WARNING: This is a rant review. If you do not enjoy rant reviews do not keep reading.
Okay, don’t think that I did not enjoy the story, as I did. I found it interesting looking into the fashion industry and going on the journey with Jana, and the whole court case which is similar to the #METOO movement. However, there is A LOT of things in the book whilst reading that bugged me.
• Firstly, this book on the back says 14 + which I do not agree with and think it should be 15+ as the content is quite mature, with drugs, sexual harassment, language etc. I’m not a prude, as I believe sex should not be something shameful to learn and talk about, however with all these topics combined it should be a 15. The sex scene with her boyfriend jarred me, and came out of nowhere, and if I’m being honest I was not expecting. I’m not saying it was a bad thing, and I understand now that’s it’s to show her age, and also the industry she is in, but near the start I just felt like it came out of nowhere. I’m fine with swearing, however some may think me old fashioned when I say, was most of it really necessary in the book? It took me a while to get used to it. Even from the start of the first few pages, there were swearwords everywhere, I was just like really?? I don’t think as a sixteen year old realistically she would be swearing so much in her mind and out loud, even though obviously sixteen year olds swear, but still it was very excessive.
• Janas character. Ugh. As a sixteen year old myself, most of the things said and done in this book is definitely not how a sixteen year old would act and think. Not just Janas character but the other ones as well. It felt unnatural and unrealistic. It very much felt like an older author trying to be a relatable character, and write about hip teenagers, (which it was) when really, I could hardly relate at all.
Janas character extremely bugged me, and someone being written as academically smart, could be really dumb sometimes. One instance was when her friend said she was jealous of her, and she COULD NOT FATHOM why, whilst going to New York, Dubai, wearing expensive clothes, being a MODEL, - like the stupidity and nativity of this character really bugged me. Throughout most of it she was like, Why did they pick me, I’m an alien, there’s nothing special about me blah blah blah. It got extremely tiresome and boring. There is obviously a reason why they scouted you, so stop trying to be ignorant about the whole thing.
One thing I have noticed in ya books, is that they try to bring down the typical girly girls who like fashion and make up, talking about them as if there is something wrong with them for having a common interest with other girls. As a girl who is not typically like that myself, I honestly don’t care what anyone else does, and girls shouldn’t drag each other down, but support each other for their similarities and differences.
One other thing was that at the start at school, she had bullies in the book, and when Jana started to become famous they were immediately nice to her. Anyone with a brain could see they were only doing it for the fame, and would have said something, but no, not Jana, she just sat there, stuttered, was confused when they asked for a famous models number, and didn’t really say anything at all, or stand up for herself. One of the bullies openly called her supposedly best friend a bitch, and as a normal friend, you would say something about it, but she didn’t say anything at all.
In this book she was basically like, I’m Indie, I’m not like other girls, Ed Sheeran is rubbish I listen to the old stuff, which means I’m superior. Ugh. As someone who listens to everything, who cares if people listen to generic pop, if that’s what they like??
She looked down on the girls who had sex for money, however it’s okay to pop dozens of non-prescribed pills and numb yourself from the world, but what they are doing is disgraceful? That bit very much annoyed me. About the pill thing, surely she could have been smart enough to realise that they were having a negative effect on her, or called a doctor to ask if the pills were okay to take, and how many. If the author had written her character as naive and uneducated I would have understood, but many times it is stated that Jana is a smart character.
I just extremely did not like her character throughout this book.
• Another thing is that I noticed there were a lot of racial stereotypes in this book. Wether it was Italy, China, there was a lot. I hate that they kept referring to the Russian girls as, all basically looked the same, as if Russians all look similar. It even admitted in the book that they weren’t actually all Russian but from many different areas in Eastern Europe.
Also in this book it refers to gap toothed people as unattractive, which annoys me as it happens in a lot of books, gapped tooth people are written as ugly or old characters, and there is never a beautiful character with gapped teeth.
• Another big thing was the writing style. It’s okay to have accents in books, however if you are going to do it, do research and be consistent with it the whole time. It felt like whole chunks were normal, and then out of nowhere, BAM, there would be an accent spelt, and it would completely throw me off.
MANY times in this book I had to do a double take, as A LOT of sentences did not make any sense at all, and were VERY grammatically incorrect. It highly offended me that the author thinks that because you are from East London, and have an accent, you can’t form correct sentences. It really bothered me.
One of the reasons I continued reading was Ferdy, as he seemed the only decent character in the book. Overall there wasn’t much character development in most of the characters as a whole, and the Laurel situation was just dismissed.
I think this book may be overhyped. I enjoyed getting a glimpse into the modelling world and it’s hardships, but I feel like there are probably many other better books like that out there, that have a good overall plot than this one. I feel like it just got hyped because of the author. I will still read more of Junos books, and give them a go, however I do think this one has been overhyped.