*Alternative title for this book is "The Night Man.*
Big disappointment. This book, which really is a by-the-numbers Horror-genre book (which is fine), ended up failing to actually accomplish this.
I'll summarize: this book has a stupid premise that could have been a lot of fun if it had a lot of murdered teenagers as it hints, but it doesn't.
Basic plot is there is an entire highschool football team where all the players and their cheerleader girlfriends are pieces of shit to a ten-year old boy who then conjures up a malevolent dream-killer to take care of them. And the teenagers are truly ghastly; it's 200-pages in this 300-page book where all they do is make this young boy's life a living hell in disgusting and cruel ways with zero redemption to any single one of them.
I was getting bored, it's definitely overkill, but then at page 200 finally one of them gets killed. I licked my lips and rubbed my hands together and thought, Alright! Here comes the bloodbath! 100 pages of asshole teenagers getting brutally murdered, let's do this!
Nope! One more deadteenager 45 pages later, and then a dull ending with one more body that isn't even graphic or detailed or fun at all.
Look. If you're going to write a stupid, genre-heavy Horror book, then you need to know what readers want. This book was designed, is supposed to be, an excessive murder-romp of vengeance gone out of control. It isn't complicated, and although the 200-page set-up is excessive that's really all such a set-up can possibly lead to.
There shouldn't be a damn story after that, is what I'm saying. It should be corpse after corpse after corpse and then fast wrap-up where either Good or Evil can win; it really doesn't matter, as that's not what a book like this offers nor what it's readers would care about.
Just disappointing and a waste of an afternoon read. You had one job to do, Night Man, which was kill teenagers and somehow you fucked that up. I want the .80 cents I spent on this at the thrift store back!