I ended up rather disappointed in this book. I expected so much more from it and just didn't get any like I was hoping for.
Series Note:
Fifth book in the "Mindhunters" series about and independent forsenics agency and it's agents. I would suggest at least reading book 4 before reading this one. The first trilogy is pretty independent, but this second trilogy has an overall story arc.
Summary:
Marisa Chandler is an agent for Raiker forensics who has dreams about crimes - who did them, why, how, where, etc. But when her dreams don't help her fully understand a child kidnapping case and she is unable to save a little boy, Risa hands in her resignation and takes time to heal her wounded shoulder. She is staying with her mom in Philadelphia when her dreams return, showing her the terror of a man being burned alive. Risa is thrust into an investigation of a cop killer who has so far set 3 cops on fire.
Heading the investigation is detective Nate McGuire. He's not thrilled with and outsider's help, but his main goal is to find out who is killing cops and why. And as they search for clues, the two grow closer together and trusting each other may be all that will save Risa when the killer targets her.
Review:
I had a lot of issues with the first trilogy in this series. Lack of thorough character portraits, over doing keeping the characters enigmatic, poor romance, not enough clues to the bad guy, etc. But when I read the first book of the second trilogy, it seemed like the author had made a lot of improvement. I really enjoyed that book and didn't really have any major issues. So I was expecting much of the same with this book. Unfortunately, this one regresses back to the same issues that the books in the first trilogy had.
Similar to my complaint in the first trilogy, this book does a poor job of connecting you to Raiker Forensics as group that the series is based upon. Especially in the early part of the book. Risa is just sort of dropped in there as the lead character and she just happens to be an agent of the group. You don't get a feel of what Raiker Forensics is. That doesn't work for me. The group is what the series is based on, I want to feel connected to it.
There was also a bit of an issue where it seemed like a lot of things happened off the page between this book and the last one, things that have a great deal to do with the overall story arc of the second trilogy. Someone is trying to kill the leader of Raiker Forensics and a bunch of things happened and it felt like some big events were glossed over. That annoyed me.
Also like problems I had with the first trilogy, the character portraits aren't very thorough. The characters are primarily in the moment and you get only past info as it relates to one or two tragic moments in their lives. Otherwise, you don't know anything else about these characters. Another very annoying thing.
But what is even more annoying is that the author seems to be so set on making these characters enigmatic that you spend most of the book guessing about what is going on with them. Risa had a big tragic even happen that made her question her career and over and over again you get little tid bits about that event but never an explanation until near the end. And it just gets so annoying waiting and waiting for an explanation. I just wanted to know already. And Nate is helping take care of his nephew and you get bits about the kid has issues, a disability of some sort, but it's not until like 300 pages into the book you finally learn the kid is autistic. What was the big deal about not telling that straight off? It had virtually no consequence to the story so why did I had to keep wondering what was wrong with the kid? It's once thing to have some mystery to the characters but it's another to be continuously evasive to the point that it hurts your characters.
Then there's the romance of the book. I almost want to say 'what romance?' because for most of the book there's none. There wasn't even really any chemistry between these two for most of the book. They are just two people who are working together and now and then you get one of them thinking the other is kind of interesting and whatnot. There was not connection between them that I could feel. So you keep reading and reading hoping for some romantic development and it just doesn't come. They don't kiss for the first time until page 244 of 325 pages. And I want to say they FINALLY kiss, but even then I wasn't feeling the romance of it. Then they don't kiss again until page 283 after which they have sex. I just never felt the romantic connection between these two. And when the end rolled around, you feel more of an HFN ending than an HEA. You really have no idea how these two are going to work out a relationship. Which is made worse because the issues of Risa's psychic dreams and Nate understanding them is dealt with very poorly. Overall, the romantic element of the book was very poor. And I understand it's a romantic suspense. I don't mind if the romance in an RS book is second priority, the case takes first string. But I still want to feel the romance between the characters. That didn't happen here.
On the suspense plot front...it was okay. The case was interesting, but it was also rather slow moving. Most of the book is spent with Risa and Nate just going around questioning people and checking places out. It was a bit boring and tedious and didn't add enough tension to the story. Plus there were so many secondary characters that when one was brought up again later I couldn't remember what his role was earlier in the book and I had to stop and go back and find the character so I could understand the connection. The clues as to the bad guys identity were a little better than some of the other books. I was able to guess about half way through who the bad guy was. So that was good. But it was a plot that could have been more action oriented, more tense instead of so procedural and minutiae oriented.
Were there good things about the book that I liked? Hmm...well, I liked Nate. He seemed like a good guy. And I liked that there were some guest appearances of past characters. There was also a furthering of the overall story arc involving Adam Raiker and who wants to kill him. That aspect makes you really want to read the next book (which will feature him and supposedly wrap up the arc). And the ending was pretty good. It does leave some issues open regarding the story arc, but I can deal with that knowing they'll be handled in the next book.
So yeah, on the whole, this book bugged me. I think it's my least favorite of the series so far, which is really disappointing after the last book was the best of the series for me. It leaves me having no idea what to expect of the last book in the series, which I have to read so I know how the story arc wraps up and so I can learn more about Adam Raiker.