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Eternally Yours

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Penny finds herself dateless when she’s invited to her cousin’s wedding. To make matters worse, the groom is her cheating ex! Desperate to save face, Penny resorts to contacting an escort service for her plus one. Little does she know, SFH is not what she expected. It’s a private matchmaking service for lonely immortals.

Nicholas has spent centuries searching for his true mate and finally finds her in his lovely date for the night. He instantly falls for the shy beauty right away. Determined to make her his, he will do anything in his power to convince him that they belong together, including seducing her into willing submission.
But how will she react when she learns the truth about her ‘date’? And that he's a vampire?

85 pages, Kindle Edition

Published January 29, 2023

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Eve Vaughn

116 books843 followers
NYT and USA Today Bestselling Author Eve Vaughn has enjoyed creating characters and making up stories from an early age. As a child she was always getting into mischief, so when she lost her television privileges (which was often), writing was her outlet. Her stories have gotten quite a bit spicier since then! Eve likes to read, bake, make crafts, travel, and spend time with her family. She lives in the Philadelphia area with her husband and pet turtle. She loves to hear from her fans, so feel free to contact her at Eve@evevaughn.com or join her Facebook Group at https://www.facebook.com/groups/eveva...

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Profile Image for Tay.
195 reviews41 followers
November 29, 2023
Short and Sweet

Cute characters, fierce loyalty from sisters, an overprotective, or in this case, the right kind of protective, vampire mate and a spicy love story. Only 85 pages long, but no less impactful.
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134 reviews6 followers
March 18, 2024
An enjoyable short read. Her ex is a horrible person.
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1,787 reviews26 followers
February 11, 2023
Nicholas and Penelope

This was a cute and short story. Penny ex got what he deserved. I know this was only a Novella but I wished it was more to the story, can't wait for the sister book.
152 reviews2 followers
March 13, 2023
Zero Stars!

This was nothing but smut. I was okay with the story until Penny and Nicholas met, then it went to the gutter from there. Such VULGAR references to sex and body parts. A story can be hot and sensual without being downright nasty. This was porn. I won't be buying anything else from this author. Using tacky, vulgar, language does not make a story well written, romantic, or interesting. It's just offensive, especially when the main character is a black woman and the author's depiction of her just perpetuates myths and stereotypes about black women. Black women deserve to be courted, romanced, and loved, but most authors of BWWM romance novels seem to think that the only thing black women want is a good screw. It's so offensive and stereotypical! Amazon, I want my money back!!!!!
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1,433 reviews8 followers
March 15, 2023
His True Mate

Betrayed by a boyfriend can be hard, but when the betrayal includes a close family member is beyond painful… That was the case for Penny. However, most of the time that’s the best thing that could happen to you, saving you a lot of headaches in the future and doors wide open for better possibilities ! 😉
See, how Penny’s life changed for the best when dumped by Chad for her cousin and she met the handsome Stud by the name of Nicholas.
Short & sweet !
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134 reviews
August 5, 2023
2.5? I went in thinking i was a full length novel, so when I realised it wasn’t I was disappointed. It would’ve been so much better longer and more developed🫠
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16 reviews
March 6, 2023
Abrupt Ending, lots of Errors

This book does have potential but don’t let it build up enough before it ended abruptly. Right when you think you can give it a little more of your attention it ends.
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1,270 reviews9 followers
October 1, 2023
I kept waiting for the story to start and it just never does.
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317 reviews3 followers
March 21, 2023
Mature Love

Thank you for writing a great story about a mature couple that has an HEA. Most of the time when you read these novels, except for BDSM, the mature couples are almost sexless. We aged women still like to be participatory. So, thanks. Plus you made sex seem fun, and not a burden.
I almost felt so sorry for Penelope in chapter one. Then I learned of all she had going and how Chad needed to be taught a lesson and thought, “ummm”.
Enter Nicholas! and I was floored. Thank you for adjusting the vampire rules for ultra old/mature vamps. I can hardly wait for Nicholas’ friend, the Incubus and Emmy to meet and begin their forever journey.
Finally, Valentina is the best Witchy Yenta, ever. If you do decide to match these two hunks then you still have all of there friends and fiends to match.
I love Val and her Ghoulish office.
Have read Ann the Millie Taiden, etc. Paranormal Dating series and yours would make a great Dating Service for all of the mixed race, mixed fantasy genre.
Again, Thank You! And I look forward to Emmy’s forever journey.
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Author 1 book5 followers
June 29, 2023
Eve Vaughn is one of my all times favorite authors, but...

This didn't feel as polished as she normally writes. One of my favorite series is her Grimaldi vampire series. My other favorite book is Hostile Takeover. There are more I love, but those are a few I reread often. She's on my immediate purchase list, which is why this is a hard review for me.

The plot is great. Nicholas and Penny were adorable, but the editing issues and plot holes took away from what could have been an amazing short story. I wish I could message Ms. Vaughn and ask her to allow me to edit for her so she can keep to what is usually an amazing, polished standard. Her books don't usually have these errors. I hope everything is well with her. I gave the book 4 stars because the premise was great and the bones are there for a fantastic read. If she needs an editor I'll gladly help because she's far too talented to have this many errors, plot holes and misused words.
288 reviews2 followers
February 11, 2023
This was a nice short story.

I like the story but found some misspelled words that didn't take it away from the story but the author forgot that Penny was a scientist and not a real state realtor that threw me off for a minute but because the rest of the book was good I see that author stop for a moment when she wrote the book. I like the book and look forward to reading the second book. Which hope the author will proof read and check to make sure the characters stay on point and not go off script. I do wish the book was a little longer because I feel like Penney had more to say about her life but I did enjoy that barb got what she deserved for taken what wasn't her's . As always happy reading😊.
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793 reviews5 followers
February 7, 2023
This is definitely going in my re-read list

I love reading great stories over & over, this will be one of them it had me smiling, and wanting to laugh. It was hot, sexy and made you horny as well. Reading Nicholas & Penny story I felt like cheering every time Nicholas corrected Penny on talking negative about herself. Been there done that, and so over it. I can’t wait to read Emma story, she is going to have one right.
This is a great read, and something you’ll love to read over again.
284 reviews
March 12, 2023
Great book

Great book and story line. I enjoyed this book. I feel like the author did an excellent job for a short story. There were some typos but it didn’t take away from the story for me. I see potential growth for this author to be an excellent writer. I did four stars, would have liked to give four and a half but that’s not the sliding scale on here. This was straight to the point, fast paced because it’s a short story. Great love scenes, alpha male who knows what he wants. I’ll check out her sister’s story next.
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230 reviews
February 28, 2023
Love Comes Unexpectedly

Nicholas is immortal. Penelope aka Penny is human. She begins her story here with betrayal. However her story doesn't end there. That relationship ending brings Nicholas into her life. He is her destiny if she can accept herself for herself & just enjoy being treasured for who she is. This was a quick read with a HEA. Love it. Can't wait for next in the series. Enjoy. 😍
61 reviews1 follower
May 8, 2023
A Vampire's Tasty Bite of Love

Nick spent hundreds of years waiting for his Mate. And just when he was at the bottom of the barrel of loneliness, Penny came on the scene. Their relationship was kind of shaky in the beginning. But the "Mate Factor" took care of that REAL quick. Smile.

Usually I am not a fan of Vampire Romance, but I really enjoyed this book. And I think you will too.
100 reviews
February 22, 2023
To Sssshhhhoooorrrtttt!!!!(Short)

Man, I was just getting comfortable when the book ended. I wish that the other characters in the book storyline had been processed and then the length of the book for the price should have been fulfilling, now I'm just hungry for more. Maybe next time. 😂
163 reviews
March 27, 2023
Better Than I Thought

I was a little surprised because I'm not really in the mood , or at least though I wasn't in the mood for a vampire love story. Yes, definitely a love story. Didn't expect any thing, but I must admit that match maker hit the target head on. Very enjoyable book. Better than I thought it would be. Thanks Eve Vaughn.
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623 reviews3 followers
April 11, 2023
Bite Sized 5 Flaming 🔥⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

No one writes Vamp Romance like Eve Vaughn😀! Eternally Yours is a blazing 🔥🔥🔥🔥bite sized 📕of deliciousness! Nicholas is sheer perfection& he is swagalicious💋Penelope is a sweet cinnamon roll . I wish the story was longer ; could’ve easily read another 100 pages of their story💃🏻
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145 reviews
August 13, 2023
3.5 stars..

The editing was horrible. A lot of sentences are unfinished. It's as if a rough draft was submitted instead. I really don't understand when there's spell check in every type of software these days. I really don't even want to read the next one. The book itself was cute. I like how they met. That's all I got.
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2,538 reviews11 followers
September 18, 2023
Nicholas and Penny

Penny deserved everything Nicholas has in store for her. She's a good woman who did deserve the mess her boyfriend Chad and cousin Barb did to her. Barb would have caught hands. Now Barb has done Chad the same way he did Penny. Even tho Nicholas is a vampire he has eternity to keep Penny happy. I can't Wait til her sister Emmy finds her forever man.💜💜
25 reviews2 followers
February 9, 2023
Quick Sexy Read!

This was a quick and well written short story by Eve Vaughn! It had great characters and an entertaining storyline! Nicholas and Penelope had great chemistry and some funny moments. I can't wait to read Emmy and Padraig's story next!
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364 reviews1 follower
February 11, 2023
🥰🥰

It was short and sweet....I'm glad Penny got someone that shows her, her worth it's rare to find. But Chad I would throat punch 👊 😤 over and over again. He got what he deserved 👏 through and through.....can't wait to see Emmy 👀 she will fight her connection hard......
67 reviews
February 28, 2023
Cute quick read.

4 stars because it still needs editing.

Is she a scientist or a realtor? The grammar typos are easy to gloss over and the store is solid for it to be such a short book. Really liked it!
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416 reviews1 follower
March 26, 2023
great story

I love a good vampire story. Nicholas and Penelope’s story was very cute. I would have loved for it to be longer, but I still enjoyed it. I’d recommend it to anyone looking for a quick steamy read!
91 reviews
April 22, 2023
Hot!

Raliegh & Penelope- what a match. While I enjoyed this quick read, I’m curious to know if there’s a follow up story with Emmy. I would also like to know what happens to the fated couple as they move through life.
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245 reviews
May 30, 2023
Could be better

this book read more like an outline for a book - it would be very good if more editing was done to smooth out the story line - also, more education on adjectives would be appropriate - absorbent expensive does NOT mean exorbitantly expensive
16 reviews
June 26, 2023
Sexy but short

This was so good but too short. I wanted to learn more about Nick’s backstory. However I did love the HEA and how the ex got his in the end. Nicely done, but I wanted more.
27 reviews
July 11, 2023
Good storyline but needs more work overall

I like that the story was to the point. But the many typos and grammatical errors was very distracting. I would recommend the author have her work proofread prior to publication.
242 reviews2 followers
September 30, 2023
Loved it

I really enjoyed reading this story, but i felt that the ending was rushed. I wish more detail was added when they realizes they were in love. Guess I'll have to read the rest of the series. It does need minor editing.
4 reviews
January 31, 2023
love it

Good short read sizzling chemistry right to the point romance ... this short packed a powerful punch.. good read indeed
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