The Fire in Ember - DiAnn Mills
(*SPOILER ALERT!!!*)
This novel started with a hanging. Needless to say, I was immediately hooked. And the book held my attention through the rest of the story as well. If I was so engaged, why the 4 star rating?
Well, the book was great. The plot was good. The characters were developed well. The setting worked.
But there was one part I didn't care for. The book had a lot of action in it. (A near hanging, a shootout, a murder, etc.) But she could've done more with the danger. Built the tension, added more risk, and escalated emotions. (I've been reading too much Mary Connealy.)
This is the first I've read of DiAnn Mills. I'd seen her books from time to time and they looked interesting. I finally decided to just read one... and The Fire in Ember was the one I picked.
John was a sweetheart. He was strong, and confident, and protective, and kind. I agree with his mother. He was born too old. He grew up too fast. He needed to smile, and laugh, and tease more. He was still sweet, just a little too serious. That was so cute how he fell head-over-heels in love with Ember - even though he hated it half the time.
Isn't Ember such a beautiful name? It's so pretty and eloquent. I refuse to call her by the disgusting nickname her backstabbing brothers invented for her. It's so ugly. Especially compared to Ember.
Ember was sweet, and sensitive, and shy. She was also brave, and sincere, and kind. I thought it was kind of strange how she had lived with her rotten brothers her entire life. She endured abuse and rejection. But she still quaked in fear when others questioned her. You'd think she would have built up a tolerance and wouldn't have been so scared. Oh well. I liked how they found out that she was a girl. That was definitely dramatic.
Evan - He was really sweet. He was so nice, and good with both animals and people. That's so sad how he had to put aside his affection for Ember. I hope he finds some sweet girl that loves him to death.
Leah was great. A fiercely caring mother that would lay down her life for her children without batting an eyelash. And she took to Ember so well. She was a great example.
Though I hate his name, I have to admit, Wirt's a great guy. He's sweet, and caring, and totally in love with Leah.
Simon was such a fool-brained, coldblooded jerk! How could he abuse and take advantage of his own sister?! The double-crossing, dung-eating moron!
Victor - I knew he was the bad guy! At first I thought it was just Simon, but once I realized that he was locked up and I still had a fourth of the book left, I just knew it was him.
Aaron and Mark were a lot of fun. Annoying most of the time. Boy, were they surprised when Ember ended up being a girl!
Davis was such a sweetie. He was so innocent and adorable. I'd have thought him younger than just nine.
In case you're wondering, yes, I plan to read more of DiAnn's novels.