This is the first book of Nikki Leech I've read. And I feel she has good potential in her writings. I don't care if her writing style is basic. If I want to read Shakespeare, I would rather go read Shakespeare. In the erotica of this genre a basic writing style can surely work. And I'm sure Nikki can write a masterpiece of this genre (or probably have written already, but I haven't found yet). I would surely read more of her books.
This book, however, have a few issues for which I could not rate it too highly. The main issue was with characterization. Although Nikki spent enough time on building up the basic premise and the main characters, many of her characters seem to be acting out of character. Moreover, lot of time was spent on building the character of Sarah, while the story involved her mother mainly, whose character was not built properly. Thus, the whole book felt more like an interlude of a follow up story, which then ended up abruptly.
Nevertheless, the story has lots of scenes and scenarios that the readers interested in Femdom and Forced Feminization would enjoy. Hence, I rate it 3 stars for being a readable book with some fun parts. Though it could have been far better in my eyes.