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72 pages, Paperback
First published June 1, 1972
a diamond-tipped
drillpoint crept closer
to residual chaos to
rare artesian hatred
that once squirted warm
blood in God’s face
confirming His first
disappointment in Eden
The musicality of Achebe’s writing melds wonderfully with the poetic simplicity of imagism, and at its strongest, Beware Soul Brother feels like a postcolonial anachronism, a modernist missive in a world already verging on postmodernism. Likewise, “The Explorer” perfectly combines abstract rumination on identity with imagery, recalling the ghosts of Robert Frost and Robinson Jeffers, culminating in a brilliant closing sequence: “Enough / in that trapped silence of a freak / dawn to come face to face suddenly / with a body I didn’t even know / I lost.” As in these two cases, when he lets the images do the work for him, he’s capable of excellent poetry, but many of these poems are so eager to articulate their messages that they don’t let the images unfurl, such as in “Benin Road,” where the image of a butterfly as a counterpoint to the violence of war is robbed of its power by the speaker explaining to us the butterfly’s symbolic significance:
speed is violence
power is violence
weight violence
the butterfly
seeks safety
in lightness
in weightlessness
fluctuating flight
but somewhere
our divergent
territories meet
in paved forests
While the poem’s ending is excellent, bringing the two conceptual poles together in a striking contrast, it’s robbed of its power by his abstract and explicit linkage of modernity and violence coupled with his redundant delineation of the butterfly’s associations with lightness and weightlessness. And so it goes for most of the collection: the occasional gems’ subtle noise is out-shouted by their too-explicit siblings, while Achebe’s penchant for precise adjectives and abstract nouns over-clutters his imagery to the point that poems with promise, like “Mango Seedling,” fall strangely flat. In the end, like many prose writers, Achebe’s a better novelist than a poet; one of the most rewarding parts of his books is their humanistic irony, and while the occasional poem in here (e.g., “We Laughed at Him”) manages to capture that, I don’t know that poetry is a mode that allows him to fully exercise his talents.