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Only Mr. Darcy Will Do
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Her worst fears come true...
After her father's death, Elizabeth Bennet goes to work as a governess. Little does she know the Willstones are social acquaintances of the Bingleys and the Darcys, and Elizabeth finds herself once again drawn into Mr. Darcy's orbit. To make matters worse, Mrs. Willstone's sister sets her sights on Mr. Darcy. With Elizabeth's social status even lower than it was before, she knows she must abandon all hope of Darcy renewing his proposals, even as she begins to see him in a completely different light...
What readers
"An amazingly good story, beautifully plotted."
"I loved this book... I've already read it twice!"
"Another outstanding Kara Louise story! I read and own everything she has written, and I have never been disappointed."
Her worst fears come true...
After her father's death, Elizabeth Bennet goes to work as a governess. Little does she know the Willstones are social acquaintances of the Bingleys and the Darcys, and Elizabeth finds herself once again drawn into Mr. Darcy's orbit. To make matters worse, Mrs. Willstone's sister sets her sights on Mr. Darcy. With Elizabeth's social status even lower than it was before, she knows she must abandon all hope of Darcy renewing his proposals, even as she begins to see him in a completely different light...
What readers
"An amazingly good story, beautifully plotted."
"I loved this book... I've already read it twice!"
"Another outstanding Kara Louise story! I read and own everything she has written, and I have never been disappointed."
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First published June 30, 2010
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Kara Louise
20 books232 followersKara Louise has been writing "Pride and Prejudice" novels since 2001. She has published 8 novels, 2 that were published by Sourcebooks Publications. She was born in the San Fernando Valley, just north of Los Angeles, but moved to Kansas in 1991. She lives just outside Wichita with her husband, sharing their 10 acres with an ever changing menagerie of animals. They have one married son who lives in St. Louis..
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December 19, 2017
Feb. 2017: I have read this book under the later released publication with a change of title to "Only Mr. Darcy Will Do" at least 3, but maybe 4, times and now have read it again with this initial title. It builds the romance between our beloved couple in a way I find very believable and sweet. I will not repeat the plot as so many reviewers have done so already. And even though I can take or leave sex scenes the omission of such in this book fits with the writing very well. There is plenty of angst but little sexual tension. Darcy is always the gentleman and is very careful to protect Elizabeth's reputation which is in even more jeopardy due to her lowered position in society.
One of my favorite scenes is the chess match between Darcy and Elizabeth. It starts with the fact that when it appears he is losing to Hamilton, who then states the winner will play Elizabeth, Darcy suddenly takes the game seriously and wins. Then he describes the game (Lizzy's "rival" for Darcy's affections is listening in to learn the game) with references to the roles of each piece in such a manner that we and Lizzy know he is talking about their relationship, the failed proposal, etc. Lizzy participates in this dialogue, but others are in the dark as to the double meanings in the conversation. "I once made a move based on what I thought would prompt a particular response, having foolishly considered no other option. I was...gravely mistaken”....Elizabeth - Is there some hidden message to me in those words? ETC.
The next day: Rosalyn goes to Lizzy's employers, Rosalyn's sister and brother-in-law, and makes sure Lizzy is not allowed to spend time after dinner "in company" when she hears Darcy request another chess game with Lizzy.
Another happening that causes angst but also makes one want to cheer are the events leading to Darcy relating to Elizabeth that "I want you to be assured that you have come through this shining like a star, for according to the letter, you were disgusted by my offer." The first page of his letter to Elizabeth after his failed proposal at Hunsford, has been accidentally left in her room at Pemberley, the premises of which she quits to return to London due to Lydia's elopement, Subsequently found by her student and then grabbed by Rosalyn who reads the first line out loud. The letter is grabbed from Rosalyn by Hamilton (another cousin to Darcy) before any other line is read so the full letter is not revealed. Rosalyn starts out to be a good friend to Elizabeth but when Darcy is the "prize" the "cat" comes out - reminding one of Caroline.
Others have made comparisons to Jane Eyre but I find the similarity very slight, basically both having the position of governess and witnessing a woman of higher status trying to gain the hero's attention. But little else is copied. Darcy is NOT attempting to make her jealous and he is NOT her employer and her whole background and history are NOT at all alike. Plus Lizzy has family who support her in opposition to Jane Eyre's having no family who care at all about her circumstances nor have any relationship with her.
Darcy's character vs. the Willstones' and Roslyn's lack of such in their view of the tenants and servants comes out very clearly during a flood in the area. Others have mentioned the cat....which leads to another favorite scene with a hint of sexual tension. Lizzy chases the cat which has escaped the area of confinement and it runs into Darcy's bedroom. When Darcy looks upon Elizabeth standing in the doorway of his bedroom - well, you can imagine where his mind goes.
This is a story that I would recommend to all. Even in re-reading it I found it to be a page turner and hard to put down.
One of my favorite scenes is the chess match between Darcy and Elizabeth. It starts with the fact that when it appears he is losing to Hamilton, who then states the winner will play Elizabeth, Darcy suddenly takes the game seriously and wins. Then he describes the game (Lizzy's "rival" for Darcy's affections is listening in to learn the game) with references to the roles of each piece in such a manner that we and Lizzy know he is talking about their relationship, the failed proposal, etc. Lizzy participates in this dialogue, but others are in the dark as to the double meanings in the conversation. "I once made a move based on what I thought would prompt a particular response, having foolishly considered no other option. I was...gravely mistaken”....Elizabeth - Is there some hidden message to me in those words? ETC.
The next day: Rosalyn goes to Lizzy's employers, Rosalyn's sister and brother-in-law, and makes sure Lizzy is not allowed to spend time after dinner "in company" when she hears Darcy request another chess game with Lizzy.
Another happening that causes angst but also makes one want to cheer are the events leading to Darcy relating to Elizabeth that "I want you to be assured that you have come through this shining like a star, for according to the letter, you were disgusted by my offer." The first page of his letter to Elizabeth after his failed proposal at Hunsford, has been accidentally left in her room at Pemberley, the premises of which she quits to return to London due to Lydia's elopement, Subsequently found by her student and then grabbed by Rosalyn who reads the first line out loud. The letter is grabbed from Rosalyn by Hamilton (another cousin to Darcy) before any other line is read so the full letter is not revealed. Rosalyn starts out to be a good friend to Elizabeth but when Darcy is the "prize" the "cat" comes out - reminding one of Caroline.
Others have made comparisons to Jane Eyre but I find the similarity very slight, basically both having the position of governess and witnessing a woman of higher status trying to gain the hero's attention. But little else is copied. Darcy is NOT attempting to make her jealous and he is NOT her employer and her whole background and history are NOT at all alike. Plus Lizzy has family who support her in opposition to Jane Eyre's having no family who care at all about her circumstances nor have any relationship with her.
Darcy's character vs. the Willstones' and Roslyn's lack of such in their view of the tenants and servants comes out very clearly during a flood in the area. Others have mentioned the cat....which leads to another favorite scene with a hint of sexual tension. Lizzy chases the cat which has escaped the area of confinement and it runs into Darcy's bedroom. When Darcy looks upon Elizabeth standing in the doorway of his bedroom - well, you can imagine where his mind goes.
This is a story that I would recommend to all. Even in re-reading it I found it to be a page turner and hard to put down.
November 10, 2020
Book Review: Only Mr. Darcy Will Do: Kara Louise: 5-stars
Kara Louise did a marvelous job in keeping with what we know and love best about Austen’s P&P characters. In her latest work, only the circumstances in which our characters found themselves were changed and we were able to watch them react to new situations. It was like new chapters had been added to what we already loved.
“Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation.” –Kahlil Gibran
‘What-if’ books are strictly conjectured and ask the question, what would our characters do if so-and-so happened? Our author posed the question ‘what if Mr. Bennet died?’ She answered with the following: Mr. Collins would take over Longbourn; Lydia would return from Brighton; Mrs. Bennet, along with Kitty and Lydia, would move in with Aunt Phillips; Jane, still grieving Mr. Bingley, would move to London to help the Gardiners with their children; and Elizabeth [also in London] would go into service with the Willstone family as a governess to their daughter Emily.
“It hurts to breathe. It hurts to live. I hate her, yet I do not think I can exist without her.” –Charlotte Featherstone, Addicted
Time wise: Easter… one year after the DHP [Disastrous Huntsford Proposal]. Darcy and the Colonial are once again visiting Rosings. Lady Catherine was lamenting having to find another clergyman. When Darcy asked what happened to Mr. Collins, she informed them of the demise of Mr. Bennet and that Mr. Collins deserted her to take possession of Longbourn.
“When it’s gone, you’ll know what a gift love was. You’ll suffer like this. So go back and fight to keep it.” –Ian McEwan, Enduring Love
The Willstone family was enjoying a visit from Mrs. Willstone’s sister Rosalyn Matthews. She, like most of the women of the ton, was infatuated with Mr. Darcy and fancied any attention from him as a sign he was attracted to her. The Willstone family [including the governess Miss Elizabeth] was invited to Pemberley for an extended stay. Elizabeth’s reduced status, in Mr. Darcy’s presence, was hard for her to deal with. Rosalyn compounded her discomfort by extoling her effusive affection for Mr. and Miss Darcy and her desire to be the next Mistress of Pemberley. When Darcy paid attention to Elizabeth [after a rousing game of chess] she was confronted by Mrs. Willstone and reminded of her lower status. She was asked to not come to the drawing room again and to remember her place. She was reminded it was not proper for her, as a governess, to be so familiar with the Darcy family. It was a bad reflection on the Willstone family and thus on Rosalyn who wanted to make a good impression.
“Our parting was like a stalemate…. Neither of us won. Yet both of us lost. And worse still … that unshakable feeling that nothing was ever really finished.” –Ranata Suzuki
We spend a lot of time in Elizabeth’s head with her reflections, regrets, and angst. I enjoyed seeing Darcy and Elizabeth recover from the DHP and fall in love all over again in their journey toward that HEA. Wickham showed up and was handled so quickly it was almost a non-event. Never fear… he was still a scoundrel. I enjoyed the writing style and language. I especially liked the story with the storm. You always see a person’s character in times of disaster and Rosalyn’s true character shone through bright as day.
1-6-16 ~ 1-7-16: This is actually the second time I've read this book. I originally read it as a library e-book but wasn't writing reviews at that time. I loved it so much that I bought my own copy so I could read it again.
12-24-18 ~ 12-25-18 [reread]
11-09-20 ~ 11-10-20 I had to read it again. Yep, I really enjoyed this story.
Kara Louise did a marvelous job in keeping with what we know and love best about Austen’s P&P characters. In her latest work, only the circumstances in which our characters found themselves were changed and we were able to watch them react to new situations. It was like new chapters had been added to what we already loved.
“Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation.” –Kahlil Gibran
‘What-if’ books are strictly conjectured and ask the question, what would our characters do if so-and-so happened? Our author posed the question ‘what if Mr. Bennet died?’ She answered with the following: Mr. Collins would take over Longbourn; Lydia would return from Brighton; Mrs. Bennet, along with Kitty and Lydia, would move in with Aunt Phillips; Jane, still grieving Mr. Bingley, would move to London to help the Gardiners with their children; and Elizabeth [also in London] would go into service with the Willstone family as a governess to their daughter Emily.
“It hurts to breathe. It hurts to live. I hate her, yet I do not think I can exist without her.” –Charlotte Featherstone, Addicted
Time wise: Easter… one year after the DHP [Disastrous Huntsford Proposal]. Darcy and the Colonial are once again visiting Rosings. Lady Catherine was lamenting having to find another clergyman. When Darcy asked what happened to Mr. Collins, she informed them of the demise of Mr. Bennet and that Mr. Collins deserted her to take possession of Longbourn.
“When it’s gone, you’ll know what a gift love was. You’ll suffer like this. So go back and fight to keep it.” –Ian McEwan, Enduring Love
The Willstone family was enjoying a visit from Mrs. Willstone’s sister Rosalyn Matthews. She, like most of the women of the ton, was infatuated with Mr. Darcy and fancied any attention from him as a sign he was attracted to her. The Willstone family [including the governess Miss Elizabeth] was invited to Pemberley for an extended stay. Elizabeth’s reduced status, in Mr. Darcy’s presence, was hard for her to deal with. Rosalyn compounded her discomfort by extoling her effusive affection for Mr. and Miss Darcy and her desire to be the next Mistress of Pemberley. When Darcy paid attention to Elizabeth [after a rousing game of chess] she was confronted by Mrs. Willstone and reminded of her lower status. She was asked to not come to the drawing room again and to remember her place. She was reminded it was not proper for her, as a governess, to be so familiar with the Darcy family. It was a bad reflection on the Willstone family and thus on Rosalyn who wanted to make a good impression.
“Our parting was like a stalemate…. Neither of us won. Yet both of us lost. And worse still … that unshakable feeling that nothing was ever really finished.” –Ranata Suzuki
We spend a lot of time in Elizabeth’s head with her reflections, regrets, and angst. I enjoyed seeing Darcy and Elizabeth recover from the DHP and fall in love all over again in their journey toward that HEA. Wickham showed up and was handled so quickly it was almost a non-event. Never fear… he was still a scoundrel. I enjoyed the writing style and language. I especially liked the story with the storm. You always see a person’s character in times of disaster and Rosalyn’s true character shone through bright as day.
1-6-16 ~ 1-7-16: This is actually the second time I've read this book. I originally read it as a library e-book but wasn't writing reviews at that time. I loved it so much that I bought my own copy so I could read it again.
12-24-18 ~ 12-25-18 [reread]
11-09-20 ~ 11-10-20 I had to read it again. Yep, I really enjoyed this story.
March 29, 2016
I really enjoyed the fist half of this book. The second half was quite long-winded and the slow pacing prevented me from reading this in its entirety in one sitting. But it was a good read, well-written I'd say, I just wish that the book could keep being entertaining as the first half throughout.
July 1, 2013
I have now read quite a few Pride and Prejudice variations, and once again I was not disappointed with Only Mr Darcy Will Do. I had already read and loved Darcy's Voyage. I look forward to reading Pirates and Prejudice and Assumed Engagement, also by Kara Louise.
I liked the basis for this story; I had always wondered what might happen to the Bennet girls had the Collins’ moved into Longbourn. Jane and Lizzy having to become governesses is very believable and very likely what would have had to happen had Mr Bennet died. It was sweet that the Gardiners took Jane for a governess to their children, meaning the family was not too split up and that Lizzy’s position allowed her to visit Jane and her aunt and uncle on her days off. I enjoyed seeing Lizzy as a governess and how she would fair in such a position, not having had a governess herself (much to the surprise and disapproval of Lady Catherine!) Mrs Bennet, Lydia, Kitty and Mary were hardly in this story which was a nice change.
The characters were once again portrayed faithfully and there were some wonderful new additions. I particularly enjoyed Darcy’s other cousin, Mr Hamilton. In many variations Colonel Fitzwilliam is a favourite character to develop further and bring into the story more, however in this variation, this part was given to an equally as amusing and fun character, Mr Hamilton. Colonel Fitzwilliam does make an appearance in the story, but mostly this Mr Hamilton takes the (what I will call) ‘Colonel Fitzwilliam limelight’. He was a very loveable character, just like Fitzwilliam, and is a great addition to the story and anytime he was around, I was laughing!
Having just said how Colonel Fitzwilliam is not in the story as often as in some variations, he does make an appearance and the small part he plays is an important and rather sweet role. I won’t say anymore!
Another wonderful character was Emily, the little girl to whom Lizzy is governess. She is a wonderful little character! Her relationship with Lizzy is adorable and you could see they have a very strong bond. Emily was almost like a young Lizzy; her character discernment and ability to asses people’s feelings from their facial expressions was very reflective of Lizzy’s own abilities. I could see Emily growing up to become a very witty and lively girl, just like Lizzy is.
Georgiana was another whose character was developed further and that was great to see. We see how she fairs being the hostess of a party of people invited to stay for a few weeks. Her friendship with Lizzy and how that develops with Lizzy now being a governess was interesting and there were times when you could see how much Georgiana depended on and was grateful to Lizzy. There was one scene I particularly enjoyed; Lizzy was teaching Emily on the piano when Georgiana comes along to listen, and before long Georgiana takes over the lesson and starts teaching Emily, and very successfully, I might add!
I think my favourite addition to the story, character wise, was Rosalyn. She seemed like a lovely character, until it became clear that she had her sights set on Darcy! Having Lizzy have the competition for Darcy instead of Darcy having the competition was another interesting twist with this story. As well as this, Rosalyn provides the possibility of feeling a little sympathy for Caroline Bingley! I never thought I would be able to feel sympathy for her, of all people! When it is discovered that Rosalyn is aiming for the highest prize in the marriage market, Darcy, she very quickly dissolves into a scheming, false and annoying woman, and the friendship between her and Lizzy had built up quickly disappears! Does this mean that Caroline was once a friendly and reasonable woman and that is was her want to marry Darcy that turned her to what we see in the story? Maybe… but then again maybe not! But it does make you think that maybe the wonderful marital prize that is Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy of Pemberley turns all the woman, who set their sights on him, into scheming and manipulating and generally horrible woman! Of course, Lizzy never planned on marrying Darcy and so she never undergoes this character change, unlike Rosalyn and (maybe) Caroline!
As in Darcy’s Voyage, there are some iconic scenes that we know from the original which are included but, of course, have twists thrown in; one of my favourites in this story was the classic argument between Lizzy and Lady Catherine! All I will say is a few more people get involved in the argument…
One of my favourite parts of the original story is when they run into Darcy at Pemberley and we see Darcy, the levelheaded, kind and sensible master of Pemberley. As this is one of my favourite parts it was great to see more of this relaxed Darcy. There were many times when Darcy’s care and concern for his tenants was clear; especially when there is a flood and Darcy allows all those whose houses are in danger from the water to stay at Pemberley (as well as climbing a tree to save one of the little girls cats from being drowned!) As well as seeing his care for his tenants, you also get to see Darcy's more relaxed and fun side. This is shown through a multitude of different acts and conversations; among my favourites was a treasure hunt designed by Darcy for his guests!
Finally onto Lizzy and Darcy; I don’t want to give too much away but the story is full of romance as well as trials and tribulations for the two. Darcy is not bitter and his pleasure at seeing Lizzy again is clear and he does everything in his power to treat her with civility and show her how her words had affected him. Lizzy begins to realise how strongly she may have misjudged Darcy and how much of a mistake she may have made in refusing him over a year ago! Through important and revealing games of chess, morning walks round Pemberley and accidental meetings in rather personal places Lizzy comes to understand who the real Fitzwilliam Darcy is and why so many woman do fall for him!
http://laughingwithlizzie.blogspot.co...
I liked the basis for this story; I had always wondered what might happen to the Bennet girls had the Collins’ moved into Longbourn. Jane and Lizzy having to become governesses is very believable and very likely what would have had to happen had Mr Bennet died. It was sweet that the Gardiners took Jane for a governess to their children, meaning the family was not too split up and that Lizzy’s position allowed her to visit Jane and her aunt and uncle on her days off. I enjoyed seeing Lizzy as a governess and how she would fair in such a position, not having had a governess herself (much to the surprise and disapproval of Lady Catherine!) Mrs Bennet, Lydia, Kitty and Mary were hardly in this story which was a nice change.
The characters were once again portrayed faithfully and there were some wonderful new additions. I particularly enjoyed Darcy’s other cousin, Mr Hamilton. In many variations Colonel Fitzwilliam is a favourite character to develop further and bring into the story more, however in this variation, this part was given to an equally as amusing and fun character, Mr Hamilton. Colonel Fitzwilliam does make an appearance in the story, but mostly this Mr Hamilton takes the (what I will call) ‘Colonel Fitzwilliam limelight’. He was a very loveable character, just like Fitzwilliam, and is a great addition to the story and anytime he was around, I was laughing!
Having just said how Colonel Fitzwilliam is not in the story as often as in some variations, he does make an appearance and the small part he plays is an important and rather sweet role. I won’t say anymore!
Another wonderful character was Emily, the little girl to whom Lizzy is governess. She is a wonderful little character! Her relationship with Lizzy is adorable and you could see they have a very strong bond. Emily was almost like a young Lizzy; her character discernment and ability to asses people’s feelings from their facial expressions was very reflective of Lizzy’s own abilities. I could see Emily growing up to become a very witty and lively girl, just like Lizzy is.
Georgiana was another whose character was developed further and that was great to see. We see how she fairs being the hostess of a party of people invited to stay for a few weeks. Her friendship with Lizzy and how that develops with Lizzy now being a governess was interesting and there were times when you could see how much Georgiana depended on and was grateful to Lizzy. There was one scene I particularly enjoyed; Lizzy was teaching Emily on the piano when Georgiana comes along to listen, and before long Georgiana takes over the lesson and starts teaching Emily, and very successfully, I might add!
I think my favourite addition to the story, character wise, was Rosalyn. She seemed like a lovely character, until it became clear that she had her sights set on Darcy! Having Lizzy have the competition for Darcy instead of Darcy having the competition was another interesting twist with this story. As well as this, Rosalyn provides the possibility of feeling a little sympathy for Caroline Bingley! I never thought I would be able to feel sympathy for her, of all people! When it is discovered that Rosalyn is aiming for the highest prize in the marriage market, Darcy, she very quickly dissolves into a scheming, false and annoying woman, and the friendship between her and Lizzy had built up quickly disappears! Does this mean that Caroline was once a friendly and reasonable woman and that is was her want to marry Darcy that turned her to what we see in the story? Maybe… but then again maybe not! But it does make you think that maybe the wonderful marital prize that is Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy of Pemberley turns all the woman, who set their sights on him, into scheming and manipulating and generally horrible woman! Of course, Lizzy never planned on marrying Darcy and so she never undergoes this character change, unlike Rosalyn and (maybe) Caroline!
As in Darcy’s Voyage, there are some iconic scenes that we know from the original which are included but, of course, have twists thrown in; one of my favourites in this story was the classic argument between Lizzy and Lady Catherine! All I will say is a few more people get involved in the argument…
One of my favourite parts of the original story is when they run into Darcy at Pemberley and we see Darcy, the levelheaded, kind and sensible master of Pemberley. As this is one of my favourite parts it was great to see more of this relaxed Darcy. There were many times when Darcy’s care and concern for his tenants was clear; especially when there is a flood and Darcy allows all those whose houses are in danger from the water to stay at Pemberley (as well as climbing a tree to save one of the little girls cats from being drowned!) As well as seeing his care for his tenants, you also get to see Darcy's more relaxed and fun side. This is shown through a multitude of different acts and conversations; among my favourites was a treasure hunt designed by Darcy for his guests!
Finally onto Lizzy and Darcy; I don’t want to give too much away but the story is full of romance as well as trials and tribulations for the two. Darcy is not bitter and his pleasure at seeing Lizzy again is clear and he does everything in his power to treat her with civility and show her how her words had affected him. Lizzy begins to realise how strongly she may have misjudged Darcy and how much of a mistake she may have made in refusing him over a year ago! Through important and revealing games of chess, morning walks round Pemberley and accidental meetings in rather personal places Lizzy comes to understand who the real Fitzwilliam Darcy is and why so many woman do fall for him!
http://laughingwithlizzie.blogspot.co...
September 27, 2015
Reread: 26 Sep 15 - 27 Sep 15. Just as good as I remembered it being!
Originally read: 20 Jan 12
Originally read: 20 Jan 12
December 17, 2025
An old favourite in a new format.
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Mr Bennet’s death shortly after Elizabeth’s return from Kent forces the Bennet family into very different circumstances. Longbourn is lost, Jane and Elizabeth must earn their living as governesses in London, and Elizabeth finds herself once again in Darcy’s world—this time keenly aware of how far their positions have shifted. Elizabeth has a rival which added a measure of angst for me.
The book presents well in the audio format. Melissa Durbin’s narration is warm and emotional. I did wish for greater distinction between character voices at times, as some conversations required closer attention to follow who was speaking. That aside, the narration is quite good.
I enjoy having an older, well-regarded variation come to the audio format. Well done! I wish more authors would do this.
The audiobook version (cover) is not listed in the editions on Goodreads, so I posted to the Kindle version.
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Mr Bennet’s death shortly after Elizabeth’s return from Kent forces the Bennet family into very different circumstances. Longbourn is lost, Jane and Elizabeth must earn their living as governesses in London, and Elizabeth finds herself once again in Darcy’s world—this time keenly aware of how far their positions have shifted. Elizabeth has a rival which added a measure of angst for me.
The book presents well in the audio format. Melissa Durbin’s narration is warm and emotional. I did wish for greater distinction between character voices at times, as some conversations required closer attention to follow who was speaking. That aside, the narration is quite good.
I enjoy having an older, well-regarded variation come to the audio format. Well done! I wish more authors would do this.
The audiobook version (cover) is not listed in the editions on Goodreads, so I posted to the Kindle version.
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November 4, 2017Review originally posted on Diary of an Eccentric
Only Mr. Darcy Will Do is a retelling of Austen’s Pride and Prejudice by Kara Louise, which originally was self-published as Something Like Regret. Louise opens her novel a year after Elizabeth Bennet rejected Mr. Darcy’s marriage proposal at Rosings, and while she cannot forgive the role he played in separating her sister, Jane, from Mr. Bingley, she believes she may have been wrong about other aspects of Mr. Darcy’s character.
However, even if she had a complete change of heart about Mr. Darcy, it would do her little good, as her family has fallen further beneath his since the death of her father. When Mr. Collins takes possession of Longbourn, Mrs. Bennet takes her youngest daughters to live with her sister in Meryton, Jane moves to London and becomes the governess for her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner, and Elizabeth becomes the governess for six-year-old Emily Willstone. Elizabeth and Emily have forged a strong bond, but she continues to grieve for her father and cherishes the Sundays she can spend with Jane and the Gardiners.
Elizabeth is forced to deal with her feelings about Mr. Darcy when Mrs. Willstone’s sister, Rosalyn, comes to stay with the family and confides in Elizabeth that she has long had a crush on Mr. Darcy and will do everything possible to ensure that he views her as marriage material. With no one knowing what transpired between her and Mr. Darcy, Elizabeth must spend time at his Pemberley estate when the Willstones are invited for a fortnight. At Pemberley, Elizabeth gets a glimpse of the man Darcy has become since his failed proposal.
Louise’s novel turns the lives of Austen’s characters upside down but still manages to follow the major plot points of Pride and Prejudice. Elizabeth handles her changed circumstances with dignity, helped along by the fact that the Willstones treat her better than a governess in recognition of her past social status, and despite the duties she must bear in her new role, Louise allows her wit to shine through. She also brings in some new characters, like Rosalyn, whose quest to impress Mr. Darcy provides much amusement, and Mr. Hamilton, Darcy’s cousin, whose loose tongue and clumsiness add some lightness to the story.
Only Mr. Darcy Will Do is a must read for fans of Austen variations. I found that I couldn’t put the book down and read nearly all of it in one day. Louise obviously adores Austen’s characters and stays true to their personalities. Even though you know how the book will end, you’re not exactly sure how you’ll get there, but you’ll enjoy the ride.
Only Mr. Darcy Will Do is a retelling of Austen’s Pride and Prejudice by Kara Louise, which originally was self-published as Something Like Regret. Louise opens her novel a year after Elizabeth Bennet rejected Mr. Darcy’s marriage proposal at Rosings, and while she cannot forgive the role he played in separating her sister, Jane, from Mr. Bingley, she believes she may have been wrong about other aspects of Mr. Darcy’s character.
However, even if she had a complete change of heart about Mr. Darcy, it would do her little good, as her family has fallen further beneath his since the death of her father. When Mr. Collins takes possession of Longbourn, Mrs. Bennet takes her youngest daughters to live with her sister in Meryton, Jane moves to London and becomes the governess for her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner, and Elizabeth becomes the governess for six-year-old Emily Willstone. Elizabeth and Emily have forged a strong bond, but she continues to grieve for her father and cherishes the Sundays she can spend with Jane and the Gardiners.
Elizabeth is forced to deal with her feelings about Mr. Darcy when Mrs. Willstone’s sister, Rosalyn, comes to stay with the family and confides in Elizabeth that she has long had a crush on Mr. Darcy and will do everything possible to ensure that he views her as marriage material. With no one knowing what transpired between her and Mr. Darcy, Elizabeth must spend time at his Pemberley estate when the Willstones are invited for a fortnight. At Pemberley, Elizabeth gets a glimpse of the man Darcy has become since his failed proposal.
Louise’s novel turns the lives of Austen’s characters upside down but still manages to follow the major plot points of Pride and Prejudice. Elizabeth handles her changed circumstances with dignity, helped along by the fact that the Willstones treat her better than a governess in recognition of her past social status, and despite the duties she must bear in her new role, Louise allows her wit to shine through. She also brings in some new characters, like Rosalyn, whose quest to impress Mr. Darcy provides much amusement, and Mr. Hamilton, Darcy’s cousin, whose loose tongue and clumsiness add some lightness to the story.
Only Mr. Darcy Will Do is a must read for fans of Austen variations. I found that I couldn’t put the book down and read nearly all of it in one day. Louise obviously adores Austen’s characters and stays true to their personalities. Even though you know how the book will end, you’re not exactly sure how you’ll get there, but you’ll enjoy the ride.
April 9, 2013
This is a sweet 'what if' style variation on Pride and Prejudice. This variation sees Mr Bennet dying before Lizzy is due to go to Derbyshire in the summer, thus never meeting Darcy at Pemberley. Darcy learns Elizabeth's change in circumstances the following Easter whilst paying his annual visit to Lady Catherine.
Lizzy has become a governess to a delightful young girl, Emily. The family she works for is kind to her and when the Emily's young aunt, Rosalyn comes to stay she quickly makes a friend of Lizzy, and Lizzy begins to socialise with the family rather than just be their employee. One one occasion the family have visitors, one of whom is Mr Bingley, and he and Lizzy's prior acquaintance comes to light. Realising that Lizzy also knows Darcy, Rosalyn confides to Lizzy that she has set her heart on marrying Mr Darcy and asks her for advice on obtaining a proposal from him. At this point Lizzy's only regret in turning Darcy down is that if she'd accepted him she could perhaps have paved the way for Jane to marry Bingley.
Lizzy then sees Darcy at other social occasions and the family, including Lizzy and Emily, are invited to Pemberley. Lizzy is dreading the visit, when she is now so much further below D socially, and having to watch a possible courtship between him and Rosalyn. Getting to know and understand Darcy better, Lizzy finally begins to see that she was mistaken in her estimation of him and she starts to regret turning down his proposal for more reasons...
I was surprised to see that this book is mostly in British English, although there is the odd word or phrase which struck me as not being very British, e.g. sandbox, drapes, oftentimes, inquiry rather than enquiry, go play, come sit, etc.
I thought that this was an entertaining and sweet romance. There is no high drama, like in some variations, it's quite a comfortable, cozy read. I wondered at first whether we would feel very bad for Rosalyn, but as the story draws out you lose gradually lose sympathy for her, which I felt was really well done. It took probably about 3 hours to read and I read it in one sitting, which is a compliment to how much I was absorbed in reading this story!
Also worth mentioning, for those who prefer to avoid them, is that this book has no sex scenes.
Lizzy has become a governess to a delightful young girl, Emily. The family she works for is kind to her and when the Emily's young aunt, Rosalyn comes to stay she quickly makes a friend of Lizzy, and Lizzy begins to socialise with the family rather than just be their employee. One one occasion the family have visitors, one of whom is Mr Bingley, and he and Lizzy's prior acquaintance comes to light. Realising that Lizzy also knows Darcy, Rosalyn confides to Lizzy that she has set her heart on marrying Mr Darcy and asks her for advice on obtaining a proposal from him. At this point Lizzy's only regret in turning Darcy down is that if she'd accepted him she could perhaps have paved the way for Jane to marry Bingley.
Lizzy then sees Darcy at other social occasions and the family, including Lizzy and Emily, are invited to Pemberley. Lizzy is dreading the visit, when she is now so much further below D socially, and having to watch a possible courtship between him and Rosalyn. Getting to know and understand Darcy better, Lizzy finally begins to see that she was mistaken in her estimation of him and she starts to regret turning down his proposal for more reasons...
I was surprised to see that this book is mostly in British English, although there is the odd word or phrase which struck me as not being very British, e.g. sandbox, drapes, oftentimes, inquiry rather than enquiry, go play, come sit, etc.
I thought that this was an entertaining and sweet romance. There is no high drama, like in some variations, it's quite a comfortable, cozy read. I wondered at first whether we would feel very bad for Rosalyn, but as the story draws out you lose gradually lose sympathy for her, which I felt was really well done. It took probably about 3 hours to read and I read it in one sitting, which is a compliment to how much I was absorbed in reading this story!
Also worth mentioning, for those who prefer to avoid them, is that this book has no sex scenes.
March 8, 2011
Only Mr. Darcy Will Do, originally self-published as Something Like Regret in 2008, is another superior Pride and Prejudice variation by Kara Louise. In this inventive retelling, Mrs. Benent's gloomy predictions about Mr. Bennet's death preceding her own have unfortunately become a reality and Mr. Bennet passes away shortly after Elizabeth's return from Hunsford Parsonage. Thus effecting quite a few alterations to the plot's original course: Lydia is forced to leave Brighton early, Elizabeth is denied her trip up north, and Charles Bingley never returns to Netherfield Park. In addition, due to their reduced circumstances, Jane and Elizabeth must move to London and earn their keep as governesses; Jane for the Gardiners and Elizabeth for a family by the name of Willstone.
While working as a governess, Elizabeth makes several new friends in the Willstone family, one being her little charge Emily, a precocious and perceptive six year old (whom I adored!), the other being Rosalyn Matthews, the unmarried sister of Mrs. Willstone. Rosalyn seems like a lovely friend until she confides in Elizabeth her secret dream of marrying the illustrious and unattached Mr. Darcy! Even though it has been a year since Elizabeth rejected Darcy's disastrous proposal, the man has not been far from her thoughts. Now after coming into contact with him once again, Elizabeth cannot help but wonder: Does Mr. Darcy still love her? Is he falling in love with her friend? Did she miss her opportunity at marrying for love?
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While working as a governess, Elizabeth makes several new friends in the Willstone family, one being her little charge Emily, a precocious and perceptive six year old (whom I adored!), the other being Rosalyn Matthews, the unmarried sister of Mrs. Willstone. Rosalyn seems like a lovely friend until she confides in Elizabeth her secret dream of marrying the illustrious and unattached Mr. Darcy! Even though it has been a year since Elizabeth rejected Darcy's disastrous proposal, the man has not been far from her thoughts. Now after coming into contact with him once again, Elizabeth cannot help but wonder: Does Mr. Darcy still love her? Is he falling in love with her friend? Did she miss her opportunity at marrying for love?
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August 21, 2017
This was a successful Pride and Prejudice variation in my opinion. It is actually the first one I read this year and I realised how much I have missed them so maybe that was why I enjoyed it so much.
The premise of this story was really interesting. Mr. Bennet died a short time after Elizabeth rejects Mr. Darcy’s proposal and has to find work as a governess to support herself. And of course the family that she works for just happens to be acquaintances of a certain gentleman. I thought that the author handled it rather well. I enjoyed the characterisation of both Elizabeth and Darcy and while I was reading I was relieved to find that I didn’t think either of them were doing things that were completely out of character. A rare thing in a P&P variation.
There was a good mix of familiar and original characters. I though Elizabeth’s ‘love rival’ was particularly well done. Her transformation from the sweet and innocent friend to the jealous and bitter rival was really interesting and just goes to show that very few people are as immune to potential wealth and power as they seem. Which in my opinion just emphasises how special Elizabeth really is.
I’ll admit that this was a pretty cheesy novel. Pride and Prejudice sequels and variations tend towards the overly fluffy and sentimental in my opinion but as long as you don’t take it too seriously and don’t expect this to be Pride and Prejudice 2.0 as written by Jane Austen herself Pride and Prejudice fans can have a lot of fun reading books like this.
The premise of this story was really interesting. Mr. Bennet died a short time after Elizabeth rejects Mr. Darcy’s proposal and has to find work as a governess to support herself. And of course the family that she works for just happens to be acquaintances of a certain gentleman. I thought that the author handled it rather well. I enjoyed the characterisation of both Elizabeth and Darcy and while I was reading I was relieved to find that I didn’t think either of them were doing things that were completely out of character. A rare thing in a P&P variation.
There was a good mix of familiar and original characters. I though Elizabeth’s ‘love rival’ was particularly well done. Her transformation from the sweet and innocent friend to the jealous and bitter rival was really interesting and just goes to show that very few people are as immune to potential wealth and power as they seem. Which in my opinion just emphasises how special Elizabeth really is.
I’ll admit that this was a pretty cheesy novel. Pride and Prejudice sequels and variations tend towards the overly fluffy and sentimental in my opinion but as long as you don’t take it too seriously and don’t expect this to be Pride and Prejudice 2.0 as written by Jane Austen herself Pride and Prejudice fans can have a lot of fun reading books like this.
October 6, 2014
Mr.Bennet has died and it has forced Jane and Elizabeth to take positions as governesses. But Elizabeth has taken the harder course while Jane is employed by the Gardiners their kind Uncle and Aunt. Elizabeth is working for strangers. I am not surprised that Lizzy took the harder job and let Jane have the easier one. This book has a much more sober air about it then Darcy's Voyage because of Mr.Bennet's death.
This is my second book of Kara Louise's and I wasn't disappointed.Kara Louise has a real talent with Jane Austen Fan Fiction. She keeps the characters true and comes up with great what if variations. Be it this isn't as unique an idea as Darcy's Voyage.
I really enjoyed the addition of Mr.Hamilton, Mr.Darcy's other cousin. He was such a fun character and kinda wish he would get his own book. Rosalyn as a character is an idiot and I find her very annoying. I liked her until she started making a fool of herself in front of Mr.Darcy. My opinions of the Willstones and Rosalyn changed a lot as I got to know them. I thought they weren't a bad sort. But their true colors started to show. They were the only ones being so unkind to the poor people who had to take refuge at Pemberley because of the flooding. I know they were of a lower class but everyone else was kind and didn't act like they were diseased only the Willstones and Rosalyn. Particularly as Rosalyn said her father married beneath him. You would think they would be more compassionate but I guess everyone shows their true colors eventually. Surprisingly I enjoyed the character of Emily(I'm not much of kid person). I found her intelligent and adorable.
This book was so sweet and romantic.This book is a clean romance but the spark between Elizabeth and Darcy is very hot. I love their chemistry with each other. There is no doubt that they are in love with each other. It was such a beautiful retelling and kept me captivated. The ending was Perfection and I highly recommend this to all P&P fans.
Rating:5 out of 5
Content Rating:PG(sensual embraces and kisses)
Keeper: YES!
This is my second book of Kara Louise's and I wasn't disappointed.Kara Louise has a real talent with Jane Austen Fan Fiction. She keeps the characters true and comes up with great what if variations. Be it this isn't as unique an idea as Darcy's Voyage.
I really enjoyed the addition of Mr.Hamilton, Mr.Darcy's other cousin. He was such a fun character and kinda wish he would get his own book. Rosalyn as a character is an idiot and I find her very annoying. I liked her until she started making a fool of herself in front of Mr.Darcy. My opinions of the Willstones and Rosalyn changed a lot as I got to know them. I thought they weren't a bad sort. But their true colors started to show. They were the only ones being so unkind to the poor people who had to take refuge at Pemberley because of the flooding. I know they were of a lower class but everyone else was kind and didn't act like they were diseased only the Willstones and Rosalyn. Particularly as Rosalyn said her father married beneath him. You would think they would be more compassionate but I guess everyone shows their true colors eventually. Surprisingly I enjoyed the character of Emily(I'm not much of kid person). I found her intelligent and adorable.
This book was so sweet and romantic.This book is a clean romance but the spark between Elizabeth and Darcy is very hot. I love their chemistry with each other. There is no doubt that they are in love with each other. It was such a beautiful retelling and kept me captivated. The ending was Perfection and I highly recommend this to all P&P fans.
Rating:5 out of 5
Content Rating:PG(sensual embraces and kisses)
Keeper: YES!
May 30, 2011
I'm giving it five stars because it was Jane Austen fan fiction at its finest, and Kara Louise has really grown as a writer. It was hard to give a bad review of her other book, but in this genre it can be difficult to find quality reading. There is a plethora of Pride and Prejudice fan fiction available to read for free online. I raise my standards once a writer decides to publish his or her work. While Kara Louise gave her own twists to Pride and Prejudice, they weren't too far fetched, and she remained true to Darcy and Elizabeth's characters (two elements I look for in JA fan fiction).
July 28, 2014
Wow! This is the first book that I've ever read by this author. If her other books are as good as this, I will be a fan for life!
April 9, 2011
Jane Austen retellings and sequels are a hot commodity but it's not easy to step into Ms. Austen's literary shoes. Author Kara Louise does so seamlessly and with the beautiful and romantice Only Mr. Darcy Will Do, solidifies her position on my list of "Must Read" authors.
Ms. Louise takes Jane Austen's familiar and beloved characters from Pride and Prejudice and transports the reader to the time after Mr. Darcy makes his first, failed proposal to Elizabeth and before she makes her trip to Pemberley with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner. In this retelling, Mr. Bennet has unexpectedly died, leaving Mrs. Bennet and her daughters to the mercy of her family, as the Longbourne estate is now entailed to Mr. and Mrs. Collins. Jane and Elizabeth are now governesses in London while Mrs. Bennet, Mary, Kitty and Lydia are living with Mrs. Bennet's sister and her family in Meryton.
Despite her now reduced social standing, Ms. Louise's Elizabeth retains her sparkle, her wit and the wonderful verve that Ms. Austen originally bestowed upon her. Jane, similarly, is as sweet and even tempered while silently pining away for Mr. Bingley. Lizzy, too, is having her own pains as she regrets turning down Mr. Darcy's proposal and, worse, she is forced to confront her decision as her employer, the Willstone family, is acquainted with Mr. Darcy and invited to spend part of the summer as his guests at Pemberley.
The interactions between Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy are the very best sections of this lovely and lively book. Their initial interaction in Mr. Darcy's private study at Pemberley is awkwardly sweet and leaves the reader aching for more. Their veiled insinuations and witty interchanges during their chess match, in full view and hearing of other guests, is clever and great fun to read.
While Miss Bingley is not present in this retelling, and only mentioned in passing, Ms. Louise brings on a new character as a rival for Mr. Darcy - - Mrs. Willstone's younger sister Rosalyn, who has the social standing to catch Mr. Darcy's eye and aims to do just that. And unfortunately for Elizabeth, an unknowing Rosalyn solicits her help to win the supposedly aloof Mr. Darcy's heart.
My own heart broke for Elizabeth, as Ms. Louise so adeptly made her hurt, sadness and longing radiate off each page, as each confessional session with Rosalyn made any chance of a future with Mr. Darcy seem more unlikely.
I found myself completely engrossed in this story, which was incredibly romantic. And while the conclusion was wonderfully rewarding and sure to satisfy any Jane Austen lover, I was sad to close the book and leave the story behind.
I would not hesitate to recommend this book to any lover of Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice and/or heart-thumping romances. You will not be disappointed. Beware though, you will become a fan of Kara Louise and your wallet may suffer under the requirement of purchasing all of her books.
Ms. Louise takes Jane Austen's familiar and beloved characters from Pride and Prejudice and transports the reader to the time after Mr. Darcy makes his first, failed proposal to Elizabeth and before she makes her trip to Pemberley with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner. In this retelling, Mr. Bennet has unexpectedly died, leaving Mrs. Bennet and her daughters to the mercy of her family, as the Longbourne estate is now entailed to Mr. and Mrs. Collins. Jane and Elizabeth are now governesses in London while Mrs. Bennet, Mary, Kitty and Lydia are living with Mrs. Bennet's sister and her family in Meryton.
Despite her now reduced social standing, Ms. Louise's Elizabeth retains her sparkle, her wit and the wonderful verve that Ms. Austen originally bestowed upon her. Jane, similarly, is as sweet and even tempered while silently pining away for Mr. Bingley. Lizzy, too, is having her own pains as she regrets turning down Mr. Darcy's proposal and, worse, she is forced to confront her decision as her employer, the Willstone family, is acquainted with Mr. Darcy and invited to spend part of the summer as his guests at Pemberley.
The interactions between Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy are the very best sections of this lovely and lively book. Their initial interaction in Mr. Darcy's private study at Pemberley is awkwardly sweet and leaves the reader aching for more. Their veiled insinuations and witty interchanges during their chess match, in full view and hearing of other guests, is clever and great fun to read.
While Miss Bingley is not present in this retelling, and only mentioned in passing, Ms. Louise brings on a new character as a rival for Mr. Darcy - - Mrs. Willstone's younger sister Rosalyn, who has the social standing to catch Mr. Darcy's eye and aims to do just that. And unfortunately for Elizabeth, an unknowing Rosalyn solicits her help to win the supposedly aloof Mr. Darcy's heart.
My own heart broke for Elizabeth, as Ms. Louise so adeptly made her hurt, sadness and longing radiate off each page, as each confessional session with Rosalyn made any chance of a future with Mr. Darcy seem more unlikely.
I found myself completely engrossed in this story, which was incredibly romantic. And while the conclusion was wonderfully rewarding and sure to satisfy any Jane Austen lover, I was sad to close the book and leave the story behind.
I would not hesitate to recommend this book to any lover of Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice and/or heart-thumping romances. You will not be disappointed. Beware though, you will become a fan of Kara Louise and your wallet may suffer under the requirement of purchasing all of her books.
July 2, 2023
This book is a sweet, light read, with mild angst, and a forgettable story. How do I know it's forgettable? Because it seemed almost vaguely familiar at first, yet quite new to me as I read it all the way through. It turned out I read this book in 2017. That's one of a few reasons it doesn't quite cut it for a top star rating.
I won't be summarizing the plot, I'll be commenting on the technical issues. The plot itself was straightforward and cliche, but interesting all the same: the rival for one of the protagonists.
One of the main peeves I have about this book is that the rival started out to be a good person and ended up being a harpy. There's nothing easier than making your rival a harpy and nothing harder than making your rival a legitimate rival who compares favourably with the other protagonist. That change in characterization made the book easier to write, but the character grated on the readers' nerves.
Language was good, understandable, and used Regency concepts well. There were a few non-Regency words or words used in the wrong way, though, including: chuckle, normally/normal/"the norm," neckline, drab, outing, and staff. In addition, the American toward was used instead of the British towards, and "I will" for "I shall." Note that most JAFF authors get these same words wrong, and more. The phrase "not as much ample space" was used twice. There were filter words, where the author was telling rather than showing.
Although the POV was predominantly from that of the protagonists, the author also used head-hopping of occasionally. One example is that the author had her main character seeing herself blush. That's not possible without another character seeing it, or an omniscient narrator. So it's head-hopping. Instead, the author should have her aware of a rising heat on her face.
The cover is not a great one. It doesn't catch one's eye--other than the checkers, which remind me of a picnic tablecloth, and that's not what you want your JAFF cover to say. It's not because it's dated; it was never the greatest cover. In a field of JAFF covers, it would be different than all the blow-dried man covers, but not in a good way. There's too much going on with the motifs fighting for dominance. A cover needs to POP, to look different in the field of covers, and yet tell a bit of the story within, without going over the top doing so.
This is a good book that I'd recommend.
Disclaimer: I am a JAFF author and some might say my review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them to assist the reader and the author.
I won't be summarizing the plot, I'll be commenting on the technical issues. The plot itself was straightforward and cliche, but interesting all the same: the rival for one of the protagonists.
One of the main peeves I have about this book is that the rival started out to be a good person and ended up being a harpy. There's nothing easier than making your rival a harpy and nothing harder than making your rival a legitimate rival who compares favourably with the other protagonist. That change in characterization made the book easier to write, but the character grated on the readers' nerves.
Language was good, understandable, and used Regency concepts well. There were a few non-Regency words or words used in the wrong way, though, including: chuckle, normally/normal/"the norm," neckline, drab, outing, and staff. In addition, the American toward was used instead of the British towards, and "I will" for "I shall." Note that most JAFF authors get these same words wrong, and more. The phrase "not as much ample space" was used twice. There were filter words, where the author was telling rather than showing.
Although the POV was predominantly from that of the protagonists, the author also used head-hopping of occasionally. One example is that the author had her main character seeing herself blush. That's not possible without another character seeing it, or an omniscient narrator. So it's head-hopping. Instead, the author should have her aware of a rising heat on her face.
The cover is not a great one. It doesn't catch one's eye--other than the checkers, which remind me of a picnic tablecloth, and that's not what you want your JAFF cover to say. It's not because it's dated; it was never the greatest cover. In a field of JAFF covers, it would be different than all the blow-dried man covers, but not in a good way. There's too much going on with the motifs fighting for dominance. A cover needs to POP, to look different in the field of covers, and yet tell a bit of the story within, without going over the top doing so.
This is a good book that I'd recommend.
Disclaimer: I am a JAFF author and some might say my review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them to assist the reader and the author.
March 31, 2011
I absolutely adore Jane Austen sequels and variations. When I received this book in the mail I squeeed while jumping up and down. My husband asked me what was the matter and I told him "It's Darcy and Elizabeth". He just rolled his eyes and said he didn't understand how I could read the same story over and over again. I had to set him straight. This is an entirely different story. Yes, it has Darcy and Elizabeth in it but the journey to happily ever after is completely different. That's what I love about variations. I love seeing how the authors envision these beloved characters and the alternative direction they take this well known story.
Only Mr. Darcy Will Do is a fantastic variation. I found my self devouring this book page after page. This was a 'stay up all night to read' book. Kara Louise takes Darcy and Elizabeth and sets them on a different path. After Mr. Darcy's disastrous proposal, Elizabeth gets the tragic news that Mr. Bennett has died leaving his estate to Mr. Collins. Elizabeth becomes a governess with a respectable family. She adores her pupil and is within walking distance of her most beloved sister, Jane. Elizabeth and Jane although content are a little disheartened about their present circumstances. They carry on as best they can. Elizabeth forms a friendship with her employers sister, Rosalyn. During their friendship it is discovered the Rosalyn has her sites set on none other than Mr. Darcy.
I really like the direction that Kara Louise took this story. I really appreciated how she kept the personalties of Darcy and Elizabeth in tact. I was sorry that Mr. Bennett had to die because he's one of my favorite characters but it is necessary for the storyline. Kara Louise introduces some new characters into the story. Rosalyn, who has her eye on Mr. Darcy is a great character. I love seeing her transform through out the book. Mr. Hamilton is also a great new character. He doesn't think much before he speaks but he added some comedy to this novel. The author kept many of the original characters in this book but she gives an exciting twist to their stories as well. Of course the main focus of the book is Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth. I loved seeing their story unfold bit by bit. Kara Louise gives us a glimpse of the softer side of Mr. Darcy. The banter between the two is great. I fell in-love with Darcy and Elizabeth all over again. I thought the story was fresh and deeply romantic. This is a book that I will definitely read again.
Only Mr. Darcy Will Do is a fantastic variation. I found my self devouring this book page after page. This was a 'stay up all night to read' book. Kara Louise takes Darcy and Elizabeth and sets them on a different path. After Mr. Darcy's disastrous proposal, Elizabeth gets the tragic news that Mr. Bennett has died leaving his estate to Mr. Collins. Elizabeth becomes a governess with a respectable family. She adores her pupil and is within walking distance of her most beloved sister, Jane. Elizabeth and Jane although content are a little disheartened about their present circumstances. They carry on as best they can. Elizabeth forms a friendship with her employers sister, Rosalyn. During their friendship it is discovered the Rosalyn has her sites set on none other than Mr. Darcy.
I really like the direction that Kara Louise took this story. I really appreciated how she kept the personalties of Darcy and Elizabeth in tact. I was sorry that Mr. Bennett had to die because he's one of my favorite characters but it is necessary for the storyline. Kara Louise introduces some new characters into the story. Rosalyn, who has her eye on Mr. Darcy is a great character. I love seeing her transform through out the book. Mr. Hamilton is also a great new character. He doesn't think much before he speaks but he added some comedy to this novel. The author kept many of the original characters in this book but she gives an exciting twist to their stories as well. Of course the main focus of the book is Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth. I loved seeing their story unfold bit by bit. Kara Louise gives us a glimpse of the softer side of Mr. Darcy. The banter between the two is great. I fell in-love with Darcy and Elizabeth all over again. I thought the story was fresh and deeply romantic. This is a book that I will definitely read again.
June 10, 2011
Check out that cover y'all. I think it is really pretty. I read the ebook version, but if I ever come across a used copy I'll have to grab it to add to my shelves.
Okay, I am super wary of P&P sequels/variations. Most of them are just a sorry excuse to write sex scenes between Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy. Seriously - I can't stand those. Luckily, this is not one of them. This book asks the question: what if Mr. Bennet had died after Darcy's first proposal, before Elizabeth's trip with her aunt and uncle...before Lydia had a chance to run away with Mr. Wickham? How would things have been different?
Well, lots of things are different. Many, many changes occur in this book from the original Pride and Prejudice plot. Luckily, I loved the changes! There is a ton of character development that I found incredibly insightful. I also thought it to be very respectful of the original characters. Mr. Darcy's stiff behavior is explained through a series of stories about his childhood, we get a lot more face time with his sister, and the Bennet women are put into situations where we see sides of them not available in the original work.
Elizabeth is a governess for a family that initially seems to accept her as an extension of the family. She loves her charge (thank goodness there isn't any convoluted bratty child side story)...and through a series of events comes to be a visitor of the Pemberley estate with the family. There are a lot of absolutely brilliantly written scenes between her and Mr. Darcy. The tension between them was so high that it was all I could do not to skip ahead to read the final scenes. Their chemistry was absolutely dead on.
I opened this book, slightly nervous, unsure of what I would find. Fast-forward a few hours (and a few ignored phone calls and a skipped meal) and I'm closing the book wishing there was a sequel! If you're a Pride and Prejudice fan unafraid to try something different than the original, absolutely pick this up. You'll love it!
Okay, I am super wary of P&P sequels/variations. Most of them are just a sorry excuse to write sex scenes between Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy. Seriously - I can't stand those. Luckily, this is not one of them. This book asks the question: what if Mr. Bennet had died after Darcy's first proposal, before Elizabeth's trip with her aunt and uncle...before Lydia had a chance to run away with Mr. Wickham? How would things have been different?
Well, lots of things are different. Many, many changes occur in this book from the original Pride and Prejudice plot. Luckily, I loved the changes! There is a ton of character development that I found incredibly insightful. I also thought it to be very respectful of the original characters. Mr. Darcy's stiff behavior is explained through a series of stories about his childhood, we get a lot more face time with his sister, and the Bennet women are put into situations where we see sides of them not available in the original work.
Elizabeth is a governess for a family that initially seems to accept her as an extension of the family. She loves her charge (thank goodness there isn't any convoluted bratty child side story)...and through a series of events comes to be a visitor of the Pemberley estate with the family. There are a lot of absolutely brilliantly written scenes between her and Mr. Darcy. The tension between them was so high that it was all I could do not to skip ahead to read the final scenes. Their chemistry was absolutely dead on.
I opened this book, slightly nervous, unsure of what I would find. Fast-forward a few hours (and a few ignored phone calls and a skipped meal) and I'm closing the book wishing there was a sequel! If you're a Pride and Prejudice fan unafraid to try something different than the original, absolutely pick this up. You'll love it!
August 9, 2016
I have so many feelings about this book! First I thought it wouldn't be as good as the last P&P variation that I read because the language was not as on point as it was with the other one. I also found Rosalyn really annoying, but as soon as they were it Pemberley everything changed. I enjoyed every single encounter of Mr Darcy and Elizabeth and I adored how she gradually began to see his worth and fall in love with him, even if a week seemed very short for me.
There were times when I nearly swooned. I didn't think I could fall deeper in love with Mr. Darcy, but I was proved wrong. So many times I cried out aload because this book was driving me crazy in a good way! As for the other characters and character additions, I found them delightful. Especially the conclusion to some character arcs. I will not spoiler, but I was highly satisfied with each of them!
If you wanna read a truly enjoyable variation of P&P I highly recommend this!
There were times when I nearly swooned. I didn't think I could fall deeper in love with Mr. Darcy, but I was proved wrong. So many times I cried out aload because this book was driving me crazy in a good way! As for the other characters and character additions, I found them delightful. Especially the conclusion to some character arcs. I will not spoiler, but I was highly satisfied with each of them!
If you wanna read a truly enjoyable variation of P&P I highly recommend this!
March 28, 2017
This is what a good P&P alternate variation should be.
In this version after returning to Longbourn from Hunsford parsonage Mr. Bennet suddenly dies. With 5 unmarried daughters and limited resources the Bennet ladies are forced to make changes. Lizzy and Jane move to London where Jane stays with the Gardiners while Lizzy takes a job as a governess with a well to do family.
When she encounters Mr. Bingley and Miss Darcy in her employer's drawing room she is unaware how this will impact her entire family.
The employer's sister believes that Mr. Darcy would be the only man she could marry and Lizzy is forced to watch the young lady's machinations to curry his favor. When the family is invited to Pemberley a match is expected to be made.
This book has the perfect balance of tragedy and joy and is a pleasure to read.
In this version after returning to Longbourn from Hunsford parsonage Mr. Bennet suddenly dies. With 5 unmarried daughters and limited resources the Bennet ladies are forced to make changes. Lizzy and Jane move to London where Jane stays with the Gardiners while Lizzy takes a job as a governess with a well to do family.
When she encounters Mr. Bingley and Miss Darcy in her employer's drawing room she is unaware how this will impact her entire family.
The employer's sister believes that Mr. Darcy would be the only man she could marry and Lizzy is forced to watch the young lady's machinations to curry his favor. When the family is invited to Pemberley a match is expected to be made.
This book has the perfect balance of tragedy and joy and is a pleasure to read.
August 16, 2015
Okay, I should have known what I was getting into - because this is a P&P retelling after all. But this was just soooo not good. There were way too many "hearts beating rapidly" and too many scenes where I honestly had to cover my face I was so embarrassed by the cheesiness. And I have a high tolerance for cheese, I think. Mr. Darcy didn't even act like Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth turned into an emotional, foot stomping, clasping-her-hand-over-her-heart woman. There was no witty banter. Ugh. I need to pull out some Jane Austen and detox.
December 29, 2015
Sweet variation told in a new way!!!
Ms. Louise has created a tale that is familiar and new, while adding some interesting dimensions to our old friends... Romantic and pleasurable reading!!!
Ms. Louise has created a tale that is familiar and new, while adding some interesting dimensions to our old friends... Romantic and pleasurable reading!!!
January 16, 2018
Exciting plot. Mr B dies and Elizabeth is working as an governess. The family she works for is invited to Pemberley.
Sweet, romantic and angst filled. Loved it!
Sweet, romantic and angst filled. Loved it!
June 2, 2018
A beach read for Austen fans that don’t mind the story alterations. Clean read, but quite romance-y.
May 5, 2021
3.75 stars.
Despite my having some bones to pick with respect to some of the choices made regarding plot, this was a pretty enjoyable little story.
The first half was incredibly engaging - like surprisingly so? I was in it to win it with all the forced proximity and angsty pining from both sides of the street. The plot was dramatic, but not overly so, and the characterization was quite strong. The initial premise drew me in but the characterization of Lizzy and her growth throughout the story is what held it. It felt realistic, and true to Lizzy’s temperament despite her situation.
I wasn't in love with how easily Miss Matthews and Mrs. Willstone and the conflict they provided were so easily brushed aside, because they were built up to initially be side characters and then progressed to the roles of somewhat albeit minor antagonists yet there was nothing really cohesive about them. Their characters never truly felt complete; they never really came into their own as individual characters, but rather acted as pawns to be used within the confines of the plot. That’s what’s so disappointing about their overall arcs because it feels like they could’ve been used so much effectively from an emotional standpoint. I guess I just wanted more out of them then what they presented.
Also, the Lydia-Wickham relationship, while necessary from a variation/retelling standpoint was truly underwhelming because I don’t really believe that it would’ve occurred based on this alternative timeline what with the mourning period and the fact that it’s literally a year later. With what incentive did Wickham have to seduce Lydia into a sham of a relationship? Because I don’t think there was one barring convenience considering Lizzy was acting as a governess and thus would not be thought to have any entanglement with the Darcy’s. The whole thing just sat in a way where it felt like it happened for plot purposes only and didn't necessarily hold true to the convictions of the individual characters involved so it seems disingenuous.
I did really like the part where Lizzy questioned Miss Bartley as to her own behaviour as a governess. It was such a solid interaction - I thought it was brilliantly written because it showed Lizzy was willing to adapt to her new station, but was also burdened by the classism that the Willstones observed. It also really made me sympathize with Lizzy, because the added conflict of her position made her growing feelings that much more ansgty. And let me tell you, we are most definitely here for the angst.
My biggest gripe though was the ending because it wrapped up a little too easily and what felt like entirely too quickly. I could’ve stood for more content to draw the ending out a bit more actually.
All in all, while it wasn't my favourite Pride and Prejudice retelling from this year, it still was decent read, and if you're interested in the synopsis, I say go for it.
Despite my having some bones to pick with respect to some of the choices made regarding plot, this was a pretty enjoyable little story.
The first half was incredibly engaging - like surprisingly so? I was in it to win it with all the forced proximity and angsty pining from both sides of the street. The plot was dramatic, but not overly so, and the characterization was quite strong. The initial premise drew me in but the characterization of Lizzy and her growth throughout the story is what held it. It felt realistic, and true to Lizzy’s temperament despite her situation.
I wasn't in love with how easily Miss Matthews and Mrs. Willstone and the conflict they provided were so easily brushed aside, because they were built up to initially be side characters and then progressed to the roles of somewhat albeit minor antagonists yet there was nothing really cohesive about them. Their characters never truly felt complete; they never really came into their own as individual characters, but rather acted as pawns to be used within the confines of the plot. That’s what’s so disappointing about their overall arcs because it feels like they could’ve been used so much effectively from an emotional standpoint. I guess I just wanted more out of them then what they presented.
Also, the Lydia-Wickham relationship, while necessary from a variation/retelling standpoint was truly underwhelming because I don’t really believe that it would’ve occurred based on this alternative timeline what with the mourning period and the fact that it’s literally a year later. With what incentive did Wickham have to seduce Lydia into a sham of a relationship? Because I don’t think there was one barring convenience considering Lizzy was acting as a governess and thus would not be thought to have any entanglement with the Darcy’s. The whole thing just sat in a way where it felt like it happened for plot purposes only and didn't necessarily hold true to the convictions of the individual characters involved so it seems disingenuous.
I did really like the part where Lizzy questioned Miss Bartley as to her own behaviour as a governess. It was such a solid interaction - I thought it was brilliantly written because it showed Lizzy was willing to adapt to her new station, but was also burdened by the classism that the Willstones observed. It also really made me sympathize with Lizzy, because the added conflict of her position made her growing feelings that much more ansgty. And let me tell you, we are most definitely here for the angst.
My biggest gripe though was the ending because it wrapped up a little too easily and what felt like entirely too quickly. I could’ve stood for more content to draw the ending out a bit more actually.
All in all, while it wasn't my favourite Pride and Prejudice retelling from this year, it still was decent read, and if you're interested in the synopsis, I say go for it.
June 11, 2019
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This is the second time that I have read this book. This time I purchased it for my personal Kindle library. The main misunderstanding occurred when Darcy invited the family that Elizabeth worked for to Pemberly. The single sister of Mrs. Wilstone assumed he was interested in her because she was one year older than Elizabeth and couldn't think of any other reason for the invitation. Elizabeth and Miss Darcy also thought Darcy wanted Miss Walker, but he invited them so that he could spend time with Elizabeth. You can imagine how well they reacted after they discovered the truth. Miss Walker was similar to Miss Bingley and only saw a handsome man with land and money, but she didn't see Darcy for himself, especially when he allowed some of his tenants to stay in a section of Pemberly due to torrential rains. While Miss Walker harassed Darcy and Miss Darcy about their presence, Elizabeth pitched in to help, especially when Hamilton was injured. Wickham and Lydia married after Darcy forces Wickham 's hand, but he purchased property for them that would give Wickham an income but he would never be able to sell the house due to his gambling debts. L Lydia would always have a home. Mrs. Bennet and the three remaining sisters loves there as well. Jane and Bingley married and purchased an estate that was only three miles away. The sisters were always with each other.
This is the second time that I have read this book. This time I purchased it for my personal Kindle library. The main misunderstanding occurred when Darcy invited the family that Elizabeth worked for to Pemberly. The single sister of Mrs. Wilstone assumed he was interested in her because she was one year older than Elizabeth and couldn't think of any other reason for the invitation. Elizabeth and Miss Darcy also thought Darcy wanted Miss Walker, but he invited them so that he could spend time with Elizabeth. You can imagine how well they reacted after they discovered the truth. Miss Walker was similar to Miss Bingley and only saw a handsome man with land and money, but she didn't see Darcy for himself, especially when he allowed some of his tenants to stay in a section of Pemberly due to torrential rains. While Miss Walker harassed Darcy and Miss Darcy about their presence, Elizabeth pitched in to help, especially when Hamilton was injured. Wickham and Lydia married after Darcy forces Wickham 's hand, but he purchased property for them that would give Wickham an income but he would never be able to sell the house due to his gambling debts. L Lydia would always have a home. Mrs. Bennet and the three remaining sisters loves there as well. Jane and Bingley married and purchased an estate that was only three miles away. The sisters were always with each other.
October 21, 2017
I really loved this!
This was, in fact, shockingly good! It is so refreshing and exciting to read a variation that is capable of causing anxiety about the matches of ODC. You would think it practically impossible, but I was truly on the edge of my seat through a great deal of this!
Elizabeth as a governess has been done a few times, but never have I seen it done so perfectly. I’m always impressed when Elizabeth’s or Darcy’s uncertainty can become our own, and it is absolutely deliciously done in this novel. Darcy’s point of view is shown only in the the prologue and the last chapter and epilogue. The rest is purely Elizabeth’s experiences and varying conjecture, and man, was that a clever way of going about it!
Absolutely pleased and impressed, this is a top 10 for me, without a doubt.
This was, in fact, shockingly good! It is so refreshing and exciting to read a variation that is capable of causing anxiety about the matches of ODC. You would think it practically impossible, but I was truly on the edge of my seat through a great deal of this!
Elizabeth as a governess has been done a few times, but never have I seen it done so perfectly. I’m always impressed when Elizabeth’s or Darcy’s uncertainty can become our own, and it is absolutely deliciously done in this novel. Darcy’s point of view is shown only in the the prologue and the last chapter and epilogue. The rest is purely Elizabeth’s experiences and varying conjecture, and man, was that a clever way of going about it!
Absolutely pleased and impressed, this is a top 10 for me, without a doubt.
April 9, 2021
Must a book be good? Can't one just read a rehashed version of P&P, with little in the way of originality but scads of comfort food 'goodness', large print?
October 8, 2022
You almost always know what you’ll get with a P&P variation. Clean, comforting, and predictable 😂❤️ This one is on par.
April 1, 2021
This book is a sweet, light read, with mild angst, and a forgettable story. How do I know it's forgettable? Because it seemed almost vaguely familiar at first, yet quite new to me as I read it all the way through. It turned out I read this book in 2017. That's one of a few reasons it doesn't quite cut it for a top star rating.
I won't be summarizing the plot, I'll be commenting on the technical issues. The plot itself was straightforward and cliche, but interesting all the same: the rival for one of the protagonists.
One of the main peeves I have about this book is that the rival started out to be a good person and ended up being a harpy. There's nothing easier than making your rival a harpy and nothing harder than making your rival a legitimate rival who compares favourably with the other protagonist. That change in characterization made the book easier to write, but the character grated on the readers' nerves.
Language was good, understandable, and used Regency concepts well. There were a few non-Regency words or words used in the wrong way, though, including: chuckle, normally/normal/"the norm," neckline, drab, outing, and staff. In addition, the American toward was used instead of the British towards, and "I will" for "I shall." Note that most JAFF authors get these same words wrong, and more. The phrase "not as much ample space" was used twice. There were filter words, where the author was telling rather than showing.
Although the POV was predominantly from that of the protagonists, the author also used head-hopping of occasionally. One example is that the author had her main character seeing herself blush. That's not possible without another character seeing it, or an omniscient narrator. So it's head-hopping. Instead, the author should have her aware of a rising heat on her face.
The cover is not a great one. It doesn't catch one's eye--other than the checkers, which remind me of a picnic tablecloth, and that's not what you want your JAFF cover to say. It's not because it's dated; it was never the greatest cover. In a field of JAFF covers, it would be different than all the blow-dried man covers, but not in a good way. There's too much going on with the motifs fighting for dominance. A cover needs to POP, to look different in the field of covers, and yet tell a bit of the story within, without going over the top doing so.
This is a good book that I'd recommend.
Disclaimer: I am a JAFF author and some might say my review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them to assist the reader and the author.
I won't be summarizing the plot, I'll be commenting on the technical issues. The plot itself was straightforward and cliche, but interesting all the same: the rival for one of the protagonists.
One of the main peeves I have about this book is that the rival started out to be a good person and ended up being a harpy. There's nothing easier than making your rival a harpy and nothing harder than making your rival a legitimate rival who compares favourably with the other protagonist. That change in characterization made the book easier to write, but the character grated on the readers' nerves.
Language was good, understandable, and used Regency concepts well. There were a few non-Regency words or words used in the wrong way, though, including: chuckle, normally/normal/"the norm," neckline, drab, outing, and staff. In addition, the American toward was used instead of the British towards, and "I will" for "I shall." Note that most JAFF authors get these same words wrong, and more. The phrase "not as much ample space" was used twice. There were filter words, where the author was telling rather than showing.
Although the POV was predominantly from that of the protagonists, the author also used head-hopping of occasionally. One example is that the author had her main character seeing herself blush. That's not possible without another character seeing it, or an omniscient narrator. So it's head-hopping. Instead, the author should have her aware of a rising heat on her face.
The cover is not a great one. It doesn't catch one's eye--other than the checkers, which remind me of a picnic tablecloth, and that's not what you want your JAFF cover to say. It's not because it's dated; it was never the greatest cover. In a field of JAFF covers, it would be different than all the blow-dried man covers, but not in a good way. There's too much going on with the motifs fighting for dominance. A cover needs to POP, to look different in the field of covers, and yet tell a bit of the story within, without going over the top doing so.
This is a good book that I'd recommend.
Disclaimer: I am a JAFF author and some might say my review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them to assist the reader and the author.
October 23, 2017
2015:
As much as I love Jane Austen Fan Fiction (JAFF), I **adored** this novel!! It was one of the best books of this genre I've read...and I devoured it in fewer than 48 hours. (Being on Easter break helps, LOL!) Absolutely splendid book--and for those of you in California, it's available through the public library LINK+ system, as are the majority of books by the amazing ladies at the Austen Variations site. :)
2017:
I broke down and bought my own Kindle copy and enjoyed this book just as much the second time through!! Again, I devoured it within 48 hours (between assignments to grade for my research class!) and loved it all over again! Elizabeth as a governess after her father's death meets Mr. Darcy in the home of her employers; their niece befriends Elizabeth and has apparently loved Mr. Darcy for many years as she grew up on an estate near Pemberley. Convinced that only Mr. Darcy will do, the niece makes Elizabeth her confidant as the family, including Elizabeth and her beloved six-year-old charge, are invited to Pemberley. Elizabeth thinks that the invitation shows the Mr. Darcy returns her friend's feelings, but is that the real reason the cautious Mr. Darcy invited them all to his home?
As much as I love Jane Austen Fan Fiction (JAFF), I **adored** this novel!! It was one of the best books of this genre I've read...and I devoured it in fewer than 48 hours. (Being on Easter break helps, LOL!) Absolutely splendid book--and for those of you in California, it's available through the public library LINK+ system, as are the majority of books by the amazing ladies at the Austen Variations site. :)
2017:
I broke down and bought my own Kindle copy and enjoyed this book just as much the second time through!! Again, I devoured it within 48 hours (between assignments to grade for my research class!) and loved it all over again! Elizabeth as a governess after her father's death meets Mr. Darcy in the home of her employers; their niece befriends Elizabeth and has apparently loved Mr. Darcy for many years as she grew up on an estate near Pemberley. Convinced that only Mr. Darcy will do, the niece makes Elizabeth her confidant as the family, including Elizabeth and her beloved six-year-old charge, are invited to Pemberley. Elizabeth thinks that the invitation shows the Mr. Darcy returns her friend's feelings, but is that the real reason the cautious Mr. Darcy invited them all to his home?
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