Deep Penetration

Alien Breeders #2

by Kaitlyn O'Connor

There'd been a time when her people had looked upon theirs as gods and they'd expected nothing less than complete adoration and subservience. What began as a determination to bend her to their will, however, became a desperation to protect the woman who'd enthralled them from the consequences of her refusal to behave in a manner acceptable as a slave of the Anunnaki. The will to survive, Emerald discovered, wasn't enough in itself to help her comply with the Anunnaki's expectations of a slave/breeder, but she discovered they had methods of training that could buckle the strongest will and teach submission. In learning to submit to her new masters, though, Tariq and Koryn discovered that Emerald had taught them that it was a double edged sword that could enslave them just as completely. Carnal/Erotic Warning! This book contains graphic scenes of BDSM in which the heroine is being 'broken' to accept the status of sex slave/breeder! Forced seduction. Not for the faint hearted! Multiple heroes, rough sex, alien sex toys. Futuristic Romance.

Genres: Menage, Science Fiction, Romance, Aliens, Science Fiction Romance, Erotica, Futuristic

ebook

First published January 1, 2010

About the author

Stats:
■Kaitlyn has written and completed nearly 140 intellectual properties under several pen names in different genres.
■She has written over 8,000,000 (yes, more than 8 million!) words in published works.
■She has nearly 50 partials in various genres in various stages of completion. :0
■In 2004 she wrote 27 different stories which, together, amounted to nearly a million ‘printed’ words.
■However her most productive year was 2009 when she completed 17 projects totaling well over a million words.
■Second runner up was 2007 when she completed 14 projects at just over a million.
■The year 2008 was a close tie to 2004 in number of words written.
■Her least productive year was 2011. Sorry!
■At 500 to 750 words per hour, the 8+ million written words constitute 10,666 to 16,000 hours, or 20 to 34 hours per week, devoted to Kaitlyn fans over the past 9 years!
■One title had over half a million copies pirated. She decided not to count anymore.

Kaitlyn O’Connor’s Bibliography

Liar’s Poker—romantic suspense; 1993; 93k

Lord of Chaos—historical suspense; 1993; pen name Goldie McBride; 98k

Moonlight Surrender—historical; 1993; 100k

Bond Unbroken—romantic suspense; 1993; 98k

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Bride of Atlantis—paranormal; published NCP March 2003; pen name Marie Morin; 47k (overall light/humorous)

Sexphiles: Haunting Melody—paranormal/erotica; published NCP Jan-Mar 2003; pen name Kimberly Zant; novella (overall light/humorous)

Four Play—erotica; published NCP Apr-June 2003;pen name Kimberly Zant; 9k

The Lion’s Woman—science fiction; published NCP Apr-June 2003; pen name Kaitlyn O’Connor; 58k (drama)

Thief of Hearts— erotica; published NCP April 2003;pen name Kimberly Zant; 6k

Thief of Hearts: The Return— erotica; published NCP May 2003;pen name Kimberly Zant; 6k

The Claiming—science fiction; published NCP Apr-June 2003; pen name Kaitlyn O’Connor; (drama)

The Assassin’s Blade—science fiction; published NCP July-Sept 2003;pen name Lyssa Hart (drama)

Blood Moon—paranormal/fantasy; published NCP July-Sept 2003;pen name Sylvia Kincaid; 59k(drama)

Doctor, Lawyer … Police Chief—erotica; published NCP July-Sept 2003; pen name Kimberly Zant; 9k

Neptune’s Daughter—paranormal; published NCP July-Sept 2003; pen name Marie Morin; 35k (overall light/humorous)

SexPhiles: The Howling—paranormal/erotica; published NCP July-Sept 2003; pen name (overall light/some humor)

Yar & the Orgasmizer9000—Science Fiction; published NCP July-Sept 2003; pen name Marie Morin; 23k (overall light/humorous)

Below—science fiction; published NCP Oct-Dec 2003; pen name Kaitlyn O’Connor; novel(drama)50k

fantasy; published NCP Oct-Dec 2003; co-authored ; (overall light/humorous)

The Prey—erotic suspense; published NCP Oct-Dec 2003; pen name Kimberly Zant; 33k(dark)

science fiction; published NCP Oct-Dec 2003; co-authored 41k (overall light/humorous)

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The Djinn—paranormal; published NCP Jan-Mar 2004; pen name Marie Morin; 29k(overall light/humorous)

The Fairy Ring—fantasy; published NCP Mar 2004; pen name Catherine Paige; 42k (overall light/humorous)

urban fantasy; published NCP Jan-Mar 2004; co-authored ; 29k(drama)

Goldilocks—erotica; published NCP Jan-Mar 2004; pen name Kimberly Zant; 8k (overall light/humorous)

Guardian of the Storm—science fiction; published NCP Jan 2004; pen name Kaitlyn O’Connor; 61k (overall light/humorous)

The Invitation—erotic romance; published NCP Jan-Mar 2004; pen name Kimberly Zant; 9k(drama)

Maiden of Atlantis—paranormal; published NCP Jan-Mar 2004; pen name Marie Morin; 40k(drama)

Noccio—science fiction; published NCP Feb 2004; pen name Veronica Chase; 9k (overall light/humorous)

science fiction; published NCP Jan-Mar 2004; co-authored 51k(drama)

The Shaman—erotic suspense; published NCP Jan-Mar 2004; pen name Kimberly Zant; 32k(drama)

Thief of Hearts: Stolen—erotica; published NCP Jan-Mar 200

Reviews

[Sammy Loves Books · Rating 1 out of 5]

With a title like, Deep Penetration, how could I not have High Expectations?
But I could not finish this book. DNF at 20%



I tried…I really did



I gave it my best…



But my best just wasn't good enough…



You gotta know when to say when…



I never imagined Deep Penetration could be so disappointing ;o(

[Sophia Triad · Rating 3 out of 5]

Too repetitive with an interesting but not unexpected twist in the end.

[Ivie dan Glokta · Rating 1 out of 5]

I kinda should have known that if I read a book with 'Penetration' in the title, the chances were high that I would get screwed.



Yup, that bugger there is totally how it happened – and I only have myself to blame.

This work was a work balls deep in BDSM, and not in a good way. Now, I don't mind some slap and tickle but the whole grovelling is not my thing. There are different layers of dominant men but once you have women who are completely into naughty punishment, things have the tendency to get just a little nasty...

Hmmmm....Space Dungeon Master....



Yeah... doesn't float my goat.

Pretteh cover, tho....

[Carolyn F. · Rating 1 out of 5]

I've been singing the praises of Kaitlyn O'Connor and this is the first lemon in the series of books I have read. In order to prepare Emerald for her life on their planet, they have to make her completely docile "for her own good". She can't hesitate when they tell her to do something, she can't disagree with anything, she can't show that something hurts her. So they put this belt on her that doesn't let her climax and then spend hours and hours and days and days punishing her. I hated it. I hated reading it. I kept thinking this will end and the book will get better. It didn't. And then for Emerald to fall in love with these fuck-offs because she thought they were doing it for her own good. Oh my gosh - how warped is that? Thankfully this is the only book that I've read by this author that I couldn't stand.

[Jean · Rating 1 out of 5]

Do Not Waste Your Time..
I wish I could give a negative star rating.

The first two chapters are sooo misleading.
A woman wakes up with no memory,
doesn't know where she is or how long she has been there,
Ok, sounds interesting enough.

One of the main characters, Emerald, goes from being
an amnesic -to- a slave -to- being a free person -to- being a breeder.
WTH?

Over half of the story Emerald is being tormented / teased with an electronic device for hours(not minutes but HOURS)a day without ANY release.
And to make matters worse the characters who are torturing her act as though it is for her own good.
:: right :: "this hurts Me more than You" ..crap

Adding Insult to Injury,
Emerald suddenly realizes that she is in love <3
Wait a minute..
What?
With Whom?
Really?
How?

Can you all say "Stockholm Syndrome" boys and girls ??

The story is not Sensual or Erotic.

I stuck with the story line hoping that it would get better and
make some kind of sense at the end
But it never did.

I am wishing that this is the worst book that the author has published; however,
I am not willing to find out about the other books.

Totally Disappointed

[ValerieC · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.5 stars

This was more than a little difficult to read at times... downright cruelty. Nice that there was a HEA, but getting there was gut-wrenching.

[Treece · Rating 4 out of 5]

In every Kaitlyn O'Connor novel no matter what happens, even in the darkest points, humor prevails. It makes her stories so remarkable and they never lose that human touch. So when she's writing about aliens breaking a human woman to their will to protect her, and the psychology and sexual physiology of the situation, it makes you question the entire dynamic of male/female relations and interaction.

I found this story to be one of her exceptional efforts because it was different from her usual fare. The heroine's history is murky, downright dark with elements of sci-fi horror. There's denying the fiery eroticism though, it's most definitely there, along with the romance and love that evolves and is demonstrated. Emerald and her captors/lovers kept me riveted to the pages and held me there. She is a strong woman to endure what she does, and despite what she faces I feel her suffering, sympathy, but I never feel pity--she will prevail and she does. The alien lovers (Tariq and Koryn) are not the good guys at all; nor should they be. They just are. They become more than what they were, and what they are willing to risk to protect and keep her makes them that much more human. There's an unexpected twist at the end that is heartwarming, and I will be first to say, I never saw it coming. Good.

This is an excellent example of what this author is capable of. Her comments on the status of women, the progression of our roles in the world is always scrutinized in Ms. O'Connor's novels without preaching and pointing fingers. Once you're done reading, you always come away with something and this is no exception.

[Jacqueline J · Rating 1 out of 5]

Not nearly as enjoyable as the other books I've read by this author. There were oddly done BDSM elements. I've got nothing in particular against that but in this book it just didn't make sense and wasn't well done. These two guys seemed to be all protective and loving and stuff with no indication that they were so dominant. She wakes up, they are all 'you're so beautiful and we want you' then they are questioning her about what had caused the devastation on Earth and where the survivors went and she doesn't know and wouldn't tell them if she did. That seems reasonable, after all these are two aliens that she doesn't know from Adam. Suddenly they are so mad at her that they spend the next month, I kid you not, keeping her at a sexual peak without allowing her to come. I mean continually. If she even looks at them sullenly they up the punishment. Didn't make sense. I'm using horse training experience here but if she never gets a reward for being good then what exactly do they think she is learning? So suddenly they are all in love. Right. They hadn't given her any pleasure to be grateful for and dependent on, just physical agony for a month. I'm sure that would make me love someone. Stockholm syndrome wouldn't even get a toe hold here.

The second half of the book was better but it was too late by then.

One plus is that the men totally didn't want to share and were jealous and fought a lot. So that was at least different to read.

If you haven't read any Kaitlyn O'Connor, please don't start here.

[Jen · Rating 1 out of 5]

where is the hated it button? normally I really like the authors books.. but this one gahhh i despised the male leads and could not work out WTF she saw in them or even why she would fall in love with them it was like reading a train wreck you know its bad but you keep thinking surely not, it cant be this bad .. but it was /sigh

[Susan Marie · Rating 1 out of 5]

i,m a fan of this author but this wasn,t a nice story. crude, cruel. rape is not sexy.

[Melanie · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really liked this book, it kind of caught me off-guard with the ending.

[Steph · Rating 5 out of 5]

It was way darker than her other books, but I LOVED it!

[Meri · Rating 3 out of 5]

I actually liked the way they built the story, it was deep and detailed. I spesificially liked that they integrated the story to the well-known 'we are an alien project' theory. However, it dragged. There were so many inner dialogs and repetition in events. Moreover, they talked and analysed more then that acted. The disiplinary process took too long that it lost the erotic edge. I felt like skimming the actualy sex scenes because I got bored before. I skimmed the last 25% of book. If the book were a little bit shorter, I would have enjoyed it greatly.

[Rita · Rating 5 out of 5]

good

[Kitt · Rating 2 out of 5]

I'm unsatisfied and i can't quite pinpoint why.... theoretically a good story, but the execution is lacking.

What is with the authors horrible 'heroines'?! every main female character i have read is a coward. They can't deal with anything that comes along that is an inconvenience to them so they push it to the back of their mind or ignore it, just completely refuse to think about it. cuz ya know, thats gonna completely solve your problem. The women always act like children and are often compared to/called them by the male characters, this is such a reoccuring theme in Kaitlyn O'Connor books that i wonder about her own personality and if shes like the 'heroines' she writes about. At first i had no qualms about the females, i even liked them, but the more books i read by the same author the harder time i have with them. When it comes down to it all the 'heroines' exhibit the same characteristics and personalities; selfish, ignorant, racist, cowardly and naive. Each main female character could be interchanged with eachother in any of the stories and you would not be able to differentiate between them. Take away their name and they're all the same, it gets boring after a few stories.

[Jennifer · Rating 1 out of 5]

Sigh. I read the first book and it could have been a lot better and for some reason I really had high hopes this one would be what the other was not, it was worse. I wont go into all the details but after all the woman protested for rights in the first books, and this was at least a hundred years later you'd think the society would be much different, it's not. If anything it's worse. I liked the two men at first, it was interesting about Earth and how she lost her memory and what happened, then it all went downhill quickly. I normally like these books but sometimes it gets too ridiculous and obviously a torture element going on, both physically and emotionally. There's a fine line between kinky and abuse, this was abuse.

[Anna · Rating 3 out of 5]

I really loved the story, the sex was great. This book alone could/should have been two; a little more in-depth on the science and world building. She needs a continuity checker though, Lady Seana's ship turns into Lady Selena's ship midway through the space flight. And, I hate to see men fighting over a woman, when they could all be in bed together. Well done though, and I'm looking for the others now, I got this as a stand-alone on one of my erotic ebook sites like freya's bower or renbooks, but can't find the rest! figures

[SueM · Rating 2 out of 5]

Whoa! Pages and pages of sex for the 'heroine' who is denied orgasm by means of a device strapped to her abdomen, including being penetrated by a f**king machine while strapped into a chair. While being f**ked by the machine, one of the 'heroes' works at a desk next to her for several hours, while not acknowledging her presence at all. All designed to 'break' her, while preparing her to be a sex slave for their commander... And she falls in love with the two 'heroes'? Ugh! Such a disappointment from the author of the Cyborevolution series.

[Lucy · Rating 4 out of 5]

More like 3 1/2 stars. Not my favorite from this author, but still enjoyable. Light editing issues, including a name change for one of the characters, which is sloppy, but I did figure out who they meant. My biggest problem was so little of the book dealt with character development of the heroine. We knew a lot more about the heroes than her and I never quite understood how she came to care so much for them in the end. Still, if you like these kinds of stories, this was pretty good.

[Devon Rhodes · Rating 1 out of 5]

Stomach-turning torture of a sexual nature that just goes on and on. All done for her own "good" to make her into what they want. More than not my cuppa, it left a lasting, negative impression. I like many of this author's books, but this makes me hesitant, and definitely not continuing this series.

[Doris]

very good

[Caroline · Rating 1 out of 5]

.5 stars

[Martha · Rating 1 out of 5]

I normally love Kaitlyn's books, but this just depressed me. There was NOTHING loveable about the two male lead characters. Cruel and sadistic is more like it.

[Laura Wolf · Rating 3 out of 5]

I'm rating this one a 2.5 I liked the 1st three chapters and the last 3. It was all that in the middle that bored me cross-eyed. Sorry..... I usually enjoy Kaitlyns books