David Baldacci's Last Man Standing has elements of a good novel, but a couple of flaws -- and one in particular -- keep it from transcending mediocrity. Web London, a member of the FBI's Hostage Rescue Team, freezes during a mission and watches as his team is gunned down. While seeing a psychiatrist in an attempt to understand what made him hold back, he investigates the shooting and uncovers a conspiracy involving drug dealers, white supremacists, undercover feds and a horse ranch.
Spoilers follow...
The biggest problem the book has is its hero. Web London isn't likeable at all. He's selfish, stubborn, refuses to listen to anyone, insults people who try to help him and bullies his own colleagues into giving him what he wants. And this is our hero? At one point, he all but forces the head of another HRT team to let him come along on a mission (while he's supposed to be on leave), even implying he'll hurt him if the guy doesn't comply, and it leads to the man almost getting fired. When the inevitable scene where the superior threatens to fire Web comes, I was on the bureaucrat's side. When he questions Jerome, the uncle of a missing boy who figures into the shooting, he mocks him and belittles the idea that Jerome could have a job, which frankly makes him seem racist. When he heads off to Billy Canfield's ranch, he goads Romano into going with him, knowing he's ruining the man's vacation and causing trouble with Romano's wife, but he shrugs this off and makes her out to be unreasonable. Finally, toward the end, he has in his sniper sights a man who helped his investigation -- not to mention the guy was as much a victim of the conspiracy as Web -- and he threatens to kill him. Right in front of his son. When he ends up letting him go, he wonders what's wrong with him. The man has zero honor. There's an undercover agent names Randall Cove who would've made a much better protagonist. He's tough, but honorable, has a dark past that makes some of the real assholes at the FBI -- like Web! -- suspect him of being part of the conspiracy, he's driven to seek justice at any cost and he's one of the people set up by the bad guys. They could've had Web die in the shootout and had Cove be the hero trying to figure out what happened. They'd need to get rid of the psychiatrist subplot and the title of the book, but it would've made for a better reading experience.
Some of the writing is a bit subpar as well. Baldacci repeats himself a lot, often in the same paragraph. The dialogue is often very corny, especially when he's trying to be witty. The expository dialogue is particularly rough as well. It doesn't even attempt to come off naturally. They may as well break the fourth wall and talk directly to the reader. It's a problem I don't recall having with The Camel Club or The Collectors, but they were written later so maybe he's just grown as a writer.
One more thing that bothered me was a particular setup that never got a payoff. Nemo Straight, who is revealed to be the architect of the HRT murder and the takeover of the drug business on the Eastern seaboard, shoots Randall Cove, but has to run before he can make sure the undercover agent is dead. Turns out that was a big mistake because Cove was wearing a bullet proof vest. One would think he'd pop up in the final shootout and help Web and Romano, right? Well, he doesn't. We find out in one of the final chapters that he made it to a hospital. That's really lazy plotting. Baldacci might as well have had Cove die. He also sets up a reunion between Web and his father, but that happens after the book is over. Very disappointing.
The book isn't all bad, however. The conspiracy, with all its different players -- each with their own motives -- is well thought-out and parts of it are very original. Having Dr. O'Bannon be the traitor, who not only sold the secrets agents and their wives told him to his paymasters but also hypnotized Web into freezing during the ill-fated mission, is more interesting than just another crooked agent. It was foreshadowed well, with Web learning that many of the agents' wives visit psychiatrists as well. I also enjoyed the subplot where Web sees Claire Daniels and she attempts to help him figure out why he froze up. I liked how calm she was, particularly since Web is so nasty to her.
I went back and forth between two and three stars for this one. Ultimately, I think there's enough that's good about the book to make it worth reading. I'd never read it again, though. And I'm glad Baldacci never used Web London as a hero again.