"Bystander" by James Preller is one of many different takes on the problem of middle school bullying. Eric Hayes is the new kid in Bellport Middle School in Long Island, New York. His little brother is Rudy, and Eric has constant thoughts about his dad throughout this story. He has started his year with an encounter of David Hallenback, a boy that is running away from someone, or something. As he is shooting hoops on the basketball court, fours kids roll up to him on bicycles. These kids are Griffin, Drew P., Cody, and Mary. Griffin opens himself up to Eric during this encounter. They meet each other multiple times throughout the story, and Griffin seems to be building a friendship with Eric. Mary, however, grows increasingly distrustful of Griffin, and Eric starts to uncover the truth with help from her; Griffin is a bully. He is rude towards David Hallenback, cares little about other people, and has even stolen from Eric after coming over to his house. Eric and Mary also become friends, and this friendship continues to grow. Eventually, Hallenback comes to Eric and asks him to come outside to the pet cemetery behind the school. Eric agrees, and follows him to said location. However, Hallenback has deceived Eric, as he encounters Griffin, Drew P., Cody, and Sinjay. Cody and Eric get in a fight, leaving Eric bloodied and beaten. Hallenback gets some kicks in as well. Mary is able to find Eric, as she was hiding from the fight. They fix him up at his house. Eric, however, wants to get Griffin back. He remembers what Griffin has stolen from him; one of his dad's CDs and $27.00 from Rudy's piggy bank. With help from Mary, he is able to get his stolen items back after sneaking into Griffin's house, and Eric and Griffin seem to be even.
Eric is very cautious, as, of course, he is attending a new school for his seventh grade year. One of the biggest struggles Eric has in this story is that his dad has left him. He hasn't been in contact with Eric since, and Eric has grown increasingly frustrated by his father's lack of communication and care for them. His father also has a drug problem, as mentioned by his mother later in the story. She continues to reassure Eric that his dad still cares for the family, but Eric is still left confused and worried about him. This conflict is well developed throughout the story, and gives the reader something else to focus on other than Eric's situation with Griffin during the down times. However, it needs improvement. The reader isn't given enough information about Eric's father to truly sympathize with him - his name wasn't even provided in the story. The reason for why he left his family isn't clearly provided, either. Eric is clearly frustrated that his father has left him - which is justified - but the reader is only left to infer why this has happened. This internal conflict also seems rather rushed. Once again, the reader doesn't gain enough insight as to who Eric's father is, what he does for a living, and what his life has been like. Therefore, there are many loose ends to Eric's situation. There isn't a tidy solution. At the end of the book, Eric has made the basketball team and pictures his father cheering for him in the stands, but I was left with a number of questions about this; Did his dad come back? Will his dad come back? Where is his dad now? Has Eric accepted his internal conflict? And so on, so forth. Overall, it was a nice touch to the story, especially to let us know that Eric has an underlying problem on top of Eric's existing problem with Griffin.
The main topic in "Bystander," of course, is bullying. Eric finds out that Griffin is a bully after many hints from Mary and Eric's personal observations. The personalities of these characters are well written, and I understand their relationship to Eric; Mary is caring and outgoing with a bubbly personality and a close friendship towards Eric. Griffin, on the other hand, starts as welcoming Eric in as a friend, but soon casts him out of his friend group and begins to steal from him, tease him, and, obviously, bully him. Preller does a great job projecting a sense of helplessness as Eric is beaten up by Cody and Hallenback. The reader feels terrible for Eric, and Preller makes sure that the bad guys are established. A big problem is that this major event comes in the middle of the story. At this point, we know that Griffin is the bully, and this solidifies it. It builds the characters of Hallenback, Cody, and Mary, yes, but it doesn't come as a huge shock to the reader. While it is surprising, readers got multiple hints for this happening during the story. This all happened because Hallenback led Eric to the cemetery, which I had mixed views on. Yes, Hallenback seems somewhat trustworthy, but he had told Eric that he was friends with Griffin's crew. Why would Eric trust Hallenback if he didn't trust Griffin? Again - they are friends with each other, so it confuses me why Eric would willingly go with Hallenback to an area where he is obviously exposed. Nevertheless, these boys are in 7th grade, but I'm still left with questions. Also, Eric sneaking into Griffin's house to retrieve his belongings takes things too far. What 7th grader would think to do this? Yes, Eric is standing up for his little brother, but this is crazy for someone at his age. In general, the characters are well developed. Readers can easily connect with some and oppose others, but some events in the story don't have enough justification to them.
"Bystander" intrigued me because of the tagline, "A bystander? Or the bully's next target?" This alone can get a reader thinking about the story and wanting to open it up. I had read this book before, and had forgotten what happened, so I decided to return to this to see what was so good about it. Reading it again, I do realize what I liked about it. The characters are very well developed and described, and Mary quickly became one of my favorites in the story. The settings are described clearly, with in-depth descriptions of the cemetery and the school itself. However, I've noticed some flaws during my reread. I had questions about the aforementioned cemetery scene, Eric's struggles with his father, and some events during the story. I was left particularly unsatisfied with the ending of "Bystander." Eric forgot his shoes while retrieving his stolen items in Griffin's house, to which he sees Griffin wearing them in school the next day. Just like that, it's over? No response from Griffin? After seeing what Eric had gone through during the story, this ending feels weak. Yes, Eric has made amends with Cody, Drew P., and Sinjay, but the conflict with Griffin feels unresolved. It could be assumed that Griffin decided that Eric wasn't worth it anymore. Whatever the case, more closure is needed. "Bystander" is a different approach to the topic of bullying, which I appreciate. Preller has created a story of discord, a constant battle between Eric and Griffin. I was involved with the story, as I wanted Eric to win and Griffin to lose. In the end, neither of those things happened, but it was still an enjoyable read. I look forward to seeing what James Preller has in store for the future.