This story gives us a good example of proper military protocol.
“God Damn it Sirs,” the sargent said loudly and breathlessly, “Just a little (effing) faster next time?”
Highly skilled team members willing to do anything.
“Major, I’ve never flown one of those things in my life. I don’t even like riding in the (effing) things.”
“What about the smaller one?” Collins asked, heading for the lone Blackhawk.
“Are you nuts?” Ryan asked as he chased Collins.
“Where is the Crew Chief for this Aircraft!” Everett called out.
“Right here Sir,” a young spec 5 called out.
“Can you fly?” Everett asked quickly, starting to grab his weapons.
“No sir, I’m just a crew chief.”
Jack slapped the man on the back and shoved him towards Ryan. “You’ve now been promoted to warrant officer and you will assist your new Pilot in the co-pilot’s station.”
“Major-“
Everett and the injured Collins just turned and glared.
Ryan Grimaced and ran for the imposing Blackhawk.
And cool, calm leadership.
“God Damn it Lieutenant!” Everett shouted.
“Sorry, Sorry,” Ryan said, cursing under his breath. He spared a glance over to the specialist who was holding on for dear life. “Relax Trooper, I’ve got it now.”
Brave instant heroes willing to risk life and limb for God and country.
Then Ryan smiled and looked at the young specialist in the right seat. “You ready to be a hero?”
“No Sir!” The man answered.
Who aren’t afraid to speak their mind.
“Sit down, sit Down you crazy Bastard!” The Specialist Screamed.
“You waited long enough to say something besides ‘yes, sir’” Ryan Screamed back “and now you’re giving orders?”
And never give cock-a-mamie excuses or pass the buck.
“We were only passengers, Jack,” Everett replied, “I was trying to jump out of this thing when I hooked you. That (effing) Ryan can’t fly worth a damn.”
All kidding aside, I enjoyed this story. It had me on the edge of my seat and leaning forward as I read, waiting to see what would happen next. In the first few pages, Golemon takes the time to establish at least some sense of what the main characters in this action-fest are like, and where they came from. Then, he starts to pick up the pace at an ever increasing rate.
The Event Group, a specialized, super-secret organization that has been working directly for the president of the United States, since before the Civil War, has just brought in an Army Major who is also a former spec-war Army Ranger to take over security operations. He’s hardly there long enough to hang up his uniform and eat lunch before emergency strikes and he’s up to his armpits in betrayal, treachery, espionage, and some super high tech stuff that could curl your hair.
A young Naval Aviator, pilot, just had a close encounter of the third kind and lived to tell the tale. His F-14 crashed into the ocean but not before he got a shot off at the UFO that ran into his airplane. Don’t you just hate those illegal aliens? They come down here and don't bother to get any UFO Liability Insurance.
The fighter pilot’s phoenix missile isn’t much but it’s enough to take out one of the UFOs sending it plummeting to earth while he hung around in his ejection seat. That'll teach em! Both alien craft crash into the desert, but there’s a dangerous secret at Event Group. They have seen this before at Roswell and they know that something on one of those space ships want’s out…and that something is not going to be a very pleasant house guest.
Okay, before I go into excruciating detail, and possibly more humorous intent, I want to direct you to the forward included by the Author, speaking about our military service members. He clearly states his intention to be respectful, treat the military with dignity and show their human side and their sacrifice. In my opinion, he does a very good job of that.
Without glorifying who and what the military does, he allows a few very brief moments to show how the pressure and stress that comes with simply signing up to put on the uniform. He allows them to be the heroes, along with other robust action junkies, and he allows a more realistic image of what military people are really like in between acts of heroism and even cowardice. To David R. Goleman, speaking as a retired veteran, I say “BZ” which means, “Well done.”
Now to the story.
This story reads like a 1950s era monster movie. In the 50s, people believed in heroes. The Lone Ranger and Tonto still patrolled the west putting everyone's lives before there own. The book comes across with an almost naiveté’ about the darker side of human nature. This is written from a point of view that seems like it came before the Vietnam War ripped the rose colored glasses off and disrupted the sense of innocence that shaped our thoughts and the way we looked at the world. Since I enjoy the old monster movies, good and bad, it was easy for me to practice acceptance and enjoy the story on its own terms even if they were outdated and sometimes far fetched and stretching.
I liked this book.
I liked Jack Collins as a main character, or at least a pivotal character whom the plot turned on. I liked the concept of the “Event Group” and I thought the monster aliens (the Destroyers) came across as frightening, blood chilling monsters. The male supporting characters had been well thought out, and integrated into the story in solid roles. The female characters did not seem to have the same, tight, character concept as the male characters.
Golemon did a good job of allowing his female characters to be put in heroic roles and allowing them to be very capable fighters and leaders. Had he stopped with that, they would have come across as equals to their male counter parts. His idea of romantic relationships seemed almost high school-ish in the story and broke most of the rules and regulations concerning Fraternization in the armed forces. Had he left all the romance out of the story, perhaps keeping Jack-Sarah or Lisa-Everett love stories and allowed his ladies to be more mature and complex, then the story would have been stronger and the female characters (especially the service members) would have seemed equal, at least equal in importance, as they should be.
That said, this was the only thing I think could have been tightened up and I was able to accept this part of the story, flawed as I feel it may have been. This was an Action Adventure story not a Paranormal Romance. There was plenty of action to go around with some to spare. These were not your average James Bond Beauties, with the PhD’s in astrophysics and double "C" degree in modeling able to tell someone how to diffuse an atomic bomb yet unable to stand up quickly without braking a nail. These were intelligent warfighters, and scientists and as long as they weren’t caught exchanging goo-goo eyes with the hot new Major and his sidekick they managed to hold their own, some of the time.
Gollie-jee-whilickers Wally, can’t you be nicer to the Beaver tonight? (I didn’t mind the descriptions, just how the romance seemed to make the girls appear weaker.)
I think Golemon paced the story well. I liked the slow start while he set up the details of the Event Group and their staff and allowed some insight into who “Gus” and “Jack” really were. I also liked the way the pace ramped up exponentially, an ever increasing speed.
The plot stayed neatly wrapped, tight, not frayed up to the last few pages of the exciting complex. The story read so smoothly that it almost seemed to simple until I stopped and made a short list of all the things that had been going on in the story up to where I was. This was a complex plot with lots of developing sub-plots and possibilities.
The strange change in “mood” to a still serious but lighter, almost campi dialog in the closing chapters took me by surprise. I like the change, but it was like Golemon suddenly threw down his pencil and tossed the book to someone else to finish for him while he went for a latte’. Where did this new sense of humor in Jack come from? I liked it, but still haven’t understood where it came from or what prompted it.
I’m not going to get into the things that might be similar to other stories, Tv shows, or movies. As far as I can tell, any similarities with other creative fiction works are unintended and likely stem from having the same source material, not because they were copied. If nothing else, integrating so many supernatural and/or scientific ideas is unique and enjoyable no matter what their source turns out to be.
To summarize, I found this book to be exciting, fun, well-paced, with a complicated plot and believable human male characters and flawed but still strong female characters. The story moved well and read smoothly. The monsters were scary. I liked the international espionage angle to the plot and the concept the book is based on.
Warning:
The Destroyers are scary, mean blood thirsty alien monsters. They treat humans with all the loving tenderness of a meat grinder. It’s not a gory story, but there are gory parts of the story that may not be appropriate for children below a certain age or the squeamish and possibly vegitarians. There is cussing, plenty of it.
The F-bombs are likely where I’d utter an F-bomb if I were in the same situation as the characters and Golemon does not hold back.
There is plenty of violence. There are some blood-thirsty human killers in this story as well as the monsters so, again, this story may not be appropriate for children below a certain age, some nuns and various religious zealots.
Legend is the next book of the series.