I'm warning you, it's long. When I picked this book up, the plot reminded me of Gillian Shields' "Immortal", which I liked; I'd probably lower the rating if I read it again, because back then I was a very lenient reader.
Now on to "Blood Magic." There are choppy sentences, unneeded and unwanted details, and it's repetitive. I think Tessa (the author) hates the word "that," or doesn't know its use. Tessa likes to compare things to stone. Why is this book so long and slow? Nick and Silla's first kiss bothered me; it was too much, and their feelings didn't match it. I declare this relationship as lust at first sight. Stop kissing and build the relationship up so it's believable. I shake my head at these horny and angsty teens. Please don't summarize a scene we had to endure through; it was bad enough the first go round. Good idea; go bleed animals to death in the name of witchcraft! I hope this girl hits a major artery next time she cuts herself! Sure, brothers just love to hear about their sister(s) making out and lusting over someone. Ugh!
Can Tessa buy or use a thesaurus instead of constantly using the Lord's name in vain? It makes the characters sound like white trash. It's kind of funny that this book mentions "Harry Potter", because I'd rather be reading that this very instant than this garbage. I feel bad comparing this mess to "Immortal." Why are we constantly being told when the characters have to use the powder room and gentleman's room? Somethings are understood, unless you say it isn't done; it's like a Sookie Stackhouse novel without suspense, thrill, or the characters (well it's artificial, and Silla needs to grow a backbone, and Nick needs to grow a pair), or a bloody (it is called "Blood Magic" not "Bloodletters") plot!
A snotty remark about the unhealthy thinness of model (she said Vogue in particular) is hypocritical if you are close to looking like them; your point has contradicted itself, silly Tessa. If Silla being a witch in a play was supposed to be cleverly ironic, you failed miserably, Tessa. This book doesn't deserve to allude to Shakespeare. Will they please suck it up; I'm not accepting the evil stepmother and recently dead parents as an excuse for all this teenage angst! You just had to pick a script that was hard to read. Why are there sixty-four chapters? If you can't tell the story within thirty, you need to cut a lot of crap out. No wonder none of the heroes have bad luck; they're doing the "Devil's magic." That's what Josephine said the Deacon (who's supposed to be a demon) said.
Zombie birds, really? Sure, let the blood bitch know you have her diary; what's the worse thing that could happen? How are they going to get a sample of Josephine if she's in Eric's body; don't they need to banish her and find her real body to bind her? The whole rhyming spells (aka bad poetry) thing is silly. Why do you have them fighting Reese's corpse? Was that the best that you could of? What about, instead of burning the forest down, you just set Josephine's body on fire after you bind her? Why aren't they charged for arson and question for having blood all over them? I'm confused; what happened to the spell book/diary? Did Josephine get it? Did it burn? Who has it?
This book has more chapters than Harry potter books: smh and roll my eyes. The plot is laughable, and the character development is poor; I could go on and on, but I'll shorten this for you. This book is the perfect example of everything not to do. Why didn't you make up some spells and stay consistent with them, instead of having many of them just needing blood? That's sloppy and lazy writing. This book had potential, and had the idea been executed by an author who can actually write, it would have been magnificent. This book was a waste of some may different things, like trees, ink, money, and time. Did Nick burn his house down too or was Silla describing the forest? Way to go Silla and Nick; this is why idiots shouldn't play with or handle fire; it's partly Eric's fault too for giving Silla the fire. So they're both conveniently moving to Chicago? Get real Tessa! I'm guessing from the repeated obnoxiously obvious lectures against immortality that Tessa is strongly against it. This book has one of the worst endings I've ever read.
Nick: He seems like a creepy, boring, birdbrain, wannabe-asshole freak, who, by his own words, isn't smooth with the ladies. Geez, I wonder why. He's kind of a loser, not a shy guy or a loner, a loser. I hate his reaction to things, and he describes things in an awkwardly weird way. That was just my opinion of him after reading chapter three. I'm sure his mother's POV is much more fascinating. If i had a son as boring as him, I'd pretend he didn't exist too; maybe that was too harsh, but you get my point (like father like son.) When he first saw Silla he was like OMG, she's hot. He said that he thought her name was pretty... excuse me while I gag. What's his hair and his eye color? Dreaming about being trapped in a dog's body? Of all the things in the world he could dream about, why that? That's exactly why he can't get laid. Why is he talking about fashion sense? Writing a dirty haiku? Why is he calling himself a asshole? I finally know what he looks like! Even if i wasn't Christian, i would still think the misuse of the Messiah's name is annoying and unnecessary. I've heard "goddamn" a lot, but not Christ. Please stop making him agree with everything she says. Stop saying, "You bet." So he's addicted to whiskey or obsessed with it. Stepmother drama is boring unless she isn't boring. Stop tasting her makeup. The fruity flavors are artificial, you know. Nick has a foul mouth; where's the Orbit gum lady when you need her? No one but you cares about your dad's sex life. I would say complain to your dad, but he'd put you in your place before you got a peep out. Why is he dressed up for a house party? "Color me shocked"... ugh! So now the cemetery is evil; what's next, the gas station and elementary school? Silla tastes like blood and wine, eww? Quit calling her babe; he is such a creep. You want to chew on her lip, really? Finally, Tessa realizes that the boy is creepy. Goodness, this boy is a teenage hormone bomb; she can't even touch him. Pg. 240, this is why many teenage pregnancies start in cars. You two were about to get it on in her the driveway, how classy; where did her step-grandma get the idea that you were a gentleman from? I get it; you're dad's perfect and boring (just like you), so stop rewording the same descriptions. You need Dr. Phil (the psychiatrist). So now he's starting fights; what a loser. I bet the real reason he punched Scott Jobson is because he's cooler and is actually masculine. Apparently, he knows palmistry. I get a feeling that Tessa is saying. "Okay teens and tweens, you can be cutters (aka emos)"; please do not encourage people, especially the youth, to harm themselves! Your father has horrible taste in women: like father, like son. You're a bigger idiot than I thought. When someone is dead in their grave, they can't drink beer, duh. He's wasting stuff like he bought it. you're such a drama queen. If only you were being flushed down a toilet. It's called an IV, and apparently, Tessa was too lazy to look up the name for it. Why is he always dressed like a old time gentleman? Tessa, keep your own love fantasies out of the story.
Silla: Thank goodness Tessa shortened the name Drusilla because I hate that name. There's hopefully some hope for her. She thinks too much. Does she always carry a pocketknife, or was it just for the spell book? She wasn't clear about some things, and I still didn't get them after doing three double takes. What color are her eyes and her hair? What teenager cooks and cleans to keep busy? It sounds like future housewife prep. Why is she trying to convince her brother? Does it really matter if he believes in it or not? Nick is forgettable; no, seriously, please forget him. There was got to be more interesting guys at that school. Sure, accept a ride from a boy who you barely know; what's the worst thing that could happen? Why do you want to touch him? He's not even cute from your description. Duh, if you lick your lips, they're either dry, you're getting rid of crumbs, or you're trying to be sexy. Do not suddenly shove your tongue in someone's mouth; they'll either think you're easy, take offense, or both. So her eyes are grey; what color is her hair? It worries me that she's comparing her love interest to the devil; it's not a good sign. He's not really something; he's really boring. No one cares about what you bought at the mall... clothes most likely. Why is she turned on by a guy throwing himself at her? If you knew the definition of gangly, you wouldn't have added tall; readers don't need a bad analogy to understand what gangly means. I know your parents are disappointed in having you for a daughter; if I have a daughter like her, I'd be contemplating suicide too. Sorry, but not sorry. Stop licking your lips and get some chapstick. You barely know the boy, and yet you let him in your empty house; if this was real life, she'd regret that decision. At this rate, they're going to be in bed before suppertime: like father, like son. Please don't tell yourself that lie; your mom would have told you that you could have found better. He's just as boring as you... no wonder you two get along so well. If the reader doesn't care about Nick, why would your late parents? Metaphors and similes should only be used by pros and people who know how to properly use them. Bloody headstone and being chased por watched by an unseen forced: truly the epitome of horror, not. Eww, who wants wine with someone's blood in it. Stop chewing your lips, or you'll get chapped lips; on second thought, please do, and I won't have to suffer through any painful kissing scenes. Which mask means what, because I've lost track of them? I wish Josephine had pressed the letter opener to Silla's neck and made a deep cut. Could you not think of something scarier than a letter in her locker? I'm pretty sure Tessa got her grief training in online unaccredited class, and that's why Ms. Tripp sounds like she does. Stupid Silla. You are paranoid; just because someone doesn't answer their phone, doesn't mean they're dead or in mortal danger. No, Melissa isn't a bitch; Nick and you are. Good job at proving that you aren't a headcase, not. "That's the wrong kind of strong." That was so obvious that think I'm going to puke! If you feel like you have to baby your readers then you're aware that you're not gifted with words. Apparently, she doesn't like it when birds sing; I think if nature has to tolerate her singing, she should return the favor. You would sacrifice your future over puppy-dog love and a worthless boy, and move to his hometown? Ugh! So you won't fight your possessed brother to save yourself; are you kidding me! You're positively weak. Why do you keep on puking; are you pregnant? Are you seriously drinking Pepto-Bismol? I know it taste good, but so do many other none drugs, and if you have to keep on drinking it, clearly you need something stronger. Yeah, let's all get drunk off of the pink stuff, not. After the funeral was more boring that the actual thing. Please don't use a word to describe something and then define the word; what is wrong with you? Sure make-out and get freaky in a graveyard; I mean dead bodies turn everyone on. Idiot, you don't bury your only defense in your brother's coffin. We know which button sends the messages on a cell phone, Tessa. Please stop whining. Why are you talking about the sky when you're tied up? Where and did you get the scissors to free yourself? She has masks in her room, so when she was talking about wearing masks, was she literally wearing a mask? Why would Judy move you to Chicago after you killed the villain? If you stayed in that house after you found your parents dead, why would you move just because of dead Josephine? Is the Deacon going to come after you now or something? You just keep on getting dumber each page. Why is she obsessed with hair gel: yuck? How come she wants to bring Reese back, but says nothing about her parents?
Josephine: I'm guessing that she is going to be the villain, if that's not too presumptuous. "And so, against my Will, this is the tale of how I came to meet Mr. Philip Osborn (the beast)." Why is "will" capitalized? Her influenza reminds me of the fever Sebastian ("Immortal") kept on getting; also the journals put me in mind of Lady Agnes, and she worked in a sewing shop (in here it's a mill.) Maybe I'm being unfair with the comparisons, but i can only stomach so much deja vu. I wanted a similar story that was still original. I don't see the point of her POV yet.
"The little girl shaking in the bed next to me was certain we were Doomed, the gutless creature." Why is "doomed" capitalized? I'm starting to think that this is failed emphasizing.
"Philip's eyes had a thickness to them, and his copper hair and long-fingered surgeon's hands Awoke something in me that has never Slept again." There are so many things wrong with that sentence!
"I stared at the corner of his mouth as he concentrated, at the way it twitched when he tried to hide the Truth as he listened to the little girl beside me breathe." I'm just going to let these exerts make a mockery of themselves.
"Philip took me out of St. James and to his tall house in Town."
"It smelled of flowers!" Hopefully everyone knows what soap smells like.
"With an Education, I'd never have to go back to the mill, and i would impress him so very much with my wits and skills and prettiness that he would love me above all other things." This makes me cringe.
"How could i have known that what he would teach me is ever so much greater than Love."
"This is how i found out about Magic."
"Philip's Library is small and cramped, but the books pile on top of each other until i feel their Weight will bring down the very house around our heads."
"...of pictures of the with Dead body....."
"Little sprite, tomorrow you will come with me, to assist with my work."
"....the Blood the very next day."
"..Long Ago, but to drain the Illness away"
"....and they would never Know me."
".......all Lumpy and Infested....."
"...gathering the Blood for our midnight secrets"
"...at the way the Blood separated."
"No words Capture....."
"The Thrill of the Blood...."
"Oh but this is Heaven. Philip is my announcing angel--or am I Morgan and he is the wizard teaching me how to rule the world."
Basically Josephine has issues, bad grammar, and there are so many exerts. This book is too long for me to list them all, but they're all in her POV.
Why is it that her diary entries have become more entertaining than the actual story? Who's Arthur?
1961 wasn't the first year in the 60's, 1960 was; I can tell she didn't learn math. No wonder Philip abandoned this hopeless nutcase.
Tessa, using gay, instead of happy or another symptom, proves that you're trying too hard to sound authentic; if you want to sound authentic, start from scratch on this disaster.
Why is she giving Silla a lesson on magic?
If she possessed the whole forest, shouldn't she know when Silla frees herself and runs through the forest?
Why didn't she escape in an animal's body when the forest was burning: before they bound her?
What a pathetic villain!
Other:
Reese is clumsier than me. Why would you toss your wallet on the table; are you trying to get robbed? Why does he call Silla, bumblebee? His brother-sister relationship with Silla seems borderline incestuous sometimes; I keep on thinking that they're going to kiss. I think his death unnecessary; it added nothing to the plot. It just took from it. Oh well... one less moping young adult. What am I saying; now she's going to cry over him too. Ugh, I am most definitely not wasting my money on the sequel. I had to skip over your funeral because it was so badly written. Why is he alive; he was killed off, and you even showed his funeral? I bet Tessa threw that in last minute because she wanted to bore the reader to death with him in the series. When he died, he didn't have time to possess the crows, so he's dead-dead. Why is his spirit watching over them? Tessa, when you kill off a character, understand that you can't use him or her anymore unless under certain circumstances (which don't apply here).
Wendy: I' m crossing my fingers that she won't disappoint me. Why would you want to stare at a guy's hairy legs in a kilt? Seriously, who has secret talks in the janitor's closet in school in real life? When is the last time Tessa has been in a high school? Smh, you're disappointing me. Did her parents and her drop the charges she had against Silla and Nick, or did Tessa just forget about that? They're were witnesses, and of course Nick and Silla are going to say whatever it takes to make themselves look innocent. "Oh, Sil......," Who shortens a nickname? Her name is Drusilla, and her nickname is Silla, so is Sil just being a lazy American (I'm American, by the way)?
Gram Judy: Can she please act like a guardian! A bird attack isn't exciting, it's a wtf moment. Maybe you all should carry loaves of bread on you after that. If you exorcise one body, she can just possess another, and come after all of you, so how would an exorcism make all of you safe? Josephine has a body, so she isn't a demon. You need some sort of banishing spell of the whole town or a powerful amulet. I guess she decided to put in a feminist to balance weak Silla and Nick (self-explanatory). She decided to add more history in there; it's kind of ironic how she's talking about gender equality, when Silla's sickeningly close to licking Nick's feet clean, and transforming into a 50's homemaker: another failure, Tessa. I'm sick of hippie-fever unless the writer does it justice; I know that not every white American in the seventies was a hippie, so stop this trend. What the heck is bunko? How did she conveniently refilled Reese's grave before the police arrived there? Can't you tell the difference between a freshly dug grave by an amateur and a professionally done one that's days or weeks old?
Philip: He sounds so boring. I knew he was Silla's and what's his name... um, Reese's father (well, in paternal, not a biological sense; I hope Tessa makes this make sense). Why did you have to possess Robert? Couldn't you have started over in your real body?
Ms. Tripp: Please kill her; that is all. To be continued for stupidity. You never slip up or slip out that you're the villain, until all the heroes are dead, or off your trail; this is why the villains almost always lose: can't keep their secret identity. "You're delightful." "Stop struggling, darling." What kind of villain says something like that? Not a scary one or a good one. I can't take her seriously.
Lilith: She's a leech. Yes, Tessa, we get that she's a gold-digger and that you want us to pretend that Nick is attractive and charming enough to have a cougar after him. Nobody wants you except Silla, Nick. Get real! So, her name isn't Lilith? What's her name then? All that I'm reading is the nickname Nick gave her and her pen name. So, it's Mary; why didn't Tessa just name her Lilith to begin with? Why was she drinking blood, and how come Nick's dad didn't notice it (especially when she spilled it, unless Nick's delusional). How come she's the best character, and the heroes hate her? I'm confused; is she controlling the crows that are stalking them but not harming them?
I'm offended that I actually bought this book. I paid good money just to be disappointed. Steer clear of this book. Save your eyes the strain from all of you eye-rolling. Excuse me while I suppress all of my memories of reading this atrocity of a book.