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Kaylin Neya is a Hawk, part of the elite force tasked with keeping the City of Elantra safe. Her past is dark, her magic uncontrolled and her allies unpredictable. And nothing has prepared her for what is coming, when the charlatans on Elani Street suddenly grow powerful, the Oracles are thrown into an uproar and the skies rain blood….

The powerful of Elantra believe that the mysterious markings on Kaylin's skin hold the answer, and they are not averse to using her—how ever they have to—in order to discover what it is.

Something is coming, breaking through the barriers between the worlds. But is it a threat that Kaylin needs to defend her city against—or has she been chosen for another reason entirely?

503 pages, Kindle Edition

First published August 1, 2010

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Michelle Sagara

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Michelle is an author, book­seller, and lover of liter­ature based in Toronto. She writes fantasy novels as both Michelle Sagara and Michelle West (and some­times as Michelle Sagara West). You can find her books at fine booksellers.

She lives in Toronto with her long-suffering husband and her two children, and to her regret has no dogs.

Reading is one of her life-long passions, and she is some­times paid for her opinions about what she’s read by the venerable Magazine of Fantasy and Science Fiction. No matter how many book­shelves she buys, there is Never Enough Shelf space. Ever.

She has published as Michelle Sagara (her legal name), as Michelle West (her husband's surname), and as Michelle Sagara West (a combination of the two).

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Author 45 books127k followers
September 6, 2010
GUYS...I hate to be negative, but the last few books in this series have not lived up to my immense excitement for them. I feel like what I personally loved about this series is not what the AUTHOR likes about it, is that weird/arrogant/ridiculous to say? It's a really weird place to be, because I feel like a jerk not loving what the author's vision is, because she's the the OWNER of the series, but I'm reading these books going, "WHERE ARE THE CHARACTERS AND PLOT I WANT TO SEE?! WHERE ARE YOU GOING, NOOOOOO!"

For this series, it's the Nightshade factor I'm really frustrated about. I'm a huge Nightshade fan and I think she hates Nightshade. It's kinda like Lillith Saintcrow's Dante series, where she obviously HATED Jaf after the first few, and killed me with where it went, haha. I mean, it's her vision, but I don't have to love it, you know? I can APPRECIATE it, but emotionally I wasn't on track, and that's how I feel with this book and series as a whole. Why am I writing so much about it? Because I love these worlds and the characters. But...Severn? THERE"S NOTHING THERE! AND THINGS ARE STILL TOO CONFUSING!

Ok, I'm gonna go read some comics and calm down, hahaha.
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748 reviews147 followers
September 29, 2017
This series is either getting better or I've finally reached the point of addiction where I no longer notice the aggravating parts.

I can't say much without resorting to constant spoiler tags. However I can say that things got pretty tense for a while and for a while I was worried that this time around Kaylin's blind luck won't save her. I know, I know there are more instalments so she can't die but I was still worried that she won't be the same after. And I've grown fond of that bumbling idiot *affectionate smile* She's even showing signs of improvement now that she's forced to confront her abilities.

There seems (to me at least) that there's a love triangle forming between Severn, Nightshade and Kaylin. Or at least that both males are interested in Kaylin. She's however blind to it (or at least pretending not to notice though I'm more inclined to believe she's totally ignorant). It's endearing to me since I'm the same in RL.

The Arcane and the other Dragon Lords remain my top favorite characters and I can't wait for Kayling to start her etiquette lessons for two reasons - it promises to be hilarious and absolutely aggravating for the poor soul (dragon) that is to be her teacher (he shows a lot of promise!) and so we can finally meet the Dragon Emperor. Though it's very likely that Kaylin's new teacher will eat her long before she gets to meet the Emperor :D

There are some new developments in Elantra and I can't wait to see what's next in store for the Chosen and her city!
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Author 2 books114 followers
August 31, 2010
I adore Michelle Sagara.

It's true, I do adore her. And I am in awe of how deep her creativity is. There is not one book of hers that I have read and thought 'oh, that's just like [insert author/book:]'. For me, with Michelle, it just it doesn't happen, and while I certainly haven't read everything out there - and tend to avoid those deemed 'classics' in the genre - I have read a lot.

Michelle is one of those writers whose work makes me stop all of my own work so I can just immerse myself in story and wallow!

Why do I like it so much? Agh! It is actually hard for me to pin point.

I admire writers who have a masterful grasp of worldbuilding (and you will hear me go on and on about this in future reviews), so yep, she ticks that box.

I have to be interested by the character(s) and, to a degree, empathise with them (if I am truly going to rave about a book), and she has always managed to do that.

And mostly I have to be believe the words a writer writes. Terry Dowling calls this 'Voice of Truth' and when you've got it, you've got it. Michelle has it. Her writing is evocative and powerful, machiavelian and heartfelt.

But to talk about 'Cast in Chaos'... where to begin without offering any spoilers?

There aren't any big battles in this book. Personally I don't care, I am not one for battle scenes so the lack of them doesn't make me think twice. But that doesn't mean that this is a slow book (for battle scenes - despite popular opinion do not make a story travel faster [unless you skim read them:]). The story is packed with menace and sense of urgency, as well as humour and humanity, and it places another piece of the story arc firmly into place - heading us towards a confrontation with the Shadows.

There is more talking in this book. But I like the 'talking'. And Kaylin is maturing before our eyes. When we began Book One, Kaylin was very frustrating and always opening her mouth to speak the first words that popped into her head. By Book Six you actually notice that she is biting her tongue alot to stop from putting her foot in her mouth. The character has grown before our eyes and it's so gradually done that you while you notice it has happened you can't say exactly where this bit of 'growing up' has occured. And what more can you ask of any book but that it takes you on a journey with the characters, especially a character who is dynamically changed by the experiences that you experience with her.

Cast In Chaos is a brilliant tale of redemption and forgiveness, unexpectedly deep discusions and humourous interludes. It explores the nature of language and its limitations and human blindness as well as generosity. It is an awesome piece of entertainment with characters you will come to love, who you will cheer for and cry for, rage at and laugh with (and at). It is a story of human flaws, and heroism despite itself.

My only criticism is that the books are too short. And I don't just say that because I want to read more - and boy do I ever! - but because although Michelle crafts each story to stand alone, they all tie in together within a larger story arc, and that arc is epic. Steven Erikson epic. And I have to have more.

I have to!
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1,068 reviews99 followers
August 9, 2010
I am calling this The Cast Book In Which People Finally Answer Each Other's Questions. Not that there's not still plenty of evasiveness and need-to-know, but an astonishing number of queries (at least, for this series) actually elicit responses, sometimes even more detailed than Kaylin wants. It made for a much more satisfying read, and helped build a stronger picture of the world.

Metaphysical endings, in which rather than kill X bad guy or deliver Y plot token the protagonist must in some mystical fashion rewrite the laws of the universe, seem to be all the rage in books I'm reading lately. Who Fears Death had one. So did The Hundred Thousand Kingdoms. I found the later more satisfying than the former, but both ultimately left me feeling like I'd either missed something, or they'd been insufficiently set up.

Chaos follows a similar path--but in contrast, by the time I reached the final critical pages I felt like I understood what was going on, and that it had been well telegraphed from the start. (At least, I understood what was going on as well as Kaylin did, which is perhaps setting a low bar.) Some of that is because Sagara had five previous books to worldbuild, of course, but given how sparse the exposition was previously, this volume had to carry a lot of weight. And it does so while still maintaining a pretty brisk pace.

In fact, if there's one thing I regret about the book, it's that the plot is paced quickly enough that we don't get much time for secondary character development. The Arkon makes a fairly strong showing, and the other dragons to a lesser extent, but Teela and Tain are almost entirely absent and the Hawklord never appears on page. As for Nightshade and Severn--well, the good news is both romantic plotlines experience some movement. In any other series it would be so tiny as to be unnoticeable, but for the Cast books they qualify as gigantic leaps. The bad news is that Severn in particular gets no real development as an individual. He's still almost as much a cipher as he was in book one.

(Frankly, I'd be just as happy if the romantic plotlines continue not to move. Both Nightshade and Severn make me twitch as romantic partners for Kaylin. If I had to pick a pairing, I. . .think I would vote for Kaylin/Teela. Because why the hell not?)

All of this makes it sound like I didn't enjoy the book. But I did! The worldbuilding is great fun, and Kaylin's haplessness manages to be endearing. Not my favorite Cast book--that'd be Courtlight--but probably tied for second place with Fury. I look forward to the next one.
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952 reviews254 followers
December 18, 2017
I feel like I liked this one better than the previous one because it was less of a constant info dump, but due to life, it took me a month to finish this & I can't remember much of the beginning at this point.

The plot of this better, it had a driving end point & more dragons. More Arkon, more Severn. I liked the Devourer, the traveling, and all the times in the library.

Now for the real question, is Kaylin still annoying? Super annoying for most of the book. Maybe extra annoying about choosing strangers over people she knows. Time away from the book and the last half of the story, she finally wasn't annoying.

Will I read more? Yeah, I have low expectations and these fit that.
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827 reviews159 followers
June 15, 2017
I do love how this series gets more complex with each book, and the way the immediate crises resolve into the overarching plot.
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2,336 reviews151 followers
November 5, 2012
4.5/5/ 5 stars; A

I think this was my favourite book in the series so far. Kaylin kind of saves the world again. I thought the travel between worlds and the continuing revelations about the Ancient ones, the elemental garden, and the cranky dragons was well done.

Strangely, Kaylin is still only a private, is paid crap, and treated like crap. How is that???
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3,251 reviews259 followers
October 10, 2024
This is book six in the Chronicles of Elantra series and I am still amazed at the depth and creativity of its author! This book and series is definitely NOT the usual light and quick reads that are so popular now. It is deeper and extremely nuanced in its characters, the world, the individual plots, as well as the overall arc of the series. That, however, is what makes it so riveting and what keeps a reader wanting more! We want to watch Kaylin grow and see how the dragons (yes, there are awesome dragons!) Leontines (lion people), Aerions (hawk people) and the rest of this incredibly interesting society will interact and accept her.

Even with all the fantasy elements and UF touches, each book is, at heart, a mystery and somewhat of a police procedural. So, one also gets the aspect of uncovering all kinds of nefarious plots and characters, as Kaylin and company do their jobs (she is what we would call a police officer), as well as discover all kinds of new challenges.

In this specific story, we are actually introduced to a completely new society of people, and faced with how they will assimilate into the society Kaylin is part of and protects. They are not the only entity that has arrived, however, they come with a destroyer on their heels. It is creative, nail-biting and as interesting as any book so far in this series! AND, it pushes Severn and Kaylins relationship forward - at least a bit (about time!). It really is two steps forward and three steps back on that front, however.

The only area I wasn’t thrilled with (and the reason for the four stars instead of five) is the length of time we spend in the weird ether again. As I’ve whined before, I’m not a fan of meandering around in the “other” and this time it went on for what seemed like FOREVER! And, it was at the very climax of the story! Yet, it went on and on and on….. Yes, the author is extremely creative and indulges in letting that gift run wild, but I just want to get on with the story at some point.

Still, I enjoyed the overall story immensely and will absolutely dive right into the next book!
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2,660 reviews51 followers
November 6, 2024
3.5 stars.

Nov 2024 - re-listened.
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Nov 2023 - re-listened.
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Re-listened Aug 2021.
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Re-listened in 2020. There's a bit of the "Origins" feel to this one as we learned that humans weren't native to Elantra. Again, we have lots of words and half of the time, I feel a bit like Kaylin in not understanding much of the mumble jumbo. Still, it's an interesting world.
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The author really likes words!!!
Finally the "love" triangle is starting....
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2,317 reviews159 followers
July 29, 2010
This installment is just as heartwrenching as any of the others. There are too many things to actually go on about so I'll just pick a few.

The theme of this book seemed to be about Home and Trust. How the two are connected and what it means to be without both and then find your way back.

The story of the Devourer and the Elemental Garden, toward the end of the book, seems to mirror the relationship of Severn and Kaylin. It's clear that Severn is in love with her (at least to me) and he goes on at one point, in order to save her, to let her know why he loves her. Of course he doesn't say that he's 'in love with her' but I think that with the two of them, they don't need to. When the question is brought up in passing, Kaylin can't answer why she loves Severn - she's too afraid - but she can talk about why she trusts him, which seems to be more important.

The Devourer has lost much and in the path of his wreckage, in the pursuit of finding that which he has lost, he receives a second chance and is brought back to his maker/punisher/lover the four elements. Much like Severn, who lives with the choice of killing Steffi & Jade - an act that should have been done by Kaylin - everyday and is forced to live with the fact that the person he loves is hurting and partly sculpted by his actions, I would imagine, is nothing short of torture.

As for Kaylin, she is still angry (who wouldn't be) but she is also angry with herself. Love is thrown around in as a concept but never exchanged between any of the characters. Making certain scenes a bit sterile and a little stunted.

The fact that Nightshade kisses Kaylin made my eyebrow raise for two reasons. Kaylin seems to so asexual at this point that it is hard for me to think of her with anyone and secondly, I want her to eventually be with Severn! Which would be hard but everything in life worth having is.

However, a Nightshade interlude would be quite interesting.

The dreaded Emperor meeting may be happening soon and I can only hope that Kaylin grows up just a little bit more so that she is confident in herself as well as her abilities.

How come Severn doesn't have a possible love interest? Why is everyone so celibate?!

Sorry that was a random thought. Anyhoo, it was nice to see Tiamaris and Ybelline (sp). Can't wait for the next installment.
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522 reviews8 followers
January 27, 2018
Although it doesn't seem possible, Sagara just keeps getting better and better with the Elantra series. I think Cast in Shadow remains my favourite Elantra novel, but Cast in Chaos has stolen the second favourite prize from Cast in Fury.

Sagara's writing is just one of the things I love about these novels. There is such a moreish air to the story. I didn't stay up until after midnight just because my best friend wanted to read the book today. I couldn't stop reading. Every word flowed onto the next and I found myself sitting up almost holding my breath as the story reach the climax. My favourite aspect of the Elantra series however is the growth of the heroine Kaylin. Each book has really taught Kaylin an important lesson, although the focus of the book has not really been the lesson, aside from Cast in Shadow. With each novel Kaylin becomes more and more three dimensional and her foibles and weaknesses come to light.

It's not only Kaylin who shines in this book, although she certainly does dominate the story more than usual. Tiamaris and Tara make an appearance, along with Sanabalis and the Arkon, and of course Severn and the rest of the Hawks. The confrontation with Nightshade over the events of the previous book doesn't lead where I expected it to, but did open up a whole lot more questions regarding Kaylin past and the mystery of the runes.
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799 reviews135 followers
May 20, 2013
I really appreciate Kaylin growing up in the year that has taken place since the first book timeline. She really needs it for this particular crisis and I loved the resolution of why there are magic words on her body and what a Chosen actually is.

There is still more to see, we haven't seen the Emperor yet and we haven't dealt with the Outcaste or the situation with Nightshade for that matter, but I did have the feeling of a major climax with this particular end-of-the-world situation and especially with addressing a lot of the background tension with Severn. Considering he rarely speaks about his emotions, the fact that he had to speak up this time was totally believable in the context of the development here.

I think it's the strongest entry in the series so far.
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A delight to read more closely the second time and learn even more about the make-up of the fief of Tiamaris and the Elemental Garden. I will ever be in team Severn.
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On my third reread I keep wondering why we haven't seen more of the Maker since and what is happening with the fact that the Nurannor have a Chosen, too. I mean stuff keeps happening to Kaylin and he's simply the pathfinder for his people?? But then maybe it is because she's the current Chosen of the original world... hmm. A bit like the idea behind the Fionnavar Tapestry of Guy Gavriel Kay, who is Canadian, too ^^ - like MSW.

Other than that I was more sensitized toward Severn and Kaylin's interaction in the last book and here, where he gives her an anchor that is deeply necessary (not that Nightshade's saving her from the paths between the worlds isn't a great scene, too - but I still think it has to do with the power he eventually wants her to use on his behalf and not with her as a person, no matter how he likes to play with fire aka flirt with her), and shows a lot more than we have seen of his feelings apart from the horrible explanation for what happened to Jade and Steffi.
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1,777 reviews285 followers
January 1, 2023
I just absolutely love this series. I love it more with each book. And there's not much more to say.

Oh, except this.
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4,876 reviews734 followers
December 30, 2024
First read 8 March 2013.

Sixth in the Chronicles of Elantra fantasy series for young adults about a remarkable young woman who has a lot of learning to endure yet.

My Take
This particular story is about the elements that make up the world: earth, air, fire, and water. Being a magical world, it seems an element may well be missing, creating an opportunity to build a story around refugees fleeing their homeland and how a civilized country/world would meet their plight. A story that is made up of words, and words are very, very important to Dragons, to the Devourer, to Tara, to the Barrani. And, in the end, to Kaylin.

I just can't help liking Kaylin. She doesn't care what grief may rain down upon her head; it's people who are important to her. She'll do whatever it takes to make them safe.

Crack me up, it's the first time Severn has mentioned that Kaylin needs to draw up a budget. And the window at HQ is acting up! It's getting downright chatty to everyone.

Ooh, I hate that Sagara left us hanging without Lady Alyssa's reaction at the end of the story. After all the fuss she kicked up, I wanted to watch!

Oh, I cried...Severn finally tells Kaylin what he thinks and feels. And Kaylin is growing up.

Whoa, it really is an emergency! The Dragons have invited the Barrani High Lord and his Lady to the Imperial Palace!! We also get more tidbits about the Barrani.

After the way in which everyone emphasizes the emperor's will and autonomy, why they should imagine that Kaylin would believe she had the right to barge in? Still, she does like to take that walk on the wild side, and Cast in Chaos definitely provides lots of opportunities for Kaylin to walk.

Oh, yeah, Cast in Ruin , 7, oughta be fascinating after Kaylin's run-ins with Lord Diarmat!

The Story
Evarraon's elemental garden is upset. Again. It feels wrong, not as alive, and when Kaylin leaves it, she falls out of the world only to be chased by the Devourer.

That's not the worst of Kaylin's worries however. She has been assigned a tutor for those etiquette lessons she's been avoiding. Wait'll she finds out who it is! She won't be able to blow this one off!

Still, magic is erupting and becoming stronger throughout Elantra, enough that it threatens their world. Thank the gods that Kaylin bears the marks of the Chosen.

The Characters
Private Lord Kaylin Neya of the Hawks is always in the...hmmm...do I dare say right place at the right time? She may fulfill this role for the world, but I'm sure others are beginning to see her as a harbinger of doom, LOL. As for her partner in the Hawks, Corporal Lord Severn Handred has gone from mortal enemy to necessary friend.

Lord Tiamaris, a Dragon, is now the fieflord of the former Barren fief with Tara, the Tower, the Avatar, the Lady, more of a partner than a mere building who raises questions and provides answers. And Tara is growing in her understanding of people. Of life. Morse (she killed Barren in Cast in Silence , 5) is now Tiamaris' second-in-command.

Lord Sanabalis is one of four Dragon lords at the Imperial Court and is becoming a friend to Kaylin. There are also Dragon Lords Emmerian and Diarmat, a very fussy, punctilious, UNfriendly Dragon who is Captain of the Imperial Guard---he still thinks he should be able to eat people who offend him. The Arkon is the oldest Dragon at court, and he hasn't left the palace library in thousands of years. The Dragon Emperor is anxious to meet Kaylin, but not so anxious that he will see her before she passes her etiquette lessons. Seems he's not very tolerant, nor does he have a sense of humor, and there is a very real possibility that he will eat Kaylin on sight if she is in any way rude. Yup, that on-sight bit is a real possibility...this is Kaylin we're talkin' about!

Evanton is the Keeper of an elemental garden on Elani street. A garden that is in wild disarray and trying to relay a message. Grethan is his defective Tha'alani apprentice (see Cast in Secret , 3). Margot Hemming is a sort of fraudulent seer who ticks off Lady Alyssa whose father, Garavan Larienne, is the Chancellor of the Exchequer.

The Hawks include:
The Hawks are one of three peacekeeping forces in Elantra, and Lord Grammayre is the Hawklord. Think of them as the investigators of the threesome. Sergeant Marcus Kassan, a.k.a., Ironjaw, a Leontine, is back and in charge. Caitlin is his unofficial second-in-command and a human. Teela and Tain are Barrani who much prefer the streets to the Barrani High Court. Both are friends of Kaylin's. Tanner is human and enjoys a laugh at Kaylin's expense.

Ybelline Rabon'alani is the Emperor's Tha'alani, the castelord of her people with the most experience of how humans think, and Kaylin's friend. Her efforts with Everly may provide a way to communicate with the newcomers/invaders. Scoros is a founding teacher and Draalzyn is the Tha'alani who serves in Missing Persons.

The High Lord, the castelord of the Barrani, the former Lord of the Green, and his Consort, the Lady, require Lord Kaylin's help. And they're not too happy with her stance.

Lord Sabrai is an oracle and in charge of the Oracular Halls. Sigrenne is a guard and very like Marrin in her care of the oracles in the Halls. After past experience with Kaylin, she's comfortable with her. Everly is an oracle who communicates through his painting. Marya is a a midwife who frequently calls Kaylin in for help. Although, the grief Marya experiences in this story is not likely to be something Kaylin can fix.

Turns out that Lord Nightshade, an outcaste Barrani fieflord (whose true name is Calarnenne), acknowledges that events in Cast in Silence , 5, caused him to seek his opportunity, take it, and explore while he awaited Kaylin's arrival, for she is part of the Regalia, a story of the Barrani. Lord Andellen is the Barrani guard who has become a part of Kaylin's life.

Vakillirae chooses to sacrifice himself for knowledge and to give his people time to flee, which his friend, Enkerrikas, records. Effaron is the traveler able to speak to Kaylin; he's leading the others on their journey. Merjah leads the refugees.

The other two peackeeping forces are the Swords who act as patrolmen and riot police and the Wolves are black ops, always in the shadows, tracking down wrongdoers.

The Aerians are birdmen, but not shifters. Barrani are the upper class in this society, although not the uppermost. The Leontine are lion shifters. Arcanists are mages who work independently of the Dragon Emperor. The fiefs in this story---Tiamaris, Nightshade, and Ravellon---are only three out of seven criminal neighborhoods around Elantra. The beings who rule fiefs are the fieflords who provide the name of the fief itself.

The Cover
The cover is brilliant greens and oranges highlighting and surrounding Kaylin and those changing tattoos on her arms as she stands, facing us, with her arms outstretched, and her long dark hair blowing in the draft.

The title reflects the state of mind of the citizens of Elantra---Cast in Chaos.
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288 reviews1 follower
January 9, 2014
I read the first few books of this series many years ago and did not go on because the library did not have the newer books in stock. Recently, I re-read them to fully appreciate the whole package before moving on...

I like this series. Undoubtedly, the world-building and character development are nothing short of great. It is easy to get immersed in the whole make-believe Elantran world with Kaylin as she explored, stumbled around and fought her way through all the mysteries and daunting challenges. The books are confidently and intelligently written - the author’s storytelling remain tight, her descriptions vivid, the tone and narrative voice strong and sure.

However, as I move on from Book 3, I find myself less and less enthusiastic.
1) Maybe it’s because the story revolved around the Leontines in “Cast in Fury”. Of all the races in this Elantran world, I like the Leontines the least. They’re so hot-tempered and easily flustered (note again title of book 4) that just reading a chapter about how they handle their affairs can be kind of exhausting.
2) Unlike the Harry Dresden series or many other such series where you have to read the books in chronological order for fear of missing significant developments in the whole plot, there is nothing much to miss in the Elantran Chronicles if you skip one book in between, especially book 4. While I appreciate the author’s in-depth analysis of Kaylin’s psyche in any given crisis, as well as the detailed narration of almost every situation so you feel like you are there every step of the way, sometimes too many details can be as intimidating as info-dumping. And such a writing style gives rise to a series that is big on plot but slow in build-up and severely lacking in action. Major advances should really be made plotwise.
3) Romance. Hmm... what romance? There’s the unspoken love between her and Severn (which is expressed in Book 6 but done so matter-so-factly), hints of physical attraction between her and Nightshade, but looking for romance in the 6 books is like looking for the proverbial needle in the haystack. I expect so much more from a female author...

I think I have listed enough grouses. I may not have fairly judged the series because, in all honesty, I enjoyed reading all the books. I still want to read on, but not because the plotlines are oh-so-exciting, but because there are still many loose ends lying around, and because the conclusion (if there is one) is still worth chasing after. And of course, I have not given up hope searching for the ever-elusive romance …

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839 reviews401 followers
July 13, 2014
I was a bit shocked at the thickness of this book, I had hopes it was going to be a wildly interesting ride. Sadly I was almost as disappointed with this one as I was the last.

Mostly, it was just too long, repetitive with some utterly useless paragraphs. I was tempted to get a red pen out and start crossing out the unnecessary parts. I especially grew tired of Kaylin repeating what she'd done or learned to everyone she encountered sometimes in greater detail than was needed.

However, there were a few things that peeked my interest which saved this from a two star rating. The blatant introduction to possible romance. So far in this series there's been none whatsoever. Kaylin's had a hard life and has showed no interest in love, sex or having her own children despite how much she loves them. We all knew Nightshade was interested in her but she's always remained reluctant. He finally makes a move and she reacts badly.

When Severn makes hints about his feelings, I'm relieved as I've been waiting for this for a while now, and when he explains his reasons for loving Kaylin and she acknowledges this it gave me hope. At the same time I grew worried that the status quo would remain in place despite their love for one another. I'm not sure Kaylin can handle it which is why Severn has said nothing for so long.

Parts of the plot were of interest to me, especially the origins of humans and the new race of people who've found their home within Tiamaris's fief. I look forward to reading about their progress and how the other races react to their presence/existence.

I am surprised Sagara hasn't done a book on the Aerians yet and that Kaylin hasn't got much closer to meeting the Dragon Emperor. I know that she desperately needs to learn self-preservation around those that can devour her but I hardly think etiquette lessons with a stuffy dragon will help matters. Besides she does pretty well with the Arkon and he's no picnic either. I really hope Cast in Ruins makes for a better read.
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5,585 reviews491 followers
October 14, 2012
*Genre* Fantasy, Science Fiction
*Rating* 4.0

*Review forthcoming*

Probably the best book of the series to this point. I really enjoyed reading about Kaylin's journey and her continued awareness that as the so called Chosen, she has responsibilities to a lot different variations she encounters over the course of her job as a Hawk. Finally, we get to see some sort of reaction between Severn and Kaylin. Now, if we can figure out the relationship between Kaylin and Lord Nightshade I would be happier than a clam at high tide!
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Author 20 books170 followers
December 26, 2019
Interesting beginning and a really cool thing happened around the 200 page mark, (plus we got to see Nightshade!) but then it felt like the next 200 pages were all reaction/people scolding Kaylin for what she did which slowed things down a lot. The last 100 pages were strong again. I liked both the elegant solution to the problem and the conversation it forced her and Severn to have.
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491 reviews
October 14, 2024
I love this series and this book doesn't disappoint. I love the characters and the way the Elantran world shifts and expands with each new book. Sagara has created an amazing world, and Kaylin is one of my favorite characters.
Author 98 books1,790 followers
April 4, 2012
Hands down my favorite of the series so far.
1,039 reviews6 followers
May 10, 2020
Couldn't Put it Down

*****Spoilers*****

What an amazing tale! Watching Kaylin grow is fantastic, her interactions with the world and people in it is always a surprise. So much happens in this book, it's hard to focus on a few things but Everly and his paintings have become a source of fact when the Oracular Halls are not well respected, the child is. I hope as he grows, they're able to balance his physical needs with the absorption caused by his art by way of his visions.

Marcus has taken a back seat and so has the Hawklord as Kaylin interacts more with the Imperial Palace. Hey intuition is incredible and great things happen when she listens to herself. The Devourer turned the Maker in Kaylin's eyes is intriguing and I'm hopeful she'll be able to communicate with him and the elements more frequently in future.

Severn has been a silent shadow for most of these books, steadily backing Kaylin however she needs. But he's also somewhat diminished by that role, that is until this book where his love for her saved Kaylin from being consumed by the Devourer.

The refugees have a new home in Tiamaris and are ready and willing to face the Shadows. I'd almost forgotten about the outcaste dragon until his roar of challenge.

I enjoyed Kaylin's sojourn to the Arkon's hoard mirror because it was impressive and necessary. I also like the Arkon who has more patience than written as well. I'm mostly now looking forward to Kaylin's introduction to the emperor, it's bound to be interesting.

The couple of things I don't quite get with these books is that Kaylin rarely seems to bathe. Perhaps the author forgets to mention when it occurs but it's a striking lack. She's doing better now but Kaylin also used to rarely eat which sustaining herself on very little with the feats she undertakes can't last. I was a little confused too, Kaylin's reaction and interaction with Nightshade though his intent is now clear. I think Kaylin should use a little less caution and visit the castle more for many reasons, we'll see what happens though.
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713 reviews117 followers
April 23, 2025
A magical disaster is brewing in the city, with a lot of magical accidents, potentially kickstarted in another world. Kaylin attempts to deals with the trouble in the city, while investigating the otherworldly source and preparing for consequences if, indeed, they all survive.

Great imagination by the author gives us new understanding of the ancients, history of worlds and introduces so many intriguing elements for future novels! The cast expands, and major changes are felt in some characters’ lives, as in every book (so many weaving threads, building on one another across the series).

The only thing I had trouble with was how the resolution of one catastrophe came about. I had trouble with how much elemental forces were humanized in their motives, behaviors and how Kaylin dealt with them (…at length). I feel it could have reached a similar destination (which is really inventive!) in a way I would have found both more dynamic and believable (within the fantastical setting).
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553 reviews13 followers
October 28, 2022
While I really loved the beautiful prose and rich depth of character in this installment, it got a little TOO abstract for me. Probably because I'm binge reading and two books in a row now have had sweeping dream-like-scapes and an excess of sitting with characters' thoughts. I found myself really missing the complex storytelling that happened in the first 4 book, and am hoping the series will return to the strong bones of that structure soon.

Still... a beautiful and important story about who decides who has a place in society. Definitely give it a read.
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226 reviews30 followers
August 13, 2013
Review first published at http://fansofmsw.com/

Summary:

In this book, the magic in Elani street, the street of the magicians and charlatans, is going wild and the city is threatened by an invasion from another world; Kaylin and Severn are send to investigate this.

My opinion:

In this book, the relationship between Kaylin, Severn and Nightshade finally progress! Unfortunately, it’s limited to Severn and Nightshade “expressing” their desire/ love for Kaylin and her being uncomfortable about it. Yet it was nice; after all the time I had almost lost all hope… As promise at the end of the last book, we have Nightshade’s reaction to the revelation we get in Silence and we finally learn his motives – or at least part of it, he is Barrani after all. I was rather surprised by part of them (the part about the Regalia) but not disappointed and this revelation promised a change in his behaviour in the future books (though I expected it to come into play before the trip to the West March). It was a pleasant surprise to see him confront Kaylin about her avoiding him and finally kiss her. If Kaylin’s reaction was a little disappointed, it was nonetheless not unexpected considering her past and the trauma she still carries. We also get Severn finally expressing his feeling which was good as I get the impression that if not for the circumstances he would never have done so. Whoever Kaylin end up with (though I obviously hope it will be Nightshade), it is nice that she has to confront their feelings and cannot simply ignore them completely.

In this book we also see again Evanton, his garden and the dragons Lords; I was delighted to see more of the Arkon who is as sarcastic as ever and plays a major role in the story; I always appreciate to see the relationship between the dragon Lords.

The plot in itself was engrossing and well develop; it was in keeping with the rest of the series, as we see Kaylin use her powers of Chosen to save the world. This book seems to be a sort of complement of Cast in Secret, as we come back to the elemental garden and the elements which I always love to see; we also see again the Oracles (I read this in someone else review, I had personally forgotten about them). Several plot threads which will become relevant for Cast in Peril and Sorrow are also put in place in this book, such as the Consort’s anger at Kaylin for ignoring her “advice”, the egg and the troubles with the Exchequer. I think that the Consort’s anger is well done as it reminds us that the Barrani are not human, or that at last they are powerful immortals in love with political plots: despite all the friendliness she has previously shown Kaylin, the Consort still expects her to obey her and is irrationally angry when she fails to do so. We also meet the Norranir and learn that humans come from another world; I think that it was an interesting development.

On the whole, it is a good read essential for the fans of the series.
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353 reviews36 followers
February 27, 2012
This series is, at once, beautiful and frustrating. Sometimes you want to smack Kaylin and sometimes you just want to hug her. If nothing else, the books are entertaining and they capture your attention and imagination very quickly. The author does much the same in Cast in Chaos, expanding and developing the world that she has created and making it something rich and rather lovely (as well as rather terrible to boot).

The beginning of the book was a bit of a mess. It has been a while since I've last read one of the books, and it was a little confusing and there were names and phrases thrown around like crazy. It's not really a series you can pick up in the middle and expect to figure out everything, but they are standalone, in that each and every book tells a complete story. But once the story gets moving, once you begin to understand a little more, the writing flows out and grasps your attention. More importantly, it holds it, and you're pretty much sucked into the world that is presented before you.

The plot of the book is fairly complex and filled with quite of a lot of layers. There is an area in the city that is warped by strange magic--or rather, magic is being warped in the area, and nobody knows why. Kaylin and the rest of the Hawks try to investigate what is happening, and why, with little success until Kaylin, of course, manages to fall out of place in the world and become lost. There is nothing there, and yet there is a presence that terrifies her and she barely manages to escape from such a place. Unfortunately that presence, the Devourer, a being that swallows up worlds, is searching for something, and Kaylin fears that it is her world. And that's just the tip of it, really.

The characters are great. Kaylin has grown from what she was in the beginning books, all for the better. She's not as irritating now, she thinks a little more before she jumps into things, but she's still her. She still makes rash decisions and still can't keep her mouth shut for the most part. And, okay, I'm pretty much in love with Nightshade, for no good reason other than I apparently have a certain type in books, and he pretty much encompasses all of it. It's just too bad that he doesn't show up nearly as much as I want him too.

But I think what's best about the series is the amount of creativity the author has put into the world. It's a rich, deep, complex world that you can't help but get lost in. It's a little confusing, and sometimes you don't get any answers, but there's always something more and something different. 4 stars.
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14 reviews10 followers
August 19, 2010
I am impressed. The Chronicles of Elantra series has once again been added to with a fabulous tale. I don't read very much High Fantasy, but these books are too good to pass by! Michelle Sagara does a great job in making sure these novels have a very modern feel, and they are a delight to read. Cast in Chaos, the sixth book, continues the story of the Hawk, (read: law enforcement officer) Kaylin Neya.

Something shifty is going down on the streets of Elantra. More precisely on Elani street. That’s right, the city’s own swindlers row. I mean, really. Hair tonics that actually work and fortunetellers saying something other than, “I see a tall, dark man...”? Unheard of! After it starts raining blood, Kaylin and the Hawks realize something is definitely wrong.

When the Oracles reveal that a portal is going to open in the middle of swind- I mean- Elani Street, one that will let in a crowd of tall, pale strangers, all the city is in upset. Now, aside from the stray magic from the portal doing strange things like causing three eyed babies, having new neighbors might not be so bad. Unfortunately, if the portal opens it may let in the being called The Destroyer of Worlds, who would, you guessed it, try to destroy their world.

Thanks to freak encounter with The Destroyer, from which she had to be saved by Lord Nightshade, Kaylin is right in the thick of the action. She has to decide, will she try to aid the lost people, or protect those that she loves at any cost?

Now, speaking of His Loveliness, The Lord Nightshade... we don’t see nearly enough of him in this book! Take it with a grain of salt though, because I’m always going to want this to turn into a romance, and it is never going to happen. I will say that His Lordship made the time he had in this book count. He does this whole ‘white knight’ thing and, well... *waggles eyebrows*.


Kaylin has grown a lot as a character in this series. The evolution has been gradual, and very realistic, over the course of several books. Cast in Chaos does an excellent job furthering her development and spinning a wickedly interesting story. I’m looking forward the next installment, Cast in Ruins, which comes out next year.
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993 reviews213 followers
June 13, 2012
I mostly find these books diverting, and I usually forget exactly what happens in them pretty soon after I finish each of them. This is kind of inconvenient, since although the books are largely self-contained there are some callbacks to others in the series, and I've forgotten some of the characters. (Also, I seem to have skipped an important book for Tiamaris, my favorite secondary character. Which is just SOP when reading Sagara West books, frankly.) However, I do admire how thematically tight they are, and I always enjoy them. The main character is the kind of grumpy, underslept, overworked, frazzled public servant I often enjoy spending time with (Discworld/The West Wing/Southland/Veep), thrust in over her head despite her best efforts to stay under the radar. They read a bit like a cross between Buffy the Vampire Slayer and one of Pratchett's Watch books: they solve crime and save the world! I hope some day we'll get something a bit more . . . domestic, and less apocalyptic, because I think the characters can stand it.

"When all of this is over - if we're still alive - I want a vacation."
He smiled. "If you consider lessons with members of the Imperial Court a vacation, I'm sure Marcus will be happy to sign off on it."
"I could probably get around Sannabalis."
"True."
It wasn't Sanabalis he was thinking about. "I don't suppose a mouse could get around Diarmat."
"Lord Diarmat, and no, not if his reputation is anything to go by. Are you ready?"
"No, I never am. I just make do."


I don't really care about the love triangle because . . . I almost never care about love triangles. But it's kind of mildly interesting in this book, maybe because although people talk about their feelings a lot more, the actual love triangle takes a definite back seat to the end of the world. (As it ought to.)

Also, at some point I decided Sanabalis was Werner Herzog. This definitely makes reading the book and his lines more fun. It's a strategy I'll be adopting more often in the future.
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