Ah, yes. Ellen Hopkins. You see, I'm a little late in the game here reading the Crank series. When I was in high school these books were extremely popular, therefore it was impossible to get them at the library. I'd read burned (more on that later) and detested it, so I put the Crank series at the very bottom of my "to read" list.
A few weeks ago, out of boredom, I finally read Crank and Glass. I liked them, I did. Went through them both in less than a day. It was only natural that I read Fallout next, right? Well, lets just say it is a day of my life I will never get back.
For starters, I was initially intrigued at Hopkin's decision to tell the story from the POV of Kristina's oldest children. However, the entire story took a nose dive about 1/3 of the way through the book. I won't bother to give a summary here, but I will recount the elements of the story that bothered me the most.
1.) All three children, Hunter, Autumn, and Summer (autumn and summer, really now?) were as deep as puddles. I found their cliche and contrived story lines made them all incredibly unlikeable. Instead of really delving into the seemingly traumatic childhoods each endured in their own right, they instead found themselves wrapped up in their own vanilla teenage romances. I was particularly bothered by how forgettable some of the main characters turned out to be, such as Autumn's boyfriend Bryce and Summer's ex Matt. For all I could tell they were essentially the same person. The character development is incredibly lazy here- the same could be said of the sisters themselves. Hunters story showed the greatest promise, yet the middle of the book was mainly him getting unjustifiably angry with the back and forth relationship with his girlfriend Nikki, who is portrayed as a brainless Barbie doll. The important parts of the story, such as Hunter meeting his father and Autumn discovering her siblings, are weakly played out in short bursts of verse in favor of lengthy pages about driving through various deserts. Literally.
2.) The blatant sexist undertones in this book are incredibly disturbing to me. Hopkins practically glorifies the fact that many of her female characters suffer abuse at the hands of their respective male partners. At one point, Summer's beau Kyle forces her to have sex with him although she had just confessed to him that she had been sexually abused as a child, and at many points in the story he is aggressive with her and orders her around like a puppet. It is hard to believe that the "tougher/stronger" girl would go along with this. I was also mad to hear Hunter guilt-tripping his mom about being raped, insinuating that she "asked for it." I could really go on all day here about these kind of themes portrayed in the book.
3.) Hopkins confuses throughout the whole book. The constant switching of POV's, for one, left me dizzy. Aside from that, however, is the revelation that Kristina's mother writes three fictional books in the story titled "Crank", "Glass", and "Fallout." This is even hard for me to explain- now, is Hopkins trying to tell us that this is an Inception kind of deal, a book within a book within a real life story? What is real and what is fake? She also makes it a point to mention several times what a "famous author" Kristina's mother is in the book- many a time an autographed copy of her latest book was the resolution of a mini crisis in the story. It was cheesy, as if Hopkins imagined herself to really be that big and made plenty of space for her ego between the pages of her book.
4.) Finally, the loose ends. There were so many pointless plot twists thrown in here to shock or engage the reader, but they instead fell flat. The ending result of the entire story felt like something I would have written in a game of the Sims, to put it one way. Autumn's possible pregnancy? The siblings all meeting each other for the first time? NOPE! You get to make that all up on your own, folks. The endless blah blah blah crap I poured through all day lead to a rushed and soap-opera type ending. The only spoiler I can give you is that Kristina and Trey somehow remarry and live as happily ever after as they can. But really? Two volatile addicts with a terrifying and traumatic past are really going to last in a relationship together? And flaky selfish Kristina, who can't love anyone, is going to continue to abandon her children in favor of a dude. We also never find out how Autumn reacts to her parents being together again after they are absent from her life up until that point?
I need to stop. I could be here all night typing the flaws and shortcomings, and yes, general sloppiness of this book until my eyes fall out of my skull. But I simply use up my 20,000 character limit and then some. This book was so bad that I went out of my way to find this site so I could review it. Like I said before, I liked Crank and Glass all right because it was more engaging, it had more soul. I kind of understand what Hopkins was going for with her final installment of the series, but it turned into a bleak, hopeless, and vapid piece of writing. Her idea could have come through in so many different ways, and it could have even held the potential of being a five star work of art. I am truly surprised to see how many perfect reviews it got, so maybe she got what she wanted out of Fallout- a cash cow of a follow up to please those readers with a taste for mindless Facebook type drama.