The cover of this book bears a quote from Clive Cussler: “Craig Dirgo has the stuff of a master storyteller and the makings of a great adventure author!” I agree, but Dirgo’s first solo effort shows that he’s still got a way to go to get there. I enjoyed his Oregon Files books because they were written differently than most adventure novels in that they weren’t about unraveling a villain’s plot, but were more about the intricacies of a major heist. It is unfortunate that that doesn’t work so swell in a standard adventure yarn, which this is.
It’s as if this novel is a bunch of pieced-together short stories about failure, as John Taft, his partner Larry Martinez, and the rest of the good guys keep letting the bad guys get away. Even worse, the timing is poor. We know exactly what the bad guys are doing well in advance of the good guys, so as they go through the paces of catching on, we’re left tapping a foot with impatience because we want to get on with the story already.
The book also has a few issues with editing. Like a camera that lingers too long on a scene, too many details are mentioned, or they’re described awkwardly and laboriously. It’s as if the wrong draft of the manuscript went to the printer and more editing and a few rewrites should have been done to smooth out its many rough spots.
Complaints aside, I still think this is a pretty decent first novel. Dirgo has a lot of talent, and I have the feeling he’s going to improve with subsequent novels. He just needs to hone his craft a bit now that he’s on his own.
He borrowed a little from Cussler to get the story off the ground, beginning in the last days of Albert Einstein’s life before vaulting into the present day with high-adrenaline action as John Taft rescues a physicist from a Chinese prison and spirits him out of the country. The US government has reason to believe the Chinese are on the verge of developing a superweapon using Einstein’s Unified Field Theory, which would utilize the Earth’s three major forces: gravity, magnetics, and electricity. The Americans chase the Chinese all over the Eastern seaboard trying to get their hands on the papers in order to develop a superweapon first. Meanwhile, the Chinese stir up trouble in the Middle East as cover for their REAL plot: annexing Taiwan to mainland China. When the American physicists finally have the formula complete, things turn out much different than expected, but the good guys use it to their advantage in an explosive climax.
As far as heroes go, John Taft has potential, but I haven’t really been able to warm to him yet. Hopefully, he will develop along with Dirgo’s skills with character depth. Ditto with Taft’s sidekick Martinez, particularly since he has the unusual appendages of a wife and children. Dirgo should be able to use them in some interesting ways in the plots of future novels.
In all, I can’t put this one on the top of my list of favorites, but I didn’t hate it, either. I think Dirgo shows a lot of potential and it should be fun to watch his talent develop along with this series.