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330 pages, Paperback
First published June 24, 2010
Not good, but not the worst. The concept - a boy with the ability to cross over to the land of the dead through pain induced sleep - is intriguing; the execution of the concept is lacking. Writing quality goes up and down throughout the entire novel. Going from a solid 4 to trudging along at a 1. This book has the potential to be something great but failed to deliver. It has the land of the Dead, a civil war, and a witch Queen; all of which weren't touched by Anna Kendell. Plus she left loose ends everywhere, which I guess sets up for the other books to answer.
Roger, the main character, is a whiny, erection obsessed young lad who suddenly decides to take charge of his life at the last 50 pages or so. Before then he is 'in-love' with every girl who pays him attention and wants to do them all. Plus has sleep-talking episodes, spilling secrets while groups of people are around as if these sleep terrors are new, which they aren't. Then sometimes, he visits the land of the dead. The Land of the Dead, as described way too many times in the book, is a place where the dead people go and they become unacknowledged bumps on a log. Roger is an annoying main character but he fits in with the other annoying characters in this book.
Now world building is another story. I liked the world, despite how unused most of it is. We have a land that is in a civil war with two coloured queen battling it out for the throne, okay battling it out is a strong notion for them just having a mother-daughter fight. The idea of the different coloured rulers was something I actually liked. Was it actually practical for the people in the story, no. With every queen they'd have to rip up the tiles, redye every fabric, pretty much redo the entire castle over and over and over again. So it is great in theory but not in actual practicality. Moving past the civil spat of the kingdom we go to the Land of the Dead. An underused, boring place that doesn't have a whole purpose in the book. Other than, I think, it was added because the description talked about Roger's ability and the land itself. It had the potential to be so much more than what we got. I never imagined it containing people who are boring and seem to be waiting for something. I imagined... well I imagined sort of what we got a glimpse of during the war. Even so, with Roger's ability he is limited to the world. Unable to talk to anyone, discover anything or even use it for his benefit. That's why I feel like it was added in for no reason at all. Maybe the other books would tell me what the dead are waiting for but right now, only looking at this book, the dead are boring, uneventful and pointless.
May rating is 2 stars for the fact that the entire book wasn't pushed it it's potential. There is so many directions Anna Kendell could have gone and she went with the boring, erection obsessed way. The writing overall boring, with boring action and uneventful everything else.


