I've been in a reading slump so I decided to ease into things with something silly. I loved the World of Darkness games when I was young and I remember eyeing these books wistfully in game stores, dreaming of the hot vampire action within, so I decided to return years later. What I found was a mixed bag, a dense, plot-driven, often overwritten book that struggles to tell coherent stories about its characters. The two main characters of this novel, as a novel in itself and not the tightly interwoven series its a part of, are probably the vampire assassin Lucita and her rival Talley, who's trying to find and protect her latest target. I say "probably" because there are so many asides and so many POV characters who come and go. Some of these cameos seem like sensible excuses to advance the larger plot, or important characters in the larger unfolding story. But many left me scratching my head, like the minor Sabbat warrior who volunteers for a dangerous mission, introduces us to his raggedy but reliable crew, and then immediately dies offscreen. Why did I need so many pages of his interior monologue?
Coming back to our main characters: Lucita and Talley both suffer as characters from just being sooooo badass. Like yes we get it, they're the scariest vampires ever, they're really powerful, sometimes they kill people because they're slightly offended. Talley is probably a better drawn character within this novel, a man who has a job he just wants to get done who is constantly thwarted by the incompetence and personal agendas of his colleagues. This guy just wants to hand in the group project and go home, always relatable. Lucita is more of a cypher and I think a character who suffers from being too "cool;" it's like she has a rider in her contract that she can never lose or even seriously struggle. Because she doesn't struggle, she doesn't have to change or reveal things about herself; she just does a bunch of (pretty well-written!) superpowered violence and then drives off without looking back at the explosion.
I still found myself rooting for Lucita because my god the Sabbat vampires she's fighting are tedious with all their betrayal and counter-betrayal and tedious power games that, literally, even they are bored by. Sascha Vykos takes a call in the middle of a big meeting, obnoxiously disrupting things, which makes people mad, and later everyone's like "wow she made those people mad, WHAT a master manipulator." Really?
The best parts of this book are when it gets away from the politics and the scheming and gets closer to horror. There's a pretty spooky passage where a vampire seduces young men so she can turn them all into vampires to enter a suicidal battle for her; monstrously transformed when she became a vampire, she resents conventionally attractive men and wants to punish them. I wanted to find out more about her and what was going on before and after that experience, rather than cutting back to vampires being snide across a boardroom at each other. The action sequences where super-powered vampires tear into each other are also very well-written; they're lively and kept me engaged even though its content I might often be tempted to skim.