Firstly and most importantly; the roast of Ash: I waited the entire book for Ash to pull his head outta his a$$ and stop treating Chastity so toxically, for apparently nothing. I cheered for Chas when she told Ash that one day he would be on his knees begging her forgiveness because of what he’d said about her, only for them to just sleep together in the end without him changing anything?!? He made me so mad the way he gambled with the trials, and treated Chastity for literally no real reason. He was constantly overstepping and almost controlling of the guys because of his irrational insecurities, which he just continued to practically lord over everyone when they confronted him about it. Jonah did not deserve to be yo-yo-ed around by Ash being so hot and cold and dismissive of him, he was really rather toxic in both of his ‘relationships’ and with his team. I really hope to see him make some changes after the ending of this book, and there better be some authentic groveling on his part.
The secret society irked me; it was very unclear what it’s actually purpose was, so I wasn’t even sure if it was a ‘good’ or a ‘bad’ society until we get a little more vague info about what they do. How they regarded Chastity’s ‘parents’ and the reaction to human trafficking were the most telling details about their mission, goals, and purpose. I couldn’t even fully trust the MMC’s because I just didn’t understand their purpose and why they were so adamant about this society. And the creed of the Locked Souls Society…? Ridiculous and nonsensical. I could barely take the whole thing seriously because of the lack of details and elaboration for one of the biggest, if not the biggest, component of the books. ALSO, my mind was boggled by the ultra religious, super secret society in a monastery ran by zealous Catholics condoning and supporting polyamorous relationships… let alone the whole Adam and Eve thing… like I know it’s fiction, but help me understand!?!
Was def surprised by this book, it was very different than book 1, but a good continuation of Chastity’s story. I like how she’s growing, and love her relationship with Levi. I just knew once he learned what had happened to her and why he was punishing her, he would be her biggest advocate and supporter and he really was. While I wish their relationship progression had been a bit different in some ways, I understood how and why it changed so quickly, and was surprisingly okay with it even though I was apprehensive. I like Jonah and Bast too, but Bast’s reactions to some things have been a bit bothersome for me when he acts to sweet to her and has been hooked since day 1. Lost some respect for him when they found that picture after the first trial, but def not as much as I lost for Ash.
Finally, (maybe small spoiler?) a big WTF to Tempest for somehow getting preggo by her estranged step brother, and his FATHER… is that her step daddy? Conversations between her and Chas made it seem like King and Roman knew she was with them both?!? I was super confused about the whole thing, especially since she seduced Roman, who was also a priest…? But King hadn’t been religious before his new GF Holly…. It was just soooo confusing and it’s still just bugging me, especially because of the year and a half time jump at the end.
Hopefully the last book will fix some of the problems the series has. The plot holes are way more problematic than the less descriptive writing style used, but between the both of them, this book just left a lot to be desired, even though it was really interesting and emotional.