I Didn't Drink the Kool-Aid,
I don't even know where to begin with this review. I won't bother with a recap because those that have followed the Thug series already know the players and what it is. "Justify My Thug" picks up where the last book left off. To say that I was disappointed, insulted or stupefied wouldn't begin to express how I felt while I was flipping the pages of this book. I don't know who any of these characters are but they are not the same as the series started out with and that readers grew to love. It's like `The Invasion of the Body Snatchers' or something. It looked like them. They had the same names. But these are not the same characters. Everyone seems to have digressed in maturity with age. Love turned into abuse and disrespect. Domestic violence and verbal abuse is not cute or sexy nor can it or should it be justified by thug mentality.
A lot happened in this book, yet nothing happened. It was just a bunch of strung along events and characters running around doing things with no real plot or purpose except to make it possible for another book to keep this series going. Add to that a lot of pointless sex. There was no closure and, instead, new issues were brought into play that now makes it necessary for readers to continue on to get answers. Five books in, readers deserve more. I feel cheated and insulted.
With Cash Money backing this project, I expected, at the very least, quality editing. That is not the case. More than the copyediting issues, though, was the obvious lack of a content or developmental editor. A qualified person would have picked up on the plot issues. And that person should have definitely nixed this narration. The alternating first-person narration was ridiculous. I counted sixteen, yes sixteen narrators with some narrations as short as one paragraph. Readers are forced to jump from one character to the next to the next to the next, all within the same chapter. Many of the characters that got airplay through their own narration weren't even central characters. Because of this, there is zero connection with any of the characters. Apparently character development stopped in book two or three. I didn't even bother counting how many times the narration switched as I'd still be counting. And just when the narration issue couldn't get any worse, the book flipped to third-person temporarily only to flip back to the ever-changing and dizzy first-person.
Many scenes were unbelievable. Some will reason that it's not that serious, that this is a work of fiction. Exactly. Fiction, not fantasy. With some of the outlandishness of this book, it read more like fantasy. I could give example after example in this review but that would only spoil the book for someone else.
I initially loved the Thug series and Wahida quickly became one of my favorites, but I don't know what happened here or honestly with her last few releases. "Justify My Thug" is like a rocking chair. It was moving but didn't go anywhere. I'm sure that with her tons of fans there will be plenty that like this book just because it's Wahida. I don't doubt that if this book was published by a first time or unknown author, the reviews would not be the same. But for those willing to be honest and real, on the strength of the content of this book, "Justify My Thug" falls way short of the power of the beginning of this series as well as Clark's talent (displayed early on in her career). It's very unfortunate as these originally were some really great characters that a lot could have and should have been done with. Now they are just doing any old thing for the sake of more books. It's almost as if someone else had a hand in this or the fire is gone. I feel that same way about her other recent releases. Either way, I wish Ms. Clark the best and I truly enjoyed her first releases, but I'm sorry, this is it for me.
Reviewed by: Toni