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My Vampire System #17
My Vampire System: Book17
The human race is at war with the Vicious Dalki and when they needed help more than ever, THEY started to come forward.
Humans who had hidden in the shadows for hundreds of years, people with abilities.
Some chose to share their knowledge to the rest of the world in hopes of winning the war, while others kept their abilities to themselves.
Quinn had lost everything to the war, his home, his family and the only thing he had inherited was a crummy old book that he couldn’t even open.
But when the book had finally opened, Quinn was granted a system and his whole life was turned around.
He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day the system gave him a quest he wasn’t sure he could complete.
"It is time to feed!"
"You must drink human blood within 24 hours"
"Your HP will continue to decrease until the task has been completed."
Humans who had hidden in the shadows for hundreds of years, people with abilities.
Some chose to share their knowledge to the rest of the world in hopes of winning the war, while others kept their abilities to themselves.
Quinn had lost everything to the war, his home, his family and the only thing he had inherited was a crummy old book that he couldn’t even open.
But when the book had finally opened, Quinn was granted a system and his whole life was turned around.
He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day the system gave him a quest he wasn’t sure he could complete.
"It is time to feed!"
"You must drink human blood within 24 hours"
"Your HP will continue to decrease until the task has been completed."
170 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 7, 2023
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August 17, 2025
proofread and stop begging for money
The story is fun. The proofreading and command of grammar is horrible. The “join my Patreon” and begging for support at the end of EVERY non-proofread chapter is bad. This series is on Amazon and expensive. Each “book” is short now and for the amount he charges, should be polished and free of the Patreon crap.
The story is fun. The proofreading and command of grammar is horrible. The “join my Patreon” and begging for support at the end of EVERY non-proofread chapter is bad. This series is on Amazon and expensive. Each “book” is short now and for the amount he charges, should be polished and free of the Patreon crap.
May 28, 2024
still reads like a first draft
I really want to see where this story goes but it still reads like a verbalized essay that was never proof read.
I really want to see where this story goes but it still reads like a verbalized essay that was never proof read.
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