Angela Carter put it well, if bluntly: "The Return is not a good novel”. The premise is interesting – a man falls asleep in a graveyard, and becomes possessed by the spirit of an eighteenth century Frenchman. But having come up with the idea of demonic possession, de la Mare doesn’t really know what to do with it, so the rest of the novel is spent with the middle-class protagonist (although is there is any other kind of protagonist in de la Mare?) debating over whether he really is possessed or not. He becomes estranged from himself, isolated from his wife, and alienated from everyone but an eccentric brother and sister, with whom he has lengthy, rather abstract conversations. The plot never really gets going, and the narrative seems to drift, much like Lawford himself, from one place to another, without ever getting anywhere. It would have been much more effective as a short story, and doesn’t come close to the quality of Memoirs of a Midget, which is a more successful exploration of isolation. Yet reading The Return is still an interesting experience, as reading anything by de la Mare always seems like the closest one can be to dreaming while still awake. Even if his plots sometimes disappoint, de la Mare is always good at creating a surreal, dreamlike atmosphere.
The Return seems, on one level, to be about the limitations of language. The same conversations and arguments are repeated without ever coming to any resolution. Lawford fails to communicate not just with his wife, but with everyone he comes into contact with. Even his newfound friends don’t seem to make much sense to him, and the wonderfully named Herbert Herbert launches into long, convoluted speeches more for his own benefit than anything else, as they often seem to have little relevance to Lawford’s situation. However, they’re often interesting in their own right:
“ … ‘surely genius is a very rare thing!’
‘Rare! The world simply swarms with it. But before you can bottle it up in a book it’s got to be articulate. Just for a single instant imagine yourself Falstaff, and if there weren’t hundreds of Falstaffs in every generation, to be examples of his ungodly life, he’d be as dead as a doornail to-morrow – imagine yourself Falstaff, and being so, sitting down to write “Henry IV”, or “The Merry Wives”. It’s simply preposterous. You wouldn’t be such a fool as to waste the time. A mere Elizabethan scribbler comes along with a gift of expression and an observant eye, lifts the bloated old tippler clean out of life, and swims down the ages as the greatest genius the world has ever seen. Whereas, surely, though you mustn’t let me bore you with all this piffle, it’s Falstaff is the genius, and W. S. merely a talented reporter.
‘Lear, Macbeth, Mercutio – they live on their own, as it were. The newspapers are full of them, if were only the Shakespeares to see it. Have you ever been in a Police Court? Have you ever WATCHED tradesman behind their counters? My soul, the secrets walking in the streets! You stole them at every corner. There’s a Polonius in every first-class railway carriage, and as many Juliets as there are boarding-schools. What the devil are you, my dear chap, but genius itself, with all the world brand new upon your shoulders? And who’d have thought it of you ten days ago?”
For all its weaknesses, I still enjoyed The Return, and I’d recommend it to anyone who’s read Memoirs of a Midget and some of the short stories. De la Mare may not have been a good novelist, overall, but he had a fantastic imagination, a beautiful style, and an unusual way of looking at the world. Rather like the protagonist in his short story “At First Sight”, who is physically incapable raising of his head, and so spends his life staring at the ground, de la Mare’s perception could be said to be limited. There are some obvious things missing from his writing (ie: politics, sexuality, well-structured plots, significant characters that aren’t middle-class etc). But I think he’s all the more interesting for that, and works like The Return show how being effortlessly, uniquely strange can make a story rewarding in its own way. Having a distorted perception of the world needn’t be a bad thing, particularly for a writer with a predilection for the supernatural.