Initial Impressions 5/6/12: Really did not enjoy this one. I felt like it was poorly put together, not a lot of action to keep the reader interested, and not a lot of likable characters. I wasn't happy with the way they went about investigating, who the murder turned out to be (and seemed like a weak motive - maybe they didn't want to give it away so we weren't given much), and for a "mystery by the numbers", I wanted a lot more out of the puzzle side. Just really disappointed with this book!
Full review originally posted on The Book Addict's Guide: First off -- the cover has nothing to do with anything in the book. Not sure where they came up with that illustration. As for a review, I was really disappointed in this book. I actually found myself trying to rush through it because I was so bored. I don't like not completing books so I didn't give up on it, but I felt like it was really poorly written and I didn't enjoy any of the characters in the book. I felt like no real investigation happened (or was revealed to the reader to bring them into the story) until almost 3/4 into the novel. The first quarter is a set up of what happened, the middle is Zach staring at evidence while Savannah has meals with her old friends and/or suspects in the town, and finally towards the end, the action finally starts to pick up. Throw in some family secrets from Savannah's past, and there's the story. It just did not flow well, very little action to keep me interested, and the answer to who the killer was just seemed thrown together. Compared to all of the cozy mysteries that are out there, this definitely did not stack up. And for being a "mystery by the numbers", not a whole lot of clues were given to the reader. It was one puzzle that Savannah got bit by bit and wasn't even that interesting. Lastly, I felt like for half of the story there was a lot of tension between Savannah and Zach. It was like they were constantly taking jabs at each other and then saying "Just kidding" to make it not tense, or someone being jealous for no reason, or being selfish regarding their plans and/or how to proceed with investigation. It just seemed to me like they weren't a very cohesive couple and just did not make them likable characters.