As a new resident of Half Moon Bay, I picked this up in the local bookstore excited to read a story set in my new town where I would be familiar with the landmarks and context. While that was a fun aspect of the read, overall I was disappointed and would not recommend this as a read, even for the die hard cosy mystery reader.
From the start, I found the writing to be overly ponderous and plodding, with unnecessary details focused on things such as Jillian's interactions with Teddy and outfit choices. While I have seen books where these details are welcome, it requires a certain writing style which seamlessly blends it into the broader context of the story rather than feeling like a distraction - which unfortunately was not the case here. On the flip side, there were a number of plot holes where I felt that much more explanation and details would have been helpful, such as:
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Did Regina and Spencer actually sleep together?
Why did Evelyn and Thomas have random moments where they appeared happy?
Why did Celeste seem to change her personality at the very end?
Why did a certain FBI agent stay undercover once the culprits had been caught?
Most importantly, there were also a few aspects of the book which reinforced negative stereotypes of people of color.
For example, when referring to a local Mexican restaurant - "to put it bluntly, the place was garish - just the sort of garish one would expect to find coupled with a fiery, spice-laden cuisine." While I'm very sure that no offense was meant here, unfortunately, the way this is framed reinforces stereotypes of Mexican culture as simplistic, underdeveloped and uncultured and was an unnecessary elaboration within the broader context of the story.
In another anecdote, a "foreign looking" man was identified as wearing sandals that looked "native" who was later identified to be from Zambia. Again, I'm sure the connotation was not intentional but this clearly reinforces people from Africa as being different and "other" - it would have sufficed to simply say that the sandals were of a particular design that the person didn't recognise and were later identified to be commonly made and worn in Africa.
I appreciate this book was written over ten years ago within a different context but did feel compelled to point these out as unfortunate examples of unconscious bias which I believe readers and authors should be conscious of within today's broader environment.
Overall, I appreciated the ambition of the plot, the creativity in thinking through the multiple twists and turns, and also appreciate that this series represents the culmination of Nancy Jill Thames' ambition to pursue a writing career which I love in that people should always pursue their dreams. But unfortunately the writing and nuances within left me frustrated and disappointed.