Abdoh's debut is a terse mess of a spy novel, obviously run through the contemporary fiction workshop mill and sucked clean of anything interesting. His prose is snappy, but these days snappy prose is not enough, especially in a book marketed as literary fiction. I suppose there's some sort of exotic allure, Abdoh and his narrator both being Iranian, but there's no sense of culture in any of the characters, so any claim of multiculturalism rings empty and false.
The narrator's tone is clueless and mystified with New York, and it's not immediately convincing that Abdoh is in control of this. Sami's judgements are generic - Damadi is fack, Joanna is ugly - but we don't get anything more rich than that, no motivation or drive. Some of the Brooklyn streets are rendered with convincing desolation and a touch of understanding of the NYPD. The dialogue is paced well and the greasy basements of falafel joints bring out the grit and small time nature of these Arab thugs.
Much of the spy detail seems straight of a 60s thriller, James Bond with no flair, pay phones with voice encoders, masked identities and triple crosses. Too much of Sami's conflict is an internal argument about who is who, and who is working for who, so his own thoughts contradict themselves in almost humorous Maxwell Smart ways. The generic sex-drenched spy shit is tempered, until Ellena, a mysterious and beautiful blonde poetess shows up, and the story becomes Hollywood as hell.
The worst sex scene of all time, starts out, "They began to kiss...like explorers. Then he penetrated her again." Abdoh shows a general lack of knowledge about human interactions and relations. The generic spy shit gets slppey when Ellena dances fetish at the club, though this might be the perfect kinky idiocy of the 90s coming out. The bloodshed is unbelievable, especially that Sami, an otherwise sympathetic character has no real problem with capping people. I don't even believe him as a spy, let along a killer.
Sami's moral compass, though he's not a muslim, is quite similar, in that it is more reprehensible for one to have whipped cream licked of one's body than to put a bullet into another human being's temple. The double-crossing convolutions become excessive and comedic along with the exploration of Sami's "American half."
The Poet Game is written like Abdoh wanted the shitty Hollywood adaptation to be pretty much word for word from the novel, and the silliness of the twisty plot culminates in Sami getting gunned down with Ellena. Are we supposed to feel sorry, or some sort of romantic release a la Bonnie and Clyde? I feel little to nothing.