Not Supposed To

by Teeta

There are things that are not supposed to happen, like being kissed by your brother.

This opened Uri's eyes to the fact that his brother, Shawn, could evoke unwanted feelings in him.
Now the confused teen fights this attraction. Will he succeed?

Note: this story is no longer available for everyone; for further details check out the author's webpage

Status: In progress/Incomplete
Last update: 07/26/11
Word count: approx. 487,065

Genres: M M Romance, Romance

Reviews

[Valentina Heart · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved this story. Unfortunately it's a WIP and I wasn't aware of that fact until the very end. I probably wouldn't have started reading if I had known.
Everything progresses very slowly and it can be a bit tiring at times, but the very relationship between the two brothers somehow makes up for it. I'm terribly interested in the rest of the story, but I'm afraid I'm not all that patient and I hate waiting. Still, there is a lot to read so far and it's quite enjoyable.

[Alex · Rating 1 out of 5]

Loved it... Used to read it as it came out. Never forgot about this two characters. (5 stars)
But I Could never quite pardon that they didn't finish it by 1 or 2 chapters. (1 star, I can't in good conscience recommend it to anyone).

Yes there was drama and it got down... but if memory serves the story stalled before then and that's why it wasn't finished.

The moral of the story is, if you are releasing in instalments, got a sizeable amount of followers and the story is almost done... Make an effort to finish it. Because you never know what might happen and your readers should at least merit getting an ending. The story was started in 2006, and taken down in 2011 (5 years later).

PS: The web page shows a chat from 2014 saying they (she?) are rewriting it. I'm sure it can do with a good review, but... SERIOUSLY!? Please! We want the freaking ending!! Rewrite it once you have given us our ending!!!! PLEASE!? *puppy eyes*

[Gabriela · Rating 5 out of 5]

I absolutely loved this story-so much, much, much better than some of the stories available for purchasing. I stayed up to 3am several nights to read it as it is a little over 1000, yes, 1k full 8x10 pages. It made me laugh, cry and think... it is just not the story of two brothers in love with each other it has such an intense plot and sub plots that I just could not put it down. As of today it is not yet finished with two more chapters to go, and I hope the author, Teeta, finishes them quickly. I am now going to re-read it very slowly. Make sure you also read the two side stories to this Top Dogs which you need to read after chapter 24 and Scary Movies which is very, very HOT!!!

[Eirian · Rating 4 out of 5]

This story was interesting, interesting enough that I stayed up until 4:00 in the morning the first day and 2:30 in the morning the second.

This'll end up turning into more of a rant on characters than a review I think...

[Josephine (biblioseph)]

https://www.fictionpress.com/u/548132...

Link above is to author's fictionpress where she explains the story will return 'some day'.

[Luta Wolf · Rating 4 out of 5]

It's a four because it's not finished. I'll give a real rating and full review when fully read.