Summary: Josh orders Sam to deliver packages to people as it's revealed Josh has malicious intentions, Ed is making good progress with walking but has to keep it a secret for Heather's sake, Gaia and Tom spend time together before Tom is forced off to do another agency mission, Heather is still dealing with financial problems, Loki escapes prison, and the book ends with Gaia crying over her father leaving her again.
Tears is ever so mediocre, yet still so bad in every other way possible. It's not like I'll stop anytime soon, however.
1) The forged chemistry lab sign-in sheet did work, but had the detectives actually question the teacher that Sam supposedly had class with, it would render the sheet worthless regardless if Sam really was innocent about Mike's murder.
2) I'm getting so frustrated at having Sam wimping out on telling his accusations to Josh. All this bad communication between characters is really mind blowing to be honest.
3) Gaia mentions that she and Sam barely started dating when he starts "standing her up". Keep in mind, Gaia desires sex with him even when they finally begun a relationship together.
4) I admittedly felt warm inside when Ed first began gaining control of his legs. It was the only feel good moment thus far.
5) Gaia assumes shoplifting happens when she wears a dress despite that the shoplifting was going to take place whether or not Gaia tried on something ridiculous.
6) "He knew that a relationship with the opposite sex was all about building trust."
You could say that about any kind of relationship whatsoever whether it's straight or not. This should also be common sense.
7) Why does every new character in Fearless have to be evil or die eventually? Couldn't Josh finally avert the cliche and actually be one of Sam's close friends that is more than happy to help him with his problems regardless if it the way he solves them are less than moral? Why did you have to make him work for Loki?
8) Has there been one complicated classic that Gaia hasn't read when she was a freaking kid?
9) So far the only thing meaningful in Fearless is how it can teach people new words in different languages. On the other hand it also teaches how to not write YA literature.
10) If Tom sensed something was wrong with Gaia, why didn't he bother asking her what was on her mind? It could have better strengthened their daughter-father bond and would resolve issues quicker.
11) With all the sugar Gaia's consuming I wonder how she hasn't gained weight or any other health problems. Krispy Kreme aren't THAT healthy to ingest multiple times a week. Or is avoiding health issues one of Gaia's many Mary Sue abilities?
12) Gaia deserved to get shat on by a pigeon.
13) Gaia deems positive pregnancy test to be "all things bad". For starters, she doesn't know any lives of the women who take pregnancy tests. Maybe more than a few of females who get positive results from their tests actually DO desire children, you ever think of that?
14) Why would Gaia go ahead and insult handicapped people right in front of Ed? True, it was to get his attention but she didn't have to result to something so scumbaggy.
15) The scene where Loki escapes jail was entirely idiotic (in fact, the jailing facility as a whole counts). Just some questions:
- Why weren't there better security such as cameras in each of the jail cells/hallways?
- If Loki is so dangerous, why couldn't he be put in a more secure cell in the first place? I honestly think Loki is a perfect fit for solitary confinement.
- Why couldn't Loki be shipped off to a more high security prison like ADX Florence?
- If there were guards on constant watch, I don't think Loki would be able to get away with his escape attempt.
- That woman should have been fired for helping a prisoner escape AND giving gifts to prisoners without them being examined first. Why hasn't anyone reported her behavior?
- And yes, since this claims to be a high security prison, I would expect the prison staff to thoroughly inspect the packages sent to prisoners. Letters, for the most part, are fine for them to receive but the matches and kerosene would have been confiscated on the spot. Loki wouldn't have escaped if that was the case but I guess this jail is poorly run.
- I think a jail this poorly run should be investigated.
- Honestly this escape scene was so irritating and stupid.
16) Tom thinks the agency he works for is blackmailing him with his daughter's life for him to cooperate with him. I disagree, as the dangerous missions would badly injure Gaia and they're supposedly top secret anyway so family members shouldn't be let in to help the agents anyway. Also, it's Tom's job so he if he's had to unexpectedly leave many times before he shouldn't really be complaining.
17) Guess who's so noble and heroic that they still won't bother to help Heather with her money problem? If you guessed Gaia, you are absolutely correct.
18) Gaia runs out of the house after being devastated that her father left her again with the water in the bathtub still running. It's always nice to see Gaia wasting water/leaving it to overflow for the sake of emotional drama.
19) Why would Loki hire some random crooks to kidnap Gaia? He's seen Gaia in combat before, he should have hired someone more trained like Mr. Xi's assassin. He's only angry because he's unwilling to acknowledge his dumb mistake.
This one of the most idiotic Fearless books I've read so far...