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Centuries hence, Man, seemingly alone in the universe, slowly spreads his civilizations across his corner of the galaxy. Tyrants vie for power, and in their fierce grip the colonies of the Milky Way are suffocating. In this society of many billions, a young marine, a highly trained war hero, returns home from his tour of duty. Physically powerful yet shy, awkward and unable to sway the masses with pretty speeches, Alistair Ashley 3nn makes a decision to strike at the hierarchy the only way he can. His decision starts him on a grand adventure, and as he is carried along by forces beyond his control, he comes to confront an ancient secret, one which may reveal Humanity's future.

692 pages, Paperback

First published January 10, 2010

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Author 6 books17 followers
August 27, 2012
I received this book as a Goodreads giveaway a few months ago. I will admit, the presentation of this book is daunting. The small print coupled with the tight margins made me wait to finally read this books.

When I started the book, I regretted waiting so long to pick it up. It started as a work of science fiction with strong political and economic undertones and I was very interested. But, quickly it turned in to a preachy, speech-ridden lecture about the benefits of a free-market economy to counter the bloated, top-heavy almost fascist government. In the middle of a rebellion, where people just want to get to safety, Alistair stops to lecture his family about the pros of his economic view.

When Alistair is finally given an opportunity to put his economic theory in practice, he does so by being the biggest and strongest. He bullies those around him in to accepting this methods, and anyone who questions is shamed. Those who strongly oppose him are destroyed, and for someone who preaches private property rights, he has no issue stealing from others whose views differ from his. When his system begins to fail, instead of accepting that perhaps his system is flawed, he blames outside forces and runs away.

The way this is written will not convert anyone to libertarianism, but is written to those who already believe in the system and will agree with Alistair that the system is perfect, it's the people and outside influences that cause it to not work.

I would have liked to have seen Alistair grow as a character, but he doesn't. And added to that, his misogyny is atrocious and something I, as a reader, could not get past. Women are not characters in this book, they are incapable of having independent thought, and those who do are shamed and bullied back in to their place. They rely on men for everything, including housing and thoughts. To illustrate, Alistair and Giselle find themselves attracted to each other. Alistair is attracted to Giselle in spite of the fact that she does not have beauty products, has not shaved her legs or underarms, and he can somehow see through her animal skins that she has not shaved the rest of her pubic hair. She is attracted to him for his intelligence. And yes, at one point the author dresser her up as a warrior, but she is really only along for the ride to take Alistair's virginity, she does not really participate in the action. Similarly, when Alistair's sister is promoted, instead of sharing her happiness, Alistair needs to argue with her about how her science and history of science is wrong.

And the racism. For the second part of the book, everyone is described based on their ethnicity. People are described as Mediterranean, East African, Negro and Oriental. First, it is just rude and awful to describe anyone in terms that they themselves find offensive. Generally, people are offended by the terms Negro and Oriental. Second, saying someone is Mediterranean or Argentinian is not a description, there is too much variation within populations to think that tells anything beyond a bare shell of a stereotype. Much much more care was needed in the description of people.

This book had potential, and I feel like it should have been concluded in the first part. The second part was poorly edited and poorly written, racist, misogynistic, and a story of a bully. The third part read as if the author wrote himself in to such a spot he could not get out of it and had to find some way to end the book. It was tacked on and rather than added anything to the book, was just a cop-out to end the book.

Perhaps readers of libertarian fiction will enjoy this, but as someone who is less extreme in their views, I feel this book had potential as a story and as an illustration of libertarianism, but very quickly got lost in the speeches and completely feel apart in the second part with the bullying, misogyny and racism. Significantly better editing would make this a better book.
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Author 12 books24 followers
September 10, 2013
Matthew Alexander's freshman effort, science fiction novel Withur We, is a powerful, and surprisingly nuanced story that manages to be great fun while at the same time illustrating the superiority of Austrian economics and allowing the reader to explore a working anarchocapitalist society.

The lengthy novel (696 pages in the PDF version) tells the story of Alistair Ashley 3nn, a young ex-marine from the planet Aldra, who returns to his hometown greatly changed by his experience in a galactic war to subdue the laissez faire society of Kaldis. Alistair, never one to support the big government designs of the two competing political parties on his home world (the bumbling Voluntaryists and the brutal Realists) returns from the open libraries of Kaldis with a decidedly anarchist bent.

When the Realist party begins seizing power and setting Aldra on the road to a tyrannical dictatorship, Alistair joins a growing rebellion and helps touch off a planet-wide civil war.

Alexander combines an eminently readable writing style with exposition, for instance, on planetary and astral science, that adds to and fits within the narrative rather than taking the reader from it. Included also is a fair dosage of Austrian economics and anarchocapitalist theory, presented in such a way that the reader is able to grasp key concepts intuitively.

For example, in one scene Alistair, in an attempt to jump-start his anarchist society, seeks to convince the chief of a primitive tribe on the prison planet of Srillium to accept his private arbitration services.

"Shaking his head, and looking the chief in the eye, Alistair said, "I am not joining a tribe. I am remaining a free man with no tribe. I am running a business. You are from Earth?"

The chief nodded. "Laos."

"When you wished to buy a meal on Earth, you went to someone who made one and you gave him money for it. He did not have to join your nation or your tribe or anything at all, you just made an exchange. He gave you food; you gave him money. I am offering something similar. I offer protection and arbitration services. I am not joining the tribe, I am offering services." "

Particularly enjoyable are the nuanced nature of Alexander's characters. Alistair isn't some morally perfect superman, he has doubts and failures (quite a lot of them, actually), and the bad guys seem to be acting out of genuine conviction, not some innate evilness (save one). This is a book that presents the author's views without beating you over the head with them, and for this reason (not to mention the clear writing and rip-roaring sci-fi plot) it's an incredibly easy novel to recommend.

Where the the book stumbles a little bit is the very beginning and the very end. It takes some persistence to get through the first couple of chapters, after which the story really picks up speed and leads to a middle portion that was so engrossing it had me staying up late at night to read. Unfortunately Withur We again loses steam towards the end and culminates in a slightly pessimistic, slightly hopeful, but ultimately unsatisfying ending.

It seems to be a novel calling out for a sequel, and I definitely hope Alexander writes one.
Author 2 books1 follower
August 6, 2016
I recently purchased passage to distant galaxies, seven hundred years into the future. My host on the voyage was Science Fiction author, Matthew Bruce Alexander. His time-travel vehicle? Withur We.

If you’re looking for a quick read, Withur We is not for you. Science Fiction is, by its very nature, necessarily lengthy. (Therefore, don’t fret the occasional typo). Detailed pictures must be painted, with words, describing places and things that don’t (yet) exist. Alexander is a verbal artist with the soul of a poet.

Reading the following examples one has no trouble picturing what he’s trying to convey. …“eyes were shot with blood”; “…like a cloud that recalls a castle”; “…filling in the quiet spaces like mortar between bricks”; and my favorite: “Almost immediately, a line of naked prisoners jogged out of the exit portal and down the ramp. It looked as if the ship were leaking some mottled liquid forming an ever expanding puddle over the ground. Eventually, the drainage stopped, the portal doors closed as the exit ramps were retracted and the ship fell upward.” I would deem an imagination hopeless if it failed to respond to such imagery.

Though equally masterful, descriptions of parallaxes, light years, and the physics of black holes (to name just a few), bent my mind in directions it’s not accustomed to going, and for good reason. I’m the kind of gal who, when asking for the time, doesn’t care to know how the watch was built or when asking for directions cares not about latitude and longitude. But undeterred, with the hope of high adventure ahead, I bravely ventured on through the technical jargon that Sci-Fi devotees will definitely appreciate. I wasn’t disappointed.

Through the eyes of protagonist, Alistair Ashley 3nn, I’ve experienced the deteriorating future of a largely apathetic populace fearing retribution from a corrupt, cronyism government. Seven centuries into the future, progress has been so thwarted that basic needs are perceived as a luxury. The Libertarian philosophy woven throughout the novel was greatly appreciated and most evident as Alistair Ashley, a convicted rebellion upstart on his home planet of Aldra, is sentenced to life on the prison planet, Srillium. His struggles to bring Libertarian-style law and order to the dog-eat-dog prison planet are met with both success and failure. Beyond this you’ll get no spoilers from me.

Suffice it to say that at the heart of Withur We is a story of human strengths and weaknesses, hope and despair, loyalty and betrayal, love and hate, anger and grief, and disappointment and joy. Ultimately, it is a story of mankind’s inherent instinct to survive as a free man.
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4 reviews
October 1, 2012
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I’m not going to lie, this book is dense. It is close to 700 pages and has very small print. That being said, Matthew Alexander has a true talent for writing. When writing a science fiction piece, one has two ways to introduce the reader to the carefully crafted world: an easy way and a hard way. The easy way is to have a character play dumb and have everything explained to him; but the hard way is to slowly acclimate the reader to the the atmosphere through a carefully crafted narrative. The author fortunately uses the latter, and I must say that he uses it magnificently. Whatever he may lack in quantity, he more than makes up for in quality, creating two worlds that are not only realistic, but also detailed down to the smallest specimen.
Furthermore, the character development that the author uses throughout the book is simply magnificent. My opinions of Alistair, as well as most of the other main characters, were almost constantly changing depending on how he acted in each situation. To say that they were characters is imply an understatement; by the end of the book, they all were actual people in the purest sense of the word. I simply cannot praise this book enough.
However, there were still some parts that were extremely dry. At some points it was less of a science fiction novel and more of a lecture on economics. This made it hard to read at some times and unfortunately in one of the main reasons that I cannot give it the five stars. In all I give it four stars: one for the magnificently crafted settings, two for the great character development, and one for the compelling plot. Truly great book and extremely thought-provoking.
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March 23, 2016
This book could use another edit to bring it into greater balance, but overall I loved it. First the cons... There's a tendency of the characters to lapse into political speeches, which is mildly annoying but it doesn't occur that often here, as compared to say an Ayn Rand novel. The first two parts are very long compared to the third, which makes it feel unbalanced, and leaves you wishing there was more to the end. It feels like it was wrapped up too fast compared to the first two parts. For the pros... As a self published book there are shockingly few editorial errors. Some of the prose is very, very well written. The characters are all well drawn, and the author isn't afraid to let them go their own ways, making the story seem more real rather than being populated by archetypes. All in all, it's a great read, and I'd say the best part overall is that it's hard to find anarcho capitalist fiction like this; well written with a realistic outlook on just how far people are from holding such ideals, or living up to them, however you want to put it. If you're of that inclination yourself, as I am, you'll find yourself identifying with the protagonists and you'll scoot along just fine with the reading. There's a good bit of action in the book as well.

I'm hoping the author has a sequel in mind, this is definitely a world I will revisit with a reread in some time, and I would definitely shell out some money for a new story in this world.
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152 reviews1 follower
March 17, 2016
This is a big book with a lot of big ideas, a sprawling space opera and first contact story with a Rothbardian, anarcho-capitalist hero. The author is a better story-teller than most authors with an ideological axe to grind. The epic story touches on a variety of socio-political and scientific topics, including Austrian economics, theoretical astrophysics, evolution, and libertarian political theory. I was pleasantly surprised by this first-time author.
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July 22, 2018
First Impression: This author's other book, The Preferred Observer, was a fast-paced favorite. Hopefully more of the same here!

Characters: I don't like Alistair. I tried, I really did...but between his incessent blushing(!?) and his soap box rants it felt like the whole book was a venue to vent anger and frustration. The military, the government, and society in general are assailed while the main character becomes a poster child on the importance of therapy.

World Building: One thing Alexander constently does well is set a scene. Readers will be transported - space adventure awaits in the future where new technologies and scientific discoveries abound.

Writing Style: The Shakespeare of Sci-Fi, Alexander opens your mind while drawing enough of home to keep perspective.

What I Enjoyed: The author's writing style and world building skills are impeccable, as always. I enjoyed going back to an earlier work, as it gave me a comparison of progress and craftsmanship over time.

Deal Benders: This book could have been great with some editing; I would have chopped it to half by print. Everything from using different descriptors for character behavior to paring down long speeches would make this diatribe easier to digest. The length along with Alistair's rants are distracting and ruin the story. I wanted to put him in timeout to finish his tantrums about how life isn't fair so the rest of us could go on reading.

Overall Rating: 2-2.5 stars. It was ok, with some good science ficiton bits. With the right editor it has potential.
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February 28, 2012
This book was received free from the author for review purposes.

This book is a wonderful blend of high adventure, politics gone astray and the personal struggles of Alistair Ashley 3nn. Alistair is a highly trained Marine who although he has killed in the service, is more inclined to not kill to achieve an end.

The book unfolds in three parts forming a chronological story arc.

In part one, which comprises the first 42 chapters of the book, we find Alistair returning to his home world after serving 4 cycles (equivalent to 4 years) off world enforcing peace on Kaldis. While there he did have to kill while doing his duty but the official record of kills is far higher than what really happened. Despite the training, both psychological and physical delivered to produce a killing machine, he was able to resist and maintain his ideals.

His home world had changed for the worst during his absence. Government is micromanaging not only the services that they deliver but the personal lives of the citizens these services are meant to serve.

Alistair is having none of it and is soon, along with some other like minded citizens, in full rebellion against the government. Soon the authorities are after him and his friends. The author builds a tension between Alistair who has an idealistic concept of the rebellion and his counter parts, who have a totally opposite concept.

In part two, consisting of chapters 43 to 84 we find Alistair have been caught and imprisoned on his home world. He is then transported to a prisoner planet far away from home and as it turns out far away from what could be described as civilization. Alistair blossoms on this world as his skills are highly prized and he soon leads a revolution to depose the higher technology race that is monitoring the prisoner population. Lots of action.

In part 3 , consisting of chapters 85 to 92, we find Alistair escaping from the prison planet and returning home. There he finds that the rebellion was successful but only to the extent that one of their leaders has replaced the previously leader of the government. So what was really accomplished ?

Alistair, as a character, is a great study about how the outer appearance of a person may not really tell you what they are like inside.

So if you like action, politics, high ideals and smooth and well developed story arc, this is a book for you.

Although the page length is only 692 pages, based on the font size the author has managed to fit over a 1000 pages of action; so it is a bargain as well.

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Author 3 books7 followers
August 26, 2016
Matthew Alexander's W?thûr W? is an outstanding piece of work, skillfully written and showing a concern for prose and characterization rare for a book in this genre. Better yet, while it is, at a certain level, an overtly political book, it consistently acknowledges real world complexities and manages to avoid didacticism. I never got the feel of being lectured but simply of being invited to consider possibilities. This takes a real gift.

I don't think there's any way to summarize the book adequately. It begins with the return to his home world of a young marine who was sent to fight in a ruinous and apparently pointless war on another planet. Once back, he realizes that the war is only one element in a general slide toward tyranny, and he decides to turn his talents against the government that trained him. This is simply the takeoff point for the novel, though. It is an epic work, not simply in length but in scope. And it needs to be, given the themes with which the author deals. Happily, the author has an energetic, stimulating style that draws the reader easily through the book.

While it's evident that the author has anarcho-capitalist sympathies, he is acutely aware of the practical difficulties that might be involved in trying substitute voluntary, private arrangements for their governmental equivalents. In one section of the book, the protagonist has some temporary success along these lines--this is undermined by old enmities and issues that are ultimately the aftereffects of government policies. Elsewhere, a victorious revolution becomes corrupt in its very inception, and it's not clear that this could have been avoided or that anyone is particularly culpable.

Interestingly, this tendency toward corruption in human institutions is part of a more general theme of impermanence. The cosmic background of the political plot is one in which intelligent species are infrequent, fragile phenomena doomed to eventual extinction. All the actions in the novel are, by the end, thrown into this perspective. Yet, I don't get the feeling that this is meant to lead us necessarily to pessimistic or apolitical conclusions. The emphasis on transience does, however, present the reader with a more nuanced view of political success and failure than one is typically given.

"Libertarian science fiction" seems to have become a recognized genre. If Mr. Alexander's book is any indication, it is a genre that is developing in sophistication and maturity.
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3,491 reviews1 follower
March 30, 2013
Author: Matthew Bruce Alexander
Published By: Createspace
Age Recommended: Adult
Reviewed By: Arlena Dean
Rating: 4

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"Withur We" by Matthew Bruce Alexander was a long, long read but it was full of many struggles for Alistair Ashley III in this good 'science fiction' read. I found this read to be divided in several different sections...part one dealing with this Marine who has returned home to Aldura, but finding his world had changed for the worst...finding the 'government was micromanaging not only the services that they delivered but the personal lives of its citizen these services were meant to be served.' Being upset by this due to what had happened to his father, this 'Ex-Maine', along with some other citizens to fought the government. Now the bureaucrats (government) are after them. Part 2, we find Alistair is now in prison beyond civilization where he leads another revolution to to expose this technology race that is so superior that has been monitoring the population of the barren prison planet. We find in this prison there were not laws. It was every man for himself and hardly no women were there. In Part 3, we find Alistair has escaped from prison and after returning home he now finds that really their had been no changes in this government process. Leaving you to wonder too, was it worth it all? Now, having said that I would definitely say to you to pick up "Withur We" and see for yourself how this author gives the reader the where, when, what and how of it all for in this good read. You will have questions that will really make you think with all of the corruption that is even around us today. You will see several forms that can lead to 'socialism, capitalism, anarchy and libertarianism,' Where is the freedom...liberty and justice for all? This story presents a well written novel with a plot with well developed characters. Yes, it was a long read but a page turner definitely keeping you wanting to know what was coming next. "Withur We" will give you something to think about long after you put it down.
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129 reviews57 followers
June 9, 2013
At first this book was a little rough for me to get into- worried that I was not going to understand what I was reading and simply end up confused throughout the entire book, but once I stopped focusing on certain words- the story started to unravel with ease. This is not my typical genre, but Withur We managed to surprise me~ hold my interest and leave me with new thoughts to process. Some small issues with editing but nothing to bad as to disrupt this fantastic story. Though this book is forever long :) It was worth the time investment- Full of action, adventure, and detail I found this book to be well paced, unique, and an enjoyable world to enter. I don't think of myself as a strong political person- which is a big aspect of this book- the ups and downs of the main character's (Allistair) story and creativeness of this book was enough to make it through this massive book. The characters were well rounded- with good dialog- There were times after reading a paragraph that I would stop to absorb what I just read- The Author does an outstanding job with some of his choice of words and descriptions that I can not exactly explain.... for now I will go with Simple- but Captivating* This was a unique experience for me from an Author. Overall- I was pleased and had an enjoyable experience with Withur We- I'm glad to have been given the chance to read and review this book. I would read more from this Author in this style or any other- Recommended* Even if you think this is out of your comfort zone! Thank You! Reesa*** http://www.blogger.com/blogger.g?blog...
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22 reviews
June 7, 2014
“Withur We” is an excellent presentation of the libertarian philosophy encapsulated in a science fiction action story. The hero, a very capable warrior, succeeds in answering many of the arguments against permitting a completely free society where there is no government to impose the will of the majority, the plutocracy, or the dictator on the citizens of a society. He is successful, at least for a time, in demonstrating how it will work.

Unfortunately, then, as now, governments are almost universally accepted as a necessary element in a society. The author gives examples of governments both of well meaning leaders and those only seeking power over their domain and how they grow into behemoths that control more and more of the citizens' lives taking more and more of their freedoms in the name of the “Common Good”.

The philosophical discussions are mixed in with the adventures of the hero leading revolutions in several worlds against such behemoths using first very primitive weapons then hovercrafts and later space ships. Friends are made, and lost. Many associates use his principles against him and betray his efforts to improve their condition.

The only disappointment to me is his treatment of religion and religious organizations which have really contributed to society's well being. Even though he recognizes the right to contribute to these organizations without the promise of a return it is obvious that he considers them more as cults than contributors to the society.

If I weren't a libertarian, I would want to make “Withur We” required reading :-)
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1,635 reviews96 followers
August 5, 2011
The author contacted me because he noticed I had read other libertarian fiction, and directed me to his website (http://www.withurwe.com/) where I was able to download his novel in e-book form. Just started reading it, and so far so good.

(Continued)...It's a good tale, and clearly falls in the camp of libertarian fiction, which I occasionally enjoy reading. However, I finally set this one aside. It just wasn't fast-paced enough for me, in the development of the characters, in action sequences, or in a variety of other ways. Really I think the only thing it needs is some editing. However, for those with a little more time and patience, it might be a rewarding reading experience. I give it a qualified recommendation.
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1,141 reviews35 followers
April 21, 2012
This is a story about Ex Marine Alistair Ashley who returns home from war to his home planet and unable to come to peace with his surroundings. We follow him on his journey with many ups and downs, and you can easily identify with him and all the characters. I am not usually a fan of sci-fi so I was very happy to have the opportunity to read this book. It is very well written and has an easy flow and I highly recommend it to anybody who loves a good story. It will leave you thinking about it long after you have put it down.
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4 reviews
August 6, 2012
Some of the most interesting sci-fi I have ever encountered.

What makes this book interesting is that unlike most sci-fi authors, the author here has a very high grasp of good economic theory and it shows in the book. There are no ridiculous forms of social organization or illogical incentive structures here.

Simply a story of freedom vs. tyranny in the far future, and a view of the state which will be absolutely shocking to some readers, which is precisely what they could use.

1 star off for the style of editing (I bought a first edition copy) which I was not a fan of.
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309 reviews3 followers
June 24, 2013
Received this book as an ARC Giveaway. Took me seemingly forever, but I finally finished it. I enjoyed the second part of this book the most. The first part was very political and preachy, which was toned down, but present in the second part. The third part amounted to a "See, I told you so..." type of ending.
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Author 3 books56 followers
March 8, 2016
I tried to finish this book, but lost interest and couldn't find the desire to read more.
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30 reviews2 followers
November 11, 2012
Good science fiction with interesting political drama.
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