The Bind was a very intricately woven story, no doubt. Too many situations, however, had to fall in place throughout the book in order to make it work. There were way too many occasions where Jake needed something done, and, unrealistically, Magnes would fix him up at the drop of a hat with someone to either find out information, send in another guy, or make a boat show up, all with pinpoint timing. Not believable.
Not believable either was the premise that this whole story was built on whether insurance money was or wasn’t due Mrs. Thoren. Thousands of dollars of Jake’s fee were spent along the way for Elinor’s and Magnes’s services, so much so that there would have been very little left.
The love story was lame at best. It’s very one-sided with needy Elinor hanging on Jake – yup, a real eye-roller – and he’s continually brushing her off. He treats her like crap, yet she hangs on, claiming to love him. If Mr. Ellin is trying to give the impression that she’s a ditzy, dumb blond, he is very successful.
The ending seemed very hastily thrown together. I, the reader, am supposed to believe this convoluted and complex story that took 97% of the book and then believe that the ending could be pulled together in a few pages. It didn’t work for me.