Hardly an aphorism, For Kings and Planets rehashes the age-old parables about wealth, status, lineage, and regionalism, and yet Canin does pretty well standing on the shoulders of giants, here. His language isn't as lyrical as the bookjacket suggests, but he does have beautiful moments. Most of his strongest writing is in sentences that aren't vividly limned, but succinct and smart, encapsulating the worlds he's trying to describe.
The book's plot obviously rests in its characters, not in loud events. In Orno and Marshall we have interesting characters. Orno becomes more believable as the book progresses, though Marshall sometimes falls flat. It's believable that there are special people, friends that are somehow greater than us in almost every aspect, but the "flaws" Canin inserts to ground Marshall don't suffice, and at a certain point, become irritating. The other characters go on and on about how amazing he is, which is realistic if he intended it to be absurd in that way, but the reader may get frustrated with this. I've read extremely flawed characters and not been frustrated by their actions, and yet every character hyping up Marshall, saying "But he's so amazing," frustrates me, because I'd expect better judgment from Columbia and Bard graduates. Sure, Orno is naive, but it seems his revelation about Marshall's true character comes about 80 pages late. Orno and Simone are believable enough. Orno's stock country bumpkin deepens as he struggles to make choices about his career and love life.
As far as how things progress, Canin's pacing is impeccable for much of the book. He catalogs months' time in an economic manner, never drawing out, but always making the reader feel as if the time really has passed.
The scope of the book feels reasonable. The characters are prestigious and rich, but it's believable in the same way the Gilded Age's protagonists were. The Emersons struggle to keep up and Drake Tarcher's dismay with Orno's momentary fuck-ups solidify stakes for the reader.
Spoilers ahead, now: The scope and pacing of the book REALLY hiccups when, during a kind of false climax, Marshall drunkenly leads Orno to a shack where their old flame Sofia is waiting. So far, the book has drifted by, granting moral conflicts and imposing its themes in little ways. Marshall has gotten a little crazy at this point. But his chagrin with Orno's "betrayal", and just magically making Sofia appear (and then wait in a shack?), makes the reader wonder if they've stumbled into a thriller instead of a literary novel. The suddenness and hostility of the moment doesn't make for the plot twist Canin wants it to. The ensuing search is, also, irritating. There are clear signs that Marshall is a little deranged throughout the book, but this just doesn't vibe with the rest of the work's pacing.
I know I've just complained about something eventful happening, but ultimately, it does seem the character-based events are few. I like character-based fiction, but the psychological stakes and conflicts don't often seem as high as they could. There are idiosyncratic troubles that could be taken farther with these characters. They're not quite as full as they should be after 300 pages. Ultimately, For Kings And Planets is good, especially in its dialogue and in its two main characters' relationship, but feels as if it's got nothing new to say. Like an aggregated reimagining of many more important texts that came before it. The messages feel as if they're important and the story skirts on being important and, of course, Canin is undoubtedly talented, but it feels as if he's trying to write somebody else's book, at times, and not his own.