Are you a huge James Kirk fan? Then don't read this review. We are not the same.
I originally opened this novel feeling cautiously optimistic. Kirk is my least favourite character of the original crew - I adore Spock, Uhura, and Chekov and I like Scotty, McCoy, and Sulu, while Kirk falls somewhere below Janice Rand and Kevin Riley - but I'd read a few earlier novels that focused on Kirk yet surprised me and that I even quite enjoyed. In addition, this is penned by Diane Carey, a giant of Star Trek and a truly talented writer, so I figured it had an even chance of being delightful despite the subject.
Then I read the 4-page introduction to the novel. My enthusiasm absolutely plummeted. Starting a Star Trek novel by waxing philosophical on how great Civil War generals were? Yyyyyyikes.
Then the actual novel started and I thought... oh, no. Oh, dear. The first 200 pages are basically just a snotty, spoiled, sullen 16 year old being a typical dreary teenager - but in space - and I can't remember having been so bored and disconnected reading a Star Trek novel in a while.
Let me be clear - the quality of the writing itself is top tier. A different story, a different plot, I could easily have been hooked by the lyrical and descriptive qualities of the prose. But the majority of this story was so incredibly
boring
I could barely convince my eyes to move to the next line.
I just don't care that a deeply unlikeable 16 year old eventually learned a lesson, taking a 400-page novel to do it, and an equally unlikeable 19 year old took the same 400 page novel to never learn, grow, or change. I just. Don't. Care.
The novel started with the conceit that it would help us understand how Kirk got to be so great. I don't feel that I learned that at all. If anything, Kirk has become an even blander, even more boring, white-bread character to me than he already was. The little asides into the colonizer POV, about how great the U.S. pioneers were without a single mention of the massive genocide of the peoples who were already there and fully cognizant of the land they were "discovering" added bursts of cringe to a consistently mind-numbingly boring story.
If you are a big Kirk fan, you might adore every page of this book. If you know a disrespectful, egotistical teen who likes Star Trek and you think seeing themselves in this story might turn them around, then maybe it's worth a try. But me? I genuinely wish I'd had the strength to DNF this one, because I didn't gain a darn thing from it but a few unintentional naps.