An enjoyable book with some pluses and more minuses. I really enjoyed book 1 so I decided to get this one. Captain Edgemont is captain of the small 28 gun frigate Louisa which is sent together with the brig Pylades to the Mediterranean.
Spoilers ahead:
I like this book because the writing is easy to read and follow, almost written like a young adult book. I generally like the characters and the action. There are two single ship actions in the beginning, a lot of sailing around and a lot of storm action, all of which are done well.
There is an interesting side story of Emma Hamilton and Nelson. Some other clones have also done this side story but I find this one the best, most easy to understand and the one that does the best job of explaining their relationship.
What I don't like:
Edgemont takes his wife and companion on to his ship. First of all I'm not even sure that is allowed. I'm sure someone on the King's service can't just take their wife with them. I think I've read about this but it must be very rare and perhaps needs permission.
Secondly, even if this was allowed it stretches belief that Edgemont would have done it. It's bad for discipline and dangerous for everyone, including the crew. And several times his wife tried to alter his decisions. It's just ridiculous. Someone else said this seems like a bad combination of CS Forester and Jane Austen, which I agree. About 20% of the book is romance, which I did not sign up to read.
Secondly Worrall writes a lot of other stuff which I don't think is permissible. I don't think Commander Bevan can just resign his commission like that. And Edgemont ignoring orders at will from senior captains or Nelson, that's the worst case of bad writing I've come across for a long time.
That last thing about the Battle of the Nile. Other Hornblower clones have inserted their characters into real life battles but this one about Edgemont leading 2 ships of the line behind the French line of battle is just laughable. I mean all of this stuff strains credulity. This is why I chose not to read the 3rd book in the series.
Anyway the summary of why I didn't really like this book is that the characters' actions in this book just don't make sense and don't seem realistic and there's too much romance.