Erotique

Naughty Nooners

by Nicole Austin

Out of print
An Ellora's Cave Naughty Nooners story.

What’s your fantasy? Exhibitionism, voyeurism, S&M, D/s, bondage and spanking, ménages, orgies…For Dani, it’s being bold and brazen enough to have sex before an audience. The thrill of performing empowers her. The idea of others being titillated by witnessing her intimate gratification excites her. Mikael has given her an extravagant present, a trip to Pigalle—Paris’ notorious red light district—where they will satisfy her wildest fantasy and perhaps discover a few new ones along the way.

Note: This story contains voyeuristic hot man lovin’ and exhibitionism that will get you all worked up.

Genres: Erotica, Romance, Contemporary, Ebooks, Fiction, Adult, Short Stories

20 pages, Kindle Edition

First published April 27, 2009

About the author

Bestselling author Nicole Austin writes provocative erotic romance stories that push boundaries and release inhibitions, resulting in extreme reader satisfaction. Her tales of hunky heroes and badass heroines include BDSM, contemporary romance, edgy role play, erotic horror, ménage, paranormal, sci-fi, shapeshifters, stepbrother romance, vampires, and much more.
Nicole has an Associate degree in Radiology Technology and a Bachelor in Health Care Services. When not writing, she loves the fast-paced excitement of working night shift in the Emergency Room.

Reviews

[Mojca · Rating 3 out of 5]

A short, hot little number of a woman about to live out her ultimate fantasy - sex in front of an audience.

I actually didn't miss the plot, what there was was enough for a short-story and the added bonus of her husband being present (and participating) gave this one a "good" vibe, instead of just being a story for the sex' sake.

[willaful · Rating 1 out of 5]

Someone recently told me that the biggest problem with free online erotica is it builds up to the good part and then stops, as if the author had said "bored now the end." This short story was even odder, because it stopped right before the "good part," as if the author had creeped herself out. Even though the exhibitionism premise wasn't really my thing, I felt cheated.

[Jolene · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a short story of exhibitionism and a husband gifting his wife with an anniversary present of being able to live a fantasy. I was really getting into this story as it started out and was feeling the connection between these two. They loved eachother and were secure in thier relationship to try new things. It was really erotic as the whole club was watching the two men on stage and the husband was talking dirty to get his wife ready for their turn. I think there was so much leading up to their making love on the stage and I was a little dissapointed it just kind of tapered off. I felt like it wasn't finished and maybe felt a little cheated that it was well detailed and just stopped as I got to the ending. I think it had great potential and I wish the author would have given them a little more page time

[Meg · Rating 2 out of 5]

After I first bought my Kindle, I went on a downloading spree of every free book I could find. This included short stories and included Erotique, which I remember months later. This is not because it was good, but because I remember being so frustrated with it. The plot sounded intriguing, but it felt like it was way too short and ended in the middle of the climax of the novel. I expected more and instead just got the "about the author" section when I turned the page. It only took a few minutes to read, but the fact it left me hanging was not very appreciated. On top of that, I didn't even see much good about this. The dialogue was weird and the whole scenario seemed...squicky. Not because of the voyeurism part, but because the characters seemed really creepy, especially the husband.

Two stars, and that's pushing it to be honest.

[Angela · Rating 1 out of 5]

Erotique is a short Contemporary Erotica Story by Nicole Austin.
Dani and Mikael are in the France Red Light District as an anniversary gift from Mikael to his wife Dani. Dani and Mikael are quite risqué in their sexual activities and Dani’s greatest desire is to have sex with her husband in front of an audience. So, they hit a club, partake in some voyeuristic male on male, while Mikael talks dirty to Dani. Then, they enter the stage and do their thing. That’s the end of the story. It was lame. There were a few hot moments, but the lack of story was way too much to overlook.

[Jennefer · Rating 4 out of 5]

A husband takes his wife on a sex-cation to 'perform' on stage in a sex club in Paris. Very hot, hard core dirty talk, m/m sex, oral, voyeurism... and yet for such a short story I just loved both the characters and got a idea about their strong, hot marriage. I enjoyed it very much.

[Devon · Rating 4 out of 5]

Hot, Sexy, well written. Nothing to complain about here. :)
Also was a nice touch that the couple is a husband and wife who really seem to love each other.

[Jane · Rating 1 out of 5]

Erotique is about fantasy and the girl in the story likes to be seen by lots of people in the act. Just not my thing and so I would say don't waste your time if this isn't your thing either.

[Amyiw]

I read this but don't remember to rate or review. Was a freebee and one of the first ones I read. I read another of hers, Trip My Switch, also but that one pushed to far for my comfort and remember because of that, this one didn't leave an impression. They are definitely titillating.

[Jessie · Rating 4 out of 5]

Short- only 11 pages of actual reading, but it kept my interest and wasn't too far fetched. Believable, steamy, good.

[C is for **censored** · Rating 2 out of 5]

The star rating given reflects my opinion within ‘the official goodreads rating system’.

1 star: Didn’t Like it
2 stars: It’s Okay
3 stars: Liked it
4 stars: Really Liked it
5 stars: It Was Amazing

I don’t really give a rat-fuck that there are some who think I ‘owe’ an explanation for my opinion. Nope, nada, and not sorry about it.

Sometimes I may add notes to explain what my opinions are based on, and sometimes I don’t. I do this for me, on my books, in my library and I don’t ‘owe’ any special snowflakes a thing. Fuck off if you don’t like it and stop reading my shit.

Particularly given the ‘modifications’ to reader’s personal content going on (and outright censorship), unless particularly motivated I will not comment in detail.

It would help if GR was forthcoming in the new ‘appropriate’ and would make a site-wide announcement delineating the new focus from a reader-centric site to one that is now for authors and selling.

[Heather in FL · Rating 2 out of 5]

It was just OK, hence the rating. It started out with such promise, and it sounded like it was going to be a really sexy story of a married couple living out her exhibitionism fantasy, and we got a semi-hot description of a blowjob, but that was not the main event. And the main event was glossed over as essentially the last paragraph of the story. Seriously glossed over. It would have been really hot to read about the other activities they planned and perhaps to have some kind of feedback from the audience that they were doing it right, lol. But it was totally glossed over.

I know these are freebies and I know they're generally pretty short, but there was so much build up and then... nothing. The end.

[Danielle Zwissler · Rating 5 out of 5]

I just finished reading this sexy, quick read, and I don't understand all of the low ratings. I downloaded it onto my kindle yesterday, and saved it for last night. Bedtime was certainly more interesting. Nicole's storyline sucked me in right away. It's not that I would ever do anything like the character.. I can't imagine my husband doing that either, but it was exciting, sexy, and very much a turn-on to read about. And best yet... it was free! Kudos to Nicole Austin, and to Elloras Cave, you just found yourself a fan:)

[Blue Eyed Vixen · Rating 2 out of 5]

A quick erotic read about a couple who celebrate their anniversary by fulfilling the wife's fantasy of exhibitionism and although the story showed some sound development all hope of an interesting story ended quicker that you can say pre-ejaculation!...hence the 2-star rating.

The author's intent may have been to leave the climax (pardon the pun) up to the reader's imagination however I felt that the brakes were applied to early. It just felt to me like the total effort had been placed on building towards the pinnacle with little thought towards the conclusion which deserved more.

[Jessica · Rating 1 out of 5]

I've read several of these shorts and liled them but this one left me cold. I can deal with the lack of a real plot because its a really short erotica..but I didnt find it very erotic. the idea of a woman orgasming just from dirty talk is beyond me and made everything else feel unrealistic. half the book is a description of the husband but all we get about the wife is long blonde hair and a flat stomach (yawn). then after all this buildup the big sex scene is her giving a blowjob...kindve a let down if you ask me

[Linsey · Rating 1 out of 5]

A very small glimpse into a shared fantasy between a husband and wife. The erotica seems to wane at the end and almost seems unfinished.

We get a build up to the scene the wife craves but then none of her gratification as the act plays out.

Sometimes you get porn without plot, and that can be okay, especially in something this short, but this almost seemed like minimal plot without the expected climax.

[Lady Raven RAVE! · Rating 2 out of 5]

Say what now. Come on I know amazon/authors gives us these freebies for the kindle but COME on give us more good freebies. The book is so so-ish and I found that hard to say. But whoever is reading these reviews and you want to know if you should try it try it because it's a freebie and also read it to form your opinion maybe you will like it.

[R J Royer · Rating 3 out of 5]

This short erotic story was a bit dull for my tastes. Probably because it was just to damn short. I really wish it had more story development and more character development as well. I did enjoy the descriptive details and the rather fun erotic details though they where not as fulfilling as I wanted them to be.

[Momreadstoomuch · Rating 1 out of 5]

I read it because it was 19 pages and well I downloaded it because it was free. Proving that sometimes you get what you paid for.

Maybe if it was longer and we got to understand the characters better it would make sense.

[Brenna Zinn · Rating 5 out of 5]

What's not to love about this fast-paced story? It has it all. Conflict, sharp dialogue, interesting characters, and mind-blowing sex. Nicole Austin is one of the best erotic writers currently on the erotica scene. Love her work.

[Melanie · Rating 1 out of 5]

maybe 10 pages on my Kindle. All it did was leave me thinking WTH. Then again, you can't complain too much when you got the book free from the daily BookBub email. Let's hope all my other books from there aren't disappointment as well.

[Gina · Rating 5 out of 5]

Whew!

If you're looking for fast and sizzling, this is it! A one-handed read with dominance, voyeurism, scorching heat and sex talk! Only a few of my favourite things.
Recommended read!

[Megan · Rating 3 out of 5]

REVIEW LATER

[Kristina · Rating 2 out of 5]

Nothing particularly exciting in this run of the mill piece of erotic writing. Short and sweet, but boring.

[ChaosDuchess · Rating 3 out of 5]

A little too short of a story. Very well written though.

[Nyssa · Rating 2 out of 5]

The build up was fantastic, but the ending was both disappointing and anticlimactic .

[Megan Riverina Romantics · Rating 4 out of 5]

Do you like to watch or would you rather put on a show?

Though this book is about a m/f couple, there is m/m action going on.

[Nichelle · Rating 3 out of 5]

It started out great for me...with great detail. Up until the ending sex scene where she is supposed to be getting pleasured...hmmm..sort of fizzled for me. But otherwise great story.

[Nicole · Rating 3 out of 5]

For a free quick read, it wasn't a bad story, but it just didn't capture my attention, like some of the other quickies I've read.

[KyBunnies · Rating 3 out of 5]

I did not like the ending. The author should of finished the ending with details of what the female character wanted.