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Gone Away Into the Land
KILL THE BEAST, JOHN! KILL IT! "Gone Away, Into the Land is unlike anything I have ever read before. It is a completely unique story." Meet twelve-year-old John Greber, who describes the dark clouds of daily life he, his mother, Ellie, and six- year-old sister, Marny, live under. The fear and loathing that exist within a home ruled by the iron fist of an abusive father is established on the very first page. It is impossible not to feel, in the pit of your stomach, the inevitable onslaught of catastrophe. John's beast of a father is unpredictable and dangerous. He takes the storybook villain to a whole new level of greed and ignorance. "The beast" finally goes too far when he disappears, taking Marny with him. The search for her leads John and Ellie into the Land, a place they couldn't have imagined in their wildest dreams. (Think of Candyland crossed with Gregory Maguire's vision of Oz and you'll have something of an idea.) Allen skillfully combines the everyday world with the fantastic, a seemingly seamless combination which reminds the reader of the very best of fantasy novels. Yet, after all of the tragedies and triumphs are said and done, Goneaway, Into the Land, will leave you with a feeling of hope and a yearning for more. www.jeffreyballen.com.
496 pages, Paperback
First published June 1, 2008
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About the author
Jeffrey B. Allen
1 book11 followersIt was the early 1970’s. Jeffrey Allen was attending Boston University where he was majoring in history with a minor in set-design and fine-art. However, uncertainty, restlessness, and tuition woes got the better of him. After a one year hiatus, in the form of a nationwide hitchhiking trip, Allen returned home and began the task of assembling his art portfolio so he could apply for acceptance into the Rhode Island School of Design. Discouraged by his father, and in need of income, he took an apprenticeship position as a cabinetmaker. Within a year’s time, Jeffrey had achieved journeyman status and was named foreman of the cabinet company were he was working. Still committed to nurturing his creative talents, Allen left that position in order to attend Millersville State University where he was an honors graduate earning a Bachelor of Science degree in architectural design and industrial arts education.
Allen taught school for two years while working toward his Masters degree at Temple University. Again, restlessness took over and Allen left his fledgling teaching career and went to work for a respected architectural woodworking company in northeast Philadelphia. There he gained his status as a master-cabinetmaker. In 1981, he created his own architectural woodworking firm. By 1984, Allen’s company had grown to be one of the most highly regarded shops in eastern Pennsylvania, employing over twenty people. With remarkable creativity and a feel for emerging technologies he expanded his business to offer full design services and residential electronic integration.
In 1996, Allen received his fifty ton US Coastguard captain's license and followed that with extensive sailing adventures and chartered voyages. In 2006, Allen was awarded the Colonel Holt Business Achievement Award. In 2007, he sold his Architectural woodworking business, and in 2009 published his first novel, Gone Away, Into the Land.
Today, Mr. Allen lives in Bethlehem, PA. He is a teacher of writing at Northampton Community College, a fellow of the National Writing Project at Penn State University, and he sits on the board of the Greater Lehigh Valley Writers Group. Jeffrey Allen is a frequent lecturer on subjects as wide ranging as architectural design, writing and publishing, the social impact of his new novel, Gone Away, Into the Land with its underlying theme of domestic violence. He also gives talks on his unique writing style of integrating relevant social issues into Magical Realism.
Allen taught school for two years while working toward his Masters degree at Temple University. Again, restlessness took over and Allen left his fledgling teaching career and went to work for a respected architectural woodworking company in northeast Philadelphia. There he gained his status as a master-cabinetmaker. In 1981, he created his own architectural woodworking firm. By 1984, Allen’s company had grown to be one of the most highly regarded shops in eastern Pennsylvania, employing over twenty people. With remarkable creativity and a feel for emerging technologies he expanded his business to offer full design services and residential electronic integration.
In 1996, Allen received his fifty ton US Coastguard captain's license and followed that with extensive sailing adventures and chartered voyages. In 2006, Allen was awarded the Colonel Holt Business Achievement Award. In 2007, he sold his Architectural woodworking business, and in 2009 published his first novel, Gone Away, Into the Land.
Today, Mr. Allen lives in Bethlehem, PA. He is a teacher of writing at Northampton Community College, a fellow of the National Writing Project at Penn State University, and he sits on the board of the Greater Lehigh Valley Writers Group. Jeffrey Allen is a frequent lecturer on subjects as wide ranging as architectural design, writing and publishing, the social impact of his new novel, Gone Away, Into the Land with its underlying theme of domestic violence. He also gives talks on his unique writing style of integrating relevant social issues into Magical Realism.
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November 5, 2009
Part fairy tale, part drama, Jeffrey Allen’s Goneaway into the Land tells the story of John, a boy whose father is so abusive that John calls him “The Beast.” And a beast this man is - when John’s father physically carries away John’s little sister, Marny, John is launched into a mythical investigation to find her and on a journey that will weave his path with the fate of another place - the Land.
The concept of this novel engaged me from the minute I heard about it - I love when fantasy and reality intertwine on the page, probably because I see most of life working that way. Plus, I know that most kids, myself included, often wanted to escape into another world when life got too hard while we also wanted to solve the problems around us and become heroes of great stories. Allen has pulled all these ideas into one novel, and he’s done so with some prowess. In fact, the book reminds me a little of LeGuin’s story “The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas,” one of my favorite stories of distopia.
In particular, the opening scenes with the Beast and the Beast’s family are harrowing. After I read them, I dreamed horrible dreams of abuse and assault, of the monsters that come after us partially because we have chosen them.
However, I have to admit that I did not get that far into the book before my interest started to wane and I started to grow frustrated. First, the fantastical element of the story is slow to develop; even as the Land and it’s inhabitants are introduced, it’s hard to become invested in THEIR story because so little of it is revealed. Instead, we are given lots of character development in short snatches of scene. More plot in that element of the story would have been helpful.
Secondly, and here my job as a teacher curses me again, Allen does not use commas well. His writing is full of run-on sentences or non-restrictive clauses that aren’t set off with commas. Honestly, a good editor should have caught these mistakes, but he/she didn’t, so the reader is left to deal with them.
Overall, Allen’s book concept is engaging, but the execution lacks luster. The novel could have used a good tightening up and editing. I applaud Allen for his success and wish him all the best - including a stronger editor - on his next book.
The concept of this novel engaged me from the minute I heard about it - I love when fantasy and reality intertwine on the page, probably because I see most of life working that way. Plus, I know that most kids, myself included, often wanted to escape into another world when life got too hard while we also wanted to solve the problems around us and become heroes of great stories. Allen has pulled all these ideas into one novel, and he’s done so with some prowess. In fact, the book reminds me a little of LeGuin’s story “The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas,” one of my favorite stories of distopia.
In particular, the opening scenes with the Beast and the Beast’s family are harrowing. After I read them, I dreamed horrible dreams of abuse and assault, of the monsters that come after us partially because we have chosen them.
However, I have to admit that I did not get that far into the book before my interest started to wane and I started to grow frustrated. First, the fantastical element of the story is slow to develop; even as the Land and it’s inhabitants are introduced, it’s hard to become invested in THEIR story because so little of it is revealed. Instead, we are given lots of character development in short snatches of scene. More plot in that element of the story would have been helpful.
Secondly, and here my job as a teacher curses me again, Allen does not use commas well. His writing is full of run-on sentences or non-restrictive clauses that aren’t set off with commas. Honestly, a good editor should have caught these mistakes, but he/she didn’t, so the reader is left to deal with them.
Overall, Allen’s book concept is engaging, but the execution lacks luster. The novel could have used a good tightening up and editing. I applaud Allen for his success and wish him all the best - including a stronger editor - on his next book.
April 14, 2009
A truly gripping story. I felt present in the world I was reading about, standing next to the most descriptive and interesting characters I have come across in a long time. GoneAway is an emotional story that boasts some of the most outstanding imagery written today. An awesome read.
December 12, 2009
I won this through Goodreads' giveaway over a month ago. I'm finally getting to it now that I've gone through all the ones I borrowed at the library.
I'm impressed with the personalization! I received a letter, and the book had a sticker on the 1st page addressed to ME with the author's signature and the date it was signed.
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12/12/09 - Well, I finally finished this.
This is a fantasy novel. It is Willy Wonka meets Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs, though I haven't seen either movie. Think of a place where jelly beans rain down and ponds are made of jello.
Allen describes this world he created, called ZingZongLand (ZZL), as "a land of inspiration, dedicated to all things sweet." This is the land where sweets are created. Every sweet that the world has ever known originated in this land. It is then gifted to the world, and someone is then given the inspiration to discover what ZingZongLand has already invented.
But, there are 2 deadly concoctions being created. There is an evil one who wishes to use one of these concoctions to rule all over, both in ZZL and the world.
John, a worldly boy, is a key character. He is a 12-year-old who lives in an abusive family. His father is the terror of the family, whom John calls the Beast. The Beast also wants to live where he can be 'king.' The steps he takes to achieve this will break up the family.
The beginning of this novel is told from both the world and from ZZL, separately. Later on, we are just in ZZL. Allen has us following separate groups in this adventure.
The story is much more interesting in ZZL once the paths of the worldly people (John and his family) collide with the world of ZZL. I was feeling a little disconnected in the beginning, may be even a little frustrated. I felt there were things that I didn't understand or that I knew that there was more to the story, but it wasn't being revealed to us yet. This frustration does go away once we are privy to more of the story and the motives and relationships of others.
I know that this is a fantasy world, but sometimes I felt that the general 'goodness' of 99.9% of the creatures in ZZL were unrealistic. I wish any world was fulled with such good souls, hard-working, sacrifice your body stuff. With the Beast finally wrecking havoc in ZZL, I also felt it unrealistic that not more of the train tracks were destroyed, especially with the obsession the Beast has for the train. If I were a Beast, I would ruin several important train tracks and render the train useless. This paragraph comes from the part of me that complains how unrealistic this is or that is when I'm watching a movie :P
I'm torn on the use of the Beast. Maybe for me, the term for John's dad came too early. I think I would have connected more if John had called him the Jerk in the real world, and then later it morphed into the Beast later after entering ZZL. I think calling him the the Beast from the start really made him less human for me in the beginning. I think because of this, I did not fear him as much or he didn't really become like a real person to me. I was also a little confused (hate to admit it) about the size of the Beast. In my mind, his size kept changing. Sometimes I imagined him to be the size of the giant in Jack and the Beanstalk, other times I imagined him to be the size of Goliath (the Philistine slain by David). Unfortunately for me, I had imagined him as a giant in the middle of the story, but the size of Goliath at the end. It wouldn't have bothered me if the Beast's size just continually grew through the story, but for me...it just went to a big human to a ginormous, humongous, earth-shaking giant to a huge man (with some type of growth disorder gone wild haha).
I really, really enjoyed how Allen weaved the adventures between all the characters in the book. I think that's why all the story in ZZL was very enjoyable to me.
I also liked the way Allen dealt with the outcome of the bad, specifically Mengus and the Beast. I thought their outcomes were believable as well as how they were defeated.
More criticism: I did not like the cover art or the font work. I felt like the writing inside was much better than the cover. I'm glad I didn't let that stop me from reading this book, though it was quite long at 550 pages.
I believe this is the 1st book in a series. Even so, this book felt like a stand-alone book. It does have a conclusion, but I do see a couple of areas that could be continued into a sequel. But I am so glad that it's not a cliffhanger ending.
The last chapter takes place 6 months afterward. Often times, I love epilogues and really wonder what happens to the characters in the story. Funny for me to say, but this last chapter was not necessary for me. I was totally fine with how things ended in ZZL. That is very strange for me. I think that shows just how much I enjoyed the adventures in ZZL and how Allen finishes everything up.
Um...I can't remember any other random thoughts at this moment so I'll just include some quotes I enjoyed:
"It may be wrong to suppose that beauty is goodness..."
"Sometimes we are blinded by our own cause."
"Sometimes, if you look beneath the mobility of goodness you find the entrails of evil."
"Although, you all must know that power is never about a place. In fact, should its place be swept away, the seat easily moves elsewhere, unless of course there was no power to begin with--an illusion only."
"There is a path paved with wisdom, and there is a path made over with ignorance."
"This and no other is the root from which a tyrant springs. When he first appears he is a protector." - from Plato
"A boy become a man when a man is needed."
"...that if a man's house burn down...he is likely to see the sky more clearly."
"Blessed are the hearts that can bend, because those are the ones that shall never be broken."
Another random though here, I think I know what the deadly concoction Mengus was making: High Fructose Corn Syrup!!!! hahaha
I'm impressed with the personalization! I received a letter, and the book had a sticker on the 1st page addressed to ME with the author's signature and the date it was signed.
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12/12/09 - Well, I finally finished this.
This is a fantasy novel. It is Willy Wonka meets Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs, though I haven't seen either movie. Think of a place where jelly beans rain down and ponds are made of jello.
Allen describes this world he created, called ZingZongLand (ZZL), as "a land of inspiration, dedicated to all things sweet." This is the land where sweets are created. Every sweet that the world has ever known originated in this land. It is then gifted to the world, and someone is then given the inspiration to discover what ZingZongLand has already invented.
But, there are 2 deadly concoctions being created. There is an evil one who wishes to use one of these concoctions to rule all over, both in ZZL and the world.
John, a worldly boy, is a key character. He is a 12-year-old who lives in an abusive family. His father is the terror of the family, whom John calls the Beast. The Beast also wants to live where he can be 'king.' The steps he takes to achieve this will break up the family.
The beginning of this novel is told from both the world and from ZZL, separately. Later on, we are just in ZZL. Allen has us following separate groups in this adventure.
The story is much more interesting in ZZL once the paths of the worldly people (John and his family) collide with the world of ZZL. I was feeling a little disconnected in the beginning, may be even a little frustrated. I felt there were things that I didn't understand or that I knew that there was more to the story, but it wasn't being revealed to us yet. This frustration does go away once we are privy to more of the story and the motives and relationships of others.
I know that this is a fantasy world, but sometimes I felt that the general 'goodness' of 99.9% of the creatures in ZZL were unrealistic. I wish any world was fulled with such good souls, hard-working, sacrifice your body stuff. With the Beast finally wrecking havoc in ZZL, I also felt it unrealistic that not more of the train tracks were destroyed, especially with the obsession the Beast has for the train. If I were a Beast, I would ruin several important train tracks and render the train useless. This paragraph comes from the part of me that complains how unrealistic this is or that is when I'm watching a movie :P
I'm torn on the use of the Beast. Maybe for me, the term for John's dad came too early. I think I would have connected more if John had called him the Jerk in the real world, and then later it morphed into the Beast later after entering ZZL. I think calling him the the Beast from the start really made him less human for me in the beginning. I think because of this, I did not fear him as much or he didn't really become like a real person to me. I was also a little confused (hate to admit it) about the size of the Beast. In my mind, his size kept changing. Sometimes I imagined him to be the size of the giant in Jack and the Beanstalk, other times I imagined him to be the size of Goliath (the Philistine slain by David). Unfortunately for me, I had imagined him as a giant in the middle of the story, but the size of Goliath at the end. It wouldn't have bothered me if the Beast's size just continually grew through the story, but for me...it just went to a big human to a ginormous, humongous, earth-shaking giant to a huge man (with some type of growth disorder gone wild haha).
I really, really enjoyed how Allen weaved the adventures between all the characters in the book. I think that's why all the story in ZZL was very enjoyable to me.
I also liked the way Allen dealt with the outcome of the bad, specifically Mengus and the Beast. I thought their outcomes were believable as well as how they were defeated.
More criticism: I did not like the cover art or the font work. I felt like the writing inside was much better than the cover. I'm glad I didn't let that stop me from reading this book, though it was quite long at 550 pages.
I believe this is the 1st book in a series. Even so, this book felt like a stand-alone book. It does have a conclusion, but I do see a couple of areas that could be continued into a sequel. But I am so glad that it's not a cliffhanger ending.
The last chapter takes place 6 months afterward. Often times, I love epilogues and really wonder what happens to the characters in the story. Funny for me to say, but this last chapter was not necessary for me. I was totally fine with how things ended in ZZL. That is very strange for me. I think that shows just how much I enjoyed the adventures in ZZL and how Allen finishes everything up.
Um...I can't remember any other random thoughts at this moment so I'll just include some quotes I enjoyed:
"It may be wrong to suppose that beauty is goodness..."
"Sometimes we are blinded by our own cause."
"Sometimes, if you look beneath the mobility of goodness you find the entrails of evil."
"Although, you all must know that power is never about a place. In fact, should its place be swept away, the seat easily moves elsewhere, unless of course there was no power to begin with--an illusion only."
"There is a path paved with wisdom, and there is a path made over with ignorance."
"This and no other is the root from which a tyrant springs. When he first appears he is a protector." - from Plato
"A boy become a man when a man is needed."
"...that if a man's house burn down...he is likely to see the sky more clearly."
"Blessed are the hearts that can bend, because those are the ones that shall never be broken."
Another random though here, I think I know what the deadly concoction Mengus was making: High Fructose Corn Syrup!!!! hahaha
December 20, 2009
I won this book on a goodreads giveaway and was thrilled to receive it signed by the author and later to receive a personal message from him. I was not quite sure what genre of book I was getting into with this but it is fantasy, which is not my usual read.
The vast array of characters were very well-defined and likeable. The author offers great descriptions of the land as well as the characters. The story was well put together with short scenes and good build up. I absolutely loved the pursiers! I found them to have the most unique characteristics which gave the story a fantastic edge.
I was a little confused trying to picture the beast's size. He seemed to be larger than when he left the world but just how large and why he was growing was not clear to me. Perhaps his hunger for power and greed "fed" his evilness? Perhaps he simply appeared in that manner to John? I like that Allen allows the reader to use their own intelligence to interpret the deeper meaning of the story. Many authors attempt this same thing and fail leaving the reader frustrated and wondering if they may as well write the book themselves. But Allen gives you just enough to chew on and then pulls back.
The only part of the book that I wasn't fond of was the land itself. The idea of candyland just seemed irreperably silly to me and I couldn't get past it. I did, however, appreciate the linkages the author used to relate John's personal likes/dislikes to the world. It became apparent that it was John's voyage very early on.
Overall this book is a great adventure and one definetly worth taking!
Merged review:
This newer edition is much better organized than the first. The story flows more easily.
I was not quite sure what genre of book I was getting into with this but it is fantasy, which is not my usual read.
The vast array of characters were very well-defined and likeable. The author offers great descriptions of the land as well as the characters. The story was well put together with short scenes and good build up. I absolutely loved the pursiers! I found them to have the most unique characteristics which gave the story a fantastic edge. Their social position in the world was reflective of current day discrimination and the development of Albertson's relationship with Hampton was a fantastic and surprising addition to the story.
I was a little confused trying to picture the beast's size. He seemed to be larger than when he left the world but just how large and why he was growing was not clear to me. Perhaps his hunger for power and greed "fed" his evilness? Perhaps he simply appeared in that manner to John? I like that Allen allows the reader to use their own intelligence to interpret the deeper meaning of the story. Many authors attempt this same thing and fail leaving the reader frustrated and wondering if they may as well write the book themselves. But Allen gives you just enough to chew on and then pulls back.
The only part of the book that I wasn't fond of was the land itself. The idea of candyland just seemed irreperably silly to me and I couldn't get past it. I did, however, appreciate the linkages the author used to relate John's personal likes/dislikes to the world. It became apparent that it was John's voyage very early on.
Overall this book is a great adventure and one definetly worth taking!
The vast array of characters were very well-defined and likeable. The author offers great descriptions of the land as well as the characters. The story was well put together with short scenes and good build up. I absolutely loved the pursiers! I found them to have the most unique characteristics which gave the story a fantastic edge.
I was a little confused trying to picture the beast's size. He seemed to be larger than when he left the world but just how large and why he was growing was not clear to me. Perhaps his hunger for power and greed "fed" his evilness? Perhaps he simply appeared in that manner to John? I like that Allen allows the reader to use their own intelligence to interpret the deeper meaning of the story. Many authors attempt this same thing and fail leaving the reader frustrated and wondering if they may as well write the book themselves. But Allen gives you just enough to chew on and then pulls back.
The only part of the book that I wasn't fond of was the land itself. The idea of candyland just seemed irreperably silly to me and I couldn't get past it. I did, however, appreciate the linkages the author used to relate John's personal likes/dislikes to the world. It became apparent that it was John's voyage very early on.
Overall this book is a great adventure and one definetly worth taking!
Merged review:
This newer edition is much better organized than the first. The story flows more easily.
I was not quite sure what genre of book I was getting into with this but it is fantasy, which is not my usual read.
The vast array of characters were very well-defined and likeable. The author offers great descriptions of the land as well as the characters. The story was well put together with short scenes and good build up. I absolutely loved the pursiers! I found them to have the most unique characteristics which gave the story a fantastic edge. Their social position in the world was reflective of current day discrimination and the development of Albertson's relationship with Hampton was a fantastic and surprising addition to the story.
I was a little confused trying to picture the beast's size. He seemed to be larger than when he left the world but just how large and why he was growing was not clear to me. Perhaps his hunger for power and greed "fed" his evilness? Perhaps he simply appeared in that manner to John? I like that Allen allows the reader to use their own intelligence to interpret the deeper meaning of the story. Many authors attempt this same thing and fail leaving the reader frustrated and wondering if they may as well write the book themselves. But Allen gives you just enough to chew on and then pulls back.
The only part of the book that I wasn't fond of was the land itself. The idea of candyland just seemed irreperably silly to me and I couldn't get past it. I did, however, appreciate the linkages the author used to relate John's personal likes/dislikes to the world. It became apparent that it was John's voyage very early on.
Overall this book is a great adventure and one definetly worth taking!
January 21, 2011
First let me say that if you are reading this review you must take my word for it- "You will not be disappointed by this author or his wonderful tale. It is simply not possible." I promise you this is one of those rare "good books" we all desire each time we sit down to read, but rarely get. You will walk away from "Gone Away Into the Land" satisfied and content that you have found what you have been looking for, a uniquely good story told in a mastery style.
I received a copy of this book from the author as a goodreads giveaway and I am shocked I received such a wonderful book for free when I've paid for so many that didn't give me nearly as much pleasure as this book did.
Jeffrey B. Allen captured my attention from the very first pages of this wonderful fantasy novel (with a social conscience)and held me through the very last sentence without losing me once along the way. Jeffrey B. Allen's descriptive narrative about the Land brought it to life for me, reminding me of the awe I felt the first time I read "The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe", "Alice in Wonderland", and "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory." The delicious landscape in the Land captivated me as did the host of fascinating characters presented throughout the tale of twelve-year old John Greber. I easily matched people in our world with the "real" world blended with fantasy cast of characters that John and his family came into the Land to interact with. The social and political issues of our "real" world were also manifested in the Land and the reasons for the evils and ill-will were similar as well. Ill gotten gains, greed, and desire for world domination are the themes that create a stir for all involved, leaving John to take on a cruel, raging beast all by himself. John's courage is as palpable as are his fears. I never gave up on his ability to overcome them, when it mattered most.
I longed to read the next chapter and the next chapter into the wee hours of each night until I finally reached the unsuspected conclusion. I really didn't see it going in that direction. Although there was sadness there was also hope. The reading experience left me eager to read Book II. If I had it within my grasps I'd have started it at once to see just where Jeffrey B. Allen will take us next. I'm so looking forward to the journey.
Before reading this book I had not read any fantasy novels as an adult by way of choice but I'm so glad I did. I have a new found respect for the genre now. So Mr. Allen if you see this review, thanks for the book and please don't make us wait too long for the sequel. I anticipate another splendid read.
I received a copy of this book from the author as a goodreads giveaway and I am shocked I received such a wonderful book for free when I've paid for so many that didn't give me nearly as much pleasure as this book did.
Jeffrey B. Allen captured my attention from the very first pages of this wonderful fantasy novel (with a social conscience)and held me through the very last sentence without losing me once along the way. Jeffrey B. Allen's descriptive narrative about the Land brought it to life for me, reminding me of the awe I felt the first time I read "The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe", "Alice in Wonderland", and "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory." The delicious landscape in the Land captivated me as did the host of fascinating characters presented throughout the tale of twelve-year old John Greber. I easily matched people in our world with the "real" world blended with fantasy cast of characters that John and his family came into the Land to interact with. The social and political issues of our "real" world were also manifested in the Land and the reasons for the evils and ill-will were similar as well. Ill gotten gains, greed, and desire for world domination are the themes that create a stir for all involved, leaving John to take on a cruel, raging beast all by himself. John's courage is as palpable as are his fears. I never gave up on his ability to overcome them, when it mattered most.
I longed to read the next chapter and the next chapter into the wee hours of each night until I finally reached the unsuspected conclusion. I really didn't see it going in that direction. Although there was sadness there was also hope. The reading experience left me eager to read Book II. If I had it within my grasps I'd have started it at once to see just where Jeffrey B. Allen will take us next. I'm so looking forward to the journey.
Before reading this book I had not read any fantasy novels as an adult by way of choice but I'm so glad I did. I have a new found respect for the genre now. So Mr. Allen if you see this review, thanks for the book and please don't make us wait too long for the sequel. I anticipate another splendid read.
April 29, 2009
GoneAway into the Land by Jeffrey B. Allen is an interesting juxtaposition between a child’s harsh, abusive reality and a Land of fantasy and tasty confection. It is well-written, engaging, and fascinating, creating a vibrant world that draws in the reader.
The plotline of GoneAway into the Land is innovative, and delicious. The story begins with the sad home life of young John Greber, who tragically has an angry, abusive father; he, his younger sister, Marny and his mother Ellie all live an unhappy existence. The forlorn home life explodes in a violent confrontation that results in John’s father, whom he calls The Beast, kidnapping Marny; this horror catapults John and his mother into a strange odyssey, as they search for the little girl. With the help of the mysterious Driver they venture into the Land, a curious place of sugary bonbons and inspiration intricately connected with our World. This extraordinary place is now in serious danger of destruction by the evil machinations of Mengus, one of the Ministers of the Land, and the rampages of The Beast. Denizens of both worlds are bound together in their attempts to save their respective worlds and one small girl.
GoneAway into the Land is a remarkable novel, and I was most impressed with its characterization. The portrayals in this novel are not larger than life heroic depictions; they are solid, relatable, fully complete people, be they born of the real world or the realm of fantasy. The wondrous characters that abound in this novel are diverse, some malicious, some decent, some in-between. They will earn your loyalty and your affection or your dislike and disdain.
There is a faint dream-like quality to this book, a metaphoric attribute as it deals with themes of friendship, loss, violence, courage, greed, innocence, selfishness, and love. It is an adventure, an allegory, a bittersweet fantasy filled with subtle meaning and depth that never loses its appeal. GoneAway into the Land is a captivating book with a creative narrative that quietly lures a reader into an original world that is fully realised and thoroughly absorbing. It transcends into a superb piece of fiction, and I recommend it highly.
The plotline of GoneAway into the Land is innovative, and delicious. The story begins with the sad home life of young John Greber, who tragically has an angry, abusive father; he, his younger sister, Marny and his mother Ellie all live an unhappy existence. The forlorn home life explodes in a violent confrontation that results in John’s father, whom he calls The Beast, kidnapping Marny; this horror catapults John and his mother into a strange odyssey, as they search for the little girl. With the help of the mysterious Driver they venture into the Land, a curious place of sugary bonbons and inspiration intricately connected with our World. This extraordinary place is now in serious danger of destruction by the evil machinations of Mengus, one of the Ministers of the Land, and the rampages of The Beast. Denizens of both worlds are bound together in their attempts to save their respective worlds and one small girl.
GoneAway into the Land is a remarkable novel, and I was most impressed with its characterization. The portrayals in this novel are not larger than life heroic depictions; they are solid, relatable, fully complete people, be they born of the real world or the realm of fantasy. The wondrous characters that abound in this novel are diverse, some malicious, some decent, some in-between. They will earn your loyalty and your affection or your dislike and disdain.
There is a faint dream-like quality to this book, a metaphoric attribute as it deals with themes of friendship, loss, violence, courage, greed, innocence, selfishness, and love. It is an adventure, an allegory, a bittersweet fantasy filled with subtle meaning and depth that never loses its appeal. GoneAway into the Land is a captivating book with a creative narrative that quietly lures a reader into an original world that is fully realised and thoroughly absorbing. It transcends into a superb piece of fiction, and I recommend it highly.
June 19, 2011
The first chapter of the book sucks you in. But the second chapter spits you back out. That's kind of how the entire first quarter of the book is. It's written in two completely different worlds (literally). Half of the book is about John, Marny, The Beast (an abusive father) and their mother Ellie. The other half is about the Land, which really reminds me of Candy Land (the board game). It's strange really. You've got these two parts that don't really connect until about halfway through the book when they John and Ellie enter Candy Land, and the two sections are inseperable.
After John and Ellie finally get integrated into Candy Land, the book really began for me. Up until then (like 200 pages), I was reading through fairly quickly trying to keep up with all of the names and places in Candy Land. With Silfies, Siftars, Pursiers, and Tricossers it's pretty hard to keep it all straight especially when you're going back and forth between "The World" and The Land.
But once you've got a handle of who's who and what's what, the book is fascinating. I don't want to tell you a whole lot about the story in fear that I'll give away a lot of it, but it reminded me a lot of Charlie and the Chocolate Factory mixed with Lord of the Rings, and since I like both of those books, I really enjoyed it. The writing was solid and kept me interested in all of the different characters (and there are a lot), and the idea of a land of sweets was really intriguing.
I would recommend this book to anyone who likes a little more challenging read (that is completely worth it). Or anyone that likes fantasy mixed with reality. I would definitely pick up another book by Allen if given the chance.
After John and Ellie finally get integrated into Candy Land, the book really began for me. Up until then (like 200 pages), I was reading through fairly quickly trying to keep up with all of the names and places in Candy Land. With Silfies, Siftars, Pursiers, and Tricossers it's pretty hard to keep it all straight especially when you're going back and forth between "The World" and The Land.
But once you've got a handle of who's who and what's what, the book is fascinating. I don't want to tell you a whole lot about the story in fear that I'll give away a lot of it, but it reminded me a lot of Charlie and the Chocolate Factory mixed with Lord of the Rings, and since I like both of those books, I really enjoyed it. The writing was solid and kept me interested in all of the different characters (and there are a lot), and the idea of a land of sweets was really intriguing.
I would recommend this book to anyone who likes a little more challenging read (that is completely worth it). Or anyone that likes fantasy mixed with reality. I would definitely pick up another book by Allen if given the chance.
April 28, 2011
Reviewed by Melissa Cornwell
This book was absolutely amazing! Jeffrey Allen has created a world that is both magical and mysterious. The characters have the most extraordinary courage. Ellie and John represent a very important factor in everyone's life, and that is family. Their determination to find Marny is astounding. I was captivated at once by these characters, and by the plot of the novel. It hooked me in and didn't let go. I became enchanted by the Land and the characters there. I can imagine a colorful and wonderful world. The detail in this book is so exact. I felt like I was actually there in the book, traveling in the cars and tasting the desserts.
Jeffrey Allen takes a children's world and applies it to adults, reminding us that we are never too old to do certain things, and that we will always have that inner child. Children and their imagination should never be underestimated. Through John's character, we see that children are just as capable as adults, and that there are certain times where adults just don't get it. As I read this book, I remember that excitement and determination that I had as a child, as well as pure enjoyment of just doing something, which I think we lose as we become adults.
Excellent book! I look forward to more of Jeffrey Allen's work.
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This book was absolutely amazing! Jeffrey Allen has created a world that is both magical and mysterious. The characters have the most extraordinary courage. Ellie and John represent a very important factor in everyone's life, and that is family. Their determination to find Marny is astounding. I was captivated at once by these characters, and by the plot of the novel. It hooked me in and didn't let go. I became enchanted by the Land and the characters there. I can imagine a colorful and wonderful world. The detail in this book is so exact. I felt like I was actually there in the book, traveling in the cars and tasting the desserts.
Jeffrey Allen takes a children's world and applies it to adults, reminding us that we are never too old to do certain things, and that we will always have that inner child. Children and their imagination should never be underestimated. Through John's character, we see that children are just as capable as adults, and that there are certain times where adults just don't get it. As I read this book, I remember that excitement and determination that I had as a child, as well as pure enjoyment of just doing something, which I think we lose as we become adults.
Excellent book! I look forward to more of Jeffrey Allen's work.
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February 2, 2011
Jeffrey B. Allen has a talent for very colorful, descriptive writing that is a perfect fit for this story that goes back and forth between the real world and ZingZongLand, a kind of delightful Candyland. There there is a battle between good and evil occurring in both places. Some very weighty subjects such as addiction and abuse are dealt with in the midst of this fantasy in an amazing way. This is the first of a trilogy, and even though fantasy is not usually one of the genres I pick up first, I look forward to reading the future volumes.
April 11, 2012
I found this book very difficult to read, maybe because the candy-land was just to much for me. However, the ending completely caught me by surprise and redeemed the whole book. Maybe in time I will reread this. I guess the abuse and candy just didn't set right with me.
November 5, 2009
Review by: Fran Lewis 04/22/2009
Gone Away Into the Land BY Jeffrey B. Allen
Imagine a land so beautiful and so perfect each day is better than
the one before. Imagine living in a place where there is no strife, hate or
conflict. Imagine living in a beautiful land filled with your favorite
confections, treats, and delectable delights. Imagine a land where people are
trained to create cakes, chocolates and other candy treats for their world and
for ours.
Imagine waking up each morning in fear of what the day might bring. Imagine the
fear instilled in a young child by his father. Imagine a mother who is helpless
and cannot protect her children from the physical and psychological abuse
inflicted upon them by their own parent. A father, who blames the entire world,
his family, his bosses and everyone else for his plight in life. Imagine a
parent who makes a deal with a monster to kidnap his own daughter in order to
benefit himself and appease his guilt.
How far will a parent and a brother go to protect and find their child or
sister? To what lengths will a mother go to in order to get her child back?
Reading this novel you will find the answer and much more.
Child abuse, both physical and emotional, are serious issues that many people
face today. This book sends a powerful message to anyone that encounters an
abusive person, and why we must all speak out, and make sure someone
like the father, The Beast, in this book, is prevented from victimizing a child or an adult.
In Gone Away into the Land, Jeffrey B. Allen intermingles the world of hate,
violence and greed with the perfect world of ZingZongLand. John, with the help of
his mom, Ellie, must enter the fantasy world of ZingZongLand and search for his
sister, Marny. The Beast, John’s father, abducted Marny before entering into this land. He did this in return for luxuries and delights to be bestowed upon him by the other monster in the book, Minister Mengus. But all is not what it seems. One must carefully read between the lines.
As John enters this world of confections, sweets and other delights he
encounters many hardships, many unusual people and someone he never knew about.
His mom was attack before he was born and as a result of that attack he was
conceived. His father, forced to marry her, never came to love her or his son.
Throughout the novel, John remembers the many times his father beat him and his
mom. These descriptions of violence are quite graphic and disturbing.
As the book evolves, John meets the people who rule and run this once perfect
Land, and he soon realizes there are not places in his world, or theirs devoid
of hateful people, greed, tyranny and more.
Mengus, the villain, who is trying to take over as ruler, or Siftar of the Land
and the entire World, wants to have all of the sweet concoctions created by the
workers, or Silfies, as they are called in the Land, sent to him for his approval before
they are let out into the WORLD. With the aide of many people that he intimidates
or threatens he manages to destroy much of the Land and cause internal strife where
it did not exist before.
Throughout the struggle to find is sister, John learns the truth behind his
mother’s secret. He learns about someone new that will soon be in his life.
Mengus, seeking to control the world, has captured John’s sister and plans to use her as a
pawn to get his father to help destroy the land and spread fear throughout the
country.
There is a spectacular battle, to the finish, where John rids the world of his evil father. The chapters where Mengus, and Nikhart Maraska, his assistant, are captured makes the reader hold her breath until the very last page is turned. Suspenseful, heartfelt, heartwarming and masterfully written, I would give this book five stars and of course FIVE CHUGGAPOPS IN HONOR OF ZINGZONGLAND.
You will have to read this novel to find out whether John and his family return
to the World or remain and help restore this once beautiful Land.
Not until the very last chapter do you learn and understand what really
did happen to the family in this book.
A must read for everyone. The ending will surprise you.
Fran Lewis, Reviewer
Gone Away Into the Land BY Jeffrey B. Allen
Imagine a land so beautiful and so perfect each day is better than
the one before. Imagine living in a place where there is no strife, hate or
conflict. Imagine living in a beautiful land filled with your favorite
confections, treats, and delectable delights. Imagine a land where people are
trained to create cakes, chocolates and other candy treats for their world and
for ours.
Imagine waking up each morning in fear of what the day might bring. Imagine the
fear instilled in a young child by his father. Imagine a mother who is helpless
and cannot protect her children from the physical and psychological abuse
inflicted upon them by their own parent. A father, who blames the entire world,
his family, his bosses and everyone else for his plight in life. Imagine a
parent who makes a deal with a monster to kidnap his own daughter in order to
benefit himself and appease his guilt.
How far will a parent and a brother go to protect and find their child or
sister? To what lengths will a mother go to in order to get her child back?
Reading this novel you will find the answer and much more.
Child abuse, both physical and emotional, are serious issues that many people
face today. This book sends a powerful message to anyone that encounters an
abusive person, and why we must all speak out, and make sure someone
like the father, The Beast, in this book, is prevented from victimizing a child or an adult.
In Gone Away into the Land, Jeffrey B. Allen intermingles the world of hate,
violence and greed with the perfect world of ZingZongLand. John, with the help of
his mom, Ellie, must enter the fantasy world of ZingZongLand and search for his
sister, Marny. The Beast, John’s father, abducted Marny before entering into this land. He did this in return for luxuries and delights to be bestowed upon him by the other monster in the book, Minister Mengus. But all is not what it seems. One must carefully read between the lines.
As John enters this world of confections, sweets and other delights he
encounters many hardships, many unusual people and someone he never knew about.
His mom was attack before he was born and as a result of that attack he was
conceived. His father, forced to marry her, never came to love her or his son.
Throughout the novel, John remembers the many times his father beat him and his
mom. These descriptions of violence are quite graphic and disturbing.
As the book evolves, John meets the people who rule and run this once perfect
Land, and he soon realizes there are not places in his world, or theirs devoid
of hateful people, greed, tyranny and more.
Mengus, the villain, who is trying to take over as ruler, or Siftar of the Land
and the entire World, wants to have all of the sweet concoctions created by the
workers, or Silfies, as they are called in the Land, sent to him for his approval before
they are let out into the WORLD. With the aide of many people that he intimidates
or threatens he manages to destroy much of the Land and cause internal strife where
it did not exist before.
Throughout the struggle to find is sister, John learns the truth behind his
mother’s secret. He learns about someone new that will soon be in his life.
Mengus, seeking to control the world, has captured John’s sister and plans to use her as a
pawn to get his father to help destroy the land and spread fear throughout the
country.
There is a spectacular battle, to the finish, where John rids the world of his evil father. The chapters where Mengus, and Nikhart Maraska, his assistant, are captured makes the reader hold her breath until the very last page is turned. Suspenseful, heartfelt, heartwarming and masterfully written, I would give this book five stars and of course FIVE CHUGGAPOPS IN HONOR OF ZINGZONGLAND.
You will have to read this novel to find out whether John and his family return
to the World or remain and help restore this once beautiful Land.
Not until the very last chapter do you learn and understand what really
did happen to the family in this book.
A must read for everyone. The ending will surprise you.
Fran Lewis, Reviewer
December 7, 2009
"GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND" is a unique story that takes the reader on a
journey through life as we follow the footsteps of John Greber, a
young hero. At age twelve, John was brave enough to travel into the
land of the unknown to confront his father face-to-face, better known
as "The Beast" through John's eyes. John made a secret vow to seek
revenge on his abusive father, rescue his sister, and help his mother
during a Civil War that threatens not only the land, but the world.
As John guides the reader through the battle of horror, with survival
as the ultimate goal, he becomes stronger each step of the way as he
shares his strength with Ellie, and Marney. The reader can feel his
strength as we continue a journey through the wonders of youth,
learning life's intense lessons, while absorbing the pleasures of
childhood. Can the reader relate to any of the dramatic events that
take place in the land of evil? Does the reader feel hope as the
journey continues? Can a parent read through the mind of Ellie?
Does Marney learn to treat John with respect, and admiration?
I recommend this novel to teens, adults, and all fantasy lovers.
Jeffrey B. Allen created a Masterpiece, a captivating story the
reader can never forget. The author's wild imagination draws the
reader in, like a magnet. The plot is superb, and his
charismatic characters come to life. "GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND" is a
riveting tale of not just John's epic journey, but also our journey
through life. The vivid description of "The Beast" is incredible.
The remarkable journey is chilling, haunting, and mysterious as it
takes the reader to a place with unforgettable consequences. John
Greber tugs at the reader's heart as much as Trevor does in
"PAY IT FORWARD." Jeffrey B. Allen's "GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND"
transforms into an action-packed adventure that explodes with
spectacular special effects, and the reader will indulge into
an awe-inspiring experience as if viewing one of Steven Spielberg's
finest!
Geraldine Ahearn AIOM HonDG (IBC)
Founding Member ABI Women's Review Board
CCRN/ Author of 6 books
Merged review:
"A DELIGHTFUL JOURNEY, WITH UNFORGETTABLE CONSEQUENCES!"
"GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND" is a unique story that takes the reader on a journey through life as we follow the footsteps of John Greber, a young hero. At age twelve, John was brave enough to travel into the land of the unknown to confront his father face-to-face, better known as "The Beast" through John's eyes. John made a secret vow to seek revenge on his abusive father, rescue his sister, and help his mother during a Civil War that threatens not only the land, but the world. As John guides the reader through the battle of horror, with survival as the ultimate goal, he becomes stronger each step of the way as he shares his strength with Ellie, and Marney. The reader can feel his strength as we continue a journey through the wonders of youth, learning life's intense lessons, while absorbing the pleasures of childhood. Can the reader relate to any of the dramatic events that take place in the land of evil? Does the reader feel hope as the journey continues? Can a parent read through the mind of Ellie? Does Marney learn to treat John with respect, and admiration? I recommend this novel to teens, adults, and all fantasy lovers. Jeffrey B. Allen created a Masterpiece, a captivating story the reader can never forget. The author's wild imagination draws the reader in, like a magnet. The plot is superb, and his charismatic characters come to life. "GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND" is a riveting tale of not just John's epic journey, but also our journey through life. The vivid description of "The Beast" is incredible. The remarkable journey is chilling, haunting, and mysterious as it takes the reader to a place with unforgettable consequences. John Greber tugs at the reader's heart as much as Trevor does in "PAY IT FORWARD." Jeffrey B. Allen's "GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND" transforms into an action-packed adventure that explodes with spectacular special effects, and the reader will indulge into an awe-inspiring experience as if viewing one of Steven Spielberg's finest!
journey through life as we follow the footsteps of John Greber, a
young hero. At age twelve, John was brave enough to travel into the
land of the unknown to confront his father face-to-face, better known
as "The Beast" through John's eyes. John made a secret vow to seek
revenge on his abusive father, rescue his sister, and help his mother
during a Civil War that threatens not only the land, but the world.
As John guides the reader through the battle of horror, with survival
as the ultimate goal, he becomes stronger each step of the way as he
shares his strength with Ellie, and Marney. The reader can feel his
strength as we continue a journey through the wonders of youth,
learning life's intense lessons, while absorbing the pleasures of
childhood. Can the reader relate to any of the dramatic events that
take place in the land of evil? Does the reader feel hope as the
journey continues? Can a parent read through the mind of Ellie?
Does Marney learn to treat John with respect, and admiration?
I recommend this novel to teens, adults, and all fantasy lovers.
Jeffrey B. Allen created a Masterpiece, a captivating story the
reader can never forget. The author's wild imagination draws the
reader in, like a magnet. The plot is superb, and his
charismatic characters come to life. "GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND" is a
riveting tale of not just John's epic journey, but also our journey
through life. The vivid description of "The Beast" is incredible.
The remarkable journey is chilling, haunting, and mysterious as it
takes the reader to a place with unforgettable consequences. John
Greber tugs at the reader's heart as much as Trevor does in
"PAY IT FORWARD." Jeffrey B. Allen's "GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND"
transforms into an action-packed adventure that explodes with
spectacular special effects, and the reader will indulge into
an awe-inspiring experience as if viewing one of Steven Spielberg's
finest!
Geraldine Ahearn AIOM HonDG (IBC)
Founding Member ABI Women's Review Board
CCRN/ Author of 6 books
Merged review:
"A DELIGHTFUL JOURNEY, WITH UNFORGETTABLE CONSEQUENCES!"
"GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND" is a unique story that takes the reader on a journey through life as we follow the footsteps of John Greber, a young hero. At age twelve, John was brave enough to travel into the land of the unknown to confront his father face-to-face, better known as "The Beast" through John's eyes. John made a secret vow to seek revenge on his abusive father, rescue his sister, and help his mother during a Civil War that threatens not only the land, but the world. As John guides the reader through the battle of horror, with survival as the ultimate goal, he becomes stronger each step of the way as he shares his strength with Ellie, and Marney. The reader can feel his strength as we continue a journey through the wonders of youth, learning life's intense lessons, while absorbing the pleasures of childhood. Can the reader relate to any of the dramatic events that take place in the land of evil? Does the reader feel hope as the journey continues? Can a parent read through the mind of Ellie? Does Marney learn to treat John with respect, and admiration? I recommend this novel to teens, adults, and all fantasy lovers. Jeffrey B. Allen created a Masterpiece, a captivating story the reader can never forget. The author's wild imagination draws the reader in, like a magnet. The plot is superb, and his charismatic characters come to life. "GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND" is a riveting tale of not just John's epic journey, but also our journey through life. The vivid description of "The Beast" is incredible. The remarkable journey is chilling, haunting, and mysterious as it takes the reader to a place with unforgettable consequences. John Greber tugs at the reader's heart as much as Trevor does in "PAY IT FORWARD." Jeffrey B. Allen's "GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND" transforms into an action-packed adventure that explodes with spectacular special effects, and the reader will indulge into an awe-inspiring experience as if viewing one of Steven Spielberg's finest!
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January 10, 2010Review by Sarah Macdonald, New York, New York
January 7, 2010
GoneAway Into the Land. Wow. I begin this review at eight in the morning, only four hours after finishing one of the most unique reads I have had in ages. I bought the book on a recommendation from a book blog I follow where Jeffrey B. Allen’s, GoneAway into the Land was placed number one on the top ten list for 2009. I have never been misled by the reviewers on this site, however, after glancing at it when it was originally reviewed I moved on to another book and forgot about it. I decided to buy GoneAway only after I read the overall consensus. How could I not?
The first chapter immediately gripped me. I knew from the brief synopsis on the cover and descriptions I had read previously that I was into a fantasy book, but the beginning does not start out that way at all. The first fifty pages take you into the life and mind of a twelve year old boy who is living with his mother and younger sister under the fear and oppressiveness brought on by a very nasty and abusive father. John, the twelve year old boy, and main character, aptly names his father the beast. Although, what happens during the first fifty pages is disturbing, I was drawn in, I couldn’t stop reading. The author sprinkles you with shadows of where the story is headed and also fills you with a deepening compassion for John and his mother and of course a loathing for the father that only grows stronger as the story progresses.
Part II throws you directly into the fantasy yet pulls you out just as you are about to close the book and say, “I’ll pick this up another time.” Don’t, because Allen has a unique gift as a writer. He weaves the reality with the fantasy better than any author I have read in years. You are soon following the quest of a boy into his own fantasy world which becomes known as the land. The land is created by John. It is so relevant and wonderfully obvious that, as the reader, you are willingly led along, all the while being sucked deeper and deeper into this fascinating muse.
GoneAway Into the Land is an incredible book because it never becomes a fairy tale. It is one of those fantasy fiction books that defy a genre classification. GoneAway is a slow, steady series of revelations that turns into a superior coming of age story where you must root for the hero and wish the worst for the villains. Yet, along the way there are intricate philosophical and symbolic interactions among an abundance of wonderful and unique characters. GoneAway Into the Land is a large story with multiple plots. As a result, there are times when it is easy to question Allen’s motives, yet the interplay of the plight of the land with its parallels to the world, as well as the ultimate quest of the hero will actually cause you to pause to reflect, or go back to re-read just to get the full impact. When it all starts to come together, you had better plan your time because you will not easily put this book down. And be prepared for a few surprises.
When Allen first introduces his reader to the land it is easy to take literally this fantasy place he dreamed up for the benefit of his hero, twelve year old John Greber. It would also have been easy to label it rather a silly place where sweet flavors are invented. But you quickly lose that feeling because of Allen’s talent to send you a powerful message that this land is not what it seems. Its relevance to modern society, politics, greed, love, hate, life and death is astounding. And the relevance to the solutions John is searching for make its outward appearance perfectly sensible.
I recommend this book highly. It can be enjoyed on many levels, but I for one took a great deal from this book. The enormous compassion and relationship I developed throughout the story with the struggle of one boy to reconcile his life and find a place where he could be at peace will not soon leave me. And the characters I came to love, and some others I loathed, will also stay with me for a long time to come. A good read is something that remains in your mind as an indelible impression. GoneAway Into the Land is just such a novel.
January 7, 2010
GoneAway Into the Land. Wow. I begin this review at eight in the morning, only four hours after finishing one of the most unique reads I have had in ages. I bought the book on a recommendation from a book blog I follow where Jeffrey B. Allen’s, GoneAway into the Land was placed number one on the top ten list for 2009. I have never been misled by the reviewers on this site, however, after glancing at it when it was originally reviewed I moved on to another book and forgot about it. I decided to buy GoneAway only after I read the overall consensus. How could I not?
The first chapter immediately gripped me. I knew from the brief synopsis on the cover and descriptions I had read previously that I was into a fantasy book, but the beginning does not start out that way at all. The first fifty pages take you into the life and mind of a twelve year old boy who is living with his mother and younger sister under the fear and oppressiveness brought on by a very nasty and abusive father. John, the twelve year old boy, and main character, aptly names his father the beast. Although, what happens during the first fifty pages is disturbing, I was drawn in, I couldn’t stop reading. The author sprinkles you with shadows of where the story is headed and also fills you with a deepening compassion for John and his mother and of course a loathing for the father that only grows stronger as the story progresses.
Part II throws you directly into the fantasy yet pulls you out just as you are about to close the book and say, “I’ll pick this up another time.” Don’t, because Allen has a unique gift as a writer. He weaves the reality with the fantasy better than any author I have read in years. You are soon following the quest of a boy into his own fantasy world which becomes known as the land. The land is created by John. It is so relevant and wonderfully obvious that, as the reader, you are willingly led along, all the while being sucked deeper and deeper into this fascinating muse.
GoneAway Into the Land is an incredible book because it never becomes a fairy tale. It is one of those fantasy fiction books that defy a genre classification. GoneAway is a slow, steady series of revelations that turns into a superior coming of age story where you must root for the hero and wish the worst for the villains. Yet, along the way there are intricate philosophical and symbolic interactions among an abundance of wonderful and unique characters. GoneAway Into the Land is a large story with multiple plots. As a result, there are times when it is easy to question Allen’s motives, yet the interplay of the plight of the land with its parallels to the world, as well as the ultimate quest of the hero will actually cause you to pause to reflect, or go back to re-read just to get the full impact. When it all starts to come together, you had better plan your time because you will not easily put this book down. And be prepared for a few surprises.
When Allen first introduces his reader to the land it is easy to take literally this fantasy place he dreamed up for the benefit of his hero, twelve year old John Greber. It would also have been easy to label it rather a silly place where sweet flavors are invented. But you quickly lose that feeling because of Allen’s talent to send you a powerful message that this land is not what it seems. Its relevance to modern society, politics, greed, love, hate, life and death is astounding. And the relevance to the solutions John is searching for make its outward appearance perfectly sensible.
I recommend this book highly. It can be enjoyed on many levels, but I for one took a great deal from this book. The enormous compassion and relationship I developed throughout the story with the struggle of one boy to reconcile his life and find a place where he could be at peace will not soon leave me. And the characters I came to love, and some others I loathed, will also stay with me for a long time to come. A good read is something that remains in your mind as an indelible impression. GoneAway Into the Land is just such a novel.
May 2, 2010
Let me start off by saying in order for me to give a book a 5 star rating, it has to completely consume me and when I’m finished reading it, I’m still thinking about it days later. I love this book. I love stories that you find yourself stopping at periods and pausing at commas to get the full effect. There was so much depth, which so many books lack these days. The poetry of Jeffery Allen’s words allowed my mind to truly see the unique characters that became part of my life for awhile. I loved them and some, I even loved to hate. I usually rush though stories, just so I can start another, but with GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND, I took my time. A whopping week! And now as I write my review, I’m still attached to the characters I’ve come to love.
About the story...GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND is unlike anything I have ever read before. It’s a completely unique story. Think of the children’s board game CANDYLAND gone wrong. Think of the characters, to name a few, King Kandy, Lord Licorice and the Molasses Monster. Think of Tim Burton getting his hands on the game gone wrong and wrapping his mind around the chaos.
Jeffery Allen fills your mind with colors and the love of sugary things. I popped Skittles and M&M's the entire time I read it. Not only do colors consume you but the plot is gripping with page turning suspense. At times I thought of LORD OF THE RINGS because each group of characters had their own quest. Throughout the story you are introduced to these characters and taken away into their adventures. Piece by piece all this stories and characters come together for the big battle in the end.
I would recommend this story to YA and adults, though above average young children would love it too. Great for children that know how to let themselves fall into a fantasy world. This story has a sequel but it doesn’t leave you hanging. There is enough closure but still I long for more. I look forward for the follow-up and happy to add this book to the shelves in my own family library.
Merged review:
Let me start off by saying in order for me to give a book a 5 star rating, it has to completely consume me and when I’m finished reading it, I’m still thinking about it days later. I love this book. I love stories that you find yourself stopping at periods and pausing at commas to get the full effect. There was so much depth, which so many books lack these days. The poetry of Jeffery Allen’s words allowed my mind to truly see the unique characters that became part of my life for awhile. I loved them and some, I even loved to hate. I usually rush though stories, just so I can start another, but with GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND, I took my time. A whopping week! And now as I write my review, I’m still attached to the characters I’ve come to love.
About the story...GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND is unlike anything I have ever read before. It’s a completely unique story. Think of the children’s board game CANDYLAND gone wrong. Think of the characters, to name a few, King Kandy, Lord Licorice and the Molasses Monster. Think of Tim Burton getting his hands on the game gone wrong and wrapping his mind around the chaos.
Jeffery Allen fills your mind with colors and the love of sugary things. I popped Skittles and M&M's the entire time I read it. Not only do colors consume you but the plot is gripping with page turning suspense. At times I thought of LORD OF THE RINGS because each group of characters had their own quest. Throughout the story you are introduced to these characters and taken away into their adventures. Piece by piece all this stories and characters come together for the big battle in the end.
I would recommend this story to YA and adults, though above average young children would love it too. Great for children that know how to let themselves fall into a fantasy world. This story has a sequel but it doesn’t leave you hanging. There is enough closure but still I long for more. I look forward for the follow-up and happy to add this book to the shelves in my own family library.
About the story...GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND is unlike anything I have ever read before. It’s a completely unique story. Think of the children’s board game CANDYLAND gone wrong. Think of the characters, to name a few, King Kandy, Lord Licorice and the Molasses Monster. Think of Tim Burton getting his hands on the game gone wrong and wrapping his mind around the chaos.
Jeffery Allen fills your mind with colors and the love of sugary things. I popped Skittles and M&M's the entire time I read it. Not only do colors consume you but the plot is gripping with page turning suspense. At times I thought of LORD OF THE RINGS because each group of characters had their own quest. Throughout the story you are introduced to these characters and taken away into their adventures. Piece by piece all this stories and characters come together for the big battle in the end.
I would recommend this story to YA and adults, though above average young children would love it too. Great for children that know how to let themselves fall into a fantasy world. This story has a sequel but it doesn’t leave you hanging. There is enough closure but still I long for more. I look forward for the follow-up and happy to add this book to the shelves in my own family library.
Merged review:
Let me start off by saying in order for me to give a book a 5 star rating, it has to completely consume me and when I’m finished reading it, I’m still thinking about it days later. I love this book. I love stories that you find yourself stopping at periods and pausing at commas to get the full effect. There was so much depth, which so many books lack these days. The poetry of Jeffery Allen’s words allowed my mind to truly see the unique characters that became part of my life for awhile. I loved them and some, I even loved to hate. I usually rush though stories, just so I can start another, but with GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND, I took my time. A whopping week! And now as I write my review, I’m still attached to the characters I’ve come to love.
About the story...GONEAWAY INTO THE LAND is unlike anything I have ever read before. It’s a completely unique story. Think of the children’s board game CANDYLAND gone wrong. Think of the characters, to name a few, King Kandy, Lord Licorice and the Molasses Monster. Think of Tim Burton getting his hands on the game gone wrong and wrapping his mind around the chaos.
Jeffery Allen fills your mind with colors and the love of sugary things. I popped Skittles and M&M's the entire time I read it. Not only do colors consume you but the plot is gripping with page turning suspense. At times I thought of LORD OF THE RINGS because each group of characters had their own quest. Throughout the story you are introduced to these characters and taken away into their adventures. Piece by piece all this stories and characters come together for the big battle in the end.
I would recommend this story to YA and adults, though above average young children would love it too. Great for children that know how to let themselves fall into a fantasy world. This story has a sequel but it doesn’t leave you hanging. There is enough closure but still I long for more. I look forward for the follow-up and happy to add this book to the shelves in my own family library.
June 25, 2010
The dust jacket text for Gone Away: Into the Land promises an epic fantasy adventure. I can tell you that this is one novel that exceeds expectations. Author Jeffrey B. Allen takes the reader on an adventure that will leave you thinking about the story long after you close the final page.
We meet our protagonist, twelve-year-old John Gerber. John's life is not that of an average pre-teen-not even close. John, his mother Ellie, and his sister Marny live in constant, paralyzing fear of John's father, Daniel. Daniel, or the beast as John calls him, is an extremely volatile man whose rage could explode on his family at any moment-and explode it does. John dreams of ending the beast's reign of terror, of taking his family away before it is too late. The first fifty pages of Part 1 are no fantasy as the author describes in vivid, shocking detail Daniel's unpredictable fury and a horrible example of violent abuse, as the beast leaves John and Ellie beaten and bloodied and kidnaps six-year-old Marny.
With the help of a mysterious taxi driver, John and Ellie begin their search for Marny. This is where the fantasy starts as it is believed that Marny is somewhere in the candy factory where Daniel was employed. Soon John and his mother are aboard a train in an amazing land called ZingZongLand. ZZL is a place that is all about creating the best tasting candy. The leader of the land is called KyaSiftar. The Siftar's main rival is the minister of Southland province named Mengus. Desperate for power, Mengus has his sights set on dominating the land and controlling the new flavor creations. Mengus recruits the beast to aid in his conquest of the Land. He believes that gaining control in the Land is the key to overthrowing the World as well.
Jeffrey B. Allen showcases his considerable imagination and writing talent in creating an entire universe. His lead is a believable, lovable character with which readers young and old will quickly bond. The villains are wonderfully horrible and easy to loathe, without overshadowing the hero. The secondary characters are interesting, fresh and well drawn. The dialogue is crisp and clear and well suited to the vast variety of creatures and peoples. Allen slowly reveals his characters' secrets along the way, keeping the reader captivated throughout. He wastes none of these nearly 500 pages, using suspense and vibrant description to keep the pages turning. He brings all the players together in a David versus Goliath-type showdown for the ages that will have you rooting for John to the end.
Gone Away is building momentum, was recently picked up by a major publisher and was accepted in several school libraries. I believe it will become the next time-tested classic fantasy tale, universally adored and mentioned in the same breath as The Wizard of Oz, Charlie and the Chocolate Factory and The Lord of The Rings. I highly recommend this thought-provoking, entertaining read.
http://www.jeffreyballen.com/
Review by William R. Potter
Article Source: Gone Away Into the Land by Jeffrey B. Allen
We meet our protagonist, twelve-year-old John Gerber. John's life is not that of an average pre-teen-not even close. John, his mother Ellie, and his sister Marny live in constant, paralyzing fear of John's father, Daniel. Daniel, or the beast as John calls him, is an extremely volatile man whose rage could explode on his family at any moment-and explode it does. John dreams of ending the beast's reign of terror, of taking his family away before it is too late. The first fifty pages of Part 1 are no fantasy as the author describes in vivid, shocking detail Daniel's unpredictable fury and a horrible example of violent abuse, as the beast leaves John and Ellie beaten and bloodied and kidnaps six-year-old Marny.
With the help of a mysterious taxi driver, John and Ellie begin their search for Marny. This is where the fantasy starts as it is believed that Marny is somewhere in the candy factory where Daniel was employed. Soon John and his mother are aboard a train in an amazing land called ZingZongLand. ZZL is a place that is all about creating the best tasting candy. The leader of the land is called KyaSiftar. The Siftar's main rival is the minister of Southland province named Mengus. Desperate for power, Mengus has his sights set on dominating the land and controlling the new flavor creations. Mengus recruits the beast to aid in his conquest of the Land. He believes that gaining control in the Land is the key to overthrowing the World as well.
Jeffrey B. Allen showcases his considerable imagination and writing talent in creating an entire universe. His lead is a believable, lovable character with which readers young and old will quickly bond. The villains are wonderfully horrible and easy to loathe, without overshadowing the hero. The secondary characters are interesting, fresh and well drawn. The dialogue is crisp and clear and well suited to the vast variety of creatures and peoples. Allen slowly reveals his characters' secrets along the way, keeping the reader captivated throughout. He wastes none of these nearly 500 pages, using suspense and vibrant description to keep the pages turning. He brings all the players together in a David versus Goliath-type showdown for the ages that will have you rooting for John to the end.
Gone Away is building momentum, was recently picked up by a major publisher and was accepted in several school libraries. I believe it will become the next time-tested classic fantasy tale, universally adored and mentioned in the same breath as The Wizard of Oz, Charlie and the Chocolate Factory and The Lord of The Rings. I highly recommend this thought-provoking, entertaining read.
http://www.jeffreyballen.com/
Review by William R. Potter
Article Source: Gone Away Into the Land by Jeffrey B. Allen
August 27, 2010
The dust jacket text for Gone Away: Into the Land promises an epic fantasy adventure. I can tell you that this is one novel that exceeds expectations. Author Jeffrey B. Allen takes the reader on an adventure that will leave you thinking about the story long after you close the final page.
We meet our protagonist, twelve-year-old John Gerber. John's life is not that of an average pre-teen-not even close. John, his mother Ellie, and his sister Marny live in constant, paralyzing fear of John's father, Daniel. Daniel, or the beast as John calls him, is an extremely volatile man whose rage could explode on his family at any moment-and explode it does. John dreams of ending the beast's reign of terror, of taking his family away before it is too late. The first fifty pages of Part 1 are no fantasy as the author describes in vivid, shocking detail Daniel's unpredictable fury and a horrible example of violent abuse, as the beast leaves John and Ellie beaten and bloodied and kidnaps six-year-old Marny.
With the help of a mysterious taxi driver, John and Ellie begin their search for Marny. This is where the fantasy starts as it is believed that Marny is somewhere in the candy factory where Daniel was employed. Soon John and his mother are aboard a train in an amazing land called ZingZongLand. ZZL is a place that is all about creating the best tasting candy. The leader of the land is called KyaSiftar. The Siftar's main rival is the minister of Southland province named Mengus. Desperate for power, Mengus has his sights set on dominating the land and controlling the new flavor creations. Mengus recruits the beast to aid in his conquest of the Land. He believes that gaining control in the Land is the key to overthrowing the World as well.
Jeffrey B. Allen showcases his considerable imagination and writing talent in creating an entire universe. His lead is a believable, lovable character with which readers young and old will quickly bond. The villains are wonderfully horrible and easy to loathe, without overshadowing the hero. The secondary characters are interesting, fresh and well drawn. The dialogue is crisp and clear and well suited to the vast variety of creatures and peoples. Allen slowly reveals his characters' secrets along the way, keeping the reader captivated throughout. He wastes none of these nearly 500 pages, using suspense and vibrant description to keep the pages turning. He brings all the players together in a David versus Goliath-type showdown for the ages that will have you rooting for John to the end.
Gone Away is building momentum, was recently picked up by a major publisher and was accepted in several school libraries. I believe it will become the next time-tested classic fantasy tale, universally adored and mentioned in the same breath as The Wizard of Oz, Charlie and the Chocolate Factory and The Lord of The Rings. I highly recommend this thought-provoking, entertaining read.
Gone Away Into The Land
We meet our protagonist, twelve-year-old John Gerber. John's life is not that of an average pre-teen-not even close. John, his mother Ellie, and his sister Marny live in constant, paralyzing fear of John's father, Daniel. Daniel, or the beast as John calls him, is an extremely volatile man whose rage could explode on his family at any moment-and explode it does. John dreams of ending the beast's reign of terror, of taking his family away before it is too late. The first fifty pages of Part 1 are no fantasy as the author describes in vivid, shocking detail Daniel's unpredictable fury and a horrible example of violent abuse, as the beast leaves John and Ellie beaten and bloodied and kidnaps six-year-old Marny.
With the help of a mysterious taxi driver, John and Ellie begin their search for Marny. This is where the fantasy starts as it is believed that Marny is somewhere in the candy factory where Daniel was employed. Soon John and his mother are aboard a train in an amazing land called ZingZongLand. ZZL is a place that is all about creating the best tasting candy. The leader of the land is called KyaSiftar. The Siftar's main rival is the minister of Southland province named Mengus. Desperate for power, Mengus has his sights set on dominating the land and controlling the new flavor creations. Mengus recruits the beast to aid in his conquest of the Land. He believes that gaining control in the Land is the key to overthrowing the World as well.
Jeffrey B. Allen showcases his considerable imagination and writing talent in creating an entire universe. His lead is a believable, lovable character with which readers young and old will quickly bond. The villains are wonderfully horrible and easy to loathe, without overshadowing the hero. The secondary characters are interesting, fresh and well drawn. The dialogue is crisp and clear and well suited to the vast variety of creatures and peoples. Allen slowly reveals his characters' secrets along the way, keeping the reader captivated throughout. He wastes none of these nearly 500 pages, using suspense and vibrant description to keep the pages turning. He brings all the players together in a David versus Goliath-type showdown for the ages that will have you rooting for John to the end.
Gone Away is building momentum, was recently picked up by a major publisher and was accepted in several school libraries. I believe it will become the next time-tested classic fantasy tale, universally adored and mentioned in the same breath as The Wizard of Oz, Charlie and the Chocolate Factory and The Lord of The Rings. I highly recommend this thought-provoking, entertaining read.
Gone Away Into The Land
February 22, 2010
I just finished reading this book about 15 minutes ago. I won a copy through Goodreads, and was surpised to have a signed, personal message from the author in the front cover.
The author did a great job getting the reader to care for the main character, John, and his mother Ellie early on. This proved very useful as I felt that the book got slow not long after the Land is introduced. The author has a knack for vivid descriptions, but I felt that sometimes got in the way of the pace of the story. I also felt that some things were not fleshed out enough, such as the difference between GoneAway and Death, but this might be a topic in future GoneAway books.
I had a hard time taking the Land seriously at first, but as more time was spent in it, and the harsh situations they were to be facing it became a lot easier to get into and read.
I was particularly impressed with how well the author handled such adult topics on a level that is not over-bearing or too difficult to read while still giving the topics the needed time they deserve. One thing is for certain, this book is not just a fun ride. I will be thinking about it for a while. The search for truth, reconciliation, and closure are easy to relate to and what drives you through the story.
These are mostly minor drawbacks to a solid story and, like I mentioned, a both-feet-first introduction to the GoneAway series. I am curious to discover what other topics are addressed by the author in future installments.
The author did a great job getting the reader to care for the main character, John, and his mother Ellie early on. This proved very useful as I felt that the book got slow not long after the Land is introduced. The author has a knack for vivid descriptions, but I felt that sometimes got in the way of the pace of the story. I also felt that some things were not fleshed out enough, such as the difference between GoneAway and Death, but this might be a topic in future GoneAway books.
I had a hard time taking the Land seriously at first, but as more time was spent in it, and the harsh situations they were to be facing it became a lot easier to get into and read.
I was particularly impressed with how well the author handled such adult topics on a level that is not over-bearing or too difficult to read while still giving the topics the needed time they deserve. One thing is for certain, this book is not just a fun ride. I will be thinking about it for a while. The search for truth, reconciliation, and closure are easy to relate to and what drives you through the story.
These are mostly minor drawbacks to a solid story and, like I mentioned, a both-feet-first introduction to the GoneAway series. I am curious to discover what other topics are addressed by the author in future installments.
November 5, 2009
In GoneAway into the Land, the author allows us a refreshing escape from
reality. Although fantasy fiction, a cross between The Wizard of Oz and
Alice in Wonderland, but on steroids, and eerily parallel to real life power hungry politics we face in everyday life, GoneAway into the Land keeps you on the edge of your seat with suspense until the very end. GoneAway has been so successful that it was just picked up by a New York Publisher and will soon be re-released in hardback with a jacket as well as soft cover. The publisher will be sending Jeffrey B. Allen on a signing tour and media exposure for the novel will increase tenfold. Kudos to you Jeffrey, you inspire us all!
– Elise Crawford, author of A Promise Kept
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In GoneAway into the Land Jeffery Allen allows us a refreshing escape from reality. Although fantasy fiction, a cross between The Wizard of Oz and Alice in Wonderland, but on steroids, and eerily parallel to real life power hungry politics we face in everyday life, GoneAway into the Land keeps you on the edge of your seat with suspense until the very end.
– Elise Crawford, author of A Promise Kept
reality. Although fantasy fiction, a cross between The Wizard of Oz and
Alice in Wonderland, but on steroids, and eerily parallel to real life power hungry politics we face in everyday life, GoneAway into the Land keeps you on the edge of your seat with suspense until the very end. GoneAway has been so successful that it was just picked up by a New York Publisher and will soon be re-released in hardback with a jacket as well as soft cover. The publisher will be sending Jeffrey B. Allen on a signing tour and media exposure for the novel will increase tenfold. Kudos to you Jeffrey, you inspire us all!
– Elise Crawford, author of A Promise Kept
Merged review:
In GoneAway into the Land Jeffery Allen allows us a refreshing escape from reality. Although fantasy fiction, a cross between The Wizard of Oz and Alice in Wonderland, but on steroids, and eerily parallel to real life power hungry politics we face in everyday life, GoneAway into the Land keeps you on the edge of your seat with suspense until the very end.
– Elise Crawford, author of A Promise Kept
February 25, 2010
I won this from a goodreads giveaway and it sounds like there have been improvements over the edition that I read. Overall I liked the concept of an abusive home life and the escape into a fantasy land. The story, however, is told in small, choppy pieces, making it hard to follow and breaking up the momentum. My book also began in John’s point of view and then part-way through changed to third person. Again, this could just be a matter of the edition that I have.
Some portions of the story seem to drag on and others are not as developed as I would like. I never understood why the Beast was so large in the Land and seemed to lose his ability to speak. I also felt like Ellie's character was underdeveloped and perhaps stereotypical.
I loved the Pursier characters. I thought that they were very inventive and enduring creatures. The concept of a candy land fits into any child’s fantasy land. I liked the parallel of the train with John’s candy creations in the real world.
Some portions of the story seem to drag on and others are not as developed as I would like. I never understood why the Beast was so large in the Land and seemed to lose his ability to speak. I also felt like Ellie's character was underdeveloped and perhaps stereotypical.
I loved the Pursier characters. I thought that they were very inventive and enduring creatures. The concept of a candy land fits into any child’s fantasy land. I liked the parallel of the train with John’s candy creations in the real world.
April 18, 2009
I just finished reading this book called "GoneAway Into The Land" by Jeffrey B. Allen. The author contacted me on Facebook and asked if I would review his book. I am so glad he did! It's an amazing story told with wonderful imagination.
GoneAway is the story of John, who is twelve years old and a victim of the abusive wrath of his father whom John renames, the Beast. The Beast takes off with John's younger sister, Marny. In order to save Marny, John and his mom venture into the Land. It is during their desperate search to find her that John decides he must destroy the Beast. Not only to protect himself and his mother from future abuse but to save his sister and the friends he has made in the Land. An evil plot developed by Minister Mengus may destroy the Land and everyone in it. Will John be able to save his sister and this new land he's come to love?
I would highly recommend this book to anyone who was once a kid. You will not be disappointed!
GoneAway is the story of John, who is twelve years old and a victim of the abusive wrath of his father whom John renames, the Beast. The Beast takes off with John's younger sister, Marny. In order to save Marny, John and his mom venture into the Land. It is during their desperate search to find her that John decides he must destroy the Beast. Not only to protect himself and his mother from future abuse but to save his sister and the friends he has made in the Land. An evil plot developed by Minister Mengus may destroy the Land and everyone in it. Will John be able to save his sister and this new land he's come to love?
I would highly recommend this book to anyone who was once a kid. You will not be disappointed!
February 2, 2011
I won this book in a Goodreads Giveaway, and boy, am I glad.
This creative, extermely imaginitive novel is one of the most touching I've read in a very long time. It is as magical as it is engaging.
12 year old John and his little sister Marny live with their mother Ellie and their father Daniel Greber (a tyrannical and abusive monster John nicknames "Beast"). The Greber household is thrown into an even more catastrophic turmoil when Daniel suddenly abducts Marny and completely disappears. As they feverishly rush to find Marny, they find themselves transported to a unique and idyllic world that is being brought to the brink of ruin by a heinous, dictator like presence.
Although many of the characters are quirky and charming (I loved the Pursiers), a few were quite menacing. I thought John showed a remarkable resilience when faced with adversity. This captivating book, in my humble opinion represents optimism and hope. Snag a copy!
This creative, extermely imaginitive novel is one of the most touching I've read in a very long time. It is as magical as it is engaging.
12 year old John and his little sister Marny live with their mother Ellie and their father Daniel Greber (a tyrannical and abusive monster John nicknames "Beast"). The Greber household is thrown into an even more catastrophic turmoil when Daniel suddenly abducts Marny and completely disappears. As they feverishly rush to find Marny, they find themselves transported to a unique and idyllic world that is being brought to the brink of ruin by a heinous, dictator like presence.
Although many of the characters are quirky and charming (I loved the Pursiers), a few were quite menacing. I thought John showed a remarkable resilience when faced with adversity. This captivating book, in my humble opinion represents optimism and hope. Snag a copy!
December 16, 2009
Goneaway Into the Land is an inventive, wildly imaginative book unlike anything I have read before. I was one of the lucky few who won a copy through the giveaways and it was a joy to read. It blends the bleak and harsh reality of an abusive family situation with a fantastic and strange land of sweets. The two worlds come crashing together when twelve year old John must travel to the Land to rescue his sister from his crazed father (the Beast). In turn he must also save the Land itself from the Beast as well, who is bent on distruction of everything good, including his own family. This book builds up not only the action and suspense, but also each of the myriad of characters that grace its pages. The more you learn of each of the characters, the more you are drawn into the pages of this wonderful book.
June 14, 2010
I had high expections for Goneaway Into the Land, with its promising description and unusual cover. I was not disappointed. From the moment I opened the book and read the very first chapter, I was sucked into the unsettling and difficult life of young John who is tragically mistreated by his abusive and unpredictable father. John, along with the help of his distraught mother is propelled into a fantasy land where he must begin a quest to find his young sister Marney who was abducted by their cruel father. The story is both captivating and chilling, and the plot is quite unique. The chapters jumped between reality and fantasy, capturing my attention and keeping it focused until I reluctantly decided to set the book down. As an avid reader of adventure and fantasy novels, I was delighted with the action, mystery, and fantasy depicted in this extraordinary story. Highly recommended.
February 23, 2011
GoneAway is a thoroughly enjoyable book that I will read again and again. The characters travel through a fantastical land, think CandyLand and Wizard of Oz meets Willy Wonka, to finally confront The Beast (the abusive husband/father that is not destroying this other world). Allen's storytelling skills are tremendous and he did a superb job of telling the journey that John and Ellie go through on their quest to find John's sister and end the tyranny that is The Beast. On their adventures they end up saving not only themselves, but the fate of the candy makers in ZingZongLand as well.
I would love to see this book made into a movie!!! (Very Never Ending Story like). I was glad to have received this as a first-reads. I was deeply enthralled with this book. I can't wait to read the other books in the series.
I would love to see this book made into a movie!!! (Very Never Ending Story like). I was glad to have received this as a first-reads. I was deeply enthralled with this book. I can't wait to read the other books in the series.
September 10, 2010
Jeffrey B. Allen has brought a powerful and exciting new twist to the genre of Magical Realism. By skillfully shifting in and out of reality, Allen intertwines human drama with a land of the unknown. Allen's unique style tangles the tragedy in our lives with our strength of will to set things right. Gone Away, Into the Land is an epic adventure that will take you back to your child hood, a time of sweet innocence. The unforgettable characters will make you laugh and cry and, at times, cause you to take pause to ponder. But, all the while, Allen is gradually leading you into a deeply philosophical drama that, as with all great novels, will stay in your mind for years.
April 14, 2011
I won this book from Goodreads, but I guess I posted it in the wrong place. Anyway, the book is awesome. It was sensitive and thought-provoking, but also more imaginitive than anything I'd read in a while. At first glance, it appears to be a YA novel, but once you get started, you ralize that it is far more.
The story centers around John, a preteen living in an abusive household. One day, his dad (appropriately nicknamed "beast" abducts John's little (6 year old) sister, Marny. John and his Mom (Ellie) embark upon an amazing and facinating quest to bring her home. This is quite a fantastic story, I would recommend it to everyone.
The story centers around John, a preteen living in an abusive household. One day, his dad (appropriately nicknamed "beast" abducts John's little (6 year old) sister, Marny. John and his Mom (Ellie) embark upon an amazing and facinating quest to bring her home. This is quite a fantastic story, I would recommend it to everyone.
February 17, 2011
I won this off of first reads and had very high expectations, it sounded like it was right up my alley. However, I just couldn't seem to get into it. I VERY rarely don't finish a book but there was no real flow for me, I had a hard time keeping up with the rapid change of story line. I will keep my place and maybe pick it up again to see if I have better luck with it. It got rave reviews from others so maybe it just wasn't the right book at the right time for me.
December 10, 2009
A wonderful gem of a book! I wasn't sure what to expect when I won this as part of a Goodreads giveaway, but I can happily report that I was blown away. For me, it's always the characters that make any book, and John was immediately real to me, and I truly cared about this character in a way I haven't in a long time. I felt a part of the story, and will definitely be reading this one again.
August 10, 2010
This book is not only one of the greatest fantasy books of all time, it is one of the greatest books of all time. Even though it took me a long time to finish this book it is still one of my most favorite. The characters were great Albertson was my favorite. I am excited for the sequel. J.B. Allen is a wonderful writer. And I can't wait for any future books.
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February 23, 2013I received Gone Away Into the Land this week. It arrived in beautiful condition as someone had taken the time and effort to package it well! Thank you for the signed copy! I always appreciate it when the author signs the book! I have just begun the book and will write more later.
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