Yikes! I'm a fan of Orson Scott Card. He's easily my favorite author. He's often talked about as an egotistical jerk who you just shouldn't bother with. That, or he's just dismissed as crazy. (Thanks Hank Green. You really know how to make an argument on a hot-button issue.) I've had the pleasure of meeting him and he was just the sweetest guy imaginable. I've also read The Worthing Saga and The Folk of the Fringe and I thought they were absolutely phenomenal. He's made it very clear that he doesn't write "Mormon fiction". And in the cases when the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints is brought up in his fiction, he's often quite satirical. This can be seen in the cases of Ender's mother, or Deaver Teague, and many others.
I only bring this up because I've been able to discover why he writes the way he does. His fiction is very different from mine because he's not afraid to tackle bizarre situations. Well... with Treason, that couldn't be any truer. In fact, as I was writing this review, I had to take a star off because it felt too bizarre in my memory. And I read Magic Street! That should get me some credit, right?
Let's talk about the story for a second. Very fascinating concept. Radical Regeneratives are treated as monsters among society, but they can grow extra body parts that can be sold in exchange for metal to build a spaceship so that they can eventually leave the prison planet Treason. That's a pretty sweet concept! I dig that!
But as I've noticed with Orson Scott Card, he takes this as an opportunity to prove that he's edgy. I can't stand this with ANY author, and that counts with Brandon Sanderson too. Please remember, I love OSC's work. I just can't deny that he seems to jump at the chance to talk about excretion, sex, et cetera. And it's just really uncomfortable most of the time.
In the beginning, they talk about how Lanik Mueller, the protagonist (I think), is a Rad and how Rads work, they bring up another fascinating point: hormones would likely change how Rads grow and mature. What better way to explain that than puberty?
Well, I make this sound like an interesting point, but the way the book does it is describing how Lanik has grown breasts and how there was another girl who grew a penis and used it to pee on people in protest to... something. It's just bizarre.
I was reading this part while on a bus and a guy looked over my shoulder and got quite weirded out. Don't blame him.
Okay, fine, I can live with that (though I will say I nearly dropped the book there). But then his dad basically sexually assaults it. I think I still remember the quote... "You're soft and womanly. No man would follow you." "Except into bed," said his mother. I'll come back to why this is important later, but I just want to make sure this is clear: I still think the concept is genius. It's the execution that turns me off.
Before I talk any more about the story, I should also bring up that this is technically not written in the OSC voice you're familiar with. It's in first-person... This is a totally personal preference, but I don't like his first-person voice, especially because I have basically no idea if I'm supposed to like Lanik Mueller. He's smarmy, whiny, and can't seem to figure out if he likes his breasts or not.
Figure out, okay!? Want to rub your breasts because it feels good? Cool. Just say it and move on. It gets really awkward when you tell me that you think you're supposed to feel motherly or that you're apparently irresistible to men. It's just weird and annoying.
Back to the story...
I'm not going to go through the entire story. Now I'm just going to go through a few parts of the book that I thought were really odd.
The scene when Mwaba-Mawa (I think that's how you spell it (I really hate stupid names. Looking at you Brandon Sanderson.)) shows Lanik how to "drop" was just weird...
If you're on a spaceship and pooping is a legitimate concern, then, by all means, show me how you do it. That sounds really interesting! But when you're living at the top of a tree, I could figure out well enough on my own that your crap had to go somewhere. Naturally, it had to be down. I don't need some tall, black lady illustrating how to poop and when to do it.
The scene where Mwaba-Mawa basically rapes Lanik was weird. In fact, all of the parts where Lanik was basically raped were weird.
This is going to come across really strangely, but I can't stand bad rape scenes. I hate rape in general, but it can be an effective form of storytelling. Cut and dry, that's just a fact. Most authors use rape as a tool to either A) Describe how sexy their character actually is and then slap the reader on the wrist for thinking so because, "LOOK, THEY'RE BEING RAPED, YOU SICKO!" Or B) to get unneeded sympathy for a character. We all should know by now that rape is bad. Stop trying to use it as a tool to make someone look cool.
I'm going to bring up two rape scenes written by Orson Scott Card. One is from The Folk of the Fringe and one is from this book.
In The Folk of the Fringe, two girls are orally raped by two bushwhackers. This was a very effective scene because it actually had many characters involved. Not all as victims or as attackers, but as scared onlookers. And it was able to show the character of Teague as not only an anti-hero, Han Solo type, but because we also got to see how the two girls recovered from the attack. It was uncomfortable to read, as it should have been, and it didn't try to justify any horrible action.
Now with this book, there are just a bunch of different cases of rape or sexual assault, and they all seem to end in ways that I didn't think they should. Lanik's dad gropes him and it was just weird to think about because later, it just turns out that he's a good guy sweetheart the whole time.
WHAT? He freakin' groped the guy! HIS SON. And humiliates him in front of his jerk family. And to make matters stranger, Lanik wonders if because his dad did that because Lanik's attractive.
So he uses this advantage of boobs to get where he wants. But there's a bit in here that I think should be noted: the most womanly parts about him are his breasts and the fact that he has long blonde hair. THAT'S IT. Nowhere does it say his eyes are motherly or that he's got real nice girly skin. It's seriously just his breasts.
Anyway... Mwaba-Mawa later tries to have sex with him. There's a bit where she gropes him and the texture of her skin changes to be rougher and manlier on cue, but that never went anywhere so WHY DID THAT HAPPEN? Oh, and what is one of the considered solutions to this problem? TO CUT OFF - wait, I need you to understand the logic here - to TAKE HIS DAGGER AND CHOP OFF HIS - wait... do you not get it? HE WAS GONNA CHOP OFF HIS JUNK.
ACTUALLY WHY?
Now, he doesn't end up doing this, and he explains why in the narrative, but... WHY? Why was that even considered? "Oh, it'll just grow back cuz Imma Rad." Uh, no? Like, it will, but how would you do that without Mwaba knowing and also chopping off your penis won't suddenly give you ovaries or a vagina. (Oh yeah, I forgot to mention that he has ovaries. Dunno if he can get pregnant and I don't care to.) Lanik is portrayed as this super smart, athletic, sex magnet in both his manly man form and as the womanly Rad form, and THIS was something he considered??
One MORE case of stupid rape was the two guys somewhere. The rape happened so suddenly that I forgot where Lanik even was. May have been a beach? Desert maybe? Lanik just smiles at these two guys and in a blink they're groping him and crap and it's all just really weird. But I don't feel any sympathy for him this time because first, he expected it to happen, and second, the scene happened so that he can show how manly he actually is. Yeah, he just kills the two guys. Cool I guess?
Last one. There's a bit where he is in a cabin somewhere and he meets this girl who says that she's waiting for the right one. I honestly thought we were going to get something meaningful in this sexual travesty, but nope! Turns out, the girl is an old guy using some illusory science/magic and he makes his girl image naked, starts straddling Lanik so that she can get close enough to stab him. Through some science/magic that Lanik learned halfway through, he's able to freeze time and that allows him to see that the hot naked girl is an old guy...? And then I think he kills the guy - I really don't remember.
Enough rape... let's talk about something good.
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It was well-written, I guess. I normally hate first-person books, but he does a good job. I know earlier I said I don't like his first-person voice, but that's just because I'm so much more comfortable with third-person omniscient. It was weird specifically to me.
But... well, I'm not sure if this book would have been better in his traditional voice.
To be clear, this was his next book after Ender's Game. So... "traditionally" isn't really fair because he was still discovering who he was as an author, and that's fine. I can appreciate this for the story it tells about the author.
But that's about all I can say. I would have enjoyed the science/magic more if it just went for it. Lanik pretty much becomes a god on Treason. I'm not sure if there's anything he CAN'T do.
This book was also written before his Worthing stuff, so back then, he didn't understand that Metal rivet covers are for sci-fi, trees are for fantasy. This is a tree story no matter how you try to slice it. The cover looks amazing, but much like the Ender books, absolutely nothing on the cover happens in the book. (One exception to that is Shadows in Flight which I think is cheating because the whole book takes place on a spaceship and/or on an asteroid, but I digress.) You SHOULD judge a book by it's cover. That's why it's there. For you to think, "Huh, that's cool. I would like to read that please!"
Okay, now I'm going to tackle the ending. I just want to make it clear that I finished what is often said to be his most bizarre book and liked it. So for me not to like this ending and story must have been a realy doozy. It ends with this girl, Saranna, who was frozen in time and then being let out of slowtime. She asks Lanik (who now is a real man instead of a dude with breasts) to return while he's still young enough to want her. Okay, fair enough. So he comes back after four years in his time and he wins the war or something and now he has Saranna all to himself. The last two pages just couldn't resist saying that they make love to each other a lot. Cliché and stupid.
You know what, I skimmed over Saranna a lot. Let me just say this: I have NO IDEA what is so appealing about her other than she's pretty and supposedly loyal. But I think there's like three different cases where they're in Ku Kuei and he sees her having sex with people.
Loyal? Not in your wildest dreams.
I left so much out. I don't even think I mentioned the Schwartzes or the fact that Lanik can pretty much clone himself at all, so I'll just say this: this book is bizarre and easily my least favorite Orson Scott Card book right now. I have a lot of his books to go, so you might see me again later. My rating of two stars stands.