ISBN-13: 978-0-373-44381-9
©2010
21 chapters/208 pages
Initial Reaction (1/18/13)—Big surprise: the heroine, Violet Kramer, is really annoying. Girl has the nerve to call the hero smug and cocky—when she won’t listen to anyone’s advice about maybe letting the pros go after the Chicago Mafia. Here’s a hint, Vi: They know more about the mob than you; it’s their job, which they’ve been doing a LOT longer than you. Ever think that maybe your being uncooperative could get someone (an undercover officer maybe), killed (to say nothing of yourself)? I really hate the notion of a “Christian feminist,” a chick with a chip on her shoulder and a grudge against men to “prove herself.” Tip: Christianity and feminist-ism don’t mix. One is all about Light and Truth and being under submission to a Man (after all, He is called Adonai, right? Which, translated, means Lord, Master), Who sees neither male nor female but one’s heart. The other’s all about the breakdown of society and the destruction of true equality by the advancement of one sex through the tearing down (emasculating) of another, not to mention the absolute annihilation of God’s family unit. Besides, chips on shoulders and grudges equal pride and lack of forgiveness, Vi. If you call yourself a Christian, you have nothing to prove to anyone because God told you in His Word just how valuable and special and unique, etc., you are to Him and to the world in general. Your conceit could very easily get someone killed, and if you think God’s pleased by either your pride or the destruction it could bring about, think again. You’re not being a very good ambassadress for Christ’s Light to shine.
My Review (1/19/13)—Okay. It turned out much better than I’d anticipated—no, that’s not true. I was hoping that Violet would come to her sense before the end and that she’d stop being such a proud and contumacious nincompoop—and she did. Eventually. Of course, it takes almost being killed (at least twice, endangered countless times), getting someone ELSE killed, and ALMOST getting TWO others killed. But she did learn she needed to let go and let God (and the man God brought into her life). It’s not as if being controlling’s not human; of course, it is. As people, we WANT to be “in control,” hate having to rely on someone else, etc. But, in this case, people’s lives were at stake (including hers), and the people asking her to relent were pros—FBI, Chi PD, US Marshalls. Personally, in real life, I wonder if they’d let her run loose so long. I’d’ve locked her up for obstructing justice, impeding an investigation—SOMETHING…and don’t hand me the “freedom of the Press.” The Press’s “freedom” doesn’t trump law enforcement investigations (read: justice being served) or putting people (innocents) in harm’s way! The First Amendment of the Constitution says the CONGRESS (read: the government) shall make no LAWS infringing the press. Well, I don’t see as the police, FBI, or the Marshalls telling the Violet (the Press) to back off, as making a LAW via Congress. So, nice try, but the Press has used that trump card far too long—and incorrectly!
Anyhow, it turned out very well, the story. The love story I had one problem with (besides the age difference), and that’s: At the beginning, Clay West (I think—I’m writing this review, 8/15/16, and my notes from my reading saw only “CW,” so I hope this was the hero’s name—and I don’t remember what the age difference was between them, so I may not feel the same if I were to read the book again) was not a Christian and Violet was. The Bible’s very clear on being unequally yoked. She should’ve kept her distance from Clay until he’d found the Lord. Otherwise, you’re just picking and choosing things to obey in the Bible as if a Chinese menu—a little from Column A, more from B, none from C. The Bible’s non-negotiable. You have to follow all or nothing at all. God doesn’t give credit for in between. In fact, Jesus says clearing in Revelation that He doesn’t like the tepid Church. Of course, as humans, there are areas we’ll do well in, areas we’ll do poorly in, and areas we are half-and-half in—but this just shows you the areas in which the Holy Spirit’s at work in you, where you need to work with Him more. But to know the Scripture and decide not to follow it because you don’t like it (because he has the sexiest eyes, body, grin, etc.), is not going to cut it.
Grade: A