This is definitely a beguiling novella, that’s for sure. It managed to say a whole lot about racism, classism, cultural appropriation, the surveillance state, social power & status, celebrity, and queer identity in contemporary Japan, among other things. These sociological observations were abundant but subtle, presented as quotidian and the narrative didn’t remark on them. The whole concept of the story hinges on the interchangeability of Black men, even by those who lust for their bodies. Everything is presented to an almost exaggerated degree, and parts of this story are dark satire, but that is mixed with a detached naturalism that makes the whole thing hard to categorize. It certainly engendered reflection on the intersectionality of these issues and more, without ever once feeling didactic, self-righteous, or scolding. That made this is constantly intriguing and engaging read.
I say it is beguiling though because these observations are done in the midst of a threadbare narrative, which I suppose isn’t uncommon in farces or satires but contrasted with the detached, naturalistic tone much of the narrative adopted. We have an intimate third-person and yet there still feels like an observational distance, not because we don’t have access to the characters’ thoughts but because their emotional landscape is reserved and not as wildly expressive as parts of the story would imply they should be. There is some head-hopping, which is to say switching POV across characters within a single page without any clear narrative delineation, and it had an interesting effect here. Generally excessive head-hopping just feels like amateur writing, without the narrative clues to direct the reader to where they should be, but here it felt very intentional and it aligned with some of the themes of the story. These characters are individuals but they also are porous, confused for one another even by the narrator, seemingly, and it helped create a level of surreality and distance that set the tone for the story.
The nature of the story meant the characters didn’t feel particularly well-rounded, each had a distinct history but that was just kind of explained to the reader, we didn’t come to understand them through their emotional experiences, they didn’t have inner story arcs, and they almost felt disposable. This made sense for the story being told but it made it hard for me to care about any of them, much less try to follow the logic in the narrative action. It all lent to a detached, observational style that was more performative than inviting. The writing itself felt direct, with short, declarative sentences that almost felt clinical. This kept the story moving quickly and tended to highlight the absurdity of what was happening. It is smart for this to be novella length, because it can sustain its level of weirdness and ambiguity for that long without feeling stretched thin, but it does come at the expense of a meaningful or emotionally resonant plot. Instead it almost reads like a number of interconnected tableaus stitched together.
I definitely enjoyed reading this. It feels confident in its style and decisions, and does a great job of creating opportunity for reflection. I do wish there had been more substance to the characters, and I would have liked there to be either clearer inner journeys happening or a more robust narrative plot, something to hook my attention a little more concretely. It does read really quickly and will leave you scratching your head, if nothing else, as you think about race, identity, and power.
I want to thank the author, publisher, and NetGalley, who provided a complimentary eARC for review. I am leaving this review voluntarily.