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Alpha Redemption
From despair he fled, through tragedy he lived on, and journeyed to innocence. His the stars. His a computer poised at the brink of sentience. An unlikely friendship on a prototype spaceship at lightspeed towards Alpha Centauri, and redemption.
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First published September 1, 2010
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July 8, 2015
First off, you should know that I wrote this book. Second, you are probably wondering why I only gave it four stars. What kind of twit gives his own book four out of five stars? Let me explain.
I wrote this almost four years ago now. Anyone who has written prose of any length will know all about the pain involved in editing. You read, edit, leave, repeat... At the end of it all , you think you've found everything and that the book is perfect. Or as near to perfection as it is possible to get.
The fact is, I love this book. I love the premise, the plot, and I loved writing it. Watching it come to life was like seeing a child being born. Every parent thinks their offspring is immaculate. It is only later, when they are older and making their own way in the world, that you see the flaws.
And so it is with Alpha Redemption. I used to think it was perfect. Now, in the harsh light of objectivity, I realize that it could do with some more work. Not a lot, mind you. Just a tweak here and there. Nothing major. Just one more edit. Maybe two.
I made a point of not letting my family post ratings or comments about my work. The reason I did this was to avoid skewing opinion. I wanted an honest appraisal, both for me and, more importantly, for my readers. I wanted anyone thinking of taking the plunge to be able to get the genuine opinions of other readers.
In that spirit, I elected to give Alpha Redemption an honest review, and only after the euphoria had worn off. Four years is long enough. And four stars is my honest evaluation.
I wrote this almost four years ago now. Anyone who has written prose of any length will know all about the pain involved in editing. You read, edit, leave, repeat... At the end of it all , you think you've found everything and that the book is perfect. Or as near to perfection as it is possible to get.
The fact is, I love this book. I love the premise, the plot, and I loved writing it. Watching it come to life was like seeing a child being born. Every parent thinks their offspring is immaculate. It is only later, when they are older and making their own way in the world, that you see the flaws.
And so it is with Alpha Redemption. I used to think it was perfect. Now, in the harsh light of objectivity, I realize that it could do with some more work. Not a lot, mind you. Just a tweak here and there. Nothing major. Just one more edit. Maybe two.
I made a point of not letting my family post ratings or comments about my work. The reason I did this was to avoid skewing opinion. I wanted an honest appraisal, both for me and, more importantly, for my readers. I wanted anyone thinking of taking the plunge to be able to get the genuine opinions of other readers.
In that spirit, I elected to give Alpha Redemption an honest review, and only after the euphoria had worn off. Four years is long enough. And four stars is my honest evaluation.
March 24, 2012
Hard science fiction, a deeply dramatic character arc, lots of spiritual metaphor, and exploration of the interesting questions. This book has it all. Brett is a broken man. He's never been the same since the death of his wife and children. He has turned away from his faith in God. With nothing left to loose, he takes on a dangerous job - being the first human to travel beyond light-peed on an inter-stellar journey to Alpha Centauri. Along the way, the ship's computer - Jay - begins to show signs of artificial intelligence - of sentience.
This book deals with questions that some Christians might find controversial. If there were such a thing as AI, could a machine have a spiritual aspect to them? Could they have a soul? But isn't that what good science fiction always does? It asks questions. It asks "What if?"
The structure of the book is atypical. It alternates between the present-day story on the spaceship, and glimpses from Brett's past. I hesitate to call these flashback scenes back story, because they are intrinsically part of the tale being told. In much the same way as the television series Lost, each chapter features a story from a different part of Brett's life. Scenes alternate between the present and flashbacks. These flashbacks are linked to the present-day part of the chapter on a thematic level. Each new chapter takes the back story further back in time - so we see Brett's life in reserve. This structure takes a little concentration at first, but I figured out the pattern quite early, and then I just left myself get swept away by the story. I don't want to give too much away, but there are important reasons for using this particular structure. Trust me - it works.
This story doesn't just use space as a setting. It is a genuine science fiction story which has some interesting concepts and mysteries - many of which are never fully explained. This just adds to the feelings of wonder.
As a character drama - the book is filled with heart-ache and hope. You can't help but feel for these characters.
This book deserves to be remembered as a classic. A true Christian Sci-fi.
This book deals with questions that some Christians might find controversial. If there were such a thing as AI, could a machine have a spiritual aspect to them? Could they have a soul? But isn't that what good science fiction always does? It asks questions. It asks "What if?"
The structure of the book is atypical. It alternates between the present-day story on the spaceship, and glimpses from Brett's past. I hesitate to call these flashback scenes back story, because they are intrinsically part of the tale being told. In much the same way as the television series Lost, each chapter features a story from a different part of Brett's life. Scenes alternate between the present and flashbacks. These flashbacks are linked to the present-day part of the chapter on a thematic level. Each new chapter takes the back story further back in time - so we see Brett's life in reserve. This structure takes a little concentration at first, but I figured out the pattern quite early, and then I just left myself get swept away by the story. I don't want to give too much away, but there are important reasons for using this particular structure. Trust me - it works.
This story doesn't just use space as a setting. It is a genuine science fiction story which has some interesting concepts and mysteries - many of which are never fully explained. This just adds to the feelings of wonder.
As a character drama - the book is filled with heart-ache and hope. You can't help but feel for these characters.
This book deserves to be remembered as a classic. A true Christian Sci-fi.
February 24, 2013
3.5 stars. It's good Christian SF about a lonely man who, with the help of an AI on a long FTL trip to the stars, reconciles with his past. It's well written, but it's more a character study than space opera, and may be stretching to be a full length novel.
Brett is a 40ish year old man who volunteers to be the pilot for a faster-than-light trip to Alpha Centauri. To his surprise, he is selected, and soon is awaking from a nutrient bath designed to protect him from the shock of jumping into FTL speeds. With him is a governing AI he soon names Jay.
Over the course of his trip, we learn more about Brett's past and grief, and Jay's desire to understand humanity. It's very well done, with flashbacks woven in with the present voyage. Some good moments too, as Jay learns about things like fear and pain.
The only downside is that it feels stretched. The idea is good and well done, but it's something that works well as a novella, short story, or twilight zone episode. A subplot added to give a sense of danger doesn't go anywhere, and it's a locked room story about a man on a ship. It's a good story, but some might find not enough meat on it.
I enjoyed it though. I hope he writes another novel.
Brett is a 40ish year old man who volunteers to be the pilot for a faster-than-light trip to Alpha Centauri. To his surprise, he is selected, and soon is awaking from a nutrient bath designed to protect him from the shock of jumping into FTL speeds. With him is a governing AI he soon names Jay.
Over the course of his trip, we learn more about Brett's past and grief, and Jay's desire to understand humanity. It's very well done, with flashbacks woven in with the present voyage. Some good moments too, as Jay learns about things like fear and pain.
The only downside is that it feels stretched. The idea is good and well done, but it's something that works well as a novella, short story, or twilight zone episode. A subplot added to give a sense of danger doesn't go anywhere, and it's a locked room story about a man on a ship. It's a good story, but some might find not enough meat on it.
I enjoyed it though. I hope he writes another novel.
September 2, 2010
I’ll admit to being a fan of stories that illustrate the danger and isolation of space exploration. I’m also fond of tales where man’s creation gives him greater insight into his own Creator. In Alpha Redemption, P.A. Baines wonderfully marries my two favorite themes, in a story both fascinating and unique.
The book contains parallel stories, actually: one being the story of Brett Denton’s travel aboard an experimental ship to Alpha Centauri, the other being the story of Denton’s past. Both are touching and insightful. In fact, Denton’s backstory—which could’ve been only a series of narrative-jarring flashbacks—instead feels fully woven into the tapestry of the novel. It is organic.
I also appreciated the unique effects of hibernation sleep in Denton’s world. It is a touch that provides completeness at story’s end.
If you like your science fiction on the introspective side, in the vein of Clarke’s 2001 or Pohl’s Gateway, then Alpha Redemption is a must read!
The book contains parallel stories, actually: one being the story of Brett Denton’s travel aboard an experimental ship to Alpha Centauri, the other being the story of Denton’s past. Both are touching and insightful. In fact, Denton’s backstory—which could’ve been only a series of narrative-jarring flashbacks—instead feels fully woven into the tapestry of the novel. It is organic.
I also appreciated the unique effects of hibernation sleep in Denton’s world. It is a touch that provides completeness at story’s end.
If you like your science fiction on the introspective side, in the vein of Clarke’s 2001 or Pohl’s Gateway, then Alpha Redemption is a must read!
June 5, 2012
I'm not normally a big sci-fi reader, because so many tend to be all tech and battles. But this book is neither. Alpha Redemption is the story of a man, on a outward quest as well as an inward one. It is beautifully written, deep, and engaging. The book has voice and style that really makes it stand out. I love the unique way in which the story is presented. Ah, you have to read it to understand!
At first I wasn't sure I was crazy about the ending, but the more I thought about the story--and I did think about it long after closing the cover--the more the ending affected me, and I realized it did need to be just as it is.
I agree with other reviewers who would have liked more time spent on the planet. But that is my only gripe. Certainly not worthy of knocking a full star off my rating. It's a touching book, haunting and intense.
At first I wasn't sure I was crazy about the ending, but the more I thought about the story--and I did think about it long after closing the cover--the more the ending affected me, and I realized it did need to be just as it is.
I agree with other reviewers who would have liked more time spent on the planet. But that is my only gripe. Certainly not worthy of knocking a full star off my rating. It's a touching book, haunting and intense.
April 2, 2011
I recommend this book even if you're not much of a sci-fi fan. While the setting is sci-fi, the theme is life and faith and what it takes to have both of those. Brett is as down-and-out as a human being can be, completely divorced from God and heading nowhere. His travels with Jay, a computer who evolves into an almost-human, take us on a journey like no other. The book skips around a lot, going forward and backward in time. This isn't a light read, it takes some paying attention to keep up with the story, but it's worth it.
January 2, 2012
Loved it way more than I thought I would. Slow paced, inner journey without a lot of "action" but well worth the voyage!
May 20, 2018
Nice scifi book with a twist
This book was an enjoyable exploration of outer and inner space. It tackles some difficult philosophical questions and addresses the problem of suffering from a Christian perspective.
This book was an enjoyable exploration of outer and inner space. It tackles some difficult philosophical questions and addresses the problem of suffering from a Christian perspective.
March 13, 2020
Well, this is probably one of the most unique books that I've ever read.
The story was really well done, very interesting.
I've discovered through this book that I hate third person/present tense writing. However, this book was good enough that it kept me reading despite that.
November 25, 2010
There is much science fiction created to marvel at mankind's power and potential, perhaps with a nod to purpose (the purpose of mankind). Artificial intelligence certainly qualifies as a great achievement and, with the IBM-rules-the-world days behind us, the stories have become more sympathetic to AI characters: the intelligence we create might be likened to an innocent child. It follows that humans are the AIs parents, creators, and gods. The questions of emotion, especially love, and whether the AI can share in what makes us human may play a major role in the plot. There is one question most authors don't ask, though: a question that a curious AI would certainly ask, that the authors shy away from in real life. They don't write AIs who look beyond humanity as their creators. They don't write AIs who ask the questions every human asks. They don't write AIs who seek God.
With apologies to the Droid commercials... Baines Does®. Sorry, couldn't resist.
The story begins with the launch of the Comet, a prototype spaceship which will make several hops at near-lightspeed, gather data in the Alpha Centauri system, and return to Earth after several years. Brett Denton is the only passenger on this fully-automated ship, a guinea pig to examine the trip's effects on the human body. He begins a cycle of hyper-sleeping in a special fluid-filled chamber for two month periods, then reconditioning himself during the month he's awake (when the ship cruises at 0.5% lightspeed) so he can withstand the next jump. This first mission to other stars is anything but easy on the traveler, and Baines does a good job portraying the challenges behind such a high-velocity trip, such as time dilation and effects on mass. During his periods awake, Brett interacts with the ship's AI computer, which he names "Jay." Jay, observing Brett, begins to ask the usual AI-to-man questions, including love, a question which Brett resists due to his own emotional scars.
For those who enjoyed the flashbacks in the ABC show LOST, we're treated to a similar device in Alpha Redemption. Brett is getting younger with each jump, and the flashbacks change accordingly: When Brett is physically 31 (18 years younger) on the journey, we see a glimpse of his life when he was 31 the first time around, progressing backward into his childhood. Our understanding of Brett's character is mainly driven by these flashbacks. We meet his wife, Rochelle, and their sons, experiencing important events in Brett's life which led him to where he is now. Sometimes Baines focuses more on these flashbacks than the present day; admittedly, I found this annoying whenever I couldn't figure out how they synced-up; and I was eager to return to the present day where there's a science-fiction story going on. Patience is rewarded, though, as the flashbacks and present day flow together in the end.
The strongest point I give this book is the immersive narration. We feel the pain on Brett's first wake-up. We taste the gas coming through the hose (mmm... watermelon). We experience his shock to the plane crash. We relate to his interaction with Jay. Not all of these points are strong, though, as placenames familiar to the main character are given generically: "his apartment block," "a main road," "the coastline," etc. I didn't know where the flashbacks were supposed to be set, and it hampered my enjoyment of the story.
This reviewer thinks too much like a computer for his own good and, of course, related more to Jay than the actual human. :) Some of the interaction, such as Brett's repeated accusations of "lying by omission" irritated me to no end, even though it seemed appropriate to Brett's character. Yes, Jay was genuinely annoying at times, toward the beginning when he didn't know better. His gradual...eh... maturity (he already seemed kinda self-aware) is well portrayed and believable, as well as his growing curiosity. AI = Child, yes? In time, Jay comes to think of the Comet as his body, sensing the space around him and feeling vulnerable to it.
I highly recommend this book to those looking for science-fiction with a Christian message. The book goes from a few fleeting references to faith in the early chapters to Rochelle's full-blown Jesus obsession later (rather, earlier) on, which may be jarring for non-believers... so no pretending this is a mainstream novel when you want to witness-by-fiction. ;) All in all, I think the world needs more stories like this. I'll be watching P.A. Baines for future releases.
With apologies to the Droid commercials... Baines Does®. Sorry, couldn't resist.
The story begins with the launch of the Comet, a prototype spaceship which will make several hops at near-lightspeed, gather data in the Alpha Centauri system, and return to Earth after several years. Brett Denton is the only passenger on this fully-automated ship, a guinea pig to examine the trip's effects on the human body. He begins a cycle of hyper-sleeping in a special fluid-filled chamber for two month periods, then reconditioning himself during the month he's awake (when the ship cruises at 0.5% lightspeed) so he can withstand the next jump. This first mission to other stars is anything but easy on the traveler, and Baines does a good job portraying the challenges behind such a high-velocity trip, such as time dilation and effects on mass. During his periods awake, Brett interacts with the ship's AI computer, which he names "Jay." Jay, observing Brett, begins to ask the usual AI-to-man questions, including love, a question which Brett resists due to his own emotional scars.
For those who enjoyed the flashbacks in the ABC show LOST, we're treated to a similar device in Alpha Redemption. Brett is getting younger with each jump, and the flashbacks change accordingly: When Brett is physically 31 (18 years younger) on the journey, we see a glimpse of his life when he was 31 the first time around, progressing backward into his childhood. Our understanding of Brett's character is mainly driven by these flashbacks. We meet his wife, Rochelle, and their sons, experiencing important events in Brett's life which led him to where he is now. Sometimes Baines focuses more on these flashbacks than the present day; admittedly, I found this annoying whenever I couldn't figure out how they synced-up; and I was eager to return to the present day where there's a science-fiction story going on. Patience is rewarded, though, as the flashbacks and present day flow together in the end.
The strongest point I give this book is the immersive narration. We feel the pain on Brett's first wake-up. We taste the gas coming through the hose (mmm... watermelon). We experience his shock to the plane crash. We relate to his interaction with Jay. Not all of these points are strong, though, as placenames familiar to the main character are given generically: "his apartment block," "a main road," "the coastline," etc. I didn't know where the flashbacks were supposed to be set, and it hampered my enjoyment of the story.
This reviewer thinks too much like a computer for his own good and, of course, related more to Jay than the actual human. :) Some of the interaction, such as Brett's repeated accusations of "lying by omission" irritated me to no end, even though it seemed appropriate to Brett's character. Yes, Jay was genuinely annoying at times, toward the beginning when he didn't know better. His gradual...eh... maturity (he already seemed kinda self-aware) is well portrayed and believable, as well as his growing curiosity. AI = Child, yes? In time, Jay comes to think of the Comet as his body, sensing the space around him and feeling vulnerable to it.
I highly recommend this book to those looking for science-fiction with a Christian message. The book goes from a few fleeting references to faith in the early chapters to Rochelle's full-blown Jesus obsession later (rather, earlier) on, which may be jarring for non-believers... so no pretending this is a mainstream novel when you want to witness-by-fiction. ;) All in all, I think the world needs more stories like this. I'll be watching P.A. Baines for future releases.
September 29, 2010
I've always enjoyed a good story about people exploring space. When I heard that P. A. Baine's book, Alpha Redemption, was about a man traveling to Alpha Centauri, naturally it perked my interest. I also heard about the computer aboard this ship, called the Comet, and rumors of similarities to Arthur C. Clarke's 2001: A Space Odyssey. As I read it, indeed there were similarities, as well as major differences. I believe it would be of help in deciding if this is the book for you, to list those.
Similarities revolve around a computer on the trip developing sentience and a sense of self-preservation. Another similarity would involve giving away the plot, thus giving you no reason to read for yourself. And of course both are set in space, and above all, while both have some elements of tension to them, neither is what you would call a high action type book. Rather, like 2001, it has a decidedly "inner space" philosophical/theological journey as the book progresses.
Indeed, one of the striking similarities is in the style of writing. Baines isn't quite as descriptive as Clarke was, but the pacing and feel of the book is very similar to 2001. The reader gets to experience the day-to-day life on the ship, and the cycle of life in space. I'm not an expert on such things, but the details felt very authentic to me, given he's using the science fiction conventions of artificial gravity.
Where it differed with Clarke's 2001 is the direction Baines takes the story. Whereas Clarke's story headed into a more secular "we'll all evolve into a god-like creature," Alpha takes us into a different direction—in a decidedly Christian direction—and in an very unconventional manner. And does so convincingly. Though toward the end the changes happened a little too fast for my taste, overall it provided a believable story on one man's inner journey to escape his past, only to run headlong into the future.
Likewise, whereas Hal, the computer from 2001, went berserk and attempted to kill everyone on board, Jay, the computer running the Comet, works to save the life of his passenger. The book is about Jay's journey as much as Brett's, and is one of the more interesting elements of the story.
Another area of difference is this story adds a plot element not found in 2001. For Brett, in signing onto this mission, is as much running from something as he is trying to go down in history. And Baines introduces a parallel storyline that slowly reveals Brett's past in a manner that relates to what he experiences on the trip to Alpha Centauri. Watching as Baines weaves this alternate storyline into the main one, very deftly I might add, provided another of the interests as I read.
If there is one thing that stands out to me about this book, it is the interesting relationship between Brett and Jay, as well as Jay's own growing awareness not only of himself, but God. Like a child learning truths for the first time, this prototype computer ends up stealing the show, in more ways than one.
It's for those reasons that I can recommend this book if you are someone who enjoyed Clarke's 2001: A Space Odyssey. Personally, I had a hard time with 2001, due to the slow pace. So this one was a bit of work for me, especially at the beginning. I'm addicted to tension in a story, and while this has some, it isn't the standard kind of tension. The tension in this story revolves around the relationship between Brett and Jay, and while it starts out slow, the tension grows until it hits big in the end.
So while personally I'd give this a three on a scale of one to five for my own preferences, for those who enjoy a story with the style and pacing of 2001, this falls into a solid four, even a five for many.
Note: This book was given to me by the publisher for the purpose of reviewing it.
Similarities revolve around a computer on the trip developing sentience and a sense of self-preservation. Another similarity would involve giving away the plot, thus giving you no reason to read for yourself. And of course both are set in space, and above all, while both have some elements of tension to them, neither is what you would call a high action type book. Rather, like 2001, it has a decidedly "inner space" philosophical/theological journey as the book progresses.
Indeed, one of the striking similarities is in the style of writing. Baines isn't quite as descriptive as Clarke was, but the pacing and feel of the book is very similar to 2001. The reader gets to experience the day-to-day life on the ship, and the cycle of life in space. I'm not an expert on such things, but the details felt very authentic to me, given he's using the science fiction conventions of artificial gravity.
Where it differed with Clarke's 2001 is the direction Baines takes the story. Whereas Clarke's story headed into a more secular "we'll all evolve into a god-like creature," Alpha takes us into a different direction—in a decidedly Christian direction—and in an very unconventional manner. And does so convincingly. Though toward the end the changes happened a little too fast for my taste, overall it provided a believable story on one man's inner journey to escape his past, only to run headlong into the future.
Likewise, whereas Hal, the computer from 2001, went berserk and attempted to kill everyone on board, Jay, the computer running the Comet, works to save the life of his passenger. The book is about Jay's journey as much as Brett's, and is one of the more interesting elements of the story.
Another area of difference is this story adds a plot element not found in 2001. For Brett, in signing onto this mission, is as much running from something as he is trying to go down in history. And Baines introduces a parallel storyline that slowly reveals Brett's past in a manner that relates to what he experiences on the trip to Alpha Centauri. Watching as Baines weaves this alternate storyline into the main one, very deftly I might add, provided another of the interests as I read.
If there is one thing that stands out to me about this book, it is the interesting relationship between Brett and Jay, as well as Jay's own growing awareness not only of himself, but God. Like a child learning truths for the first time, this prototype computer ends up stealing the show, in more ways than one.
It's for those reasons that I can recommend this book if you are someone who enjoyed Clarke's 2001: A Space Odyssey. Personally, I had a hard time with 2001, due to the slow pace. So this one was a bit of work for me, especially at the beginning. I'm addicted to tension in a story, and while this has some, it isn't the standard kind of tension. The tension in this story revolves around the relationship between Brett and Jay, and while it starts out slow, the tension grows until it hits big in the end.
So while personally I'd give this a three on a scale of one to five for my own preferences, for those who enjoy a story with the style and pacing of 2001, this falls into a solid four, even a five for many.
Note: This book was given to me by the publisher for the purpose of reviewing it.
October 27, 2010
The first near-lightspeed spaceship is accelerating toward Alpha Centauri, guided by an artificial intelligence and carrying a single passenger. Brett has volunteered for what may well be a one-way mission, trying to restore some shred of meaning to his shattered life. The AI, “Jay,” mimics a human mind and personality–it’s designed to learn, and has the potential to surpass its programming. Something–or someone–is waiting for them in the darkness of space, and the encounter will change both Brett and Jay forever.
P. A. Baines’ debut novel, Alpha Redemption, is a thoughtful, emotional story, full of wonder and mystery. Though it’s set in the future, the speculative window-dressing takes back seat to a tale about grief, coming to terms with loss, and the meaning and nature of redemption, a word we blithely toss about in both secular and religious society without thinking too deeply about it. Baines asks what it might cost to restore a life in shambles and obtain an opportunity to begin again. His answer involves a journey of both spiritual and physical transformation that left me pondering the story’s outcome for a long time after I finished reading.
In a series of flashbacks that go further back in time as the ship nears its destination, we discover more about Brett and the details of the tragedy that defines his life and has driven him to volunteer for this risky mission. In the present, we watch Jay learn from Brett what it means to be human–a parallel journey from programming to sentience, and from student to teacher. When an unexpected crisis threatens their mission, both occupants of the spacecraft must make a decision that will complete their respective transformations and seal their fates.
I enjoyed Alpha Redemption. Some of the speculative elements will be very familiar to readers of the genre. There are echoes of 2001: A Space Odyssey, but the focus on the characters’ inner journeys is distinctive, and the human and AI are partners, not antagonists. Baines does a nice job developing their relationship into something much deeper than simple comradeship.
Some plot elements were a bit of a stretch, at least at first glance. Brett is little more than a passenger, but so were the first astronauts–it took a few flights for their participation to progress to more than symbolic actions, and the old jokes about “ham in a can” weren’t that far off the mark. Brett also seemed a little old, in his mid-forties, for a mission of this nature, but again, it’s not unusual for astronauts who entered the service in their twenties and thirties to have to wait until their forties before they make it to the front of the line. Selection criteria for Brett’s mission remained shrouded in mystery, as were the details of the star drive. The unusual effects of near-lightspeed travel did reflect some recent observations of subatomic particles accelerated to those speeds in the laboratory. Bottom line, even though the science in this story played only a supporting role, it wasn’t tossed about willy-nilly and didn’t feel far-fetched.
There’s not a lot of bang-zoom action, but if, like me, you prefer science fiction stories that make you think, feel, and wonder, Alpha Redemption might just be the ticket to the stars you’ve been looking for.
Alpha Redemption is available in both print and electronic format from Splashdown Books, or via Amazon.com, Barnes&Noble.com, and smashwords.com.
>>This review is based upon an electronic copy of the book provided to me free of charge by the publisher, a courtesy I appreciate, but which does not guarantee my recommendation. I strive to evaluate every book I review purely on its intrinsic merits.<<
P. A. Baines’ debut novel, Alpha Redemption, is a thoughtful, emotional story, full of wonder and mystery. Though it’s set in the future, the speculative window-dressing takes back seat to a tale about grief, coming to terms with loss, and the meaning and nature of redemption, a word we blithely toss about in both secular and religious society without thinking too deeply about it. Baines asks what it might cost to restore a life in shambles and obtain an opportunity to begin again. His answer involves a journey of both spiritual and physical transformation that left me pondering the story’s outcome for a long time after I finished reading.
In a series of flashbacks that go further back in time as the ship nears its destination, we discover more about Brett and the details of the tragedy that defines his life and has driven him to volunteer for this risky mission. In the present, we watch Jay learn from Brett what it means to be human–a parallel journey from programming to sentience, and from student to teacher. When an unexpected crisis threatens their mission, both occupants of the spacecraft must make a decision that will complete their respective transformations and seal their fates.
I enjoyed Alpha Redemption. Some of the speculative elements will be very familiar to readers of the genre. There are echoes of 2001: A Space Odyssey, but the focus on the characters’ inner journeys is distinctive, and the human and AI are partners, not antagonists. Baines does a nice job developing their relationship into something much deeper than simple comradeship.
Some plot elements were a bit of a stretch, at least at first glance. Brett is little more than a passenger, but so were the first astronauts–it took a few flights for their participation to progress to more than symbolic actions, and the old jokes about “ham in a can” weren’t that far off the mark. Brett also seemed a little old, in his mid-forties, for a mission of this nature, but again, it’s not unusual for astronauts who entered the service in their twenties and thirties to have to wait until their forties before they make it to the front of the line. Selection criteria for Brett’s mission remained shrouded in mystery, as were the details of the star drive. The unusual effects of near-lightspeed travel did reflect some recent observations of subatomic particles accelerated to those speeds in the laboratory. Bottom line, even though the science in this story played only a supporting role, it wasn’t tossed about willy-nilly and didn’t feel far-fetched.
There’s not a lot of bang-zoom action, but if, like me, you prefer science fiction stories that make you think, feel, and wonder, Alpha Redemption might just be the ticket to the stars you’ve been looking for.
Alpha Redemption is available in both print and electronic format from Splashdown Books, or via Amazon.com, Barnes&Noble.com, and smashwords.com.
>>This review is based upon an electronic copy of the book provided to me free of charge by the publisher, a courtesy I appreciate, but which does not guarantee my recommendation. I strive to evaluate every book I review purely on its intrinsic merits.<<
July 8, 2015
Alpha Redemption had the feel of '2001 A Space Odyssey' and 'The Curious Case of Benjamin Button' movies combined into one story. I don’t normally read science fiction, but when the ACFW On-Line book club voted this novel as their April 2011 selection, (and since I’m a member) I stepped out of my comfort zone and read it! I’m glad I did. I’m thankful for the review copy and for the book club experience that introduces me to new authors and stretches me to read genres I normally wouldn’t.
Each chapter of this book begins with Elasped Mission time on earth and Relative time on the Comet. This helps the reader keep track of the duration of the mission. When the ship goes into light speed, Brett has to go into a sleep chamber, lay in yellow goo, shut himself in and go to sleep as the ship travels on to it’s destination.
One of the advantages forty-five year old Brett has going for him in being picked for this mission, is the fact that he is a man who had lost everything and everyone that would keep him tied to planet Earth.
Unlike '2001 A Space Odyssey' movie where the ship took over, this ship - named Jay - wanted to learn as much as it could about humans, their emotions, sayings, relationships and God. I enjoyed Jay and Brett’s banter. Brett struggles to figure out ways to explain things to Jay as "he" asks questions.
“Humans are very interesting…you believe it’s your fault they died, so if you had stayed…you think they would be alive?
God knows-maybe-yes! Brett snapped.
If God knows, why don’t you ask Him?
It’s just an expression, Jay. There is no God! Look, I don’t want to talk about this alright?
Certainly, Brett, although I did have some questions about Jesus. I read the bible. He is very interesting to me.
No God; No Jesus. They don’t exist. Just Drop it.”
Jay is forcing Brett to think about things he hadn’t thought about in years. The last thing he wanted to think about was God; someone he couldn’t count on. I enjoyed Jay and Brett's talks about God and being human. It makes me think about deep things. Each chapter is written in the present and then things flip to the past as Brett reflects on his journey in becoming the most unlikely astronaut. This adds depth and insight into Brett the man and gives the reader a renewed look at Brett as he answers Jay’s questions.
P.A. Baines pens a fascinating, heart-felt, Sci-Fi story that follows a man who’s lost everything he loved and has embarked on a new mission that had no guarantees of returning to earth...all for the sake of science and finding other life forms. To Brett’s surprise, he got more than he bargained for, and I did too! This was a fun and enjoyable read with many twists and turns. P. A. Baines surprised me right up until the last page. I like that! You will too!
Disclosure of Material Connection:
I received a complimentary copy of this book from the publisher. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising”
Nora St.Laurent
The Book Club Network www.bookfun.org
The Book Club Network blog www.psalm516.blogspot.com
Book Fun Magazine www.bookfunmagazine.com
Each chapter of this book begins with Elasped Mission time on earth and Relative time on the Comet. This helps the reader keep track of the duration of the mission. When the ship goes into light speed, Brett has to go into a sleep chamber, lay in yellow goo, shut himself in and go to sleep as the ship travels on to it’s destination.
One of the advantages forty-five year old Brett has going for him in being picked for this mission, is the fact that he is a man who had lost everything and everyone that would keep him tied to planet Earth.
Unlike '2001 A Space Odyssey' movie where the ship took over, this ship - named Jay - wanted to learn as much as it could about humans, their emotions, sayings, relationships and God. I enjoyed Jay and Brett’s banter. Brett struggles to figure out ways to explain things to Jay as "he" asks questions.
“Humans are very interesting…you believe it’s your fault they died, so if you had stayed…you think they would be alive?
God knows-maybe-yes! Brett snapped.
If God knows, why don’t you ask Him?
It’s just an expression, Jay. There is no God! Look, I don’t want to talk about this alright?
Certainly, Brett, although I did have some questions about Jesus. I read the bible. He is very interesting to me.
No God; No Jesus. They don’t exist. Just Drop it.”
Jay is forcing Brett to think about things he hadn’t thought about in years. The last thing he wanted to think about was God; someone he couldn’t count on. I enjoyed Jay and Brett's talks about God and being human. It makes me think about deep things. Each chapter is written in the present and then things flip to the past as Brett reflects on his journey in becoming the most unlikely astronaut. This adds depth and insight into Brett the man and gives the reader a renewed look at Brett as he answers Jay’s questions.
P.A. Baines pens a fascinating, heart-felt, Sci-Fi story that follows a man who’s lost everything he loved and has embarked on a new mission that had no guarantees of returning to earth...all for the sake of science and finding other life forms. To Brett’s surprise, he got more than he bargained for, and I did too! This was a fun and enjoyable read with many twists and turns. P. A. Baines surprised me right up until the last page. I like that! You will too!
Disclosure of Material Connection:
I received a complimentary copy of this book from the publisher. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising”
Nora St.Laurent
The Book Club Network www.bookfun.org
The Book Club Network blog www.psalm516.blogspot.com
Book Fun Magazine www.bookfunmagazine.com
July 18, 2014
The Synopsis:
From despair he fled, through tragedy he lived on, and journeyed to innocence.
His trajectory: the stars. His companion: a computer poised at the brink of sentience.
An unlikely friendship on a prototype spaceship at lightspeed towards Alpha Centauri, and redemption.
When Brett loses everything in a tragic accident, he gladly accepts an invitation to take part in a prototype speed-of-light trip to Alpha Centauri, knowing that he may not survive. His only companion is the ship's on-board computer, Jay. At first he finds Jay an annoyance but, as time passes, the two become friends. With the voyage drawing to a close, Jay develops a sense of self-awareness and a belief in God. When it becomes clear that they cannot both survive the return trip, one of them must make the ultimate sacrifice.
My Thoughts:
Alpha Redemption is a slow book. Fortunately, in this case, that's a compliment! There's a bit of tension about two-thirds of the way through, as well as at the end, but for the most part, it's about a guy in a spaceship who hangs out, teaches the computer about emotions, and...
Ah, if I told you what else happens, that'd be a major spoiler. Can't do that, now can I? Let's just say that in the beginning of the book, we know nothing about Brett's backstory--who he is, why he's important, or why he volunteered to take such a dangerous job. But the further along the story progresses, the more backstory we get. And the way the backstory ties in with the main plot is sheer genius.
Another neat thing about Alpha Redemption is how it raises questions about life, God, and even--to me, at least--about artificial intelligence developing emotions and self-awareness (more on that in an upcoming post). It's definitely a book you want to hand to friend and family and say, "Hey, read this--I want to talk about it with someone. What do you think?"
The writing is quite good for a first-time book and the content is family-friendly, which as always, is awesome! Alpha Redemption is a definite must-read for fans of science fiction!
From despair he fled, through tragedy he lived on, and journeyed to innocence.
His trajectory: the stars. His companion: a computer poised at the brink of sentience.
An unlikely friendship on a prototype spaceship at lightspeed towards Alpha Centauri, and redemption.
When Brett loses everything in a tragic accident, he gladly accepts an invitation to take part in a prototype speed-of-light trip to Alpha Centauri, knowing that he may not survive. His only companion is the ship's on-board computer, Jay. At first he finds Jay an annoyance but, as time passes, the two become friends. With the voyage drawing to a close, Jay develops a sense of self-awareness and a belief in God. When it becomes clear that they cannot both survive the return trip, one of them must make the ultimate sacrifice.
My Thoughts:
Alpha Redemption is a slow book. Fortunately, in this case, that's a compliment! There's a bit of tension about two-thirds of the way through, as well as at the end, but for the most part, it's about a guy in a spaceship who hangs out, teaches the computer about emotions, and...
Ah, if I told you what else happens, that'd be a major spoiler. Can't do that, now can I? Let's just say that in the beginning of the book, we know nothing about Brett's backstory--who he is, why he's important, or why he volunteered to take such a dangerous job. But the further along the story progresses, the more backstory we get. And the way the backstory ties in with the main plot is sheer genius.
Another neat thing about Alpha Redemption is how it raises questions about life, God, and even--to me, at least--about artificial intelligence developing emotions and self-awareness (more on that in an upcoming post). It's definitely a book you want to hand to friend and family and say, "Hey, read this--I want to talk about it with someone. What do you think?"
The writing is quite good for a first-time book and the content is family-friendly, which as always, is awesome! Alpha Redemption is a definite must-read for fans of science fiction!
August 11, 2011
Ever fantasize about being on a manned space mission? Brett Denton didn’t. Not until tragedy struck his family and he had no reason to stay on Earth. Nothing to lose, nothing to gain. The perfect choice for a mission with no guarantees.
As Brett travels through space in Alpha Redemption, he endures sessions of immersion in a gooey pool, in which he sleeps during the faster-than-light portions of the trip. In between, he spends time reading, working out, eating, and getting to know the ship’s computer, whom he names Jay. Jay has been programmed to desire knowledge. As the trip wears on, Jay becomes curious about many things, including God, whom Brett has no use for since his family tragedy.
Besides the development of this unlikely friendship over the journey, strange things happen to Brett. With each successive awake period, Brett gets a little younger in real time. And with each successive sleep period, Brett relives the portion of his life that corresponds with his younger self. This has the strange effect of time stretching in both directions at the same time from the novel’s start point. This gets a bit tricky, but Baines manages to keep it together and interesting even when the reader is hurtling backwards in time.
As Brett travels through space in Alpha Redemption, he endures sessions of immersion in a gooey pool, in which he sleeps during the faster-than-light portions of the trip. In between, he spends time reading, working out, eating, and getting to know the ship’s computer, whom he names Jay. Jay has been programmed to desire knowledge. As the trip wears on, Jay becomes curious about many things, including God, whom Brett has no use for since his family tragedy.
Besides the development of this unlikely friendship over the journey, strange things happen to Brett. With each successive awake period, Brett gets a little younger in real time. And with each successive sleep period, Brett relives the portion of his life that corresponds with his younger self. This has the strange effect of time stretching in both directions at the same time from the novel’s start point. This gets a bit tricky, but Baines manages to keep it together and interesting even when the reader is hurtling backwards in time.
May 13, 2012
This book just wasn't my cup of tea.
It was well written and kept me engaged for the first third of the book, but it lost me after that for several reasons. First, I was reading this for the science fiction and AI elements so the flashbacks that created the back story of the family life of the frankly not very interesting main character felt like they belonged in some other book. Secondly, the AI turned out to not be that interesting either. There wasn't much 'I' in this 'AI'. Third, it takes a detour off into a discussion of God that somehow left a bad taste in my mouth. Fourth, while in many sci-fi books you have to suspend your disbelief about some aspects, there were just a few too many of those here for me to stay engaged in the plot line. Describing the most irritating ones would be spoilers so I won't do that. Lastly, I thought this had a couple of interesting (though not original) ideas that it might have worked as a 50 page short story, but, for me, there weren't nearly enough of them to stretch this to 250 pages.
If you enjoy the works of Iain M. Banks or Neal Asher or William Gibson I can't imagine how this novel would hold your interest.
But, this has many 4 and 5 star ratings, so clearly my opinion is an outlier.
It was well written and kept me engaged for the first third of the book, but it lost me after that for several reasons. First, I was reading this for the science fiction and AI elements so the flashbacks that created the back story of the family life of the frankly not very interesting main character felt like they belonged in some other book. Secondly, the AI turned out to not be that interesting either. There wasn't much 'I' in this 'AI'. Third, it takes a detour off into a discussion of God that somehow left a bad taste in my mouth. Fourth, while in many sci-fi books you have to suspend your disbelief about some aspects, there were just a few too many of those here for me to stay engaged in the plot line. Describing the most irritating ones would be spoilers so I won't do that. Lastly, I thought this had a couple of interesting (though not original) ideas that it might have worked as a 50 page short story, but, for me, there weren't nearly enough of them to stretch this to 250 pages.
If you enjoy the works of Iain M. Banks or Neal Asher or William Gibson I can't imagine how this novel would hold your interest.
But, this has many 4 and 5 star ratings, so clearly my opinion is an outlier.
May 12, 2011
This science-fiction books was strongly recommended to me by authors/readers whose opinions I greatly respect.
I enjoyed 98 per cent of the book very much. I didn't like one percent of it, which is when the narrations switched from the present time on the spaceship going nearly as fast as light speed and the past experiences of the sole human on the ship. In variably, I wanted to stay with whichever story thread I was already in at that moment.
The other one percent which I didn't like involves about the last two pages. I wish the author had stopped writing before those last pages. I really can't say more without spoiling a significant part of the plot.
In any case, I think I'll treat this the way I do the "Alien" films. In that case, for me, the first two films happened as shown. The third and any subsequent films do not exist in my universe. Neither do the last two pages of Alpha Redemption. (Hey! You, too, can do this! Try it sometime!)
I enjoyed 98 per cent of the book very much. I didn't like one percent of it, which is when the narrations switched from the present time on the spaceship going nearly as fast as light speed and the past experiences of the sole human on the ship. In variably, I wanted to stay with whichever story thread I was already in at that moment.
The other one percent which I didn't like involves about the last two pages. I wish the author had stopped writing before those last pages. I really can't say more without spoiling a significant part of the plot.
In any case, I think I'll treat this the way I do the "Alien" films. In that case, for me, the first two films happened as shown. The third and any subsequent films do not exist in my universe. Neither do the last two pages of Alpha Redemption. (Hey! You, too, can do this! Try it sometime!)
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July 21, 2011AWESOME!
October 8, 2012
A good book with lots of emotional tension. Starts off kind of slow but builds.
August 6, 2025
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April 25, 2017
Clever, novel idea about human self-discovery in the context of space flight.
This book puts a solitary human on a flight gradually accelerating to near-light speed. Well, kind of solitary; the computer along for the ride gradually becomes a secondary character that makes for an interesting canvas on which to paint interesting inquiries into the nature of consciousness, self, and God. (God with a capital-G, arising from the association with the God of Christianity.)
Though not all will be super-thrilled about the Christian God aspects of the book (which were not a problem for my belief system), any good sci-fi reader ought to enjoy the thoughtful exploration, as well as the resolution, of many of the thoughts explored in the book.
This book puts a solitary human on a flight gradually accelerating to near-light speed. Well, kind of solitary; the computer along for the ride gradually becomes a secondary character that makes for an interesting canvas on which to paint interesting inquiries into the nature of consciousness, self, and God. (God with a capital-G, arising from the association with the God of Christianity.)
Though not all will be super-thrilled about the Christian God aspects of the book (which were not a problem for my belief system), any good sci-fi reader ought to enjoy the thoughtful exploration, as well as the resolution, of many of the thoughts explored in the book.
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