I got this book on a Stuff Your Kindle Day because the cover was gorgeous and the blurb sounded so promising. Unfortunately, that’s about where the excitement ended, because the execution was… rough.
Let’s start with the pacing. It somehow managed to be both too fast and too slow at the same time. Scenes flew by with little to no detail the kind of descriptive writing that would have made the story immersive was completely missing yet the middle dragged with endless internal monologues and repetitive filler. Instead of a polished thriller, it read like a rough outline rushed out the door.
Then there’s the plot. I’m sorry, but what? The premise quickly veers from “fast-paced thriller” into “this would literally never happen.” Getting wrapped up in your ex’s wedding as a central plotline? Really? This isn’t fantasy I’m supposed to buy into it as a realistic thriller, and it just wasn’t believable in the slightest. If you’re going to hinge the story on something that outlandish, then at least give me enough detail to suspend disbelief.
Take Abby and Micah’s relationship: it’s supposed to be central, but we’re given nothing meaningful to hold onto. Blair’s death? Barely skimmed over, yet it’s supposedly the entire reason Micah’s mom wants Abby dead. That’s not a small detail to breeze past. Oh, and the affair between Micah’s mom and Abby’s ex-fiancé? Dropped in like an afterthought and then left dangling. These aren’t side notes — these are the bones of the story, and they were treated like optional bullet points. Fast-paced doesn’t mean you get to skip the main plot.
And don’t even get me started on the grammar. The sheer number of mistakes pulled me out of the story over and over again. Honestly, it gave the impression that this book went to print without ever seeing an editor, which is a shame because the premise had real potential.
As for the ending… oof. Thrillers live and die by their conclusion, and this one just collapsed. I was holding out hope that the last act would redeem the slog, tie things together, and hit me with the kind of punchy twist that makes you say, “Well, that was worth it.” Instead, the twist felt forced, flat, and — worst of all — boring. I get that Roberts was probably aiming for something unexpected, but “unexpected” doesn’t automatically mean “good.” In this case, it was neither satisfying nor clever, just deeply disappointing.
To be fair, the skeleton of a good story is here. With stronger editing, consistent pacing, deeper character development, and a little more respect for the intelligence of the reader, this book could actually work. But as it stands, it reads more like a rough draft than a finished novel.