Stud Sandwich

by Darren G. Burton

Sandy works at an island resort. When she goes skinny-dipping one night after her shift, she is joined by two sexy young men. They have a proposition for her. Find out what happens when Sandy agrees to indulge their fantasy in this erotic story. Adults only 18+

Genres: Erotica

11 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 18, 2010

About the author

Born in Sydney, Australia, and now living on the Gold Coast, I have been writing for more than 30 years. I've written numerous full length and short works of fiction and non-fiction, and have had many articles and short stories published in major Australian and international publications.

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Reviews

[Beate · Rating 1 out of 5]

This is clearly a scene written by a man that has seen too many porn-flicks, and doesn't quite understand women.

Even if women get incredibly horny, sleep around some and crave threesomes; there is no way in hell they'll refer to themselves as sluts. End of.

I understand this is written by a man that sees himself as some sort of expert on how to get a guy, but he knows little to nothing about women - which makes me think he watches too much porn.

A tip to the author. There is no such thing as "to cum". Cum is the stuff that comes out of your dick. You know, that sticky stuff? That you wrote "to cum" instead of "to come" is a dead giveaway that you've seen too much porn. And a woman never thinks of herself as a slut and cheap in real life. Again, too much porn.

To the readers out there. This is not a full story, just a scene and it is badly written, makes you feel more sorry for the girl in the story than horny, and you'll be more turned on watching a bad porn-flick on the web. A complete waste of money.

[Ronnae Stately · Rating 4 out of 5]

Sandy works at a restaurant that happens to be on an island resort kind of place. One night after work she decides to go skinny dipping and two of her customers show up as well. They decide to do the dirty on the beach. Sandy makes herself the meat in between two studs and the rest is deliciously provocative. She has them every way you can think of and then some.

[J.P. Barnaby]

I'm not bothered by the "slut" premise because I think that women can certainly take ownership of their own sexual identity. It was what it reported to be - a sex scene with two guys and a girl.

It did, however, read like a porn scene - but that may have been the author's intention. It's clearly defined as "erotica", and to some people that may translate as "porn".

I don't think that all sex scenes need to read like a Harlequin novel or have any sense of emotion to them to be effective, but it was like a hundred scenes that I've either read or seen before. It didn't have a hook or a unique quality that pulled me into the scene. I found myself wanting to skim through the sex, which was the whole point of the scene.