This story has quite a bad reputation among fans and there's still the mystery of who actually adapted/wrote it. It is an idea from Christopher H Bidmead and throughout I was wondering which parts was his idea, possibly the additional science stuff. Christopher H Bidmead is a nice guy but most of his era is all let's gets kids into science but not actually explain it to them because you should already know about it. But having said that, this story never really dragged for me.
There are some stories which I love that often drag however this did flow nicely for about 2 hours. The structure of the story, sometimes characters and the final reveals is alittle boring but it's fun at times. Theres numerous plots here, American war history, PTSD, changing timelines and mini Daleks. Some are more interesting than others. There is some great ideas here, the mini toy Daleks that have actual Daleks in them is a great fun idea and here it's more hilariously ridiculous. But I did like it.
There is also an idea about how the Daleks have found a way to change history by making everyone want to fight each other. Projecting images and voices into there heads. This is a great idea of how the Daleks are minupluting wars and humanity but there is a big problem that I see. 1. This is real history and your showing some serious moments such as a character who was a black slave who I did enjoy but with some historical inaccuracies, however it does work with the context of this story and has some truth to it. So yes already some contridictions are showing up. Meaning that once the Daleks are defeated the Dr willingly returns him back, to his master. Also meaning that the wars must continue and the Dr does nothing. Which I understand it's a time enigma thingy. But it's not really clear near the end of this if this just alternative timeline were the Daleks have slipped in or actually history of earth?
I think my main problems are that the ending doesn't feel like an ending. It's not clear how all these timelines and wars have been minupluted. It's revealed towards the end that the creature the greylish plans to spread Dalek particles and mini Dalek toys around earth in various wars with the hope that they will keep people fighting and somehow kill each other off so they can rule the planet. The idea of having Daleks tricking soldiers into thinking there suffering from PTSD with the voices of war to make them fight and be paranoid about one another is an horrific and interesting idea for them. But the story makes it so over complicated then it really needed to be. Plus we start to get a group of characters one from different wars that do nothing to plot but just be there which is a wasted idea. The end even has one character sacrifice himself to the vortex with the mini Daleks in the crates, but I don't understand why he had to die, this story just makes him do and it somehow allows the Dr to travel back to the Daleks and trick the greylish to sacrifice itself against the Daleks.
Okay fair even but why over complicate things, timelines aside, the story is there but it's all muddled up and still trying to be a story about all this other things.
I'm not saying I could fix this and make it a masterpiece but the ideas are there. So have the Daleks plant these Dalek toys around the timezones of a war (maybe just one war so it's less complicated) to cheer kids up etc and have some be sent as a present to their father's etc fighting in the wars. Have it then be revealed that they have parts of Daleks in them that mess with people's minds and miniupltive them to either keep fighting each other or make the kids say propaganda/hate speech that makes both sides get even madder at one other because to them, the enemy is trying to currpte our children. But we know it's the Daleks, like in Frontier in space. Then at the end when the doctor confronts the emperor dalek who's behind it and reveals his plan is to spread them Daleks across multiple timelines, the Dr does something clever and all timelines are erased and the war goes on as normal.
I'd recommend getting the download for this as its so much cheaper than trying to get an out of print cd and see what you think. It's definitely not the worst big finish audio I've listened to and deffintaly not the worst Dalek audio I've listened to but it's very, in a way unquie.
Rating 2/5 5/10