Early Bird Book Deal | Sadly evident of a good author's decline | It's hard to be critical, knowing that MacLeod was probably already dealing with signs of Alzheimer's at this point, but this just wasn't very good. After a full series that never bothered to explain the past, expecting readers to read the earlier books if they wanted to understand the characters, this one alternates between fully retelling an earlier book and not explaining more useful things. In several places it felt as though the setting and victim were chosen just to make it easier on the author--instead of having to build something new, she could just fall back on work already done. Max is absent, which I'm not a fan of, and I find myself unsure why the author gave the couple a child at all if he was just going to be shunted to one side (still, better than Ramses Peabody syndrome!). Worse yet, there are long detailed and totally pointless asides throughout the book. More words are spent explaining every aspect of how Sarah does bookkeeping for the business, why, and where the actual ledgers are kept, than in explaining the motive for the murder. The motive, by the way, is thin at best, and in several ways sends to be an afterthought. I'm not convinced it actually holds up with the rest of the book as written. I'm also always scornful of the concept that someone is a murderer because they're completely insane, have been for years, but are perfectly functional until the moment they're caught, at which point they become a howling, spitting, relic of their former self, unable to differentiate between their imagined world and reality and therefore unable to stand trial because they're so totally unhinged. MacLeod used this device several times, and it's not only unrealistic, it's too easy. Things don't make sense? Crazy culprit! Loose ends? Crazy culprit! Rule of law not properly followed, so conviction uncertain? Crazy culprit! Don't ever want to have to allude to the mess and trauma of a trial? Crazy culprit! Not how mental illness works.