This book is so annoying, and the only reason I’m giving it 2 stars is because I’ve certainly read much worse, and to be fair, Jordan isn’t a terrible writer.
Charley/Charlotte is your standard Mills and Boon character. She’s so thin she'd get lost behind a pencil, isn’t the most attractive person in the world, constantly putting herself down and wishing she could be like the women she assumes her love interest would date. However, despite how plain she may be written as, the prickly love interest is inexplicably mesmerised by her, but nothing happens until she’s out of her ill fitting clothing, with her hair and makeup done, because a swan can’t actually love or be involved with an “ugly duckling". She must transform first, she’s just merely a late bloomer. They're also poor, naive, inexperienced (I don’t think I’ve ever read a M&B book where the women aren’t virgins before they meet their very experienced love interest), she’s passionate about this or that, which always amazes the guy, and I’m sure there's many more points, but I can’t be bothered listing them all.
In this particular tale, Charley would be amazing in some teen romantic comedy with her clumsiness. She'd nearly fallen 3 times in as many chapters – with Raphael there to catch her twice. But according to Mr Grumpy pants, she's “too slender” to be clumsy... What the heck has size got to do with it?
Some nice descriptive work, but I feel that’s all it is. There's painfully little dialogue between any of the characters, especially Charley and Raphael, their relationship being built mostly through exposition.
I’m not the biggest fan of love at first sight/insta-love types stories, and this is no exception. There's also very little between them other than the stories they have of each other in their heads. It's a ridiculous cringe fest with little substance.