The Art of Writing,
"Covert Operations Alpha" is a refreshing sci-fi, approximating the Greek mythologies for creativity and the introduction of multiple plots concurrently woven with style and appeal that keeps readers moving through the future of shady and seedy characters, devices and interplanetary woes. Spy is an espionage agent in a time where injuries are simply the cost of doing business but advanced technology makes death transitory and temporary.
Beyond the events on Earth, there are "governors" that are guiding and directing activities and are seen as overseers with eminence and intense powers, hence the play on good versus evil or negative versus positive.
I appreciate Eugene Nelson's approach as there are few minority authors writing mystery thrillers, especially sci-fi. Nelson is a writer and his storyline is intriguing. However, his grammatical skills are poor. They are poor enough to have made reading difficult and cumbersome. Many instances occurred where tense was simply abandoned. Other grammatical issues include: misspellings (leaving off the last letter of words), word confusion (were/where), incorrect punctuation, fragments instead of complete sentences, and irregular use of parentheses.
Also, there is uneven development. The year is 2306. There are still cars, cell phones and TVs while the knowledge to regenerate a blown off body part is readily accessible to man. It stands to reason that all things would have benefited from the same technological advances. Some of the language is too time constrained (example: "down-low," "pussy whipped" and "fuck"). Language is evolutionary.
The storyline could have easily been 5 stars, but the presentation and lack of observation of basic grammar rules and formatting sequences make this a tedious read. In literature, unlike the spoken word, it does matter. The author could benefit from some serious editing.
Reviewed by: Gail