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258 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 1, 2010
To be fair, as far as naughty tomes go, the book's central plot is singularly realistic. Setting the proceedings at a cerebral yet raunchy convention and characters as professionals in the field yields a believable plot. The book doesn't yield supremely believable male dialog, however. Over beers (Thewestchestarian doesn't care "beer" is already plural - fight me), even the most professional and worldly of men don't clinically and politely ask another man if they would like to "help" with an attractive women's nasty fantasies. That the offer doesn't start off "yo bro..." immediately disqualifies it from verisimilitude.
The writing and, in particular, the dialog, drifts frequently into textbook or even safety video territory. No real dramatic force propels the book and the inevitable Hallmark Channel ending is never left in doubt. But (tocks) the writing does move with alacrity from stilted encounter to encounter. In short, you could do worse than curling up on a couch with your buttocks in the standard seating position and this randy novel.