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Memory: Volume 2, Trials to Bear: A Tale of Pride and Prejudice
The second volume of the Memory series, Trials to Bear, follows the newlywed couple Elizabeth and Fitzwilliam Darcy as they move beyond the heady days of courtship (Volume 1, Lasting Impressions). Both of them are very young, at only eighteen and twenty-four years old, neither is completely confident in their position and will rely heavily on each other to grow as one challenge after another comes their way. They will face the demons and fears of Darcy's past, and provide an example of love and felicity that influences and ultimately changes everyone who touches their lives. Elizabeth will grow assured, no longer a shy girl insecure of her beauty or worth; she will become every day the woman who will undoubtedly be a force in London society, in whatever capacity she chooses to excel. The pride that Darcy feels for her will be evident no matter how it is displayed and he will confidently settle into his position as the master of Pemberley. The story continues in Volume 3: How Far We Have Come. These stories contain scenes of a mature nature.
564 pages, Paperback
First published July 22, 2010
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Linda Wells
10 books92 followersWelcome to my author page; let me tell you a little about myself. I worked for years in the environmental engineering world until I traded my career as a geographer for one as a mom to a challenging and really great son. One day, I saw the 2005 production of Pride and Prejudice, and I was fascinated. I bought a copy of Jane Austen's novel and read it so many times, falling under the spell of her unforgettable characters and story, and I could not help but wonder what happened next for them. That led me in search of Jane Austen Fan Fiction.
I read many stories and then one of my own started nagging at me. So, I found an old notebook and started writing it down. Without it even being finished, I took the plunge and started posting. It was, and continues to be, a fantastic and rewarding experience to watch a story take shape while so many readers follow along. I have many ideas for new stories, and with luck and lots of imagining, they will be written too.
If you would like to email me, I would love to hear from you! Lindawellsbooknut@gmail.com
Books by Linda Wells:
Chance Encounters
Fate and Consequences
Perfect Fit
Memory: Volume 1, Lasting Impressions
Memory: Volume 2, Trials to Bear
Memory: Volume 3, How Far We Have Come
Imperative Volumes 1 and 2
I read many stories and then one of my own started nagging at me. So, I found an old notebook and started writing it down. Without it even being finished, I took the plunge and started posting. It was, and continues to be, a fantastic and rewarding experience to watch a story take shape while so many readers follow along. I have many ideas for new stories, and with luck and lots of imagining, they will be written too.
If you would like to email me, I would love to hear from you! Lindawellsbooknut@gmail.com
Books by Linda Wells:
Chance Encounters
Fate and Consequences
Perfect Fit
Memory: Volume 1, Lasting Impressions
Memory: Volume 2, Trials to Bear
Memory: Volume 3, How Far We Have Come
Imperative Volumes 1 and 2
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January 6, 2023
This has it all
Reviewed in Canada on April 10, 2019
Second book of a series. What can I say? This book has it all. The continuation into the journey of the Darcy/Fitzwilliam family, and their dearest friends. The tale is filled with love (much is mature content), passion, wisdom, development of character, anger, fear, loyalty, lust, jealously, humor, pride, some prejudice, and pure evil. The dialogue in the two books I’ve read of this Memories set, is just soooo very good. I love the way the writer has developed these wonderful characters, including new ones not in the original. I will read Book 3. Great work.
Reviewed in Canada on April 10, 2019
Second book of a series. What can I say? This book has it all. The continuation into the journey of the Darcy/Fitzwilliam family, and their dearest friends. The tale is filled with love (much is mature content), passion, wisdom, development of character, anger, fear, loyalty, lust, jealously, humor, pride, some prejudice, and pure evil. The dialogue in the two books I’ve read of this Memories set, is just soooo very good. I love the way the writer has developed these wonderful characters, including new ones not in the original. I will read Book 3. Great work.
April 24, 2018
“I wish my lawn was Emo – then it would cut itself” - Author unknown
How much money would I spend to avoid finishing this book? $8.47 so far with sales tax.
I really don't recall much of 2013. I was new to JAFF and addicted in a way that any Darcy and Lizzy were good Darcy and Lizzy. Now I am 5 years older, having read hundreds of stories and hopefully wiser.
Therefore I am reducing my stars on this book to 2. TWO. 2 and I really think I am being generous. This is a book in search of an editor, actually a team of editors. They could cut, snip, chop and delete the excess. They could choose the workable subplots and the ones that would be best as stand alone books or stories. They could eliminate the repetitive scenes where the same information is related to different characters. They could limit the sex scenes … how many times do you need the details? They could eliminate the grotesque and bizarre They could tone down Lizzy's Mary Sue qualities because it is utterly ridiculous. She is barely 18 yet she is a font of wisdom, her every decision is correct, every woman wants to be her and every man wants to be with errr marry her. Which makes her husband insanely jealous. Darcy is way too EMO and both of them are too neurotic when alone.
There is just so much that is so stupid and so pointless I don't even want to waste my time repeating it (DM me with questions). Here is one of my favorite examples
In a regular JAFF here would be some sample dialogue
And here is the same bit of business in Memory Vol. 2
I can only say that in 2018 I am amazed at what a steaming pile this book is and the only thing saving it from one star is the lack of typos, misspelling and geographical errors. As I stated in a comment about my glacial reading progress this reminds of the the bad fiction my friends and I wrote in High School where we told and didn't show. It is like a play minus stage direction. If it isn't spoken then it is thought or presented as a diary entry and let me just say by 88% into vol.2 if I never read another Diary entry from either of the Darcy's it will be too soon. However I had a revelation while reading them...The Author is perfectly capable of writing in decent prose, as all of the diary entries are presented; instead she chooses to write the rest of the book in endless pointless dialogue.
I have complained about the structure of the book in my previous review of vol. 1 but it is terribly illogical – stream of consciousness. Chapters contain multiple subplots and perspectives. The author uses CAPITALIZATION of a word to indicate change of POV. This is where an editor would come in handy.
Let me add one more disappointment I actually paid good money for these books. Now if you take the cost per page it isn't bad but still I overpaid.
How much money would I spend to avoid finishing this book? $8.47 so far with sales tax.
I really don't recall much of 2013. I was new to JAFF and addicted in a way that any Darcy and Lizzy were good Darcy and Lizzy. Now I am 5 years older, having read hundreds of stories and hopefully wiser.
Therefore I am reducing my stars on this book to 2. TWO. 2 and I really think I am being generous. This is a book in search of an editor, actually a team of editors. They could cut, snip, chop and delete the excess. They could choose the workable subplots and the ones that would be best as stand alone books or stories. They could eliminate the repetitive scenes where the same information is related to different characters. They could limit the sex scenes … how many times do you need the details? They could eliminate the grotesque and bizarre They could tone down Lizzy's Mary Sue qualities because it is utterly ridiculous. She is barely 18 yet she is a font of wisdom, her every decision is correct, every woman wants to be her and every man wants to be with errr marry her. Which makes her husband insanely jealous. Darcy is way too EMO and both of them are too neurotic when alone.
There is just so much that is so stupid and so pointless I don't even want to waste my time repeating it (DM me with questions). Here is one of my favorite examples
In a regular JAFF here would be some sample dialogue
When do your parents return?” He consulted another newly-arrived letter. “Next week or shortly thereafter”
And here is the same bit of business in Memory Vol. 2
When do your parents return?” He consulted another newly-arrived letter. “Father expects the trial for Mrs. Younge to take place in the next week or so before court ends its quarter session. Parliament will close Friday, so he is fully available to testify whenever they get the word. She will undoubtedly be convicted. Then they will return to Matlock. Unless they look in at Ashcroft on the way, I suppose that they will . . . no, Audrey and Singleton will likely join us at Matlock.” He rubbed his chin. “Perhaps we will all be meeting up at Pemberley. Hmm.” …... [This dialogue continues ]
I can only say that in 2018 I am amazed at what a steaming pile this book is and the only thing saving it from one star is the lack of typos, misspelling and geographical errors. As I stated in a comment about my glacial reading progress this reminds of the the bad fiction my friends and I wrote in High School where we told and didn't show. It is like a play minus stage direction. If it isn't spoken then it is thought or presented as a diary entry and let me just say by 88% into vol.2 if I never read another Diary entry from either of the Darcy's it will be too soon. However I had a revelation while reading them...The Author is perfectly capable of writing in decent prose, as all of the diary entries are presented; instead she chooses to write the rest of the book in endless pointless dialogue.
I have complained about the structure of the book in my previous review of vol. 1 but it is terribly illogical – stream of consciousness. Chapters contain multiple subplots and perspectives. The author uses CAPITALIZATION of a word to indicate change of POV. This is where an editor would come in handy.
Let me add one more disappointment I actually paid good money for these books. Now if you take the cost per page it isn't bad but still I overpaid.
March 21, 2015
I read the first 41% of this book on kindle several months ago and put it down to read other stories. When I picked it up again, recently, I realized that I could not remember all that had happened in the part I had already read so I re-read it from the beginning. The first half of this book didn't grab my attention as did Memory: Vol. 1. It seems, in hindsight, that it was giving us details, background, establishing roles, etc. to lead up to the more exciting and mesmerizing second half.
In the first half Darcy and Elizabeth are learning their roles as a couple, as de facto guardians to her sisters, as advisers to friends and relatives as they encounter romance and then marriage and parenthood. Darcy and Elizabeth also become parents and, I must say, I found their birthing experience a little hard to take in, especially as a first time labor and delivery. It was interesting to see Darcy become a "tiger" in his role as brother to the Bennet girls and Elizabeth set Georgiana straight as to what respecting privacy is all about. I particularly appreciated how he "communicated" with both Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. Although this is not the Darcy of canon who kept his thoughts and feelings to himself.
There are many marriages and births in this volume. But the thriller here is Wickham and his role and that of Mrs. Younge. Wickham got away with many things in canon but here, he meets his just desserts, in my opinion. The author gives us some angst in this part of the story! And I enjoyed how the author had "gossip" squelched by family and friends who spread out to share the truth.
Yes, there are many scenes of love, passion, cuddling, and sex in this book. If that is not acceptable then you don't want to read this. Darcy and Elizabeth are very open with their love in public with touches, hand holding, snuggling, etc. and the fact that they share a bed shocks some relatives and acquaintances.
I did like Mary's story. She always seemed to be put in a corner and forgotten about due to her sermonizing and tedious piano playing in P&P. Here she learns what true love can look like, not only for a married couple but among family members towards each other...love and respect. I particularly liked when she talked to Georgiana.
Both Elizabeth and Darcy have no problem making their expectations known to their staff, their family and each other. Part of this is through journals kept and shared by each. Part of this is in open communication so as to be clear.
Bingley, Jane, Charlotte, and new characters: Robert Lucas and the de Bourgh siblings all play roles which add interest and surprises at times. Jane's part is greatly altered but she grows and learns to have some depth, not just to smile and agree with all around her. Mr. Collins' tale was handled in satisfactory manner.
This book did end with many strings left dangling so you must know that reading the third in the series will be a necessity. I read this book over a 4 day period. It is a long story but I do like long and twisting plots.
In the first half Darcy and Elizabeth are learning their roles as a couple, as de facto guardians to her sisters, as advisers to friends and relatives as they encounter romance and then marriage and parenthood. Darcy and Elizabeth also become parents and, I must say, I found their birthing experience a little hard to take in, especially as a first time labor and delivery. It was interesting to see Darcy become a "tiger" in his role as brother to the Bennet girls and Elizabeth set Georgiana straight as to what respecting privacy is all about. I particularly appreciated how he "communicated" with both Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. Although this is not the Darcy of canon who kept his thoughts and feelings to himself.
There are many marriages and births in this volume. But the thriller here is Wickham and his role and that of Mrs. Younge. Wickham got away with many things in canon but here, he meets his just desserts, in my opinion. The author gives us some angst in this part of the story! And I enjoyed how the author had "gossip" squelched by family and friends who spread out to share the truth.
Yes, there are many scenes of love, passion, cuddling, and sex in this book. If that is not acceptable then you don't want to read this. Darcy and Elizabeth are very open with their love in public with touches, hand holding, snuggling, etc. and the fact that they share a bed shocks some relatives and acquaintances.
I did like Mary's story. She always seemed to be put in a corner and forgotten about due to her sermonizing and tedious piano playing in P&P. Here she learns what true love can look like, not only for a married couple but among family members towards each other...love and respect. I particularly liked when she talked to Georgiana.
Both Elizabeth and Darcy have no problem making their expectations known to their staff, their family and each other. Part of this is through journals kept and shared by each. Part of this is in open communication so as to be clear.
Bingley, Jane, Charlotte, and new characters: Robert Lucas and the de Bourgh siblings all play roles which add interest and surprises at times. Jane's part is greatly altered but she grows and learns to have some depth, not just to smile and agree with all around her. Mr. Collins' tale was handled in satisfactory manner.
This book did end with many strings left dangling so you must know that reading the third in the series will be a necessity. I read this book over a 4 day period. It is a long story but I do like long and twisting plots.
March 2, 2011
This is the second book in the Memory Series. I enjoyed how Linda Wells continued to build the drama and plot. Many P & P sequels almost die out in maudlin insipidy, but this book continues to offer believable conflict. The supporting characters and their life development are well treated too. There are a few villains you love to hate and a few unlikely heroines you cheer their success.
It's like reading a good soap opera. There is no stagnation even for our two primary characters.
This book must be read in chronological sequence.
It's like reading a good soap opera. There is no stagnation even for our two primary characters.
This book must be read in chronological sequence.
March 11, 2019
Large events
There’s a baby, lots of couples, and a very awful version of Wickham. IMHO second book was a little Berger than the first.
I hope we find out if Darcy fully recovers in the third book.
I recommend this book highly.
There’s a baby, lots of couples, and a very awful version of Wickham. IMHO second book was a little Berger than the first.
I hope we find out if Darcy fully recovers in the third book.
I recommend this book highly.
September 21, 2016
Part 2 carries on with the life of the newlyweds, more courtships and marriages, and the start of the next generation. In an interesting twist, we see a different side of Darcy at the birth of his daughter. And Wickham escapes before he is transported, leading to a major confrontation between him, Darcy and Elizabeth. I loved how family and friends rallied around them, and the ladies of the ton squelched the men's gossip with almost regimental precision!
I loved how the characters and their relationships developed in this book. Firstly, not only does the Darcy marriage grow and strengthen, it begins to positively affect most of the people around them. We see a few more glimmers of how Bingley is growing out of his "puppy" phase. And Darcy almost seems to become the head of not only his family, but the Bennets as well in his staunch (and repeated) defense of Elizabeth against her mother, and taking Mary, Kitty, and even for a short time Jane under his family's care. A few more original characters are introduced, and all are more fleshed out in depth.
All in all, it was a great second part to the trilogy, carrying on the story arc and character development in a beautiful fashion.
I loved how the characters and their relationships developed in this book. Firstly, not only does the Darcy marriage grow and strengthen, it begins to positively affect most of the people around them. We see a few more glimmers of how Bingley is growing out of his "puppy" phase. And Darcy almost seems to become the head of not only his family, but the Bennets as well in his staunch (and repeated) defense of Elizabeth against her mother, and taking Mary, Kitty, and even for a short time Jane under his family's care. A few more original characters are introduced, and all are more fleshed out in depth.
All in all, it was a great second part to the trilogy, carrying on the story arc and character development in a beautiful fashion.
September 21, 2022
This is a typical Wells read. If you read book 1 you are already aware of how in depth the author goes. One day can last multiple pages. I enjoyed it but I took breaks here and there. It could use some editing and still be a good read. Also, if you are a fan of the Darcy's keeping their privacy you will not get it here. You are up close and personal in all their escapes. Some might even think our couple are too sweet on each other. A 3 week separation brings Lizzy to tears and there are many scenes where Darcy is even shedding some of his own. I again found a brief break at times helped revive my spirits to continue forward.
Our couple has already shared their vows in book 1 and in this one Jane, Bingley, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Mary, Kitty, Lydia, Mr. and Mrs. Bennet, Georgianna, and Caroline to name a few receive a make over. I liked each individual story split up in different chapters. I enjoyed seeing Darcy and Lizzy as parents and the little dramatic scenes tossed into spice it up. Wickham plays a desperate man trying to bring Darcy down. Caroline's story had a new twist. It really makes me want to go back and read book 1. I seen there is even a book 3. Enjoy!
Our couple has already shared their vows in book 1 and in this one Jane, Bingley, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Mary, Kitty, Lydia, Mr. and Mrs. Bennet, Georgianna, and Caroline to name a few receive a make over. I liked each individual story split up in different chapters. I enjoyed seeing Darcy and Lizzy as parents and the little dramatic scenes tossed into spice it up. Wickham plays a desperate man trying to bring Darcy down. Caroline's story had a new twist. It really makes me want to go back and read book 1. I seen there is even a book 3. Enjoy!
April 28, 2018
Oh Gosh, this book was somewhat of an Odyssey for me to finish!
I think it has to do a bit with how much I really loved the first book.
I loved, and keep appreciating how Wells took the characters for herself and left them to develop and grow on their own time, even when it didn't quite fit the cannon.
.
Most of it might be related for the characters being so very young... I was caught totally off guard when Darcy was celebrating Lizzy's 19th birthday! I mean, really, she is just SOOO young to already have a kid, and be married, and take over all his houses. The modern-city-feminist-girl in me wants to just turn my nose and put it away, but then, I simply can't.
Their love is so sweet to read about, and it made somewhat a even stronger impression than the first book, cause here we really got a glimpse of their day-to-day life, the fights, quarrels...
Of course, leave it to Wickham to bring some mayhem on their lives, but still.
But (the always infamous word).
But the first half didn't work to me. It was long, it felt strained and sometimes just so... Boring, I don't know. It was like I was turning random pages on my kindle and than, all of a sudden, BOOM! the pace was back on and the story felt amazing once again.
Anyway, I simply can't wait to read the last book!! Oh-oh!
I think it has to do a bit with how much I really loved the first book.
I loved, and keep appreciating how Wells took the characters for herself and left them to develop and grow on their own time, even when it didn't quite fit the cannon.
.
Most of it might be related for the characters being so very young... I was caught totally off guard when Darcy was celebrating Lizzy's 19th birthday! I mean, really, she is just SOOO young to already have a kid, and be married, and take over all his houses. The modern-city-feminist-girl in me wants to just turn my nose and put it away, but then, I simply can't.
Their love is so sweet to read about, and it made somewhat a even stronger impression than the first book, cause here we really got a glimpse of their day-to-day life, the fights, quarrels...
Of course, leave it to Wickham to bring some mayhem on their lives, but still.
But (the always infamous word).
But the first half didn't work to me. It was long, it felt strained and sometimes just so... Boring, I don't know. It was like I was turning random pages on my kindle and than, all of a sudden, BOOM! the pace was back on and the story felt amazing once again.
Anyway, I simply can't wait to read the last book!! Oh-oh!
April 19, 2018
“So long as the memory of certain beloved friends lives in my heart, I shall say that life is good.” –Helen Keller
Rating: MA: graphic, explicit, descriptive sex scenes between a married couple.
This is a very long story… over 500 pages in book form and over 15 hours reading time for ebook. This is the second book of three, follows book one [Memory: Lasting Impressions] and picks up where it left off. It too was a long read… as is book three [which I have already started]. Some call these un-put-down-able… and I would agree; however, you have to eat, sleep and do whatever you need to do, so you need to prepare for the long haul. Yes, there will be times when it drags a bit, or you hit a part where real life is being explained or described and you want the action… so you have to be ready for that. I hung in there and OMG!! The thrills and action were startling, shocking, and the pain of watching our dear couple struggle through those tough times will nearly break your heart.
“What greater thing is there for two human souls, than to feel that they are joined for life—to strengthen each other in all labor, to rest on each other in all sorrow, to minister to each other in all pain, to be one with each other in silent unspeakable memories at the moment of the last parting?” –George Eliot, Adam Bede
If you are a D&E junkie and love page-time between ODC [our dear couple], you will adore this. D&E were uninhibited in their loving, their time spent together and they do not answer to anyone but themselves. They are bold, brash, sexual, sensual in their interactions and oh-my-goodness… some of the scenes will steam the wallpaper off the wall. Help me! Whew… keep a fan or your salts handy. If… on the other hand, you do NOT like scenes with hot monkey sex against the wall … perhaps it would be better if you skipped this series. Just saying. No offense will be taken at all unless you trash the book in the reviews when you had been warned what you would be reading. That would not be fair. Just saying.
Journaling: “Documenting little details of your everyday life becomes a celebration of who you are.” –Carolyn V. Hamilton, Art Improv 101: How to Create a Personal Art Journal
At first, I didn’t understand the importance of the journal entries. But then I realized that so much information was conveyed by the use of their reading each other’s journal. D&E are well known for their misunderstandings and this was a way for them to say what they wanted to say and the other person could read what they intended and it was so nice to see this played out. Many times, I had a better understanding of what was going on as I read journal entries from both perspectives. Well done on the use of this device to give the reader information.
Parenting: “Each day of our lives we make deposits in the memory banks of our children.” –Charles R. Swindoll
Bennet: What do the Bennet girls remember about how they were parented? Oh my… this will simply break your heart. Jane learned a lot about her mother’s advice in book one. I really felt for her. Such pressure and such bad advice nearly was the ruin of her. Lizzy survived her mother’s constant diatribe against her and did well in spite of her mother and her father. Yes, her father. Mary, Kitty and Lydia have their own stories and they too will reflect on how their parents formed and influenced them. It is sad as all that influence and advice comes home to roost and the piper has to be paid. Mr. Bennet feels it acutely and it nearly breaks him by book two. Mrs. Bennet, with her mean understanding, simply cannot understand what is going on with her girls. Foolish, foolish woman can’t see the inner beauty of her daughters for looking at the outward appearance. She is so focused on her comforts and future dwelling that she would match her daughter with a reprobate or a toad just to insure her security. Foolish… foolish woman.
Darcy: we see a lot of his reflecting on his parents, and his grandparents. He knows his place in society and his responsibilities to his name and to his holdings, Darcy House and Pemberley, the servants and tenants. Once he sees Elizabeth Bennet though… he realizes that she is all he has ever wanted. They will have to fight for their rights to be together and to raise their child as they see fit. Georgiana, spoiled, coddled and raised as an only child, will have her own lessons to learn in book two. Her road will not be totally smooth as she if forced to rein in her behavior.
Bingley… we tolerated Caroline in book one when Darcy put his foot down big time. She was just an annoyance in book two. I liked Louisa and Hurst in this second book. They realized very quickly what was required of them and joined forces with their brother Charles in order to maintain their shaky place in society. Bingley was so immature and considered a puppy, he had much to learn. I kept wondering who he would be paired with in this story. I guess we will have to see in book three. He experienced a BIG misunderstanding with a lady at the end of book two so perhaps the wind is blowing in that direction.
Loved the Fitzwilliam family. Lady Catherine was forced into a situation that was to her liking. I love the de Bourgh family. Love them… and the lady he has his eye on. There were a lot of marriages in this book, and births. This was FAMILY… and I loved it… loved it.
Wickham and Mrs. Younge… wow! Totally wow on the angst meter. Blew it out of the water. OMG! Just when you think the coast is clear.
Rating: MA: graphic, explicit, descriptive sex scenes between a married couple.
This is a very long story… over 500 pages in book form and over 15 hours reading time for ebook. This is the second book of three, follows book one [Memory: Lasting Impressions] and picks up where it left off. It too was a long read… as is book three [which I have already started]. Some call these un-put-down-able… and I would agree; however, you have to eat, sleep and do whatever you need to do, so you need to prepare for the long haul. Yes, there will be times when it drags a bit, or you hit a part where real life is being explained or described and you want the action… so you have to be ready for that. I hung in there and OMG!! The thrills and action were startling, shocking, and the pain of watching our dear couple struggle through those tough times will nearly break your heart.
“What greater thing is there for two human souls, than to feel that they are joined for life—to strengthen each other in all labor, to rest on each other in all sorrow, to minister to each other in all pain, to be one with each other in silent unspeakable memories at the moment of the last parting?” –George Eliot, Adam Bede
If you are a D&E junkie and love page-time between ODC [our dear couple], you will adore this. D&E were uninhibited in their loving, their time spent together and they do not answer to anyone but themselves. They are bold, brash, sexual, sensual in their interactions and oh-my-goodness… some of the scenes will steam the wallpaper off the wall. Help me! Whew… keep a fan or your salts handy. If… on the other hand, you do NOT like scenes with hot monkey sex against the wall … perhaps it would be better if you skipped this series. Just saying. No offense will be taken at all unless you trash the book in the reviews when you had been warned what you would be reading. That would not be fair. Just saying.
Journaling: “Documenting little details of your everyday life becomes a celebration of who you are.” –Carolyn V. Hamilton, Art Improv 101: How to Create a Personal Art Journal
At first, I didn’t understand the importance of the journal entries. But then I realized that so much information was conveyed by the use of their reading each other’s journal. D&E are well known for their misunderstandings and this was a way for them to say what they wanted to say and the other person could read what they intended and it was so nice to see this played out. Many times, I had a better understanding of what was going on as I read journal entries from both perspectives. Well done on the use of this device to give the reader information.
Parenting: “Each day of our lives we make deposits in the memory banks of our children.” –Charles R. Swindoll
Bennet: What do the Bennet girls remember about how they were parented? Oh my… this will simply break your heart. Jane learned a lot about her mother’s advice in book one. I really felt for her. Such pressure and such bad advice nearly was the ruin of her. Lizzy survived her mother’s constant diatribe against her and did well in spite of her mother and her father. Yes, her father. Mary, Kitty and Lydia have their own stories and they too will reflect on how their parents formed and influenced them. It is sad as all that influence and advice comes home to roost and the piper has to be paid. Mr. Bennet feels it acutely and it nearly breaks him by book two. Mrs. Bennet, with her mean understanding, simply cannot understand what is going on with her girls. Foolish, foolish woman can’t see the inner beauty of her daughters for looking at the outward appearance. She is so focused on her comforts and future dwelling that she would match her daughter with a reprobate or a toad just to insure her security. Foolish… foolish woman.
Darcy: we see a lot of his reflecting on his parents, and his grandparents. He knows his place in society and his responsibilities to his name and to his holdings, Darcy House and Pemberley, the servants and tenants. Once he sees Elizabeth Bennet though… he realizes that she is all he has ever wanted. They will have to fight for their rights to be together and to raise their child as they see fit. Georgiana, spoiled, coddled and raised as an only child, will have her own lessons to learn in book two. Her road will not be totally smooth as she if forced to rein in her behavior.
Bingley… we tolerated Caroline in book one when Darcy put his foot down big time. She was just an annoyance in book two. I liked Louisa and Hurst in this second book. They realized very quickly what was required of them and joined forces with their brother Charles in order to maintain their shaky place in society. Bingley was so immature and considered a puppy, he had much to learn. I kept wondering who he would be paired with in this story. I guess we will have to see in book three. He experienced a BIG misunderstanding with a lady at the end of book two so perhaps the wind is blowing in that direction.
Loved the Fitzwilliam family. Lady Catherine was forced into a situation that was to her liking. I love the de Bourgh family. Love them… and the lady he has his eye on. There were a lot of marriages in this book, and births. This was FAMILY… and I loved it… loved it.
Wickham and Mrs. Younge… wow! Totally wow on the angst meter. Blew it out of the water. OMG! Just when you think the coast is clear.
September 14, 2013
TYPE OF AUSTENESQUE NOVEL: Alternate Path, Mature Audience
TIME FRAME: After Darcy and Elizabeth marry and return to Pemberley. (Darcy is 24, Elizabeth is soon to be 18)
MAIN CHARACTERS: Elizabeth Bennet, Mr. Darcy, Jane Bennet, Charles Bingley, George Wickman, Lord and Lady Matlock, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Mary Bennet, Georgiana Darcy, Lydia Bennet,
Captain de Bourgh
SYNOPSIS: Through the first year and a half of marriage Darcy and Elizabeth learn together their roles as husband and wife as well as Master and Mistress of Pemberley. They forge some turbulent waters and face some terrifying evils, but with the strong support of their loyal friends and their fervent love for each other, Darcy and Elizabeth can survive it all.
WHAT I LOVED:
- Pleasing Development and Alternate Futures for Jane and Mary: I loved seeing the further character growth and new directions for both Jane and Mary Bennet. I found Linda Well's portrayals of these two characters to be thought-provoking and plausible. Especially in regards to Mary Bennet – I love her relationship with Darcy!
- Excitement and Action: With an attempted robbery and assault, an unconventional birthing, and a harrowing near-death experience – the Darcy's have had quite an eventful marriage so far! I enjoyed the added drama and conflicts Linda Wells introduced in this novel. I would have loved to seen some more!
- It's a Story About Love and Family: Teasing cousins, guiding siblings, steadfast friends, and supportive aunts and uncles – it is heartwarming to see Darcy and Elizabeth surounded by such a wonderful circle of friends and family. I enjoyed seeing the amicability, camraderie, and rapport between everyone – especially Darcy and Elizabeth! <3
WHAT I WASN'T TOO FOND OF:
- Poor Georgiana!: Thirteen-year-old Georgiana is sure getting herself into a lot of trouble! Flirting with older men, spying on her brother, needing attention and lacking occupation. It bothered me a little that she was acting like such a troubled teen. It just didn't feel congruent with her character.
- Meddlesome Busybodies: Everyone seems to know each other's private affairs in this series! They gossip, pry, meddle, matchmake, and bring up personal matters without any qualms. It sort of felt unnatural and intrusive for Austen characters to discuss the pregnancies, personal dilemmas, and love affairs of their friends with each other.
- A Bit Repetitious: Mrs. Bennet saying something hurtful to Elizabeth, Mr. Darcy reprimanding Mr. Bennet, Lydia being inappropriate, Lord and Lady Matlock being shocked by the openly displayed affection between Darcy and Elizabeth...it sometimes felt like we were stuck in some ruts or a reptetive cycle.
WARNING:
Some intimate and romantic scenes
CONCLUSION:
While I admired and delighted in the first volume in the Memory series, I'm sad to say I didn't feel the same with volume two. Maybe the reason for this is that it is the challenging-to-write middle book in the series and neither introduces the story or gives it closure. (Sometimes called “middle book syndrome.”) Here's hoping I will like the third volume, How Far We Have Come, more!
TIME FRAME: After Darcy and Elizabeth marry and return to Pemberley. (Darcy is 24, Elizabeth is soon to be 18)
MAIN CHARACTERS: Elizabeth Bennet, Mr. Darcy, Jane Bennet, Charles Bingley, George Wickman, Lord and Lady Matlock, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Mary Bennet, Georgiana Darcy, Lydia Bennet,
Captain de Bourgh
SYNOPSIS: Through the first year and a half of marriage Darcy and Elizabeth learn together their roles as husband and wife as well as Master and Mistress of Pemberley. They forge some turbulent waters and face some terrifying evils, but with the strong support of their loyal friends and their fervent love for each other, Darcy and Elizabeth can survive it all.
WHAT I LOVED:
- Pleasing Development and Alternate Futures for Jane and Mary: I loved seeing the further character growth and new directions for both Jane and Mary Bennet. I found Linda Well's portrayals of these two characters to be thought-provoking and plausible. Especially in regards to Mary Bennet – I love her relationship with Darcy!
- Excitement and Action: With an attempted robbery and assault, an unconventional birthing, and a harrowing near-death experience – the Darcy's have had quite an eventful marriage so far! I enjoyed the added drama and conflicts Linda Wells introduced in this novel. I would have loved to seen some more!
- It's a Story About Love and Family: Teasing cousins, guiding siblings, steadfast friends, and supportive aunts and uncles – it is heartwarming to see Darcy and Elizabeth surounded by such a wonderful circle of friends and family. I enjoyed seeing the amicability, camraderie, and rapport between everyone – especially Darcy and Elizabeth! <3
WHAT I WASN'T TOO FOND OF:
- Poor Georgiana!: Thirteen-year-old Georgiana is sure getting herself into a lot of trouble! Flirting with older men, spying on her brother, needing attention and lacking occupation. It bothered me a little that she was acting like such a troubled teen. It just didn't feel congruent with her character.
- Meddlesome Busybodies: Everyone seems to know each other's private affairs in this series! They gossip, pry, meddle, matchmake, and bring up personal matters without any qualms. It sort of felt unnatural and intrusive for Austen characters to discuss the pregnancies, personal dilemmas, and love affairs of their friends with each other.
- A Bit Repetitious: Mrs. Bennet saying something hurtful to Elizabeth, Mr. Darcy reprimanding Mr. Bennet, Lydia being inappropriate, Lord and Lady Matlock being shocked by the openly displayed affection between Darcy and Elizabeth...it sometimes felt like we were stuck in some ruts or a reptetive cycle.
WARNING:
Some intimate and romantic scenes
CONCLUSION:
While I admired and delighted in the first volume in the Memory series, I'm sad to say I didn't feel the same with volume two. Maybe the reason for this is that it is the challenging-to-write middle book in the series and neither introduces the story or gives it closure. (Sometimes called “middle book syndrome.”) Here's hoping I will like the third volume, How Far We Have Come, more!
January 26, 2018
Lovely long read that is sweet, romantic and passionate.
Wickham is back to get his revenge on Darcy and both Darcy and Elizabeth gets wounded.
There are babies being born and weddings.
Loved Jane choice of husband and the wedding.
Georgiana is up to some mischief and the Bennets are not all tamed yet...
Love the relationship between ODC in this trilogy .
Can't wait to read the next...
Wickham is back to get his revenge on Darcy and both Darcy and Elizabeth gets wounded.
There are babies being born and weddings.
Loved Jane choice of husband and the wedding.
Georgiana is up to some mischief and the Bennets are not all tamed yet...
Love the relationship between ODC in this trilogy .
Can't wait to read the next...
September 15, 2023
I love how this story is developing. The relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth is beautiful and it has a huge impact on everyone around them.
A tale that I love to re-read.
A tale that I love to re-read.
September 21, 2024
Review for all three volumes of the Memory trilogy.
Premise: Darcy and Elizabeth spot each other in Hyde park years before canon and feel an instant connection. They have several almost encounters over two years, until they finally meet. About as close and you can get to a fated mate/soulmate trope without venturing into paranormal territory. ODC stay strong and true for each other while family and friends cause a LOT of drama.
What I liked: Darcy and Elizabeth's bond never wavers despite the soap-opera levels of external drama. This is a looooong trilogy and can get repetitive, but I found it comforting and warm.
Characterization: Because they met earlier, Darcy is less selfish and snobbish while Elizabeth is less quick to judge. Jane starts out as a bad Jane, but she gets better. Mrs Bennet is more narcissistic and histrionic and Mr Bennet is more of a smug dick (though he tries to get better). Lady Catherine and Anne de Bourgh are way more over the top. Wickham is more evil and violent.
Smut level: Very high. Many passionate kisses and handsy stuff prior to marriage, lots of frequent and varied marital sex. Mostly euphemistic language for bits, though.
Any non-canon parings: Lots.
Issues: It's long. over 700,000 words. The first volume covers about two years, and the next two about a year each. But I enjoyed spending time in this world.
Premise: Darcy and Elizabeth spot each other in Hyde park years before canon and feel an instant connection. They have several almost encounters over two years, until they finally meet. About as close and you can get to a fated mate/soulmate trope without venturing into paranormal territory. ODC stay strong and true for each other while family and friends cause a LOT of drama.
What I liked: Darcy and Elizabeth's bond never wavers despite the soap-opera levels of external drama. This is a looooong trilogy and can get repetitive, but I found it comforting and warm.
Characterization: Because they met earlier, Darcy is less selfish and snobbish while Elizabeth is less quick to judge. Jane starts out as a bad Jane, but she gets better. Mrs Bennet is more narcissistic and histrionic and Mr Bennet is more of a smug dick (though he tries to get better). Lady Catherine and Anne de Bourgh are way more over the top. Wickham is more evil and violent.
Smut level: Very high. Many passionate kisses and handsy stuff prior to marriage, lots of frequent and varied marital sex. Mostly euphemistic language for bits, though.
Any non-canon parings: Lots.
Issues: It's long. over 700,000 words. The first volume covers about two years, and the next two about a year each. But I enjoyed spending time in this world.
May 18, 2023
Emotional anguish, humour, interesting
Another story that is incredibly well written, has emotional turmoil, and incredible details. The first years of marriage and children brought into the relationship of each couple. The turmoil that Mrs Bennett and Lydia bring. The humor in this story is fantastic. Four out of five Bennett girls impressive and witty. Greatly written and highly recommended.
Another story that is incredibly well written, has emotional turmoil, and incredible details. The first years of marriage and children brought into the relationship of each couple. The turmoil that Mrs Bennett and Lydia bring. The humor in this story is fantastic. Four out of five Bennett girls impressive and witty. Greatly written and highly recommended.
August 10, 2025
4.25⭐️
I am loving reading this series and reading more about Elizabeth and Darcy's life post wedding and how their love for each other is influencing the people around them. But it is not all happy tidings, there is some angst in the book, though it is addressed pretty early on in the story. I have to say I want to see what more the author has in store for us w.r.t. the next book in the series and the lives of the Darcys and their family and friends.
I am loving reading this series and reading more about Elizabeth and Darcy's life post wedding and how their love for each other is influencing the people around them. But it is not all happy tidings, there is some angst in the book, though it is addressed pretty early on in the story. I have to say I want to see what more the author has in store for us w.r.t. the next book in the series and the lives of the Darcys and their family and friends.
June 1, 2024
Not for me - far, far, far too long
This follows the first year or so of the Darcy's marriage and those of all their friends and relations. Other than a rather OTT incident with the usual villain absolutely nothing happens. This needs to be cut in length by about 50% to make a reasonable book.
A clear miss for me.
This follows the first year or so of the Darcy's marriage and those of all their friends and relations. Other than a rather OTT incident with the usual villain absolutely nothing happens. This needs to be cut in length by about 50% to make a reasonable book.
A clear miss for me.
December 16, 2022
In this Pride and prejudice variation the story continues with Jane back at Longbourn. Mary is to go and stay with the married Darcys before going to school with Georgiana. Other couples begin their lives together.
For me there was too much mature content though it can easily be skipped. Overall an enjoyable story.
For me there was too much mature content though it can easily be skipped. Overall an enjoyable story.
November 14, 2024
Good read but not enough to entice me to read again in the future. I did smile more in this one than the first but I think I liked the first more since the smut in this one was not quite my cup of tea.
June 29, 2020
I skimmed a lot toward the end. It seemed to drag on, so I won't be purchasing the 3rd in the series. I'm good.
June 17, 2016
Lovely
The love story continues and is wonderful in that it allows us to be immersed in our fantasies for Elizabeth and Darcy. I thought our evil Wickham was conquered almost too easily in the end, but magnificently dispatched nonetheless. The new characters are fabulous additions and Lydia's continued ignorance is entertaining.
The love story continues and is wonderful in that it allows us to be immersed in our fantasies for Elizabeth and Darcy. I thought our evil Wickham was conquered almost too easily in the end, but magnificently dispatched nonetheless. The new characters are fabulous additions and Lydia's continued ignorance is entertaining.
March 31, 2011
Umm not for Jane Austen purists. Charecters aren't anything like Darcy and Elizabeth, Jane or Bingley, but I found myself enjoying it.
December 19, 2014
3.5 Austen
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