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Jekua #3
Makanuele Rumble
Summoners travel from all over the world to compete in the biggest Jekua tournament in the Volukho Isles: the Makanuele Rumble.
Alani's sacred pilgrimage brings her group to bustling Makanuele at this crucial time. Her next stop is at the heart of the city, deep within an ancient crater. The Church led her along this path, but as the journey grows more difficult, she questions whether it is a path she wants to walk at all.
Meanwhile, Balt and Niona have been training for weeks just to earn a spot on the tournament bracket, but the competition is fierce. Facing savage Jekuas and harrowing environments, every battle may bring them closer to the champion's title – or else bring their journey to a premature end.
Yet as the group struggles with their inner demons and the mounting pressures of the tournament, greater dangers are prowling in Makanuele's streets.
Alani's sacred pilgrimage brings her group to bustling Makanuele at this crucial time. Her next stop is at the heart of the city, deep within an ancient crater. The Church led her along this path, but as the journey grows more difficult, she questions whether it is a path she wants to walk at all.
Meanwhile, Balt and Niona have been training for weeks just to earn a spot on the tournament bracket, but the competition is fierce. Facing savage Jekuas and harrowing environments, every battle may bring them closer to the champion's title – or else bring their journey to a premature end.
Yet as the group struggles with their inner demons and the mounting pressures of the tournament, greater dangers are prowling in Makanuele's streets.
- GenresFantasy
712 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 14, 2023
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Travis M. Riddle
17 books397 followersTRAVIS M. RIDDLE lives with his girlfriend in Austin, TX, where he earned his bachelor’s degree in English Writing & Rhetoric at St. Edward’s University. His work has been published in award-winning literary journal the Sorin Oak Review. His novels "Flesh Eater," "On Lavender Tides," and "Spit & Song" were all semi-finalists in Mark Lawrence's SPFBO.
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March 13, 2023
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Longer does not always equal better.
After quite enjoying the first two entries in this series, unfortunately I was quite underwhelmed by Makanuele Rumble. There are a number of core changes made to this one, and while I'm sure that a large number (or even most) will like love these changes and see this book as the best one yet, they didn't work for me.
For starters, the book is quite a bit longer than the other two - coming in at almost twice as long as long as the others. I thought I would love this change as one of my biggest criticisms of the previous books is that they were too short. But the added length could really be summed up as a romantic relationship between two of the characters. I normally at not a fan of romance in my fantasy books unless it's done extremely well, and this one was mediocre at best and simply didn't work for me.
My other big problem with this one was that a large majority of the book was about a Jekua tournament - so it focused exclusively on Jekua battles. So we lost my favorite part of the book, which is the exploration and Jekua hunting, and switched it out for fights. But most of the fights being described were not even our main character, but instead focused on side characters who I have not created an emotional attachment to.
Not only this, but it really forced me to suspend belief (beyond what is normal for a fantasy book) in how well the main character and his cousin did in this tournament, given that they have a miniscule amount of experience compared to the other competitors. I thought this would have gone over much better later on in the series when they are far more advanced.
Ultimately, while I was underwhelmed, I still will be looking forward to reading the next in the series and hoping that there is a return to the aspects I enjoyed from the first two books.
Longer does not always equal better.
After quite enjoying the first two entries in this series, unfortunately I was quite underwhelmed by Makanuele Rumble. There are a number of core changes made to this one, and while I'm sure that a large number (or even most) will like love these changes and see this book as the best one yet, they didn't work for me.
For starters, the book is quite a bit longer than the other two - coming in at almost twice as long as long as the others. I thought I would love this change as one of my biggest criticisms of the previous books is that they were too short. But the added length could really be summed up as a romantic relationship between two of the characters. I normally at not a fan of romance in my fantasy books unless it's done extremely well, and this one was mediocre at best and simply didn't work for me.
My other big problem with this one was that a large majority of the book was about a Jekua tournament - so it focused exclusively on Jekua battles. So we lost my favorite part of the book, which is the exploration and Jekua hunting, and switched it out for fights. But most of the fights being described were not even our main character, but instead focused on side characters who I have not created an emotional attachment to.
Not only this, but it really forced me to suspend belief (beyond what is normal for a fantasy book) in how well the main character and his cousin did in this tournament, given that they have a miniscule amount of experience compared to the other competitors. I thought this would have gone over much better later on in the series when they are far more advanced.
Ultimately, while I was underwhelmed, I still will be looking forward to reading the next in the series and hoping that there is a return to the aspects I enjoyed from the first two books.
March 14, 2023
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Note: This review will likely contain minor spoilers for the first two books in the Jekua series.
Reading Makanuele Rumble was the most fun I've had with a book in months! It came at the absolute perfect moment for me to read. I'd been saving it to read in March closer to its publication, and I'm so glad I did because I went through a pretty rough February and this book really helped me through that time because it was just so much fun and such a genuinely enjoyable read that I was able to fully lose myself in.
Makanuele Rumble picks up right after the end of A Fracture in the Qwisdeep with Balt and Alani traveling around for Alani's pilgrimage. This time we are stopped in Makanuele where it is time for the Makanuele Rumble, a huge Jekua competition that Balt has been eager to compete in. Almost the entirety of this book centers around the competition itself and at 700+ pages, you might think that's overkill, but I absolutely promise you that it is not. Instead, it is an steady-paced, highly compulsive read that fully explores the world of Jekuas and immerses readers in a series of high-action Jekua battles and is filled with compelling characters that make it a lively read.
As with the first two books, I really loved seeing Balt and Alani's relationship grow even more in this book. They've gone through some pretty tough times together, and here we can see them be what they really are–close friends who love each other, care about each other, and can move forward from conflict with one another. It was also really nice to see them interact with more people and friends as well. Seeing Balt and Niona's relationship grow in different ways has also been really interesting, and I've enjoyed how Riddle has crafted their interactions so far. Similarly, we see Alani meet up with an older friend, Aeiko, and it was nice the see her interact with someone new and different, especially since it is someone who she has her own confusing personal feelings about. Aeiko was a really welcome addition to the bunch; they aren't overly outgoing, but they bring a nice sense of normalcy to the bunch and have a very laidback demeanor that I think fit in well with the rest of the characters. We also meet a side character named Holly, also Aeiko's roommate and ex, and all I have to say about Holly is that she definitely helped facilitate some bonding among the rest of the group.
The tournament was so much fun! I think this tournament really brought the entire world to life in such a strong way because everything really comes together with regard to the world and Jekuas. We've heard about all the competitions, summoners, Jekuas of higher levels and caliber, different areas people are from, etc. in previous books, and this book is where we really get to see it all. We get to see Jekua summoners from all over and we finally get to see what a real tournament looks like firsthand through our own characters we're following. This feels like a perfect mid-series book where you just get to hang out in this world that has been created. We aren't traveling much at all in this book so there isn't too much additional world-building in that regard, but I felt like this was a great break that let's us enjoy a setting while knowing there will be more world exploration later on.
Initially, I thought that maybe getting the play-by-play detail of so many battles over and over might get a little repetitive, but I was very, very wrong. I was riveted by literally every single battle. I'm not entirely sure how Riddle does it, but he somehow makes each battle and Jekua incredibly unique to the point that I just couldn't help but feel excited, intrigued, and unbelievably curious to find out which Jekuas would appear for each battle, what they would be able to do, if any would be modified, how the summoners would handle them, and much more. This was a great setup for this book, and I liked that we really got to dive in and experience it all through each step from eliminations rounds through to the end.
I also think this book was a nice sort of breather after how intense the last book felt. Balt and Alani had quite a bit of conflict in A Fracture in the Qwisdeep and I think this book worked really well for the overall pacing of the series. I could see where this might seem like a slightly slower one-off book in the series, but I think when considering the overall arc it works really well as a realistic cooling off period. Characters seem to be somewhat recovering from the past events, rediscovering their interests, and Alani is able to slow down a little and face the newfound challenges relating to the church and how she feels about her connection to the church and future with it. Honestly, this might sound a bit much, but I almost feel like this is one of the best plotted/paced/character-developed series I've read in a while. It feels very apparent that Riddle has planned things out for this series extremely well, and I look forward to seeing what else is in store.
There is also major plot progression that occurs in this book, so don't let me make it seem like nothing happens because some big things happen–arguably some of the biggest things that are setting up for later books– but it feels mellower overall with the lack of traveling. All the subtle foreshadowing that we've been getting in the previous two books have finally really started to come to fruition and I'm thrilled about it. I love feeling like I'm finally vindicated that there is definitely something sinister and weird going on in the background of our seemingly happy-go-lucky pilgrimage (well... except for the attacks on the shrines, of course). I know it's somewhat obvious with everything going on with the attacks on the shrines, but the eeriness has felt deeper than that and has been growing. Some very big events happen in this book that really takes things to a new level, both character-wise and greater plot-wise, and it's made me that much more excited for future books.
I believe Riddle has said that this is a planned six-book series, and I'm really hoping that six books is enough to sate my appetite for this series because I really feel so close to it at this point and have been having way too much fun with. It's continuously captured me and always seems to help me take my mind off of other things happening in my life in all the best ways. It's hard to convey how I feel because sometimes because I say (a lot) how fun this series, but it really is more than just fun. This is a really close character examination of these two characters at an important crux in their lives as they go from teens to young adults and continue going on with their lives. Alani is moving into a really big potential future career with the church, and Balt is really getting a start with his summoning and leaning into this new particular path of being a more professional summoner. I cannot wait to see what's next for these two!
Overall, it's an easy five stars from me! It's out today in paperback, ebook, and it is also available as an audiobook if that's more up your alley.
*I received a copy of Makanuele Rumble courtesy of the author in exchange for an honest review.*
Note: This review will likely contain minor spoilers for the first two books in the Jekua series.
Reading Makanuele Rumble was the most fun I've had with a book in months! It came at the absolute perfect moment for me to read. I'd been saving it to read in March closer to its publication, and I'm so glad I did because I went through a pretty rough February and this book really helped me through that time because it was just so much fun and such a genuinely enjoyable read that I was able to fully lose myself in.
Makanuele Rumble picks up right after the end of A Fracture in the Qwisdeep with Balt and Alani traveling around for Alani's pilgrimage. This time we are stopped in Makanuele where it is time for the Makanuele Rumble, a huge Jekua competition that Balt has been eager to compete in. Almost the entirety of this book centers around the competition itself and at 700+ pages, you might think that's overkill, but I absolutely promise you that it is not. Instead, it is an steady-paced, highly compulsive read that fully explores the world of Jekuas and immerses readers in a series of high-action Jekua battles and is filled with compelling characters that make it a lively read.
As with the first two books, I really loved seeing Balt and Alani's relationship grow even more in this book. They've gone through some pretty tough times together, and here we can see them be what they really are–close friends who love each other, care about each other, and can move forward from conflict with one another. It was also really nice to see them interact with more people and friends as well. Seeing Balt and Niona's relationship grow in different ways has also been really interesting, and I've enjoyed how Riddle has crafted their interactions so far. Similarly, we see Alani meet up with an older friend, Aeiko, and it was nice the see her interact with someone new and different, especially since it is someone who she has her own confusing personal feelings about. Aeiko was a really welcome addition to the bunch; they aren't overly outgoing, but they bring a nice sense of normalcy to the bunch and have a very laidback demeanor that I think fit in well with the rest of the characters. We also meet a side character named Holly, also Aeiko's roommate and ex, and all I have to say about Holly is that she definitely helped facilitate some bonding among the rest of the group.
The tournament was so much fun! I think this tournament really brought the entire world to life in such a strong way because everything really comes together with regard to the world and Jekuas. We've heard about all the competitions, summoners, Jekuas of higher levels and caliber, different areas people are from, etc. in previous books, and this book is where we really get to see it all. We get to see Jekua summoners from all over and we finally get to see what a real tournament looks like firsthand through our own characters we're following. This feels like a perfect mid-series book where you just get to hang out in this world that has been created. We aren't traveling much at all in this book so there isn't too much additional world-building in that regard, but I felt like this was a great break that let's us enjoy a setting while knowing there will be more world exploration later on.
Initially, I thought that maybe getting the play-by-play detail of so many battles over and over might get a little repetitive, but I was very, very wrong. I was riveted by literally every single battle. I'm not entirely sure how Riddle does it, but he somehow makes each battle and Jekua incredibly unique to the point that I just couldn't help but feel excited, intrigued, and unbelievably curious to find out which Jekuas would appear for each battle, what they would be able to do, if any would be modified, how the summoners would handle them, and much more. This was a great setup for this book, and I liked that we really got to dive in and experience it all through each step from eliminations rounds through to the end.
I also think this book was a nice sort of breather after how intense the last book felt. Balt and Alani had quite a bit of conflict in A Fracture in the Qwisdeep and I think this book worked really well for the overall pacing of the series. I could see where this might seem like a slightly slower one-off book in the series, but I think when considering the overall arc it works really well as a realistic cooling off period. Characters seem to be somewhat recovering from the past events, rediscovering their interests, and Alani is able to slow down a little and face the newfound challenges relating to the church and how she feels about her connection to the church and future with it. Honestly, this might sound a bit much, but I almost feel like this is one of the best plotted/paced/character-developed series I've read in a while. It feels very apparent that Riddle has planned things out for this series extremely well, and I look forward to seeing what else is in store.
There is also major plot progression that occurs in this book, so don't let me make it seem like nothing happens because some big things happen–arguably some of the biggest things that are setting up for later books– but it feels mellower overall with the lack of traveling. All the subtle foreshadowing that we've been getting in the previous two books have finally really started to come to fruition and I'm thrilled about it. I love feeling like I'm finally vindicated that there is definitely something sinister and weird going on in the background of our seemingly happy-go-lucky pilgrimage (well... except for the attacks on the shrines, of course). I know it's somewhat obvious with everything going on with the attacks on the shrines, but the eeriness has felt deeper than that and has been growing. Some very big events happen in this book that really takes things to a new level, both character-wise and greater plot-wise, and it's made me that much more excited for future books.
I believe Riddle has said that this is a planned six-book series, and I'm really hoping that six books is enough to sate my appetite for this series because I really feel so close to it at this point and have been having way too much fun with. It's continuously captured me and always seems to help me take my mind off of other things happening in my life in all the best ways. It's hard to convey how I feel because sometimes because I say (a lot) how fun this series, but it really is more than just fun. This is a really close character examination of these two characters at an important crux in their lives as they go from teens to young adults and continue going on with their lives. Alani is moving into a really big potential future career with the church, and Balt is really getting a start with his summoning and leaning into this new particular path of being a more professional summoner. I cannot wait to see what's next for these two!
Overall, it's an easy five stars from me! It's out today in paperback, ebook, and it is also available as an audiobook if that's more up your alley.
*I received a copy of Makanuele Rumble courtesy of the author in exchange for an honest review.*
March 6, 2023
Just want to start off by saying thank you to the author, Travis M. Riddle for providing me an ARC of this book. This will be my first time reviewing an ARC so I’m going to try and be as thorough as I can.
First off, it’s worth pointing out this series won’t be for everybody. If you’re not a big fan of Pokémon then this series might not be for you. However this is book 3, so I can only assume anyone wanting to read this book enjoyed the first two entries into this series.
The first noticeable difference between this book and the first two is the page count. The first two sat around the 400 page mark. Makanuele Rumble has quite a big jump at sitting around 700 pages. Not only is this book the biggest (by quite some distance) but from seeing posts by the author, it’s the biggest book they’ve ever written. I won’t lie, when I first saw this I was a bit worried that maybe the author had been a bit too ambitious. Do I still feel that upon finishing the book? Honestly?
No.
I really enjoyed the extra length this book was given. It felt a lot like the first two books were episodes in a tv show and this book was the first movie. I don’t think every entry into this story needs to be 700+ pages, but for a big tournament like in this one, it certainly made sense.
I continue to be impressed with the author’s ability to write characters that genuinely feel real. I’ve been able to relate to Balt and Alani on a personal level many times. This, plus the author adding a section on ‘team building’ before the tournament genuinely made me turn to my partner and say “this series feels like it was written for me”. It just hit all the right spots. I can’t overstate just how nice it is to read a book that makes me feel that way.
If there was anything I had to be critical about, maybe a bit too much time spent talking about food? But honestly, that’s me just trying to nit pic.
As usual, I loved the illustrations at the back of the book of some of the Jekua’s we met. Would LOVE more of these to be added.
Well shit, this has gone on for quite some time….
So yeah, if you enjoyed the first two, I think you’ll love this one too. My favourite so far in the series and can’t wait for the next one.
First off, it’s worth pointing out this series won’t be for everybody. If you’re not a big fan of Pokémon then this series might not be for you. However this is book 3, so I can only assume anyone wanting to read this book enjoyed the first two entries into this series.
The first noticeable difference between this book and the first two is the page count. The first two sat around the 400 page mark. Makanuele Rumble has quite a big jump at sitting around 700 pages. Not only is this book the biggest (by quite some distance) but from seeing posts by the author, it’s the biggest book they’ve ever written. I won’t lie, when I first saw this I was a bit worried that maybe the author had been a bit too ambitious. Do I still feel that upon finishing the book? Honestly?
No.
I really enjoyed the extra length this book was given. It felt a lot like the first two books were episodes in a tv show and this book was the first movie. I don’t think every entry into this story needs to be 700+ pages, but for a big tournament like in this one, it certainly made sense.
I continue to be impressed with the author’s ability to write characters that genuinely feel real. I’ve been able to relate to Balt and Alani on a personal level many times. This, plus the author adding a section on ‘team building’ before the tournament genuinely made me turn to my partner and say “this series feels like it was written for me”. It just hit all the right spots. I can’t overstate just how nice it is to read a book that makes me feel that way.
If there was anything I had to be critical about, maybe a bit too much time spent talking about food? But honestly, that’s me just trying to nit pic.
As usual, I loved the illustrations at the back of the book of some of the Jekua’s we met. Would LOVE more of these to be added.
Well shit, this has gone on for quite some time….
So yeah, if you enjoyed the first two, I think you’ll love this one too. My favourite so far in the series and can’t wait for the next one.
March 20, 2023
Much like the Jekua on its cover, this book is BIG and CHUNKY and MESMERIZING. Everything Travis writes goes down so smooth, but I was definitely not expecting to finish such a long book so quickly!!! It's not like it's just fluffy brain candy either--there's a lot of excellent character development, nuanced relationships, and interesting themes going on with the overarching mystery in this series. Plus a lot of really creative and complex action sequences.
I think it just speaks to how well-crafted both the story and the writing itself are that I can down this bad boy as quickly as Balt chugs Thunderjolt (blue flavor). Excellent~~
I think it just speaks to how well-crafted both the story and the writing itself are that I can down this bad boy as quickly as Balt chugs Thunderjolt (blue flavor). Excellent~~
March 21, 2023
I have been a fan of Travis’s work since he began pumping out books. I have his entire bibliography on my shelf, and let me say that this fat spine stands out amongst the collection. This is a hearty boy. But as always, Travis’s prose and progression make each reading session better than the last.
If you have been following the series (if you haven’t what are you doing?!?), get ready to change up the vibe a bit. Rather than the traditional adventure journey the crew has been on, we get a closer look at the competitive Jekua scene. I was initially hesitant about such a big book being so contained, but I soon realized that this was just a new way to experience Travis’s master world-building skills.
All of the established party is in tow, Balt is still chugging Thunderjolts and chasing his dream of becoming a Jekua champion, and Alani’s arc gets even more personal as she battles her relationship with the church and unearths information that rocks the story. But, like the book, the party gets bigger too! We get into the weeds and learn about some profile Jekua summoners and the return of some familiar faces.
This book manages to be high stakes but cozy the entire way through, and you will be patting yourself on the back for reading such a big book so easily. Another win for Riddle, and bring on book four, baby!
If you have been following the series (if you haven’t what are you doing?!?), get ready to change up the vibe a bit. Rather than the traditional adventure journey the crew has been on, we get a closer look at the competitive Jekua scene. I was initially hesitant about such a big book being so contained, but I soon realized that this was just a new way to experience Travis’s master world-building skills.
All of the established party is in tow, Balt is still chugging Thunderjolts and chasing his dream of becoming a Jekua champion, and Alani’s arc gets even more personal as she battles her relationship with the church and unearths information that rocks the story. But, like the book, the party gets bigger too! We get into the weeds and learn about some profile Jekua summoners and the return of some familiar faces.
This book manages to be high stakes but cozy the entire way through, and you will be patting yourself on the back for reading such a big book so easily. Another win for Riddle, and bring on book four, baby!
March 14, 2023
If the idea of a tournament between tamed monsters, each with a complete set of unique abilities, sounds awesome to you, then this is your book and your series.
The jekuas, their abilities, the battle environments, and the strategies -- it's all there, it's all in full detail, and it's AWESOME. Best of all, there's no default "win" button for the MCs -- they can lose just like anyone else.
Oh, and what about monster transmigration? Combining two monsters into one new one, such that it inherits the abilities and gains new ones? That's also in here, and it's a fully realized system.
Outside of the combat and progression, the characters are just as endearing as ever. I don't think I've ever come across such convincing character writing. These are real people, and their friendships with each other are earned. In fact, every bit of progress in their relationships feels like it has weight, which make the setbacks hit just as hard.
This is THE cozy monster hunting progression fantasy series. If that sounds like your cup of tea, then drink up!
The jekuas, their abilities, the battle environments, and the strategies -- it's all there, it's all in full detail, and it's AWESOME. Best of all, there's no default "win" button for the MCs -- they can lose just like anyone else.
Oh, and what about monster transmigration? Combining two monsters into one new one, such that it inherits the abilities and gains new ones? That's also in here, and it's a fully realized system.
Outside of the combat and progression, the characters are just as endearing as ever. I don't think I've ever come across such convincing character writing. These are real people, and their friendships with each other are earned. In fact, every bit of progress in their relationships feels like it has weight, which make the setbacks hit just as hard.
This is THE cozy monster hunting progression fantasy series. If that sounds like your cup of tea, then drink up!
April 4, 2023
Thank you to Travis M. Riddle for the ARC!
I’ve been so busy with work for the past month that it took me ages to read anything. However this book/world was the perfect book for me to read in a time like this because it is such good escapism. As I’ve said in other reviews of this series, I can’t stress enough how much you should read this book if you ever liked playing or watching Pokemon!
My favourite part of this book, as with the others, is the slice of life and nostalgia filled story. I’m also enjoying watching the characters (Balt) become less immature. This book was slightly different than the others in that it focused on a Jekua fighting tournament rather than world exploration and adventure. I definitely missed the amount of adventure that came with the other books but I enjoyed reading about the tournament more than I thought I would - and I think this is down to the authors way of description which really works for me.
I love Alani’s arc and the underlying mystery has also got me completely hooked. I can’t wait to find out more in the next books!
My criticisms would only be the lack of exploration like in the other books, and also the amount of meaty food (I don’t eat meat so this is just a me problem).
I’ve been so busy with work for the past month that it took me ages to read anything. However this book/world was the perfect book for me to read in a time like this because it is such good escapism. As I’ve said in other reviews of this series, I can’t stress enough how much you should read this book if you ever liked playing or watching Pokemon!
My favourite part of this book, as with the others, is the slice of life and nostalgia filled story. I’m also enjoying watching the characters (Balt) become less immature. This book was slightly different than the others in that it focused on a Jekua fighting tournament rather than world exploration and adventure. I definitely missed the amount of adventure that came with the other books but I enjoyed reading about the tournament more than I thought I would - and I think this is down to the authors way of description which really works for me.
I love Alani’s arc and the underlying mystery has also got me completely hooked. I can’t wait to find out more in the next books!
My criticisms would only be the lack of exploration like in the other books, and also the amount of meaty food (I don’t eat meat so this is just a me problem).
March 27, 2023
The third installment of the Jekua series definitely kept my attention. It was action packed while still going strong on the character development. My favorite part being that it brought in a jekua we had only heard mention of until now which holds an interesting tie to a key feature of the islands. I'm nervous but eager to follow the crew and their jekua to Yuluhu!
April 5, 2023
4.5 stars.
This book was relaxing, intense, fun and heartwarming all wrapped up in a 620 page (Kindle edition) behemoth. This series keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for book 4!
This book was relaxing, intense, fun and heartwarming all wrapped up in a 620 page (Kindle edition) behemoth. This series keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for book 4!
August 7, 2024
Series seems to be getting darker and graphic and I'm all for it. A more realistic version of Palworld if you can believe it.
January 18, 2024
I am really loving this series, it's so entertaining and enjoyable to read.
I like the characters, and how they're growing throughout the series.
Despite it clearly being inspired by Pokémon, it really feels like the world is its own fully developed thing.
When I saw how long this book was I did wonder if it would feel like it was too long, but the pacing worked for me and it definitely didn't feel like it dragged at all
I like the characters, and how they're growing throughout the series.
Despite it clearly being inspired by Pokémon, it really feels like the world is its own fully developed thing.
When I saw how long this book was I did wonder if it would feel like it was too long, but the pacing worked for me and it definitely didn't feel like it dragged at all
April 23, 2023
This book was a birthday gift from my brother, who knew I had been looking forward to this book for months – it definitely did not disappoint. Being double the size of precious books (~700), I really enjoyed every single detail and tried to take my time with reading this one. I could clearly picture all the tournament battles in my head; though there were many monster fights, each one felt distinct and never got tiring. I also thought adding an additional character POV was a good touch too. This series has continued to solidify itself as one of my favorites!!
October 13, 2023
Incredibly fun read, the whole book was very well done, but the last eight chapters were so good ???
April 2, 2024
A markedly different book than the prior two entries, but still super enjoyable. Review to come.
February 15, 2025
Thanks, Mr. Riddle, for the like on my previous review. I bragged to my friends about it—just like when Mr. Lawrence wished me a happy birthday, lol. See? How easy is it to make a reader’s day great? And hey, you probably got yourself 1-2 extra readers—not much, but honest work right here.
And setting off comments aside—I honestly think every aspect of writing has improved in this story, and this is my favorite so far.
The magic system is still phenomenal and feels deeply thought out. Being able to touch the other side of the spectrum for different types (like gravity pushing/pulling, thermal heat/cold) is a clever subversion that shakes off common expectations—something I actively seek in my reads nowadays. Surprise me! And well, that’s yet another reason why people should read more of the SFBO selection.
Anyways, I got carried away again.
So, we’ve got an immense amount of abilities and combos in combat. I’m not entirely sure whether I like that, in the end, every fight ultimately boils down to how much mana you have left—obviously, there are other factors, but I feel like there should be brackets or some kind of counterweight since most of the battles weren’t just about the sustained injuries but the available pool itself. That said, it worked well as a tension mechanic—I was fully rooting for our MCs. So, one more checkmark: emotions moved.
Speaking of emotions, the second layer—the coming-of-age story—worked excellently. I still have a weak heart for this trope. Our POV characters were super awkward and relatable, just like most of us were at 18. And, let’s be real, still are—who am I even lying to? Getting drunk and rejected, having unrealistic expectations about our parents and peers, holding grudges over imagined slights because, clearly, open communication is the tool of the devil. Well played.
Closely related is the pacing. There was a solid balance of action and suspense. I never got bored during the intermezzos—because we got our fair share of sweat, blood, and tears in between. I loved that Balt made significant progress, but he’s not overpowered—neither is Niona. They suffered, pushed through, and finished as best they could. Hats off again for keeping their strength just right—not excessive, but earned. Alani could have used a little more action here and there, but I’m not going to throw rocks—this book wasn’t hers.
Now, what did make me want to climb the walls? The food descriptions. I mean, I get it—we all need to sustain our meat prisons—but huh, c’mon, obnoxiously long passages about favorite fruit-ice? Not exactly my idea of a good time.
Okay, this is getting long, and I need to keep reading. Rambling about fish tacos is probably not the most efficient way to spend my remaining grains of sand.
I’m definitely hooked on the next islands and will keep reading.
I rate this book the best techno-magic animal cruelty showdown in recorded history.
Thanks for writing it.
And setting off comments aside—I honestly think every aspect of writing has improved in this story, and this is my favorite so far.
The magic system is still phenomenal and feels deeply thought out. Being able to touch the other side of the spectrum for different types (like gravity pushing/pulling, thermal heat/cold) is a clever subversion that shakes off common expectations—something I actively seek in my reads nowadays. Surprise me! And well, that’s yet another reason why people should read more of the SFBO selection.
Anyways, I got carried away again.
So, we’ve got an immense amount of abilities and combos in combat. I’m not entirely sure whether I like that, in the end, every fight ultimately boils down to how much mana you have left—obviously, there are other factors, but I feel like there should be brackets or some kind of counterweight since most of the battles weren’t just about the sustained injuries but the available pool itself. That said, it worked well as a tension mechanic—I was fully rooting for our MCs. So, one more checkmark: emotions moved.
Speaking of emotions, the second layer—the coming-of-age story—worked excellently. I still have a weak heart for this trope. Our POV characters were super awkward and relatable, just like most of us were at 18. And, let’s be real, still are—who am I even lying to? Getting drunk and rejected, having unrealistic expectations about our parents and peers, holding grudges over imagined slights because, clearly, open communication is the tool of the devil. Well played.
Closely related is the pacing. There was a solid balance of action and suspense. I never got bored during the intermezzos—because we got our fair share of sweat, blood, and tears in between. I loved that Balt made significant progress, but he’s not overpowered—neither is Niona. They suffered, pushed through, and finished as best they could. Hats off again for keeping their strength just right—not excessive, but earned. Alani could have used a little more action here and there, but I’m not going to throw rocks—this book wasn’t hers.
Now, what did make me want to climb the walls? The food descriptions. I mean, I get it—we all need to sustain our meat prisons—but huh, c’mon, obnoxiously long passages about favorite fruit-ice? Not exactly my idea of a good time.
Okay, this is getting long, and I need to keep reading. Rambling about fish tacos is probably not the most efficient way to spend my remaining grains of sand.
I’m definitely hooked on the next islands and will keep reading.
I rate this book the best techno-magic animal cruelty showdown in recorded history.
Thanks for writing it.
March 7, 2023
Get ready for an explosive return to the world of Jekua for a book that entirely delivers on its premise. We've been building up to our first big Jekua tournament for two books and here it is: a tournament so epic it spans a whole very chunky book. And it does so spectacularly.
As with all Riddle's books, Makaneuele Rumble is highly readable and simply charming, with a pleasant, amiable atmosphere that is just enjoyable to spend time with. It's like experiencing an urban festival in book form, which is a feeling I'm not sure I've ever come across spread across a book before, but which I'll surely try and copy at some point.
And while it's rewarding to soak up the world and the characters' relationships, this one is also packed full of action, as a colourful array of Jekuas take to the stage to do battle. The pacing and originality on show here is exceptional: in the early stages, after a couple of gripping fights, I was wondering how it could sustain this in an interesting way for a long tournament, but I can tell you, every battle is so cleverly unique, there's so much originality and fun to be found here.
Underlying all the thrilling action and wondrous worldbuilding, though, it's the characters and their foibles that really make this. At times following their adventures is just like hanging out with friends, in a really positive way, and at others you'll be dying to know how they're going to resolve the various messes they get into, or sometimes create themselves. Considering how Fracture in the Qwisdeep ended, in a very difficult place emotionally, this book does a great job of maturely exploring the aftermath of such feelings, alongside interesting new problems. It's also good to see Niona take up more of a role in this book, giving a rather different perspective to the others, exposing what's going on under her seemingly carefree surface.
A wonderful book all around; if you were a fan of the first two, you definitely won't be disappointed, but if they still had you on the fence, this one will surely push you over.
As with all Riddle's books, Makaneuele Rumble is highly readable and simply charming, with a pleasant, amiable atmosphere that is just enjoyable to spend time with. It's like experiencing an urban festival in book form, which is a feeling I'm not sure I've ever come across spread across a book before, but which I'll surely try and copy at some point.
And while it's rewarding to soak up the world and the characters' relationships, this one is also packed full of action, as a colourful array of Jekuas take to the stage to do battle. The pacing and originality on show here is exceptional: in the early stages, after a couple of gripping fights, I was wondering how it could sustain this in an interesting way for a long tournament, but I can tell you, every battle is so cleverly unique, there's so much originality and fun to be found here.
Underlying all the thrilling action and wondrous worldbuilding, though, it's the characters and their foibles that really make this. At times following their adventures is just like hanging out with friends, in a really positive way, and at others you'll be dying to know how they're going to resolve the various messes they get into, or sometimes create themselves. Considering how Fracture in the Qwisdeep ended, in a very difficult place emotionally, this book does a great job of maturely exploring the aftermath of such feelings, alongside interesting new problems. It's also good to see Niona take up more of a role in this book, giving a rather different perspective to the others, exposing what's going on under her seemingly carefree surface.
A wonderful book all around; if you were a fan of the first two, you definitely won't be disappointed, but if they still had you on the fence, this one will surely push you over.
July 25, 2024
The book was super fun and had a lot of great emotional moments that really fleshed out the characters more and I really liked the addition of Niona to the main cast of POVs. This book so had the most Jekuas by far until now in the series and while it was super fun seeing all the different monsters and their unique way of fighting.
Despite all those superlatives I can't give the book 5 stars. This very well may be my preferences but I believe there were a bit to much battles and new Jekuas. While I absolutely loved the even stages (including stage 0) the odd rounds weren't as thrilling and enticing but still the fights were just as long and I made the book drag a bit through these parts.
Also I have to say I preffer the Alani side of the narrative over Balt's side and so that also made me love the book a bit less.
To sum it up the book was really great and even the handling of the stuff I liked less was good but the fact there were parts of the book I had to force myself to continue doesn't allow me to give it 5 stars.
Despite all those superlatives I can't give the book 5 stars. This very well may be my preferences but I believe there were a bit to much battles and new Jekuas. While I absolutely loved the even stages (including stage 0) the odd rounds weren't as thrilling and enticing but still the fights were just as long and I made the book drag a bit through these parts.
Also I have to say I preffer the Alani side of the narrative over Balt's side and so that also made me love the book a bit less.
To sum it up the book was really great and even the handling of the stuff I liked less was good but the fact there were parts of the book I had to force myself to continue doesn't allow me to give it 5 stars.
March 5, 2024
I was so looking forward to this book but it let me down. I loved exploring the imaginative Jekua world of the first two books. But this book fell way short of the mark. The characters are flat and unengaging. They just don't compel you to care much about them. This book steps away from exploration and world building toward mondaine interaction. Additionally the writing suffers from trying to be too inclusive. There is a charter that goes by They/them, which actually makes it hard to follow what's going on. I listened to the audiobook and was constantly confused as to who the author was talking about. In English they and them are plural not singular. I really wanted to care about the characters, it just seemed that the way they were written was getting in the way. I almost DNF this. I hope the next book goes back to catching Jekuas. The author is so creative and I'd love to see more of his magical world.
March 16, 2023
I'd say the third-book was the best book in the series so far. The Jekua tournament fights took centre stage, but slice-of-life stuff continued to be a significant presence (reminded me of "Super Powereds"). Having POV chapters from Niona was a welcome surprise. And some more side characters were introduced in this book. Balt's cousin made a return and I must admit that I didn't expect the twists.
The overarching plot also moved significantly and I think things are shaping for plenty of twists on that front. I wonder if Alani's arc is leading towards summoning the powers being worshipped!
John Bierce's infamous sandwiches made an appearance and his Jekua team was gross too :D I'm sure there were more such author cameos.
The overarching plot also moved significantly and I think things are shaping for plenty of twists on that front. I wonder if Alani's arc is leading towards summoning the powers being worshipped!
John Bierce's infamous sandwiches made an appearance and his Jekua team was gross too :D I'm sure there were more such author cameos.
January 19, 2026
The third instalment in the Jekua series brings a noticeably different flavour. While the first two books leaned heavily into exploration and adventure, Makanwuele Rumble centres on a Jekua tournament, a welcome change of pace that freshens up the series.
This was a fun read overall, packed with battles, strategy, and plenty of twists and turns to keep things engaging. The tournament structure works well and gives the story a clear sense of momentum.
There were some contemporary social themes woven into the narrative that I didn’t quite expect. While noticeable, they never became overwhelming or derailed the story.
All in all, this is another solid entry in the series, continuing to scratch that “adult Pokémon” itch while offering something a little different from what came before.
This was a fun read overall, packed with battles, strategy, and plenty of twists and turns to keep things engaging. The tournament structure works well and gives the story a clear sense of momentum.
There were some contemporary social themes woven into the narrative that I didn’t quite expect. While noticeable, they never became overwhelming or derailed the story.
All in all, this is another solid entry in the series, continuing to scratch that “adult Pokémon” itch while offering something a little different from what came before.
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October 14, 2025DNF not enjoying where this is going it's been a bit too slow with the plot and the characters aren't interesting enough.
April 29, 2023
Big Jump IMO
Hm… not sure where to start. But the MCs getting some stuff between them resolved really helped to open up the characters and take them from interesting people to being fun.
There’s a lot of relationship building (romantic and otherwise) which I’m a sucker for, and honestly think was needed. The fights were interesting and engaging.
Overall it was for sure my favorite book of the series so far. Also, the audio book is exception.
Hm… not sure where to start. But the MCs getting some stuff between them resolved really helped to open up the characters and take them from interesting people to being fun.
There’s a lot of relationship building (romantic and otherwise) which I’m a sucker for, and honestly think was needed. The fights were interesting and engaging.
Overall it was for sure my favorite book of the series so far. Also, the audio book is exception.
September 24, 2023
Really?
Forced love interest that one MC is head over heels for but somehow never mentioned in previous books.
Felt extremely forced.
Forced love interest that one MC is head over heels for but somehow never mentioned in previous books.
Felt extremely forced.
December 26, 2024
Does it count as spice 🥵 if the author is horny for food?
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