3.5 stars
If I'd read this book when I was a teen, it would likely be up there in the list of my old time, sentimental favorites along with the older Kathleen Woodwiss' novels. Today it was still enjoyable.
My Wicked Enchantress is one of the "lighter" bodice rippers from back in the day. By today's standards it is horribly un-pc, but it does not have many of the elements of the more "down-n-dirty" bodice rippers of the '80s. There is no cheating, beating, or vicious gang rape here. The hero is overbearing and alpha, but he's very obviously smitten at first glance. But, be warned, there are definitely consent issues going on with the sex. There is at least one scene that is classic, old school forced seduction where the h says "NO" but her traitorous body says "YES. OH, YES!" Plus the very imbalance of power between the two makes consent an issue.
The heroine meets the hero when she tries to pick his pocket as he gets off a riverboat in French Colonial New Orleans. He is instantly obsessed with the beautiful street girl and determined to make her his mistress. Of course, in grand old school tradition, she's not really a street girl at all, but a virginal Scottish lady hiding out from the scheming relative who killed her sister in revenge after the heroine refused his marriage proposal. The villain - like all men - is obsessed with the heroine. He plans to murder her so no one else can have her.
The hero, St. Bride is actually an English Duke posing as a colonial plantation owner. He also just so happens to be out to get the heroine's evil cousin for his role in his own sister's death. Dude was death on people's sisters.
The villain does not know who the hero is and thinks they are partners in a scheme to grow and sell opium. The hero, of course, plans to double cross and ruin him. *evil laugh*
What follows is one long misunderstanding. St. Bride thinks Kayleigh is a street urchin who has been around the block more than once. He doesn't see anything wrong with keeping her for his own. In fact, he sees it as doing her a favor. Kayleigh doesn't tell him the truth because she thinks that he and her evil cousin are friends.
There's definitely some captor/captive kink going on here. The hero holds her attempted theft over her head to force her to stay with him. He even alludes to the fact that as a man of means and power he can make her his bond slave (presumably by paying to have fake papers drawn up). He actually has a jeweler make a choker holding a heirloom sapphire that she can not take off. It has a hidden catch that only he and the jeweler know how to operate. So, yep, a slave collar. Kinky :)
Then there's the older man/younger woman trope. Kayleigh is 19 and the hero... I'm not sure. I can't remember his age being listed, but it is noted that he's graying at the temples. There's definitely a patronizing, paternal dynamic at times that may drive some reader's crazy. However, Kayleigh most definitely plays the part of child old school spitfire (running off into danger, foot stomping, name calling, etc).
St. Bride wants Kayleigh as his willing mistress, but she refuses and insists on being a servant on his LA plantation. The hero keeps trying though. He attempts to buy her with pretty dresses and gifts until he realizes that she will just sell those things and sail back to Scotland. She makes him crazy :) It is quite a while before they actually consummate their union and we get the big "oops, she's a virgin" moment.
Although Kayleigh eventually falls in love with St. Bride, she thinks he only wants her body. It's obvious to the reader that he is completely and hopelessly lost for her. This results in misunderstanding attempted runaway, runaway, secrets, etc..... It can be maddening, but if you take it for what it is and like those tropes, it is fun if a bit drawn out at times.