Honestly, I don’t quite know how to begin this review, or what to rate it. First off, this was my first book by this author. It was suggested for a buddy read, and I love lots of action and adventure in my historical romances, and this had lots of promise. There were parts of this novel I adored! And then there were parts that held no interest to me whatsoever. Granted, I did not find it boring in the least. In my opinion, it seemed like two different books in a mash-up. Both good in their own rights, but maybe not quite working together, for me anyways.
Simon Dante is a ruthless privateer who has been betrayed and is left for dead after successfully raiding Spanish holdings. He and his crew are barely hanging on, when Captain Jonas Spence and his ship, Egret, come aboard to offer assistance. Dante forcefully takes control of Spence’s ship, but later explains his reasoning, desperate times for desperate measures, you understand, right? Shortly after everyone on board the Egret gets along, except for Simon and Spence’s headstrong and helmsman daughter, Isabeau, or Beau. In the process, they successfully raid a floating Spanish treasure trove, with royalty on board. They run into an English flotilla headed by none other than Sir Francis Drake, and the traitor Simon wants dead (by all rights). Simon, Beau, the Egret, and Drake’s bunch all decide to attack Spanish ports to hamper a war between the two countries, one that England is determined to avoid and the Spanish is gearing up for.
Let me start by saying this: I will try several more books by this author before giving up. I may never give up on this author, even if the plots or characters don’t work for me. Ms. Canham is a master of words. One thing I cannot stand is a boring book. What I mean by that is I don’t want just words on the page. If you’re a writer, you write books. If you’re a story-teller, I will not only see the story in my mind’s eye, I will find it the most beautiful, the most fascinating and the most detailed story and love every minute of it. I may not have loved everything about this book, but I can tell you this, the story-telling is excellent. It’s not overdone, it’s simple but effective, and leaves me wanting more. The pictures she paints with words is almost beyond comparison, in fact, I think it may be difficult to compare with anyone right now. One of my favorite passages was at the end:
“Beau watched the Scout make her stumbling turn and start a bow-on run towards the Talon. She was expecting Dante to veer off at the last moment, duplicating the feat he has executed against the San Pedro, but something went mortally wrong. Even from three hundred yards away she could hear the screaming of timbers and the smashing of planks as the two ships collided. The hull of the Talon was rammed inward. The privateer staggered and reeled over, pushing a wave of water off her starboard beam. When she righted herself, the Scout was wedged fast amidships and Dante’s men were scrambling over the side, cutlasses, pikes, and muskets in hand. Two of the four kegs of Greek fire found their marks, exploding on the Talon’s afterdeck in great sheets of liquid flame. The combustible ran along the rails and dripped down the sides of the hull. It fanned across the decks, rippling blue and gold and red in the darkness, running along planks and spilling hot blue fingers between the broken boards.”
Of course, I think the last battle scene is the best part of the book, it’s where all the action is! The scenes come alive, and I felt like I was right there, or at least maybe I was watching a movie. A really good, special effects-type movie!
The battle scenes were great, but this is supposed to be a romance book as well. While there is a hero/heroine in the book, two sets actually, I didn’t feel it was the focus. I didn’t love the main characters, ever. I began to like them about half way through, but nothing ever clicked between me and them. I tried for days to figure out why this book wasn’t grabbing me between the action scenes. Today, I finally figured it out: dialogue. It’s missing a lot of dialogue for my taste. I can understand animal attraction, and wanting to jump the sexy wolf pirate’s bones from the get-go, but there had better be substance to the relationship, or I get bored. There were not a lot of scenes where Simon and Beau were not going after each other in one way or another, either arguing or sexually, or both. There were no real revelations, although things were revealed, sort of cold heartedly or with no oomph behind it. No true anguish or emotions, or not very many from Beau, and hardly any from Simon. I want a little angst in my romances. It just felt a little flat to me, and I was sorely disappointed. My thinking is I just didn’t really like Simon or Beau together, apart, they were fairly interesting characters, Beau more so, but together something was amiss. Now, I have confidence in Ms. Canham for future books, because even though they didn’t have many pages, the scenes between Geoffrey Pitt and Dona Maria/Christiana were great. I wanted to read more about them!! I think this book would have been better suited to them being the main characters, and wish Ms. Canham could have made a whole book for them. The things between them that made them interesting, such as Christiana pretending to be Dona Maria, and not telling Geoffrey, Geoffrey feeling less than deserving because he was not noble blood and she supposedly was, differing religions, hell, warring countries, would have made a more interesting relationship to dig into. As it stands, the only thing going for Simon and Beau is that he’s arrogant and she’s stubborn, and after awhile, this gets annoying to me. I don’t really understand why Beau is so stubborn, because she’s been sailing with her father’s vessel for I think it said, 8 years, and no one challenges her on his ship anymore, not until Simon comes aboard. I can see being stubborn to him, but it still got a little old for me.
When it came to the actually plot, I think it was well thought out, but lacked a little in the personal details of the main characters. I read this on ebook, and it was 317 pages. I think 25-50 more pages, going into further details about the characters, just as much as she did with the battle scenes and describing the ships, and I would have still read it all, and probably found it more enjoyable, and given it a better rating.
All this being said, I will read more of Marsha Canham, I see she has a Robin Hood series, and that has me thrilled to my toes! Loved the story telling, but I needed a bit more soul to the characters, and this would have been a 5 star book instead of a 3 1/2 stars I am giving it.