Read: 11Dec25,
4.4 stars. this was a nice read featuring a snarky 'icehole' of a hero and a smart, beautiful nurse heroine who was able to give as good as she got, but fell for him quite early in the book so was pining a bit for him all the while.
it took me a while to read this one because I misread the blurb and thought Henrietta inherited a castle, and was a bit put off at the idea of such a fortunate heroine. we betty readers like our betty heroines to be struggling a bit in life to build character and prove their mettle! they may be down, but they're never out! anyway, I am glad to say that henrietta inherits only a small house in the middle of rural Holland where the neighbours cant even speak her language, but she gets almost no money and she very much does prove her mettle.
h Henrietta (29) is a tall beautiful nurse, a ward sister, and poor. unwed because she's had offers but she will only marry for love. but in the cusp of 30, she wonders if she has just turned down the last proposal she will ever get and if her dream man even exists. she has no family left and just as she sadly anticipates a lonely future, she is shocked to inherit a house in Holland from an estranged aunt. eager for a change after 10 years of endless working, and with no family to keep her in England, she packs up her trusty old car, Charlie, and heads off for deepest darkest rural Holland.
she arrives on a freezing night to a tiny house in a small village to find no heating or electricity or water. as she is fumbling in the dark trying to locate how to turn them on, a big handsome stranger walks into her cottage. outraged, she bravely orders him to leave. he silkily calls her a hoity toity madam, and insists he is her landlord. she insists he is not. sparks fly. they clearly dislike each other. and yet this supremely annoying handsome man persists in turning on her utilities and fetching firewood and getting her stove all heated up before departing. (ahem, not a euphemism.)
his parting shots are that he wouldn't let even a dog freeze on a night like this, and also that he won't bother to offer her dinner since she is so keen to get rid of him. lol
even so, the next day, he turns up to show her around the village and take her groceries shopping, which ain't such a simple task in ye olde rural backwards Holland, esp as nobody at all speaks a word of English but him. she is miffed at his lordly manner with the locals and miffed again to find he indeed is the 'lord' and lives in the local castle. with a moat.
shortly afterwards, she finds out he is seeing a young local beauty who plays the role of innocent sweetie pie for him but is really a sly and catty little thing.
FULL SPOILERS AHEAD.
so anyway, H Marnix is 40 and a jonkheer and a surgeon and had a relationship go sour many years ago, after which he has never wanted to marry, but now has reached the age when he thinks he should, so he's taken up with the local blond, blue eyed 'sweetie pie'.
despite always snarking at h, he looks out for her and makes sure she is finding her feet in village life. it turns out that her estranged aunt was a good friend to his mother and family. she is saddened to realise that he must only be helping her for her aunt's sake... it doesn't take long for her to realise she has fallen whole heartedly in love, despite their fraught relationship and despite all the time he spends with the young village beauty.
shortly afterwards, a plane crashes nearby and she harnesses her nursing skills to organise his household and an entire village of helpers to work on the injured survivors, a gruelling experience due to the horrific injuries.
meanwhile, little miss sweetie pie OW does nothing to help, claiming she is too fragile even to comfort sobbing babies. but after the hard work is over and ambulances have arrived to take away the patients, henrietta finds Marnix cuddling miss sweetie pie and comforting her for her "ordeal". henrietta is disgusted by how taken in he is with the girl's act and hides her own distress.
but when she runs back home and sobs her heart out, overwhelmed by the horrors she saw, it is him who turns up to hold and comfort her. she pushes him away, telling him that his sweetheart must be waiting for him.
wee see H do things like subtly enquire about h's financials and try to figure out how long she will be staying in Holland, and when going out of his way to find her a suitable job in such a rural location. and we see OW get annoyed about this and snidely belittle the h and do her beat to drive a wedge...
through the story, we see the H's mom hating the sly little sweetie pie and doing what she can to get the h and her son together. we get a side plot with an other man and the whole village gossiping about the h sneaking around with the OM under cover of darkness, thus enraging the extremely jealous H. In reality, the h was secretly helping OM muster up the courage to tell his mom he wants to marry a girl the mom dislikes, and the girl had been secretly staying at h's little house while the couple planned for their future. and little miss sweetie pie fanned the flames of gossip against our h until everyone was talking about it...
ENDING SPOILERS
so... the perfect ending for me would have been if the OW storyline was really pushed to the limits and the H pushed the h too far into heartache and she fled from him and he had to chase her down with all his regrets.
instead we get to see the H react in fury when he thinks h is having an affair with OM and he accuses her of doing the nasty under cover of darkness in an old fashioned village where people like to keep their courting above board. she is outraged at his accusation and yells at him that she never wants to see him again. then he finds out the truth from the OM, but when he apologises, h refuses to forgive him.
they don't speak... until she finds a poor horsie exhausted by a difficult Labour in a farflung field with help nowhere in sight and she has no clue what to do and cant bear to abandon the ailing creature. and she is so immensely releived when Marnix turns up to help. they work together to deliver the foal.She hurries off home afterwards, but Marnix chases her down and declares his love. it was a nice amount of ending for a betty book, not too abrupt. Good to hear him admit he was completely bowled over by her at first sight and since then didn't know whether to love or hate her, whether tondrive her off or beg her to stay, nor what to do with himself. lol.
CONCLUSION
I liked this one a lot because we got the icehole H, who did his best to drive away the woman he was scared to fall for because the last time he fell in love with a strong minded woman, their eventual fights turned the relationship horribly sour in the end. plus we got a h who fell for him anyway and got to see her pining a bit. however, the angst level was fairly low in this one. he never did anything too cruel and was always watching out for her. he did not put her through the mill like Betty's "worst" (best) icehole heroes, and there was never that sense of hopelessness for the h. she always knew the OW was too young and too scheming and sly and coldhearted for the hero and so did the hero's mom. we knew sooner or later he must figure it out, and even before that, his interest was never truly fixed on the OW. I would have loved to see a lot more angst and would have loved if the OW had been older and wiser and truly had her claws hooked well and firmly into the H. I would have liked the angst pushed up a few notches. even so, i enjoyed this book and will probably reread it. also, as a bonus, this book had plenty of humor and banter and funny times seeing the h being amusingly catty in kind to the nasty little OW. Good stuff.